Al ([info]buyo105) wrote in [info]supernatural100,
@ 2007-03-02 23:31:00
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Entry tags:challenge #057-freedom

challenge #57 response, And All Of the Thoughts (Don't Know if I'm Strong Enough Now)
Title: And All Of the Thoughts (Don't Know if I'm Strong Enough Now)
Author: [info]buyo105
Rating: PG, swears
Char/Pair: Dean Winchester, gen
Disclaimer: Characters belong to Eric Kripke, the CW, and others. I am in no way earning money or other profit from this fanfic. Makes you sad, don't it?
Prompt: #57, Freedom
A/N: Spn drabbles are hard you guys. First post here *waves* hi, hello, hey! Title is from Anna Nalick's "Catalyst".



There are times when he feels wild. Like the things he hunts, the things he takes down with his bare hands. Senses high, adrenaline higher, he hits his knees in the woods, the thing he's stalking is whothefuckcares where and he howls. Straight up into the goddamn sky, he howls, releases everything since. Then. In one long, solemn note and he's never felt freer. Braver. Never felt more sick to his stomach.

There are times when he feels wild. Times when he wishes for a silver bullet to pierce his heart, like the things he hunts.




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[info]bluesister
2007-03-03 04:56 am UTC (link)
I'm not sure I understand every part of this but I love the energy of it.

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[info]buyo105
2007-03-03 05:23 am UTC (link)
What's confusing, if you don't mind my asking? If I knew what was wrong maybe I could fix it. Or file it away for future reference. But thank you for reading, though, and for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it :D

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[info]bluesister
2007-03-03 06:45 am UTC (link)
It's not a fault. I think it's the ending that sounds so suicidal but I suppose that's Dean's reaction to things truly wild and monstrous. And I think it works fine not to understand it all 'cause this seems to be more emotional than intellectual.

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[info]buyo105
2007-03-03 06:53 am UTC (link)
Ah, I see. Thanks :)

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[info]aaronlisa
2007-03-03 04:57 am UTC (link)
Powerful drabble.

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[info]buyo105
2007-03-03 05:24 am UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]chelseafrew
2007-03-03 12:39 pm UTC (link)
Welcome. Great first drabble. Keep practicing! The more you work at them, the easier they are...

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[info]buyo105
2007-03-03 10:15 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for the welcome :D I've written quite a few Harry Potter drabbles, but it's tough getting the Winchesters into a hundred words, I applaud those who manage to do it well. I'll keep at it tho *S* Thanks again for the welcome, and taking the time to read!

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[info]afteriwake
2007-07-14 04:22 am UTC (link)
Oooh. Very good insight into Dean. Loved it.

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[info]buyo105
2007-07-14 04:25 am UTC (link)
Well thank you :D I'm glad you liked!

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