Kass ([info]kassrachel) wrote in [info]sga_flashfic,
@ 2008-07-10 18:35:00
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Entry tags:author: kassrachel, challenge: five things

Life With Terrans, by kassrachel (five things challenge)
Usually SGA makes me verbose, but this time around I wrote something tiny. Hopefully tasty, though. Many thanks to [info]sihayab and [info]lamardeuse for giving this the once-over!

Life With Terrans (Five Things Ronon Notices)
750 words
eventually Ronon/Keller






Life With Terrans (Five Things Ronon Notices)


1. Breakfast

For seven years Ronon ate what he could, when he could. Stolen fruit. Bread, sometimes. Grubs. Maybe a bowl of stew, if he was pushing his luck. No: pushing someone else's. If he stayed longer than an hour, he risked bringing death.

The mess hall in Atlantis freaked him out at first. All those tables in the open, no way to watch your back. And the food was weird. Especially at breakfast.

Sheppard liked the little many-colored rings, floating in a bowl of milk. They were sweet, but not bad. McKay shoveled in anything he could find; Ronon could relate to that, though not to the way McKay seemed to crave coffee. He acted like it was Wraith enzyme.

Teyla just raised her eyebrow at him from across the table and smiled. It was nice, that someone else was an outsider too.


2. Wardrobe

Earth clothes were boring. At first he thought everybody dressed the same because they were all soldiers; their uniforms were dull, but he understood the point of everybody looking the same. "Same dress, same heart," Kell used to say. (Bastard.)

But then Ronon went to Earth for the first time, and the clothes there were boring too. Even the people who weren't in uniform. Sheppard and McKay kept talking about places called "San Francisco" and "the village" -- which was apparently a city, or part of a city? Ronon wasn't exactly sure -- like maybe he would stand out less there.

At Sheppard's father's funeral, Sheppard had told him people were wearing dark colors as a sign of mourning. But Ronon couldn't shake the feeling that Earth people always wore dark colors. Which was pretty funny, since of all the worlds he'd ever seen, Earth had the least reason to mourn.


3. Memory

"Our ancestors?" Elizabeth said thoughtfully, tilting her head. "Many traditional Earth cultures venerate ancestors; the Chinese, for instance --"

"So you don't remember your Ancestors." Ronon shrugged. "Okay." He would celebrate the rites alone. It was better than nothing. Having time and space for memory was a luxury.

"I'm sure we can help you with your rites of remembering," Elizabeth said quickly. "If you need company--"

"'S okay," Ronon said. "Nobody here knew my family anyway."

"I would very much like -- if it's not an imposition -- to hear more."

She studied foreign cultures, Ronon knew. "About the rites?" He didn't mean to let the anger show, but it did.

"About your family." Her gaze was direct.

"I'll be on the east pier at sundown," he said. "But the rites won't start until I can see three stars. It's an...auspicious time to tell stories."

"I'll be there," she promised. And she was.


4. Worry

"Sure, pregnant women can fight." Ronon didn't see why this was a problem.

"What are you, insane?" Rodney looked like he was going to keel over with shock.

"Thank you, Ronon," Teyla said serenely, and continued stretching.

"I'm not sure I'm comfortable," Sheppard began, sounding worried.

"Are you suggesting that I can no longer 'kick your ass'?" Teyla asked, her voice honey over steel.

"That's not the issue," Sheppard said. "But if anything happens--"

"To the baby?" Teyla rose and twirled her bantos sticks. "I doubt you can come within three feet of my belly, John."

"I'll fight you," Ronon offered. "If he won't."

"I don't understand why we're even having this conversation! Go do -- yoga, or something," Rodney said, sounding desperate.

"I enjoy yoga, but it is not as satisfying as sparring can be," Teyla told him.

"You people worry too much," Ronon said, stepping on to the mat.


5. Ink

"Haven't you ever been with a guy who had tattoos before?" Ronon raised his head and looked at Jennifer.

"Not as many as you have," she said, tracing the one on his wrist with her fingertips.

"On Sateda, most men had ink," Ronon offered.

"Yeah? I like it," she said, and blushed.

"You should get one," he said.

"What?" She sounded shocked, on the verge of laughing. Maybe Earth women didn't have tattoos? He hadn't seen any on the women here, but he'd figured they were all just hidden.

"Here." He rolled her over and mouthed her hipbone. "Like this." He licked a line across her skin, then another.

"That tickles."

So he bit lightly, just to make her laugh.

"Maybe someday," she said. It sounded like a promise.

She didn't ask what the symbol he was painting with his mouth meant. Mine, combined with home.



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[info]incidental_fire
2008-07-10 02:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh yes, very tasty indeed! Everyone's voices were pitch-perfect, and I loved the glimpses into both daily life on Atlantis and Ronon's past. The comparison of coffee and Wraith enzyme was delightful. And why would it not surprise me in the slightest if John ate Fruit Loops? :)

Which was pretty funny, since of all the worlds he'd ever seen, Earth had the least reason to mourn.
Very poignant, and very true.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 02:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm so glad the voices felt right to you.

And obviously I have no canonical basis on which to pin John's breakfast tastes, but I totally see him as a Froot Loops kind of guy. *g*

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[info]lomedet
2008-07-10 02:40 pm UTC (link)
three stars! ::glees::

I loved the rest of these, as well - Ronon's take on the world(s) is always interesting.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 02:46 pm UTC (link)
I hoped someone would notice that, and figured it might be you. *g* So glad you enjoyed!

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[info]sheafrotherdon
2008-07-10 02:58 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I love these! Especially that last one - asjdhflahsdf hotttttttt :D

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:51 pm UTC (link)
::beaming:: I am so glad!

Seriously, the combined hotness of Ronon and Keller blows me away; I don't know why this isn't a more popular het pairing in this fandom, I really don't.

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[info]anatsuno
2008-07-10 02:59 pm UTC (link)
very nice! I enjoy your Ronon's point of view very much.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:52 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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[info]kiku65
2008-07-10 03:04 pm UTC (link)
*huggles Ronon* Alien POVs on Lanteans are FTWs :)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:52 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it.

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[info]Elizabeth Perry [insanejournal.com]
2008-07-10 03:06 pm UTC (link)
<3 Ronon.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:52 pm UTC (link)
I love him so much OMG.

(I love all of them so much OMG.)

:-)

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[info]ladyoflisquill
2008-07-10 03:14 pm UTC (link)
Which was pretty funny, since of all the worlds he'd ever seen, Earth had the least reason to mourn.

There's some comment in this line. About counting blessings or taking things for granted and I love the way Ronan sees it because even though he was running for so long we still get the sense of how much he loves life.

Wonderful fic.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:53 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad that line resonated for you.

(And I love your icon!)

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[info]sanj
2008-07-10 03:21 pm UTC (link)
I love this a lot. "Wardrobe," especially, is pretty much perfect.

I love this Ronon -- he has so much quiet depth. Awesome.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much, hon!

Ronon is totally a man of quiet depth. (And also, great hotness. I'm just saying. *g*)

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[info]sihayab
2008-07-10 03:21 pm UTC (link)
Love it! Such great insights into Ronon's character.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much for reading it over & giving it your seal of approval, hon!

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[info]2ndary_author
2008-07-10 04:25 pm UTC (link)
What a great idea (and the length was perfect)! I love that breakfast makes such an impression, and the third one makes me wish I wrote more Elizabeth-fic. Wonderful job:)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you most kindly! I'm delighted that you enjoyed.

And there should totally be more Elizabeth-fic. :-)

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[info]accidentalfan
2008-07-10 04:34 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful and very interesting. I wonder what Ronon would think of other earth cultures' habits. Would a more traditionally germanic breakfast of breads, meats, and cheeses make more sense to him than cold cereal? Would he look around Carnival in Rio and think that maybe Terrans know how to dress after all? Really, I think this is one of the things sci-fi does best, it helps us look at and hopefully think about our own habits. This was a great example of that.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Thank you; I'm so glad you enjoyed!

And ooh, I love the idea of Ronon at Carnival. Someone should totally write that. :-)

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[info]scififreak
2008-07-10 04:46 pm UTC (link)
The one about Teyla and worry was FTW. This is exactly the scene I wanted to see on the show. About how pregnant women aren't seen as breakable glass in Pegasus, unlike in Western societies here. They would still have to defend themselves, and go offworld and do all the work their society dictates.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:35 pm UTC (link)
I'm really glad this worked for you, especially the Teyla vignette. Yay!

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[info]the_shoshanna
2008-07-10 04:51 pm UTC (link)
Gosh, I can't imagine how you come to be writing delicate, lovely, insightfully poignant vignettes of perspective on a culture that is simultaneously home and alien. Huh.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:36 pm UTC (link)
Bwee!!! Um. Right. Yes. Me neither. Can't imagine why these themes are resonating for me right now. *g*

So glad you enjoyed!

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[info]nyssa23
2008-07-10 05:17 pm UTC (link)
I love your five things stories! I swear, if/when I ever start watching this show I will be so mad that none of the stuff you write about actually happened.

I really liked 3 & 4, especially the three stars line. ^_^

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much, hon!

I'm glad the three stars line leapt out at you. *hug*

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[info]eleveninches
2008-07-10 07:00 pm UTC (link)
Wow, great Ronon voice.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]anitac588
2008-07-10 07:27 pm UTC (link)
"Here." He rolled her over and mouthed her hipbone. "Like this." He licked a line across her skin, then another... Mhmmmm, mine -- that's hot.

As much as I appreciate Rodney getting the girl -- I am Keller/Dex fan, seriously, they were great together.
Enjoyed this story very much.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:39 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed! I'm a big Ronon/Jennifer fan too, obviously. \o/!

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[info]dogeared
2008-07-10 09:06 pm UTC (link)
Oh this is really lovely, and the economy of it feels very appropriate for Ronon!!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-10 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad the spareness worked for you.

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[info]rustler
2008-07-10 10:38 pm UTC (link)
Lovely! And the last one *nrgh!hot*

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 05:55 am UTC (link)
Thank you most kindly! And I'm glad the last one worked for you. :-)

That's a yummy icon, btw.

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[info]linziday
2008-07-11 12:08 am UTC (link)
Oh I love this!! I've been in a very Ronon mood lately, so this was perfect. :)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 05:56 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I find I am often in a Ronon mood. :-)

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[info]copracat
2008-07-11 12:12 am UTC (link)
You give good Ronon :) This is lovely.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 05:59 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm delighted that you enjoyed.

And nnnrgh, that icon.

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[info]cathalin
2008-07-11 12:15 am UTC (link)
These are awesome! I especially love the one on clothes, hee, and the tattoo one, which is both incredibly sweet and hot at the same time. Wonderful Ronon, and everyone was perfectly themselves. Wonderful.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 06:00 am UTC (link)
Thank you; I'm so glad everyone felt right to you! I have a special soft spot for the clothes one and the tattoo one, too.

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[info]rinsbane
2008-07-11 12:24 am UTC (link)
I love all these little glimpses of Ronon. They're lovely, each of them.

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[info]blacksquirrel
2008-07-11 12:42 am UTC (link)
Pretty icon!

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(no subject) - [info]rinsbane, 2008-07-11 01:07 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]blacksquirrel, 2008-07-11 01:11 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]kassrachel, 2008-07-11 06:00 am UTC

[info]tex
2008-07-11 12:32 am UTC (link)
Great insight into the mystery that is Ronon. Love the last one especially - I can see Ronon being a tad possessive over his woman (or man). Thanks!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 08:22 am UTC (link)
Thank you kindly, hon! I'm so glad you enjoyed.

And yeah, I can imagine Ronon being fairly possessive of whoever his partner(s) might be. *g*

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[info]blacksquirrel
2008-07-11 12:42 am UTC (link)
Sweet!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 08:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you kindly!

I love your icon, btw.

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(no subject) - [info]blacksquirrel, 2008-07-11 05:11 pm UTC

[info]slinkling
2008-07-11 02:04 am UTC (link)
Oh, this was lovely. Fascinating to dig into Ronon's POV like this, his outsider's take on earth culture. And I can't help feeling some glee at Teyla continuing to be all badass while pregnant, and Ronon just shrugging at that, while John and Rodney are falling over themselves with concern.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-07-11 05:47 am UTC (link)
Okay, first, eeeeeeee you have an SGA icon! ::dancing with glee::

:-)

Teyla totally continues to be badass. (Okay, the writers are occasionally morons and don't allow her to be as badass as I think she should be, but she is. And also she is hot like a hot thing.)

I'm so glad you enjoyed these little vignettes.

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