rsgamesmods ([info]rsgamesmods) wrote in [info]rs_games,
@ 2008-05-12 18:45:00
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Fic -Team Post-Hogwarts - Eye of the Beholder
Title: Eye of the Beholder
Team: Post-Hogwarts
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The years, and Azkaban, have not been kind to Sirius, and he no longer recognises himself. Remus, however, knows exactly who Sirius is – and is the one who can show him.
Prompt: Yeats: "How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face.”
Genre(s): hurt/comfort; fluff/romance


Eye of the Beholder


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[info]aras_fixation
2008-05-13 02:45 am UTC (link)
One would say: it's so Sirius, bothering about his lost beauty. Well, lots of us are re-living this moment in tiny dosis each morning in the bathroom, let's give him his right to worry. As long as there is Remus to kiss up and banish all the worries away. Beautiful story.

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[info]elana_m
2008-05-13 07:59 am UTC (link)
Not every good story has to be 10 000 words! I love how you pinned the mood down rather concisely. That's exectely the way I see it happening after Sirius' return.
Great work!

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[info]archea2
2008-05-13 11:50 am UTC (link)
'Look at m': here's Sirius in three words. And kind, calm, loving, caring Moony up to the rescue. I absolutely loved this!

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[info]batmanboxers
2008-05-13 07:51 pm UTC (link)
I really loved this :)

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[info]who_la_hoop
2008-05-13 08:24 pm UTC (link)
This was very sweet - I enjoyed the contrast of Sirus' lack of confidence, and Remus' quiet strength.

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[info]xbittersweet89x
2008-05-13 11:49 pm UTC (link)
This was beautiful. Well done.

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-05-14 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Aww. :-)

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[info]jadis31
2008-05-15 06:19 am UTC (link)
That was lovely. The sadness and loss was real and powerful and the resolution, the strength and love in it, well it was all "Awwwwwwwwwwwwww" like you can only imagine.

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[info]gryffindor_j
2008-05-16 03:57 am UTC (link)
Very beautiful. I really liked the beginning where Sirius knows that he was once beautiful and that he knew he was good looking. The end was very sweet I loved Remus holding Sirius and how Sirius sees himself in Remus's eyes. It was very tender, I liked getting the small snippet of them together. YA TEAM!!!

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[info]werewolfsfan
2008-06-23 03:32 am UTC (link)
This felt very real in that Sirius would have known how great looking he was and his not being able to recognize who he is now. I could empathize with his grief and uncertainty. And the end where he see's himself in Moony's eyes is absolutely beautiful.

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