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It's My First Time Posting, I Hope You Like^_^ [17 Mar 2006|10:32pm]

I just sorta scribbled this down during chem. so it might need work. Please let me know what you think.


Knock on my door,
Tell me your name,
I shall give you mine.

Please have a seat,
I will get you some tea,
As you warm your hands by my fire.

You talk of your life,
Of places you've seen,
Of people you've met.

Twitch your fingers,
Afraid that you are talking too much,
Ask me to speak for a while.

I say for you to continue,
for I am truely interested,
But I feed you my stories,
After you insist.

We shift our conversation,
To the exchanging of jokes and riddles,
You stir your laughter into mine.

Thrust out your hand,
And I shall shake it.
Give me your phone and email,
I scribble you mine.

Walk past the imaginary line,
Of my door.
I know that I can now call this stranger,
My friend.
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[09 Jul 2005|10:23pm]

Promo [29 Jun 2005|09:22pm]

Shameless promotion - Check it out.

[25 May 2005|07:41am]

[ mood | exhausted ]

Hello everyone, I'm new. I've been writing for awhile but I've never taken classes or anything. Anyway, just looking for some constructive criticism, don't hold anything back.

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[14 May 2005|03:59am]


Hi. Go to this community.



[14 May 2005|02:14am]

[ mood | busy ]

hi im new.
im in experianced... i havent taken classes... what i write is very random in my point of view. if you have any advice for me, please give it. if you just dont want me in here, tell me. i know how ppl can be in communities. any ways, i write alot. stories, poems, short short stories, random things to express what im thinking or feeling. but if i post on of those random things, ill let you know your your not like O.O "woah this girl is on crack!' < i know. lol JK. anyways i have a short story thing that is on the line of one of my random outbreaks. (yesh i shall call them random outbreaks!!) i like to write things that ppl have to think about to find a hidden meaning. but if im just full of crap, tell me. any ways here you go:::im sorry the number you have reached is not available. please leave a message after the tone.::Collapse )

by the way my name is Liz.


[27 Feb 2005|07:01am]

She looks at him, he looks at her. And while they know of each other, they don't know each other. Catching the other staring is the only communication they've exchanged, and the dissatisfaction she feels could choke her while she sleeps and dreams of him. February's chill has turned warm and it seems a shame to be in angst when the sun's out. She would give herself to him if ever he asked, and this infatuation is enough to make happy couples cringe and cynics sigh. She'll never know if he lies awake at night thinking of her smile or if he actually notices her at all. She'll never know if he's asked his friends her name, or even it he cares. And while he's constantly running through her mind, they'll forever remain a mystery to each other.

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I'm new to this.... [23 Jan 2005|09:40am]

[ mood | sleepy ]

I guess i'll start it off by sharing one of my poems.
I wrote it about someone very important to me.
It's called "Lily of My Valley"

To my dearest Lily,
My delicate little rose petal.
You who taught me to love,
taught me to cry.
You who taught me to live,
Also taught me to die.
Though your touch had long ago
Your thorn has left an everlasting
Prick on the finger of my heart.
We planted you in the ground
Over a full decade ago.
There is where you live and grow.
In the soil.
The way that every flower should.
You are, and always will be
The Lily of my Valley.

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I'm new [20 Jan 2005|07:08pm]

[ mood | bouncy ]

Ok well I'm new. I have been writing for like the two past years so here goes.

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[31 Dec 2004|12:17pm]

This is a "random" entry- It's not really supposed to mean something or anything.

~Random~Collapse )
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new?? [30 Dec 2004|12:11am]

[ mood | thirsty ]

hi. I like to write. I've been writing poetry for a while.
Comment please??

Don't mind the title. It doesn't really make sense.
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[16 Sep 2004|01:02pm]

Honey, you're the bittersweet
of my very best intentions.
Open up your box of keys and
dig mine out.
Am I worth the time to look - beyond?
Or see a puddle for its frog?
If only my descending lines lead
somewhere else.
Trouble me
Or I won't fake it anymore.
Tasting of that apple tree is enough to put
my mind at ease.
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hey vanity. [15 Sep 2004|04:45pm]

[ mood | apathetic ]

Hey, sorry I haven't been around for a long while. I've had many things occurring in my life lately. I haven't had much time to post and what not. My apologies, again. Though I have still been reading most of the posts in the community; I still have to get better with commenting. I will catch up. ;P

Anyway, I wrote two new poems, if any of you are interested in reading them. The first one is about my mom disowning me, and the second poem is about idiotic materialistic people. HERE THEY ARE.Collapse )

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This Is Where The Streetcars Sleep... [14 Sep 2004|10:49am]

[ mood | accomplished ]

I wrote this on the streetcar one day listening to Mogwai. I put the song on repeat and all I could think about was this one guy and his plight. So I thought I'd post it here because I haven't posted any of my writing in a while. The title, obviously came to me while I was on the streetcar, as does most of my writing. I could only get part of the story, because thats how long the song is. I don't know what happened between them before, and I don't know what he will say next. I think its up to you, the reader.

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[05 Sep 2004|12:21pm]

yes yes. thats right. another username for jessica. im sorry guys your heads must be like exploding with confusedness...
ill try and have some actual poetry and whatnot up here soon. im going through major writers block at the moment. eh..

and last but not least..heres some shameless community promo from your mod...

yes yes thats right. shameless community promo. bad jessica =(Collapse )

haven't posted in a while, but..... [30 Aug 2004|06:51am]

Look at this face
Do you see the bites and the scars?
Of the pain I have felt
Many days ago
Under the dark awful sun

Look at these eyes
That long to be loved
The way only dreams can make it
Tell me do you think
You can make this suffering disappear

Look at the tears
Rolling softly down my cheek
Wondering who will be next
To shatter this innocent girl’s hopes
And bury her in the ground for good

Look at this heart
It’s pounding for you
But the fear might over take me
And I won’t know what to do
Love is all I have inside of me
But which I never get in return

Look at this girl
Looking at you
She’s lonely and scared
And only your arms will do
So take her away
Take her to a whole other world
That’s waiting for the both of you
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[29 Aug 2004|06:36am]

[ mood | chipper ]

story im writting..tell me what you thinkCollapse )

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[29 Aug 2004|01:21am]

[ mood | chipper ]

come find out what color sharpie you are!
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Saving Me [23 Aug 2004|10:19pm]

[ mood | happy ]

heres a happy song i wrote because jess yelled at me to write one, so here it tis

Saving Me

I love the way you feel when you lie next to me.
I love the way you laugh; I love the way you breathe.
I just want to mend your broken heart and seams.
I don't ever want you to need to bleed.

I just want to keep you from hurting.
I want you to see that you're perfect.
I want you to want, to need me here.
I just want you to see what I see,
Whenever I look in your eyes.
You are an Angel to me, an Angel who needs saving.

You love to play in the rain, you always make me smile.
You love to sing and dance, you are so wild.
Your eyes they drive me crazy, they're so alive.
When my hand touches your skin I don't ever feel like leaving your side.

I just want to keep you from hurting.
I want you to see that you're perfect.
I want you to want, to need me here.
I just want you to see what I see,
Whenever I look in your eyes.
You are an Angel to me, an Angel who needs saving.

So please don't go; I swear I'll protect you.
You really don't know, how much I love you.

I just want to keep you from hurting.
I want you to see that you're perfect.
I want you to want, to need me here.
I just want you to see what I see,
Whenever I look in your eyes.
You are an Angel to me, an Angel here to save me.

I thought I was saving you, But you were really saving me...

there it is


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