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23 June 2006 @ 01:39 am
Fic - Gundam Wing - "Interrogation"  
Title: Interrogation
Words: 85
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Warning: None
Notes: Written for eldritchhobbit Request details. 23rd fic for June fic-a-day.

Pain laced up and down the entire length of his body. He wanted to cry out but bit down hard on his lip to keep himself silent. He could taste blood, coppery and sharp. Darkness nipped at the edges of his vision but just out of reach. He heard voices demanding answers. He wasn't going to give them anything. Never. He'd take the information to the grave if he had to. His silence was rewarded with another blow and his world dissolved into pain again.

Amy H. Sturgiseldritchhobbit on June 23rd, 2006 10:41 pm (UTC)
Augh! This is terrific. You show his determination and strength well, but I particularly like how you leave what happens next up to the reader's imagination. It makes you feel for him all the more, not knowing what comes next! Great stuff. Thank you so much!
Katemulanreflection on June 23rd, 2006 11:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you. ^_^; *pets her poor plushies* Torturing these boys is so evil and fun. <.< I might toy with this request some more, maybe, if I'm out of any other ideas for June.