Yes, it's cliche, yes there are no paragraphs. It is my first attempt at 'erotica'
So, we drove to the coast, the sun was shining and the windows open on the car, not a care in the world. Friday night and nobody to stop us, I looked across at you and could see you were smirking at me out of the corner of your eye; I couldn’t wait to know what you had in store for me. I wasn’t allowed to pack the bags so had no idea what could be in there, I knew it would be fun though. We pulled up in a car park and I soon realised that there was no one around. I looked over to you again and realised this time you were looking back at me, I could see it in your eyes the fun was about to begin. Without saying a word you got out of the car and walked across to my side, at all times keeping your eyes on me. Once at my side of the car you opened the door and dragged me out. With my hands held behind my back you marched me to the front of the car and with one swift movement I was laying face down on the bonnet. The heat from the engine against my breasts was intense but only added to the excitement. You reached into your pocket and pulled the rope where you deftly bound my hands above my head, handy having windscreen wipers. I knew that you had taken a step back, even though I couldn’t see you, and I knew you were watching me, admiring the view. The anticipation of what would happen was growing and I could feel the hot tingling feeling stir inside me. My palms were now growing damp and I could feel my heart beating faster and faster. I heard the gravel crunch and I knew then it was about to begin. It started with a sting on the leg, nothing too painful but I knew it would mark. After that came the lick, you always had a thing for licking before the welt came up and it always made the pain a little deeper. Then the tip of your finger started to trace my calf muscle. I waited for you to get to the back of my knee; you knew this was going to be the beginning of the end for me, once there, there was no turning back. I could feel your hot breath on my leg, the tip of you tongue teasing me, right behind the knee, then the next thing I knew, were the bites, nibbling to begin with and then harder more desperate. I started to buckle but the binds kept me upright. Again your finger tip started to creep up my leg and spreading your hand, one fingertip on one thigh and one thumb tip on the other, the dampness started to creep in. I squirmed to try to get more comfortable and to be able rub myself against you when you pulled your hand away teasing me; you knew I wasn’t ready yet. Sting, another whip, this time against the back of my knee, I cried out, not just in pain, but surprise and pleasure also. Now I knew you were smiling, which made it all the more delicious. You leaned over me and whispered in my ear ‘Again?’ you said, and all I could do was whimper. The lash was a bit harder this time and I had to bite down on my lip to stop myself from screaming, I could taste blood. Your hand began to climb again and I moaned as I knew where it was leading, I just had no idea how long it would take. The cool breeze was blowing against my skin and it refreshed me for a bit, but the heat of the engine and of myself was rising through me, coursing through me, I could feel my chest becoming flushed and my breathing heavy, you must have picked up on these signs too, as I could feel your hand upon my knickers. The deep guttural moaning from you must mean that I was hot there, your fingers moving to find a way in. You stepped back again threw my skirt above my waist and ripped my knickers from me. I gasped inwardly as you went down on me your tongue finding all the crevices, licking me, probing, sucking from me. Your hands grasped my arse and squeezed. As you sucked I could hear you moaning, which only added to the vibrations on my clit. I could feel myself becoming wetter and wetter, my juices mixing with your saliva. Your hand then finding me, reaching inside, digging deeper and deeper. I knew I was close to the edge and you knew I was close too. As quickly as you began you stopped, you turned me round so I could face you, my juice around your mouth, slight shining in the sun. You leaned into me and kissed me hard on the mouth, forcing yourself into me, I could smell myself on you. As you were kissing me your hand started to find its way under my top rubbing along my breastbone, looking for my breasts. Under my bra and then to the nipples, pulling at them, rubbing them between your fingers, my moaning became more breathy and then you were ripping my top from me, until I was there laying semi naked on the bonnet of our car. There was a kind of madness in your eyes as you reached over to take the binds from the wipers. With my hands still tied you made me kneel in front of you. With one hand you undone your jeans and released your dick and with the gentlest of movements moved my head so I could take you in my mouth. Your dick filled me and as I looked up at you, you threw your head and let out the longest groan I had ever heard. You held yourself for me but let me do the moving. To begin with the smallest amount of sucking on the end and then deeper. I knew that you always enjoyed a little bit of biting so whilst looking at you directly in the eye I nibbled, sucked and ever so gently put the tip of my tongue in your hole, as I planned for your legs buckled and just for that split second I had control. You straightened again and thrust yourself in me, before picking me up and throwing me against the bonnet of the car again, face down. I knew then that I was going to get it, with you holding onto my hands you thrust your dick into me, forcing it in. I screamed with pain, pleasure and desire all rolled into one. With your other hand you swept back my hair and bit hard into my neck, I felt my cunt contract. The pain was unbearable but exquisite all rolled into one. Your hand then moved in front of me to play with my nipples again, this time pulling harder. Growling in my ear, that one day you vow to get my nipples pierced so you can lead me around, with these words you pulled harder, all the time thrusting harder into me. I could feel your breath on my neck and I knew that you were close. I wanted to scream out ‘harder’ but I knew now wasn’t my time to speak. I just knew that you wanted to fuck my brains out and afterwards I would get my permission to talk. Your hand started to move down my body and found my clit, just one touch and I was on the edge again, I knew I was close I began moving myself more to get as much of you in me and also to move my clit against your fingers. I could feel all of my wetness on your hand and I knew that I was close. Your movements became harder and faster and you began to groan ever so quietly to begin with in my ear. I so wanted to turn and face you, to take you in my mouth again and taste myself. I wanted to suck you until you came and then fuck you some more, but I knew this was your time. So I waited, I knew that my time would come. You hand was moving faster across my clit and occasionally a finger would enter me at the same time. I could feel the orgasm come on, it started in my toes and worked its way up my legs and then to my cunt, the release was brilliant. The contractions becoming more and more intense. I couldn’t help myself I had to shout. As I did you came. I felt you explode inside me as your thrusts became slower and slower. You fell on me and your breathing started to slow. You slipped out of me and I could feel the wetness trickling down my thighs. You reached over me to release the binds. I looked at you and I could see the hunger in your eyes, I knew the weekend had only just begun!