she__sings (she__sings) wrote in __amatory_verse,
she__sings
she__sings
__amatory_verse

stamped//cliche

read it through before you kill me...


Help me think of more cliches to add to this, better ways to rhyme, etc. Totally a first draft... very much so. Help me, I have writers block and can't write anything that doesn't suck!!

Let me swim in your eyes,
find the key to your heart
let me swing on a sunset,
your body--an art.
let me melt into you
your words, like dance
all the cliches I can think of,
don't stand a chance.


I just realized how novice this poem is, but I figured I needed to post something, I haven't in so long...
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