Not a Dirty Frakking Toaster, really, I mean it... ([info]blackpaladin) wrote in [info]sn100,
@ 2003-11-21 11:25:00
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Current mood: creative
Current music:The West Wing :-)

Challenge #15 response
This is my first crack at this, so please don't come down too hard on me. Thanks. :-)

Inspiration: "Don't hold yourself like that, you'll hurt your knees," from "Volcano."

The Only Words He Could Say

Natalie's office looked empty. The strong, intelligent, fiery associate producer was nowhere to be found. A scared little girl, however, sat on the floor, hugging her knees, fighting to keep back the tears.

A porn star. A PORN STAR!! He was her Jeremy; how could he??

He walked in, looked around, and saw her. One look between them was all they needed; he knew her inside and out, and he understood her better than anyone. But the words would have been too difficult for both of them. "Don't hold yourself like that," was all he said. "You'll hurt your knees."




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(Anonymous)
2003-12-03 05:43 pm UTC (link)
Hey, nice moody piece. Good start to writing Sports Night. Mmm, must write more :~)

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[info]out_there
2003-12-04 06:23 pm UTC (link)
Aw... *sniffles* That's so very Natalie and Jeremy, sweet andpainful at the same time.

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