Sweets ([info]pensive1) wrote in [info]starkindustries,
@ 2008-10-13 17:37:00
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Entry tags:au, fic, genre:gen, rating:r, tony/oc, whateververse

FIC: Thirst - R - gen
Um yeah. Vampires.

Written in September, but posted publicly for [info]amonitrate 's Halloween Fic A Thon



At first Tony thinks it's dehydration. Too many single-malt bourbons and not enough seaweed smoothies.

He chugs water and Gatorade all day but that doesn't help much. He has no appetite, but this is normal when he's working on something, so Pepper doesn't harangue him about it. She also doesn't say anything about the weird hickey on his neck, because Tony likes to wear trophies sometimes.

He eats at dinnertime out of habit, and because he's thirsty still, and he knows that sometimes the body gets hunger and thirst confused. An hour later he feels sick and throws up the dinner. Tony thinks maybe he is coming down with something, so he goes to bed early.

*
Tony yelps when she bites into his neck, then moans when she rocks her hips down, impaling herself on him. He uses her waist for leverage and thrusts upward, driving into her. He doesn't mind that she's still biting him, or that she's sucking lightly at his neck in time with his thrusts. It's kinky, and he's okay with that.

"Let me kiss you," he whispers. She stops biting and drags the tip of her nose across his chin, teasing him. Tony cups her face in his hands and pulls her lips to his. As he dips his tongue into her mouth, he tastes blood. His blood.

Her thighs clench around him and as she climaxes, she throws her head back and laughs. Her nails are scraping down his sides and the intermix ratio of pain and pleasure is enough to send him over the edge. His back arches and he's coming...


*
The next day, when Tony wakes up half-hard and blinded by the sunlight Jarvis lets into his bedroom, he's more thirsty than he's ever been in his entire life. He gulps down the morning espresso Pepper brings him but pukes it up fifteen minutes later. He feels drained even after sleeping for twelve hours.

Tony decides he has a stomach virus, and takes some painkillers to numb the achiness in his body. Pepper wants him to call a doctor, but Tony tells her viruses have to be left to the body's immune system and there's nothing besides fluids and bed rest a doctor would prescribe anyway. Pepper cancels all his appointments but opts to work in the mansion instead of taking the rest of the day off.

Tony tries to sit outside by the pool because being outside improves his mood, but is forced to come back inside when he starts to burn after only a few moments. He is disappointed but knows that sometimes medicine makes the skin photosensitive. He drinks three glasses of water.

Pepper tells him to go to bed but he flops down on the couch next to where she is working and closes his eyes. He wants to work in the shop, but knows he is too weak to do anything productive. She tells Jarvis to dim the living room and Tony falls asleep.

Pepper's loud typing wakes him up at dinnertime. He asks her what emails from the Board of Directors pissed her off so much. She makes an odd face but obliges him by closing her laptop. He asks for water, and when she brings him the fourth glass she insists he see a doctor. It's just past dusk and Tony feels a little strength return to him, but assures her he'll make a phone call if he's not better in the morning.

Pepper starts to collect her things, and hisses when she accidentally paper-cuts herself. Tony sits up as she cradles the bleeding finger, and suddenly his mouth is watering because he can smell it. He takes her hand from her, inspecting the wound. She insists that it's only a bandage away from being fixed, but then he's staring at it and his eyes are glazing over, and before she can protest he has it in his mouth. Sucking on it.

It is irrational. Some distant part of Tony's brain knows this, but all he can think about is how good it tastes, better than every $100 steak he's ever eaten. In fact, it's almost sweet. Pepper yanks her hand away from him and looks scandalized. Tony is suddenly very aware of the veins in her neck and wrist throbbing just below the surface of her fair skin.

And he's still so thirsty...




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[info]jynx
2008-10-13 10:39 pm UTC (link)
you, uh, might wanna put this behind a cut ^^;

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-13 10:40 pm UTC (link)
Fixed (dammit!)

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(no subject) - [info]jynx, 2008-10-13 10:42 pm UTC

[info]amonitrate
2008-10-13 10:45 pm UTC (link)
aw, man, you can't leave us hanging there!

Pepper better be careful, before she ends up as a snack.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-13 10:49 pm UTC (link)
I

I CAN'T IN GOOD CONSCIENCE WRITE PAST THIS.

unless people actually LIKE it, in which case I *may* reconsider?

Edited at 2008-10-13 10:49 pm UTC

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(no subject) - [info]bohemianrose, 2008-10-14 12:29 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-14 03:21 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]besyd, 2008-10-14 12:55 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]obliviousally, 2008-10-15 01:02 pm UTC

[info]tonpep1
2008-10-13 10:50 pm UTC (link)
I agree, you can't leave it there. I really like what you are doing so far and really hope you decide to continue.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-13 11:02 pm UTC (link)
OPEN ENDING BWUAHAHAHHAA


but in all seriousness, thank you very much for feedback! :)

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(no subject) - [info]tonpep1, 2008-10-13 11:05 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-14 02:00 am UTC

[info]agilebrit
2008-10-13 10:53 pm UTC (link)
Gawd, I still love this story...

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[info]agilebrit
2008-10-13 10:55 pm UTC (link)
Also, I think it's fine where you left it. But, then, I'm the Queen of Open-Ended Endings, so it might just be me.

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(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-13 11:02 pm UTC

[info]hockeyiris
2008-10-13 11:09 pm UTC (link)
Ooh. I'm intrigued. And loved it.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-14 02:06 am UTC (link)
Thank you love
xoxoxo

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[info]besyd
2008-10-14 12:57 am UTC (link)
Excellent and perfectly Halloween creepy. And yes, it's a nice stand-alone ... but I'd read more if there was more.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-14 02:06 am UTC (link)
Ohhh my god you guys need to stop tempting me.....


Thank you so much for the feedback :3

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[info]ladyelaine
2008-10-14 01:21 am UTC (link)
O.O

Meep!

Lovelovelove. I hope your vamp!muse continues to stalk you!

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-14 02:02 am UTC (link)
♥ ♥ ♥

The more comments I get, the more that muse tries to bite me again!!

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[info]europa_kore
2008-10-14 01:34 am UTC (link)
Reconsider! Please?

It's finger-lickin' good.

Ha ha.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-15 05:34 pm UTC (link)
*is reconsidering*

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(no subject) - [info]europa_kore, 2008-10-15 06:48 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-15 08:49 pm UTC

[info]neondaisies
2008-10-14 02:07 am UTC (link)
This story definitely falls under the categorization of "Need More." As in, *I* need more, and soon. :P

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-14 02:34 am UTC (link)
Lordy lordy what is happening to me? See, because of all these comments (WHICH I DID NOT EXPECT AND CERTAINLY WAS NOT PREPARED FOR) my mental hamster is running in its wheel, trying to escape plot bunnies!

Things like
*DO PEOPLE REALIZE HOW INCONVENIENT THIS VAMPIRE THING WILL BE TO HIS SUPERHERO LIFE
*PEPPER, SNACK OR VICTIM
*IF OPTION #2 TONY MUST ANGST
*ACTUAL VAMPIRISM OR MEDICAL CONDITION

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[info]melanieriot
2008-10-14 07:14 am UTC (link)
Gooooooood story. I honestly would go with actual vampire!Tony...which could be lots of fun (and dish up plenty of angst (NICEANGST!!!MMMYES?!) in the future. Pepper=snack...I don't think even an irrationl vampire Tony would do any lasting harm to his gal Friday...which means he could totes push her away...causing...wait for it...MOARANGST!!! And yes, vampirisim would be inconvenient...but there's so many potential crack fics surrounding that you wouldn't even believe. Or maybe you would.

Omgyousohavetocontinue. :D and the plot bunnies are taking over my brain as well. Damnit!

(ps. Stephanie Meyer don't have shit on you and she wrote four books. Jussayin.)

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-14 02:29 pm UTC (link)
Oh I am totally aware that the sitch is teetering on the crackfic border! I keep wanting to write SERIOUS SEQUEL but all I can think of is Tony--as if he NEEDED more charm (or another addiction!)--using his vampy powers to seduce even more people, making bad bloodsucker jokes, and sipping his food loudly during meetings.

All us who are now bitten by the vamp-bunny should collaborate. I sometimes have issues finishing fic.

*blush* I am unworthy of your high praise! But I am flattered by it. Thank you, doll ^^;;

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(no subject) - [info]melanieriot, 2008-10-14 03:43 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-14 03:52 pm UTC
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[info]invaderk
2008-10-14 09:48 pm UTC (link)
Oh how I love the crack!fic!!

As if he didn't already have a hard time resisting Pepper's neck, now he's got more than one reason to worry about it. Pepper probably thinks he's just come down with some weird STD, haha.

But awesome work! I love the Halloween feel to it.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-15 03:02 am UTC (link)
BUT SEE
it kind of IS a weird STD.

Moral: Tony needs to watch who he sleeps with ;D

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[info]keeperofdreams
2008-10-15 11:04 am UTC (link)
Ffffffff. I'm not normally one for vampires, but YES.

(Now write werewolf!Rhodey and my life is complete! *cough*)

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-15 05:32 pm UTC (link)
LOL!

(YOUR ICON. MMMMM)

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(no subject) - [info]keeperofdreams, 2008-10-15 05:53 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-15 05:59 pm UTC

[info]obliviousally
2008-10-15 01:03 pm UTC (link)
I love Tony's logical thought process of the matter. This is so great. <3

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-15 05:33 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much -- I tried to make him as scientific as possible, because Tony Stark? Yeah probably the last one on earth to believe in vampires.

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(no subject) - [info]obliviousally, 2008-10-15 07:11 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pensive1, 2008-10-16 04:59 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]obliviousally, 2008-10-16 04:22 pm UTC

[info]curls
2008-10-17 02:55 am UTC (link)
Hee! I think this is great. Very cool! :D

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-17 03:03 am UTC (link)
!

Thank you very much, darlin! ♥

Due to the response, there is more coming down the pike!

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(no subject) - [info]europa_kore, 2008-10-19 06:28 pm UTC

[info]wyntereyez
2008-10-26 05:39 am UTC (link)
Just what I needed! I've been craving Halloween IM fic. If you continue, then I'll definitely read on. If not... well, it was fun! And it would make being a super hero just a leeetle more difficult for Tony. *grins*

Well, could be worse. He could be a werewolf and have to deal with transforming while in the suit.

I'm trying not to be tempted into writing that.

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[info]pensive1
2008-10-26 06:21 pm UTC (link)
I'm working on some follow-ups.

See [info]agilebrit for the WerewolfTony idea! ;D

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[info]vr_trakowski
2009-01-23 03:17 am UTC (link)
Wowwww, what an opener...so much potential. I'd love to see the way he dealt with THAT one. And you make it quite logical, which isn't easy!

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[info]pensive1
2009-01-23 04:00 am UTC (link)
Because Tony doesn't have ENOUGH addictions, lol

Thanks so much for commenting ♥

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