Title: Sneeze
Pairing(s): Clex
Spoilers: up to Season 6 'Sneeze'
Category: episode-related, drama, angst, romance
Rating: PG
Summary: A re-write of 'Sneeze.' As the world tries to come to terms with the aftermath of Dark Thursday, Clark and Lex face more immediate concerns when the young Luthor is kidnapped by someone hoping to discover the source of his power during Zod's possession. Meanwhile, Clark's time in the Phantom Zone takes its toll on the Kryptonian in a particularly unwelcome fashion - a common cold.
Author's note: So, yes, if you've seen the actual episode this will be pretty familiar :p Sorry about that. In fact if anyone wants to see or refresh themsleves on how this scene looks onscreen you can check it out at my YouTube account
here. Hopefully my little extras around the dialogue will entertain enough until the next original part is up. Oh, and Oliver's clock tower is in no way a metaphor for the actual show. Honest :p
And by the by. When I first started this fic with Reckoning Redux it was at the urging of my friend Bobster and all I cared about was getting the ideas in my head down on paper. Now, well, my style and quality of writing is starting to become more important to me. I know I'll never be the next Shakespeare, but I want this fic to be the best it can be, so if anyone reading ever sees something they think could have been phrased better or is written in a way that doesn't make sense to them, please please please
point it out and suggest alternatives. I will listen. I will probably even change the part in question. The feedback so far has been amazing but I'm lacking in the critical department and without that element I'll just never learn! Thanks guys :)
( Part IX )