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iatrogenicmyth
1 Nov 2013, 14:38
the cusp
This is old (didn't realize just how inactive it was here) but my ex-girlfriend and I used to call "blue balls" in girls "crimson clit."
2am_limbo
4 Dec 2012, 21:38
Please be as harsh as you like, brutal honesty makes me a better writer Chapter one When Cha
Eep, I misread it! I was in a hurry, my fault!
Disregard what I said about the dialogue -___-

Sorry!
lai_lai_ranma
4 Dec 2012, 19:32
Please be as harsh as you like, brutal honesty makes me a better writer Chapter one When Cha
I like it a lot.
quickestpulse
4 Dec 2012, 17:01
Please be as harsh as you like, brutal honesty makes me a better writer Chapter one When Cha
Hiya, thanks for your reply! Good points for me to consider. With the dialogue thing, there's actually only one person who ever talks in this scene, and that's Lucy, since Daisy refuses to reply. Do…
2am_limbo
4 Dec 2012, 16:53
Please be as harsh as you like, brutal honesty makes me a better writer Chapter one When Cha
I like the way you write, it's interesting. The only "criticism" I have is just little things, like, I would describe "31st of December 2012" instead of giving the date. Something like "New Year's…