rsgamesmods ([info]rsgamesmods) wrote in [info]rs_games,
@ 2008-05-12 18:28:00
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Entry tags:2008, fic, team:mwpp

Fic - Team MWPP - Never Say Anything Right
Title: Never Say Anything Right
Team: MWPP
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: "So, are you going to tell someone what the matter is, or just keep on like this until you piss off everyone we know, collapse, and end up in St. Mungo's?"
Prompt: Degausser by Brand New. Song and Lyrics: http://www.metrolyrics.com/degausser-lyrics-brand-new.html
Genre(s): Hurt/comfort, romance/fluff
Notes: Scene titles are borrowed from Brand New. Remus and Sirius and the rest are borrowed from JKR. Thanks and mounds of cookies to my fabulous betas.


Never Say Anything Right


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[info]forest_rose
2008-05-12 10:58 pm UTC (link)
Ohh, ohh! I'm desperate to know who wrote this, it's wonderful! The boys and Dumbledore are all totally in character, and I love the pacing of the story - it really fits with the feeling of being up all night.

Damn - this isn't my team! *ponders how to entice you over* I really, really loved this. Well done.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 06:56 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! Your comment is really lovely and just made me beam. I am so happy that the characterizations seems right to you - and the feeling og being up all night came across. Thanks!

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[info]passakiss
2008-05-12 11:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I love this! So, so cute. I'm really glad it all ended happily for them.

Your Dumbledore was perfect. I love how you related the portrait to Sirius. And this:
"Loo," Remus said. Sirius had never realised before tonight that his friends possessed such weak bladders. made me laugh out loud.

Great job - we're lucky to have you on our team! ;D

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 06:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I am really glad that Dumbledore worked for you. Happy to make you laugh. :)

(and, we'll get them next round, right? Right.)

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[info]slightlytookish
2008-05-13 12:00 am UTC (link)
This was so lovely! I loved all the different interactions Sirius had with the others, and Remus being so snarky. And the ending was just perfect :)

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 06:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed it. I am glad the ending worked for you - I was worried it just sort of trailed off, so thanks for saying. :)

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[info]midnitemaraud_r
2008-05-13 12:04 am UTC (link)
♥ ♥ ♥ This is just wonderful in every way, and I LOVE that scene with Dumbledore! That portrait and how you use it in the story is just fantastic!

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 07:00 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Here are your cookies, and thanks so much for your help with it. ♥♥

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[info]spacefragments
2008-05-13 12:35 am UTC (link)
oh, oh, i love it. the ending was so sweet without being saccharine, and ever so slightly sexy. love. nothing else to say. ♥

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 07:01 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you for the lovely comment! You made me grin. :)

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[info]rev02a
2008-05-13 02:08 am UTC (link)
Oh! Oh! Oh! That was... wonderfulamazingbreathtaking I should have never given out straight 10's before because I don't think anyone else deserved it in comparison... oh!

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 07:02 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! What a lovely thing to say. Wow. Just, thanks so much!

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[info]red_squared
2008-05-13 03:52 am UTC (link)
Oh, I love this story. Poor confused pup - I wanted to squish him all the way through it :(

But YAY for a happy ending, and for a remus who finally came through.

Excellent work!

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 07:04 am UTC (link)
Thank you!!

Poor confused pup - I wanted to squish him all the way through it -- That made me very happy - exactly what I was hoping for. So glad you liked the ending, as well. Thanks! :)

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[info]elizassecret
2008-05-13 05:02 am UTC (link)
Perfect! Love the characterizations, love the dialogue, love Sirius suffering from some classic teenage existential angst! Absolutely delightful.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 07:05 am UTC (link)
Thank you!! Thank you for your fabulous help with this. I promised you cookies. Maybe you will each virtual ones, so here they are. ♥♥

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[info]loony4lupin
2008-05-13 05:35 am UTC (link)
I love this. Confused!boyness is so wonderful here.
And I LOVE the last scene... the comfort and the hip caressing was just wonderfully natural and gave me butterflies.
Well done!

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:22 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I am thrilled that the confused boyishness came across. Hee, yay buterflies! Thanks!

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[info]jadis31
2008-05-13 01:53 pm UTC (link)
That was wonderful. You captured Sirius' confusion perfectly. Really just gorgeous.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I am thrilled that you thought Sirius' confusion came across. Thanks!

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[info]woldy
2008-05-13 07:38 pm UTC (link)
Very nice indeed and absolutely believable. It's a lovely characterisation of Sirius as being genuinely troubled (though not broken) & his exchanges with Dumbledore and Regulus were perfect.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:24 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! I loved your description of the characterization of Sirius, 'troubled but not broken.' That made me grin. What a lovely comment!

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[info]batmanboxers
2008-05-13 08:37 pm UTC (link)
This is awesome!

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:25 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]erraticxthought
2008-05-14 12:59 am UTC (link)
I love this song, and I love this fic. Awesome job.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:25 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :)

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[info]sweetz1
2008-05-14 01:29 am UTC (link)
Oh. Oh. That fic just did something to my heart. I adore this so much.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:26 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much. What a lovely comment. :)

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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-05-14 12:16 pm UTC (link)
I really loved this. Sirius's prickliness and restless confusion felt very real. *happy sigh*

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:27 am UTC (link)
Thank you, thank you! I love your description 'prickliness and restless confusion.' That is just what I was hoping for. YAY! Thanks. :)

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[info]sambethe
2008-05-18 02:50 pm UTC (link)
Lovely!

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:27 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! :)

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[info]werewolfsfan
2008-05-30 02:49 am UTC (link)
Well planned and executed. Just lovely.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:28 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]gabriel_isnt
2008-05-30 09:28 am UTC (link)
Very nice. It was written perfectly, and I adore your Dumbledore - which is a compliment-an-a-half from myself as I really do not like him.
I also love Regulus. Very well done.

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:29 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much. 'Written perfectly' is high praise indeed! I am so pleased that you liked Dumbledore and Regulus - I was hoping they would add to the story. Thank you!

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[info]trailingoff
2008-06-10 05:28 am UTC (link)
I really enjoyed Sirius's journey of discovery in this, and it was nice to have some light-hearted moments along with the more serious issues. I felt sorry for Alice, but oh well, she'll just have to settle for Frank :)

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-07 03:31 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm really happy you liked the mix of lightheartedness and serious - I was hoping that would work. Yes, poor Alice, what an awkward moment. I think she did okay, though (well, you know, until later...) Thank you !

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[info]magnetic_pole
2008-07-04 12:09 am UTC (link)
Finally catching up, and this was delightful! The scene with Alice was painful and funny and too, too true. And Dumbledore's wisdom was just right--offbeat, almost mocking him, and just obviously true enough that I didn't forget it. Enjoyed this enormously! M.

Edited at 2008-07-04 12:10 am UTC

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[info]mindabbles
2008-07-06 06:31 am UTC (link)
Finally catching up, too! Thank you so much for commenting. I'm glad the scene with Alice worked. I sort of cringed as I wrote it. I do like to try and get Dumbledore, so I'm really happy you liked it! Thank you! Min ♥

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