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lovelette in excuse_me___

she is standing at the edge of the pool and i watch the water ripple before she even dips her toes in the turquoise water as if it is anticipating the touch of her skin. Her foot slips into it and she glides under as if she always was meant to, as if the water is her best friend and not me. i watch a ladybug try to follow her in and i know that it will drown. i lean over and scoop it up with my hands, it flutters off, towards the blueness of the sky.

she is completly under water now. she is completly water now.


This is really really beautiful. The imagery you use is very effective and lovely to read, a brilliant example of showing not telling. :)
aw thank you !