crowblackdreamx (crowblackdreamx) wrote in __singonpaper,
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like art could save (a wretch like) me


Name: Liora
Age: 14
Experience: None... but i can write pretty words... <33
Music: uhmm... Spill Canvas, Bright Eyes, Matchbook Romance, Avenged Sevenfold, The Used, i like alotta punkrock, but im not in the mood to list them.
Favorite Poem: i hope songs count... but my favorite poetical lyrics are by spill canvas... All Hail The Heartbreaker


I had the notion that you'd make me change my ways
My bad habits would be gone in a matter of days
I had the feeling that you'd open up my eyes
To a whole new world that had since been in disguise

But that day will most likely never come for me
And it's just my luck to end up getting stuck
To everything you are

So tonight I'll sit and pick apart your pictures
And overanalyze your words
But the truth is that I've never fallen so hard
It's taking everything in me
Just to forget your sweater so far

I had the notion that you'd make me forget the world
But your undecisive mind shows me that
You are "just another girl"
I had the feeling that those looks you gave me were real
What if I ripped your heart apart at the seams
Maybe then you'd know how I feel

But that day will most likely never come for me
And it's just my luck to end up getting stuck
To everything you are

So tonight I'll sit and pick apart your pictures
And overanalyze your words
But the truth is that I've never fallen so hard
It's taking everything in me
Just to forget your sweater so far

I can honestly say
That I never, ever, ever felt this way
Your lips, your eyelashes, your skin
These are the parts of your body
That cause my comatose to begin

I can honestly say
That I never, ever, ever felt this way
Your lips, your eyelashes, your skin
These are the parts of your body
That cause my comatose to begin

I will sleep another day
I don't really need to anyway
What's the point when my dreams are infected
With words you used to say
I will breathe in a moment
As long as I keep my distance
I wouldn't want to go messing anything up

So don't go worrying about me
It's not like I think about you constantly
So maybe I do, but that shouldn't affect
Your life anymore
I knew it the moment you walked into the door

So don't go worrying about me
It's not like I think about you constantly
So maybe I do, but that shouldn't affect
Your life anymore
I knew it the moment you walked into the door

I'll let you get the best of me
Because there's nothing else that I do well
I'll let you get the best of me
Because there's nothing else that I do well
I'll be the giver and you'll be the taker
I guess that's how this one's gonna go I'll be the giver and you'll be the taker
You've got me down on my knees and I proclaim
All hail the heartbreaker

...its sort of long, but its so pretty.

Example of Work:

uhmmm... this is a poem/song/whatever...
i worked a long time on it and i hope i
didnt pick it apart too much..... its called:

A RATHER POETICAL PLEDGE OF DEVOTION


Life is overrated baby
Life is complicated now
and it seems that everytime you fall, angel
theres somethin there to keep you down

but if you look down, darling
ill surely lift your hopes, i will
i refuse to let you down
and if ever you get turned upsidedown
i swear ill turn it around

and i can see that all these
endless impossibilities, baby
are really getting you down
twisting your stomach inside out
but if your lips are preoccupied,
honey, you wont be able to frown

but if you look down, darling
ill surely lift your hopes, i will
i refuse to let you down
and if ever you get turned upsidedown
i swear ill turn it around

and if ever you get lost in the clouds
i wear ill keep your feet on the ground

and if you look down, darling
ill surely lift your hopes, i will
i refuse to let you down
and if ever you get turned upsidedown
i swear ill turn it around

love is a powerful emotion
to you i swear my devotion


5 Words Describing Yourself: emotional, confused, sincere, loving, unsure
Link Where You Promoted: http://www.livejournal.com/community/funeral_home/15822.html
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