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Seneca,
the lead-off song from Tortoise's 2001 album Standards, is one of my favorite songs by the band. As much as I love it, something always bothered me about the song, like a promise inadvertently unkept. It's taken a while, but I think I know now how this great song could be made even better.
Starting off seemingly in medias res we hear what could either be the band warming up or concluding a performance—a muscular, room-filling roar captured with a live essence that could be a studio demo or concert space. As this punch-in section simmers down with a dual drum roll, couple of traded off crashes, and bass sustain, the drummers come to the fore with a pair of heavy, syncopated, phased backbeats they punctuate with bass tones that rattle your speakers. The energy is strong from the outset, and builds more so with a twinset of phased drum rolls leading to what should be 4th gear, keeping the acceleration going.
It's at this point I think the song falters. The promise of continued heaviness and muscle thins out as a guitar ostinato joins: clean, understated, gently phased, it is mismatched to the insistent rhythm and booming bass line propulsing the song forward. In the background a more impressionistic overdriven guitar caked in reverb from the songs beginning punctuates harmonically, strongly contrasting with this foreground choice of voice and revealing more of its weak sensitivity. Add to that a lightly buzzing vintage synthesizer countermelody wandering anemically overhead in half-time, and one gets the impression of a band throttling the tune back out of timidity of what might happen rather than juxtaposing texture and timbre to reveal a more balanced creation.
Thinking about this song in the shower yesterday for some strange reason—blame the Budos Band playing on the bathroom CD player if you wish—I started to dissect what it is about the song I don't like or think could be made better in order to fit my expectations while listening to the song. Piece by piece, I began to hear opportunities to reconstruct and rerecord the song and, in my opinion, make it better. I say these with all modesty and respect for the members of Tortoise and for what they have created over the years, and hope it will not be misread as any kind of failure on their part.
The song itself seems too eager in its postmodern desire to cannabalize the sounds of late 60s hard and experimental rock: cavernous reverb atmosphere, sunny handclaps, clavinet counterpoint, noise and feedback, flanged and phased instrumentation, studio self-consciousness, red-lined analog tape warmth, free voicing and collective expression, heavily syncopated, booming rhythms. All of these are great things, and the excitement of putting them together in a digital soundstew is a valiant effort. They practiced an admirable amount of restraint when constructing this track, reining it in from potential chaos and excess. In the process, I fear they may have been too eager to reconceive the individual elements rather than using those elements' sometimes cliched strengths to the song's advantage.
For instance, I think the melodic ostinato played by the clean guitar is more appropriate for a bass guitar. Voiced by a bass, this element would regain some of the depth and force it lost with its guitar voicing. Doing this would also fit the common jazz practice of placing melodic ostinatos in the lower ranges as a framework to support improvisation and melodic/harmonic exploration in the high range. By putting this element in the high range, I think listeners focus more on it than on the rest of the instrumentation, and may become bored or bothered by its repetitive, almost stagnant nature.
Other changes I considered:
Doing these things I think would deliver on the muscular, propulsive expectations the group sets in listeners at the beginning of the track.
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