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Hi you lovely people in here, I'm afraid I'm a newbie (I hate saying that!) I've recently been wandering the various Gravi communities on here, hopefully this time I will settle down a bit. Tohma and Yuki are my favourite pairing, naturally...
I've felt a bit lost and unloved. I recently posted a fic somewhere else, looking for help and concrit etc, and only got one comment, and I felt embarassed and blamed my bad writing. But after hiding away my friends reassured me that I'm always too hard on myself and that maybe other people just didn't have time to read. So here we go again, I'm so painfully shy about posting, gah, but I would love some feedback. It's my first fanfic as I only write original stuff usually.
So please, if you read it, whether you like it, hate it, spot a glaring error or want to point and laugh, please tell me why!! I'm English so I apologise to American spellers if my words look weird at all! Thank you for stopping by ^-^
Title: Wretched Grey
Pairing(s)/Characters: implied pairings only...characters Yuki, Tohma, Ryuichi, Noriko
Word Count: 1,947 i thinks...
Rating/Warnings: Well there's a bit of swearing, implied drug use (but there might not be any, decide for yourselves!) and far too much dancing!! Should this make it 14+?
Disclaimer: These characters are totally not mine!!
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| The Language he Left- Chapter 3/5 |
[21 Sep 2006|12:11pm] |
Author: Bitterfig
Title: The Language He Left
Chapter: 3/5
Fandom: Gravitation
Characters: Yuki Eiri/Seguchi Tohma
Summary: A five-part examination of the way Yuki Eiri’s early relationship with Kitazawa Yuki influenced his adult conceptions of love and sexuality.
Word Count: 1149
Beta Reader: Nzomniac
Rating: R
Warnings: Slash, sex, references to sexual situations between an adult and a child, mentions of rape and volence.
Author’s Note: This is the third installment in a five chapter piece written for the lj community 5trueloves using prompt #28 Secret.
Part I
Part 2
Part 4
Part 5
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| Fic: Glaze |
[24 Aug 2006|05:20pm] |
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Title: Glaze
Author: Bitterfig
Fandom: Gravitation
Pairing: Uesugi Eiri/Seguchi Tohma
Word Count: 2094
Beta Reader: Nzomniac
Summary: My praise song to the redemptive powers of writing. Set four years before the series begins. Eiri is eighteen, living in his father’s home, depressed, violent and completely out of control.
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, some slashy brother-in-law interaction and a bizarre sexual dream sequence.
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| 50 Sentences on Yuki Eiri and Seguchi Tohma |
[22 Aug 2006|01:55pm] |
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Author: Bitterfig
Pairing: Yuki Eiri/Seguchi Tohma
Fandom: Gravitation
Rating: R
Warnings: Slash, sex, angst.
Author's Notes: This was created for the 1sentence lj community theme set Alpha. It's unbetaed because most of the sentences completely disregard grammar.
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| Fic: Mozart Orchid (Seguchi Tohma/Yuki Eiri) |
[31 Jul 2006|11:54am] |
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Title: Mozart Orchid
Author: Bitterfig
Fandom: Gravitation
Pairing: Seguchi Tohma/Yuki Eiri
Summary: Yuki wasn’t always such a bastard. He has a funny way of remembering that.
Word Count: 1105
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Slash, angst, sex, language.
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters. I do not profit from their use in any way.
Author’s Note: First Gravitation story. Fingers crossed.
Beta Reader: Nzomniac
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| Collateral Chapter 2 (Tohma X Eiri) |
[20 May 2006|11:45am] |
( Author's Notes )
Click here for Chapter 1
Collateral Chapter 2
Yuki felt numb as he drove toward the Hotel Seiyo. It was a luxury hotel in Ginza, the most expensive district in Tokyo. Tohma spared no expense; that was certain. A little cuisine and conversation didn’t sound so bad but Yuki was still left with a sense of dread.
First and foremost, Yuki was anxious that he was going to lose Tohma as a friend. Tohma had always been poor at hiding his amorous feelings for Yuki and he was maddeningly vague about details for their “arrangement.” What if his brother-in-law did something stupid or pushed things too far? Although Yuki feigned disinterest during Tohma’s visits, he knew that his brother-in-law was one of the few people he could turn to in a crisis, or at least someone whom he felt understood him. This date might change everything between them, and without Tohma--
Yuki’s stomach cramped, bringing the taste of copper to his mouth. Shit. It had only been a week since he’d left the hospital, after his stress-induced breakdown. He had collapsed on the floor of his apartment, vomiting blood. The doctor said no liquor or cigarettes for two weeks and he was supposed to keep the stress to a minimum. Yuki had pushed himself to keep his promised date with Shuichi, but the sour taste rising in his mouth reminded him that this meeting might be one stressor too many.
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| *GRIN* |
[30 Apr 2006|02:26am] |
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Sit down. Are you sitting? Are you sure? Good. Because I have completely unexpected, earth-shattering news.
After over a year of hiatus, I have updated Shooting Stars.
*grin* For those of you who may need a refresher...
Shooting Stars
Chapter 22, "Beginnings"
Rating: M
Pairings: Prevalent Tohma/Eiri, heavy doses of Tohma/Ryuichi and Tohma/Mika
Chapter notes: Some things are ending, and others are beginning. Tohma and Mika's wedding and the imminent collapse of Nittle Grasper. A test of how far I can stretch Tohma and Noriko's nerves before they snap. Surprisingly unbastardly Eiri. Too many cigaretters, alcohol and other unhealthy vices. There are a hundred roads that lead to happiness...
I hope some of you still remember my beloved brainchild of a story, and are willing to take it up again. Read chapter twenty-two HERE.
Minna-san, TADAIMA!
x-posted to: ![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/community.gif) gravi_muse_meet
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| Tohma X Eiri proofs |
[06 Mar 2006|10:09am] |
You might not like TohmaXEiri, you might think that Tohma is a despicable bastard, but it's pretty hard to argue that Tohma/Eiri is non-canon. Tohma/Eiri isn't just "Remix" and fanfic material. It's always been explicit in the manga that Tohma was romantically & sexually interested in Yuki (Only difference in the Remix is that Tohma actually GETS Yuki instead of just trying)
I was truly baffled when a few people commented on my fanfics that mention Tohma/Eiri with things like, "I don't believe that Tohma/Eiri is canon, but you made it work." That was really why I compiled this list. I was dumbfounded to find that some people really don't think that the T/E thing is explicitly canon.
What follows is 5 pages of Tohma/Eiri proofs directly from the manga (and a little from the TV series/fanbook) that proves that Murakami had a one-sided love in mind from Tohma toward Eiri. Certainly, some passages are more subtle or ambigous than others, but when you look at ALL of this together, I think you'd agree it would be pretty hard to make the argument that there is no Tohma/Eiri interest in the original canon...
Enjoy and please comment. =)
If you repost this proofs list elsewhere, please give me credit as author as it took me quite a while to compile all this. Thanks!
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| Collateral (Tohma/Eiri, Y/S) |
[03 Mar 2006|10:19pm] |
This story begins after Yuki and Shuichi’s “Million Copies Sold” date and branches down a parallel “What if…?” canon.
In vol. 8 of the Gravi manga, Tohma orders Shuichi to stop his relationship with Yuki --a choice I found uncharacteristically foolish on Tohma’s part (for reasons pointed out in this chapter). This fic’s core premise is, “What if Tohma had gone to Yuki instead of Shuichi?”
Also in volume 8, Tohma muses that Yuki is only with Shuichi because he “clicks” for Yuki. Tohma figures that all he needs to do is find someone else that clicks, and Yuki would go for that. Thus, rather than tearing Y/S apart, Tohma inserts himself in as an option in hopes that Yuki will choose him…
Tohma/Eiri, Yuki/Shuichi
1,600 words
Rated: R (for lemon in future chapters)
Thanks to ![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif) imayb1 for beta reading
Comments and criticism will be put to good use (and a sure way to make my day!)
Enjoy!
Chapter 1:
Collateral
Yuki strode into the president’s office without knocking. Tohma rose from his black leather throne at the sight of his visitor, a warm smile immediately on his face. An unannounced disturbance such as this would have been inexcusable sin in anyone else, but Yuki had always been an exception to such rules. Tohma began to cross around the desk towards his visitor to embrace him, but Yuki dropped into the chair on the other side of the desk before he had the chance.
Tohma’s smile did not falter a moment. He had expected just such a reaction. He perched on the corner of the desk, looming over his guest. “A visit from you is always a pleasant surprise, Eiri-san,” he said warmly.
Yuki ignored the greeting. “So what’s this about you dropping Bad Luck?” His expression showed only bland indifference, but the hard edge to his voice betrayed him.
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| A little experiment |
[08 Feb 2006|10:58am] |
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Attention Community members
I'm carrying out a little experiment that will take a couple of minutes of your time to participate in.
All I'd like you to do is state who your favourite Gravi character is (no need to give reasons), then your favourite pairing (no reasons again), and finally your star sign. If you have a partner, then also state the star sign of your partner.
If you'd like me to screen the comment, just say so and I will.
I'll go first,
Tohma
Tohma-Eiri
Aries
Scorpio
I know it's crazy, but please just humour me this once ^__^
I'm planning to make some stats for my own amusement and see if there are any correlations. I'm hoping to have some interesting results, something about a conversation I had last night...
Edit: Thanks for all the input so far. Keep the comments coming. It only works if the stats I'll be working on are numerous. The more the merrier :D
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| A Tohma/ Eiri Valentines ficlet |
[07 Feb 2006|07:35am] |
This is for the February challenge at Muse Meet. I wanted to post it here, if that's okay, since this comm is all about the greatest pairing since peanut butter and jelly. God, Tohma and Eiri are soooo goooood together. Yum. They rule my mind, body and soul. Damnit.
It's Emanuelle-R style. Some sex. Some er... romance? (What passes for it?) ( Read more... )
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| t+e ficclet |
[06 Feb 2006|08:58am] |
Author: Liz
Fic Title: Miserable Lie
Rating: R?
Warnings: Adult themes.
Anime and Pairing: Tohma+Eiri; Eiri /Shuichi (ouch)
( Miserable Lie )
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| Gravitation RPG. w007. |
[22 Nov 2005|09:38pm] |
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I hope this is alright. ^^ If not, just let me know and I'll take it down right away. <3
A friend and I have just opened a new AU Gravitation RPG called gods_gone_wild. It has a mythological theme, where Nittle Grasper serves as the three Omnipotent gods, the Uesugi trio and Ayaka serve as Elements, and anyone else - it's a free for all! More information can be found at the community. There are many characters still open, so if you are interested, please read the user info page in its entirety and submit an application! Our contact information is also located there at the bottom, if you have any questions. You may also ask your questions in this post if you prefer.
We would love to have a full bunch, so please come join our family. ^____^ Thanks, good luck, and happy playing!
Cross-posted to various places~
~*Regina*~
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| Watch it and weep |
[13 Nov 2005|02:48pm] |
Wow, wow, wow and more wow. bakayaro_onna linked me to a Tohma-Eiri AMV and I'm just head over heels with that pairing again.
The video has been put together really nicely and although the song is not normally something I'd go for, the lyrics are just right for the theme.
It's strange because mixed in with all the humor, Bad Luck stuff, Nittle Grasper, ASK, and the Eiri-Shuichi story, it seems like the relationship and the years of history between Tohma and Eiri were practically skimmed over, especially in the anime. They were presented in such a way that for me they felt as part of an afterthought sometimes, and not enough attention was paid to it. It's understandable since the anime is only 13 episodes long, but I wish they'd done it justice. The manga has a lot more details and Tohma is not portrayed so much as the bastard whose sole intentions are to break Eiri and Shu up and make money for NG.
The video has taken all the bits and pieces of Eiri's past to do with Kitazawa and linked them all to the present in a way that is much like the potential I saw in the Gravi universe. Watching it felt like seeing a gathering of all the important things I took away with me from Gravitation the first time I watched it. I saw in it summarized the reasons I'm still interested in the things untold that the Gravi fandom has to offer.
To the risk of sounding petty... the maker could have at least spelt the name of the band properly in the ending credits, but that's something we'll overlook XD She did an awesome job of this video and it has really inspired me. I shall watch it several times today and swoon over it time and time again XD
So, if you want to watch it, get down on your knees and...
Bow down to the greatness of Tohma Seguchi
And if you want you can also read the lyrics behind the cut:
( My Immortal )
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There aren't that many Tohma/Eiri fanfictions out there. So, I figured I might as well put an effort in to increase that number. I haven't decided if this should be a one-drabble piece or a prologue to something more. So, read away, and tell all.
( The Living Dead )
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[16 Jul 2005|07:42pm] |
I'm new to this community, so I thought it worthwhile to introduce myself. I go by Howl, and I've been into Gravitation for a a few years. Tohma has always been my favorite character, and I love TohmaxEiri. They have better chemistry than Eiri and Shuichi, in my opinion, and neither of their voices grate on my ears...anyway, as said here, I think they belong together.
I hope to contribute a few ficlets to this community very soon!
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