black_alnair ([info]black_alnair) wrote in [info]we3sisters,
@ 2008-10-30 01:34:00
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Entry tags:black alnair, d/a, did, draco, draco/astoria, hp, ibmibd, itcol, itcol-b, swdbm

it's been minutes it's been days, drabble, d/a
Pairing: Draco/Astoria
Summary:
Inspired again. Continuing on the experiment that began with In the City of Love, but more of a direct response / continuation to [info]fallenwitch ’s Shoo Witch, Don’t Bother Me.
Rating:
PG
Author’s Notes: This time inspiration came from my first hearing of Snow Patrol's "Crack the Shutters." And oh, bonus points for figuring out the two ways I more or less connected this to In the City of Love. I don't know what you could do with those points, but it's the same as shopping at any large retail store. Or maybe just a fic request...
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.

The suffocating cold creeps past the double pane windows and into his room, into his lungs, clutching clutching onto that organ inside his chest that is his heart. He has been told he doesn’t have one but he can feel it, he can feel it and it hurts.

It beats, beats, even against the winter cold, and its tattoo speeds up as the chill makes him think of Astoria’s hands – always cold – on his neck, seeking warmth, waking him up. She’s not here anymore to tease him, laugh at him, bother him with her icy hands. This was life’s irony – he cannot sleep now, when her cold cold hands – the only part of her that’s ever cold – is not finding warmth in him.



Draco sighs, thinking of when he used to wake up from dreaming about her brown brown eyes. He can see them now, though he is not dreaming. And he just wants to see them, not in his mind, not as an image he conjures up here in the cold, but in the light of day – bright and laughing and teasing.



You can come, you can come with me.



Draco nods and sits up from his reclined position. This time, he isn't giving up. This time, he's going. To her. And without another thought, he leaves the cold behind.




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[info]_____faith
2008-10-30 02:34 pm UTC (link)
:)

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[info]black_alnair
2008-10-31 01:16 am UTC (link)
Hopes it makes you think of writing "Kissing Astoria Greengrass." *g*

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[info]_____faith
2008-10-31 01:19 am UTC (link)
Hee, this and the recent pictures, yes.

Although I didn't know you thought of Astoria with brown eyes...oops.

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[info]black_alnair
2008-10-31 01:24 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I know Mona has dark blue eyes but in the first few pictures I saw of her, it was hard to tell they were blue so I thought they were brown! In any case, I had Astoria figured out all in my head before Mona came along and tweaked the image a bit. But eyes, still brown in fic. :)

Hope the icon helps too then.

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[info]_____faith
2008-10-31 01:29 am UTC (link)
Hahaha I see.

Oh Zach, stop it X)

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[info]black_alnair
2008-10-31 01:37 am UTC (link)
Obviously the man can't help himself.

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[info]_____faith
2008-10-31 01:39 am UTC (link)
And that's why I love him ♥

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[info]black_alnair
2008-10-31 05:43 am UTC (link)
Oh, btw, is Solange the CK Euphoria model or is it someone else? I'm never quite sure about these things...

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[info]_____faith
2008-10-31 05:48 am UTC (link)
Nope! That's Natalia Vodianova :)

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[info]black_alnair
2008-11-10 04:34 am UTC (link)
Doesn't she have like three kids (and still an excellent body)?

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[info]_____faith
2008-11-10 04:37 am UTC (link)
Yep!

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[info]peki
2008-10-30 05:15 pm UTC (link)
Draco thinking about life's irony, and him holding Astoria's hands - that's the connection, yes? *g* You do like your guessing games.

I'm not quite sure I understand this one - at first, I thought Astoria was dead in this, but that's not what you mean, right? Or is it? Oh the riddles! :) You write such wonderfully intricate drabbles. There's always an air of mystery.

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[info]black_alnair
2008-10-31 01:21 am UTC (link)
Ooooh...you're good. *squee* Haha, I do LOVE games. :) It's like I've never aged...I certainly don't look like I have I guess! Actually, there was another sneakier connection which I don't think anyone would have gotten. My friend and I used to do this in college. We called it war and we would say, "Point for me" if we ever got it. It's a slow process - like Risk...or soccer. Some of them were really difficult. We would refer to the remotest things ever and it would require multiple chains of connect. Here, it is the inspiration. I was reading "A Thousand Splendid Suns" for the first drabble. Here, I was listening to a song from an albulm called "A Hundred Thousand Suns."

This will all connect one day... I think if you listen to the song, it sounds like the girl is dead but there are no bitter endings for my D/A, just some angsty moments so it doesn't get too fluffy. *g*

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[info]fallenwitch
2008-10-31 08:19 pm UTC (link)
Beautiful writing - as usual. As for the story line - *bangs head against wall repeatedly*

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[info]black_alnair
2008-11-02 02:49 am UTC (link)
What's that suppose to mean? (The head hitting)

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[info]fallenwitch
2008-11-02 04:41 am UTC (link)
It means I'm a simple minded person. Your D/A drabbles - as much as I love them - are too much for me to follow. I know they connect in your mind, but they are a jumbled mix of time and place and varied emotions in mine. The key word here is "jumbled". I find the moving time line the most disorienting of all. It's like a house with no foundation. Things are fluid and in motion that shouldn't be. There is no ground. There is no point of reference. There is, alas, no northern star in this series of drabbles - at least for me there isn't. It leaves me confused and discouraged - hence the frustrated head banging. I'm obviously the dissenting opinion here so feel free to ignore, as usual. *g*

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[info]black_alnair
2008-11-04 05:49 am UTC (link)
Aren't you the one who writes without a plan? I think you're thinking too hard about these drabbles, about how they connect, about how they fit in a puzzle and the thing is - they don't quite yet, and they might, but they might not. They are all different scenarios and possibilities spun out of a core relationship yet to be written. But I guess you *want* it to be, but I suppose for me, until I have *time* to get it down, to each their own.

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[info]fallenwitch
2008-11-04 01:45 pm UTC (link)
Why didn't you say so earlier? *facepalm* Thank goodness I revealed my ignorance. I thought I was supposed to try and connect them because I was under the misconception that they were all part of one big D/A story - just different slices in time. I feel very relieved to know that the connection between D/A is the anchor to these wonderful tidbits. I get it! Sorry for being so slow and off track.

Honestly, the only thing I *want* is for you to write a tiny bit about how they met, one possible scenario. I'm dying for a peek at that.

You're right. I don't write with a firm plan. I can't. I find it too constraining. I usually have the beginning and ending in mind and make it up as I go - sort of like life. You know how it begins and ends, but filling in the big blank is what it's all about. *g*

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[info]black_alnair
2008-11-10 04:32 am UTC (link)
I still remember being in junior high and watching "Hope Floats." It was not a very good movie but the last line; as cliche and sentimental as it was, I still like it: "Beginnings are always scary, endings usually sad, but it's the middle that counts."

I *am* working on it woman, much more than I should be. It has gotten a bit...political, though. Hm, now how did THAT happen?

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