Not a Dirty Frakking Toaster, really, I mean it... ([info]blackpaladin) wrote in [info]tww100,
@ 2004-03-14 23:33:00
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First attempt at a slash drabble
Title: It's All in the Phrasing
Author: [info]blackpaladin
Fandom: The West Wing
Pairing: Abbey/Josh/Amy
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Humor, Slash
Archive: Ask first
Spoilers: None
Written for: [info]tww100 challenge #36 - use three or more characters in your drabble
Disclaimer: Aaron made them. I/we just borrow them from him every once in a while.
Author's Note: This is my first attempt at WW fanfic, and my first attempt at slash, so please be kind. (Although constructive criticism is appreciated!) But the oddest things occur to you when you're stopped at a McDonald's during a three-hour roadtrip...


In a flash, Josh sat up and threw his hands in the air. "That's it! Mood's ruined. G'night."

Abbey looked at him with amusement and mock pity. "What is it, Josh?"

"It's... just..."

"A second ago, you didn't seem to have a problem with putting your cock in my mouth."

"No, that was good..."

"And your girlfriend talking dirty while licking my pussy? Didn't you like watching that?"

"Yes, I enjoyed that..."

Amy propped herself up on her elbows, wiping her mouth and smiling her smirky smile. "Then what's the problem, J?"

"Amy," Josh sputtered, "you called her 'Ma'am!'"



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[info]skywaterblue
2004-03-14 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Heh. That's pretty awesome for a first try.

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[info]obv_hot_mess
2004-03-14 10:16 pm UTC (link)
Ha, funny!

In a flash, Josh sat up and threw his hands in the air. "That's it! Mood's ruined. G'night."

Very Josh :)

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[info]michellek
2004-03-14 10:49 pm UTC (link)
Bwahwah!

Nice job. :)

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[info]femslashqueen
2004-03-15 02:52 am UTC (link)
LOL
Me likes!
Fabulous first attempt.

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[info]spectralsoul
2004-03-15 03:15 am UTC (link)
Loved that last line.

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[info]lil_ani
2004-03-15 03:24 am UTC (link)
Abbey/Josh and Abbey/Amy in the same fic? That was so awesome! Outstanding first try!

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[info]writerpuppy
2004-03-15 09:46 am UTC (link)
That is absolutely hilarious, and absolutely Josh. Well done.

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[info]chelsea_energy
2004-03-15 10:52 am UTC (link)
I love it, and welcome. :D

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[info]athena4lynn
2004-03-15 03:39 pm UTC (link)
LOLOL!!

Too funny - and VERY nice for a first attempt.

Welcome ;)

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[info]classicshe
2004-03-15 07:30 pm UTC (link)
Loved your fic - You have created a believable, unique threesome which could provoke quite a few fics.

Keep it up! Submit it the National Library

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