Walking on a rocky road on this silent journey ([info]silentjourney) wrote in [info]sarenity,
@ 2008-07-06 17:21:00
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Shiny Skin
all a glow
headed on a road
that no one knows

the stump of life
that has cracks
that we sometimes fall into

Always climbing out
to climb some more

A lizard's path in life
one I would love to know.




*okay, so not my best work and plus, i put it as a stump... I couldn't think of anything with a green pole... I am going to work some more on this. Any suggestions?*

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FUN!
[info]faerieariel
2008-07-07 12:03 am UTC (link)
one thought I had was to remove the rhyme in the first stanza, because I was expecting additional rhymes and there were none. Another thought is to "be the lizard" and expand the poem in the direction of his/her perceptions (sights, sound, tastes, temperatures, etc.)

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