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Sisters (Harry Potter)

  • Jan. 27th, 2005 at 1:11 PM
Title: Sisters
Author: [info]paranoidkitten
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Petunia, Lily
Rating: G
Summary: They were like twins, once upon a time.
Note: I'm so used to posting femmeslash here I'd forgotten that gen fic was welcome to. *sheepish smile* So this is from a few months ago, but shiny and new to most of you. :)


There was less than a year between them, a year that had flown by so that their mother sometimes forgot which was the elder of the two, and indeed most people found it difficult to remember. The eleven months were not used as a tool to gain superiority, but forgotten about. They played at being twins, and there was only ever one birthday party for the two Evans girls, halfway between the two dates. The neighbours suspected it was out of convenience, not knowing that it had been the girls’ request, and that they couldn’t bear to be thought of as different from one another.

They shared a room and a bed, the two strawberry-blonde heads side by side on the pillow. On cold nights they curled into each other, two slender figures melding into one. Their father was mildly concerned, and their mother reassured him that they’d grow out of it, though the words began to sound hollow after her suggestions that they each have their own room had fallen on deaf ears.

It was a relief when Lily went off to school and Petunia stayed behind. Hogwarts had done what they had not been able to do – separate the girls. Despite the miles between them, hours were devoted to reading and writing long letters, a desperate attempt to bridge the distance between the two worlds. Petunia refused to make friends with the girls at her school, insisting that she already had a sister, who was so much better than a mere friend, and so when Lily came home for the summer, chattering of the friends she had made throughout the year, it came as a shock to her.

The letters were few and far between the following year. Lily returned with hair redder than it had ever been before. It was something to do with magic, she explained in between talking about her teachers and classes and friends, and it was only then that their parents noticed how the red had faded from Petunia’s hair.

Petunia herself made the connection some time later, and saved up her pocket-money for a trip to the chemist’s. When she emerged from the bathroom with jet-black hair that evening, her parents murmured something about it being a phase, and she hated them for not understanding.

By the third summer there was no chance of anyone pointing out a family resemblance between the two girls, let alone anyone describing them, in jest or seriousness, as twins. They celebrated their birthdays on the appropriate dates, and Lily had her own bedroom for the months she was at home. Once, on a particular chilly night in mid-winter, Petunia wondered whether Lily had anyone to curl up with at that school of hers, but she quickly banished that thought from her mind and her dark head soon sank into the pillow.

fin

Comments

[info]rosehiptea wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2005 01:19 pm (UTC)
Wow. I like that so much. Very subtle, and revealing of their chraracters. Great job!
[info]paranoidkitten wrote:
Jan. 28th, 2005 07:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you. :D
[info]pinkdormouse wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2005 05:58 pm (UTC)
Excellent bit of backstory there.

Bravo!

Gina
[info]paranoidkitten wrote:
Jan. 28th, 2005 07:00 pm (UTC)
Merci beaucoup!
[info]vainsilhouette wrote:
Jan. 27th, 2005 06:41 pm (UTC)
Lovely, just lovely. ^_^
[info]paranoidkitten wrote:
Jan. 28th, 2005 07:01 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thanks. Also, love your icon muchly. Eeee!
[info]pathology_doc wrote:
Jan. 29th, 2005 05:00 am (UTC)
Nice interpretation of a friendship that eventually became a bitter enmity. A little OOC, I felt, in that "Philosopher's Stone" had always given me the impression that Petunia's bitterness towards Lily had been because (and only because) Lily was a witch. Thus there would have been no writing of letters to bridge the distance - the loathing would have started not long after the letter was received, and Petunia's attitude to Lily's attendance at Hogwarts would have been "Good riddance".

Of course there is always the explanation that Petunia was covering up in front of Harry, unwilling to let anyone know that her jealousy was what had caused her to view Lily negatively.

This criticism takes nothing away from the fact that this was a very well crafted fic, which I enjoyed reading.
[info]paranoidkitten wrote:
Jan. 29th, 2005 12:45 pm (UTC)
But on the other hand we know that Petunia's rather an unreliable narrator when it comes to talking about Lily - the way she goes on about Lily practising magic during the holidays, for example, when we know this wouldn't have been allowed by the Ministry. Plus I'm fascinated by people rewriting their personal history to suit their current attitude, which was vaguely at the back of my mind when writing this. But, yes, valid criticism and if I'm going to start introducing theories of behaviour into fics I should probably make it more explicit or else leave it out. *grin*

And thank you!

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