Minisinoo ([info]minisinoo) wrote in [info]romancingwizard,
@ 2007-02-27 10:45:00
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I Hope You Dance
Challenge Eleven: Amortentia and Chocolate
Title: I Hope You Dance
Author: [info]minisinoo
Main wizard: Cedric Diggory
Other Characters: Gwynn Diggory, Hermione Granger-Diggory
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Genre: romance/whimsy
Word count: 984
Summary: Gwynn Diggory gives his parents a special Valentine's present in the year of their 50th Wedding anniversary. (This is set in the Finding Himself universe, but should be comprehensible without having read the novel.)



Dancing


The British Department of International Magical Co-operation's ambassador to Canada had not walked without aid in 52 years. He hadn't walked at all, in fact, in 36, all due to a rare and debilitating curse cast on him during the final task of the last Triwizard Tournament. The megalomaniacal Lord Voldemort had disrupted events in order to kidnap a 14-year-old Harry Potter, accidentally taking along 17-year-old Cedric Diggory for the ride. Diggory came back permanently crippled, doomed to see his independent mobility vanish completely before his 35th birthday. Perhaps being confined to a wheelchair so young had driven him to stand -- at least figuratively -- head and shoulders above his colleagues in the diplomatic corps. But whatever the case, he was made an ambassador at the tender age (for a wizard) of 45, a post he continued to hold for the next 25 years.

And given this constant childhood exposure to his father's deteriorating physical condition, it was perhaps predictable that the ambassador's eldest son might be drawn to a career in Healing, even go on to become a Potions Master and Head of St. Mungo's Apothecary Research Division. With parents like his, intelligence and industriousness were a birthright. Finding a cure for his father's condition wasn't so predictable, however. Medical research -- even magical medical research -- was expensive, and sometimes as much about luck as trial and error.

Thus it was luck and a lark that made Gwynn Diggory try a bit of Amortentia in his father's original Restituo potion. It really shouldn't have worked. The world's strongest love potion and a nerve regenerator? On the surface, the one had nothing to do with the other. But with Muggle grandparents on his mother's side, Gwynn had never limited himself to only Wizarding medicine. As a boy, he'd sat at the knee of his father's Ojibway friends, learning their traditions, and as a young man he'd gone to Muggle university to read in biochemistry. He'd also pursued advanced Potions back in England. And in all this study and searching, he'd finally discovered the world's preeminent healing power.

Love.

Of course, that was hardly a revelation. It was so commonplace, in fact, it was trite.

Love and a sense of purpose could hold the dying to life long past a point that healers or doctors thought survival possible. And the loss of love could result in the untimely death of an otherwise healthy survivor -- not always from self-neglect or suicide. Bereaved spouses were more likely to catch infectious diseases; Gwynn had read the Muggle literature that proved it. And certainly, everyone magical knew the story of how Harry Potter had defeated Voldemort not by a hex or curse, but by love. What not everyone knew was how Gwynn's own father had once saved his mother's life with love. And what Gwynn himself knew was how much the love of his own life had made him who he was. Without Julie, he wouldn't have got through Healer's academy, and not because she'd cooked his dinner and kept house for him. Julie had been his classmate. They'd fallen in love over cadavers, gruelling rounds, pots of coffee, and a shared copy of Magellian's Potions. Like his mother's parents, Gwynn's wife was also his partner in practice.

So love as an antidote to life's ills was far from a poet's conceit to Gwynn Diggory. Yet like his mother, he had a scientist's mind and wanted to know the why behind it. What chemical reaction in the human body did love produce that made it so powerful, and could that be replicated in potions to help the ill?

Could he even find, at last, the magical formula that would let him heal his father?

It turned out to be a much easier question to frame than to answer. Love was complicated, and there was more than one type, even when it came to romantic passion. Gwynn didn't love Julie the way he had when they'd been young and on fire, yet if he lost her, he had no doubt he'd prefer to die. And he'd seen how his parents were virtually grafted together after fifty years. They could communicate by just a nod or a pursing of lips. For them, two had most certainly become one flesh, and not only in the act that had created him. In fact, Gwynn doubted his parents had engaged in coitus for longer than he'd been married, even if any specific mental image of them doing that gave him a bad case of the 'eew's despite being a professional healer. He just knew, medically, what his father's condition prevented.

Yet it wasn't the physical that mattered in love, even if the emotional did impact the body.

Gwynn spent the next several years trying to work backwards from the biochemical reactions love caused. He used elevated heart rate, breathing, even the neurological chemicals released and the electrical brain patterns found -- the latter of which had required him to borrow a Muggle MRI machine. When all that failed, he tried going forward, dissecting various love potions and adding this or that ingredient to previous medical potion formulae.

All to no avail.

One afternoon in his lab, frustrated by yet another series of failures, he decided to try the simple solution. Fetching a vial of fully brewed Amortentia, he mixed it with Restituo in differing amounts in differing beakers. Restituo was a chocolate-black color, while Amortentia glistened mother-of-pearl white. When put together in most beakers, it produced a murky gray soup or a thickened black liquid. But in one, the potion turned a brilliant sky blue and smelled like spring rain.

Gwynn didn't run to his father with it immediately. He was a scientist, after all, and tested it properly first. Yet after a month, he was satisfied that at least it wouldn't kill Ambassador Diggory. Whether or not it would heal him remained to be seen.


...the rest of the story

Because I am an idiot and can't seem to read the directions clearly (g), I accidentally took the maximum wordcount as the minimum, and the story was thus too long for the challenge. It really wouldn't work to shorten it, so I've moved the last two scenes to my own LJ, where you can find the conclusion. Once again, my apologies for the confusion.



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[info]ginny_weasley31
2007-02-27 05:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I liked that very much. It was very sweet and romantic. :)

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:25 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :-)

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[info]cunning_croft
2007-02-27 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Aww... I'm glad they finally got their first dance. I'm sure the stepping-on-toes was worth it. :)

This far-future mini-sequel to Finding Himself should NOT be taken as proof positive of anything that will happen in the actual sequel

Even so, I do like the idea that Cedric will regain the use of his legs.

So Cedric and Hermione married when she was just 18 (in this 'verse, at least)? Interesting. :)

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:46 pm UTC (link)
Yup. They're dangerously young. (She's almost 19, actually.)

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[info]atlantel
2007-02-27 05:34 pm UTC (link)
it's a really lovely story, very sweet!

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]tinhutlady
2007-02-27 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Lovely, lovely language, characters, and situation. I can so see a child of Hermione and Cedric pursuing every avenue of healing he could, just because he stubbornly refused to give up.

Letting love be the answer? Inspired, madam, definitely inspired. ;-)

Thanks so much for sharing this - it made my day.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:48 pm UTC (link)
(blush) Thanks. And the 'love' solution is a bit of the hospice counselor coming out, after all I've seen. :-)

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[info]mirei
2007-02-27 06:08 pm UTC (link)
I only ever gave the Cedric/Hermione pairing a passing glance while in the HP fandom but you've made me fall very much in love with it with this universe. I spent an entire night reading Finding Himself all in one go, and then the next day started again at a slower pace to enjoy it all. I look forward to Dulce almost more than Deathly Hallows lol.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:50 pm UTC (link)
Goodness, one night? Wow. I'm flattered. And yes, I do love them together. Hee. It's kind of fun to revisit this universe, however briefly, while I wait. :-)

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[info]marag
2007-02-27 06:18 pm UTC (link)
::sniffle:: That's so sweet! And yes, a child of your versions of Cedric and Hermione would *never* give up on something like this.

I adore the idea of the healing powers of love. ::sniffles more::

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:52 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. And yeah, I seem to have a habit of writing "Valentine's" fics that are more about parents and children than lovers. "5 Pounds" was also done for Valentine's Day, about Scott and the adopted baby Karl.

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[info]xenokattz
2007-02-27 06:35 pm UTC (link)
EEEEE! *squishes*

That was chocolate truffles.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:52 pm UTC (link)
Ha! (Yum, truffles)

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<---Giving you my love icon
[info]pro_fun_dity
2007-02-27 07:02 pm UTC (link)
That brought tears to me eyes, the sap that I am!
I LOVED when Ced, said that he could feel! Major aww factor.


Thank you

-pro

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Re: <---Giving you my love icon
[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:54 pm UTC (link)
Yes, I'm a sap, as well. Ha! That song (on which it's based) makes me weepy. Hee. But yeah, he got to walk again. After half a century.

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[info]gioiamia
2007-02-27 07:37 pm UTC (link)
I'm sitting here with tears streaming down my face, Min! This was just beautiful. The way everyone is just too resigned to even hope anymore is so practical and yet painful.

Cedric's jaw hardened. "I fought it for 16 years. I don't think that's passive." It had been the hardest day of his life when he'd finally gone to hospital not for another round of treatments, but for them to make the paralysis spell permanent because he just couldn't bear the pain any more. About seven years after that, there had been no need for a spell; the nerves in his lower body were dead. He couldn't feel anything at all an inch below his navel all the way to his toes.

That section especially affected me, probably because of all that is left unsaid. So much is expressed in that hardened jaw, for example. It's just heartbreaking.

Beautiful, beautiful story!

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:56 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! And yeah, it's a bit sappy, but I like some sugar now and then. (And a happy ending for him after all he went through.)

And someday, I'll write the story about his decision and that trip to the hospital.

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(no subject) - [info]gioiamia, 2007-02-27 09:25 pm UTC
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[info]kaseido
2007-02-27 07:37 pm UTC (link)
*sniffle*

That's *wonderful!*

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:54 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. :-)

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[info]thimble_kiss
2007-02-27 07:50 pm UTC (link)
What a great idea to put such a magical-scientific twist on the healing power of love! I loved how concrete that was -- but with a poetic touch in the sky blue, spring smelling potion.

Cedric's memory of going to the hospital to ask for the permanent paralysis spell gives even more power to his restitution in this story. I had the young Cedric from FH in mind as well and to think he has that terrible decision ahead of him was ... ouch. :(

So lovely and sweet to see him and Hermione dancing together at last -- and I rather hope we can infer that with Cedric's return of feeling, and the slow aging of wizards, they'd still have many years left to again make Gwynn go "eww" with the thought of his parents doing that thing. (Although I think he'd probably not mind so much. =)

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 09:05 pm UTC (link)
LOL! on that last. Yes, his feeling is all back, with all that implies. (g) But that choice does still await the younger version.

I had a lot of fun with the 'scientific' magic, and Gwynn. It's funny how clear he is in my head for a character who isn't even conceived yet. Ha. But yeah, I already know what they'll be when they grow up, and the names and characteristics of their children. I'm weirdly thorough that way. Ha.

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[info]sshg316
2007-02-27 08:02 pm UTC (link)
Squee!

How lovely that their son is the one to cure him, even if it is many years in the future. Sigh. I loved every word of this.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 08:57 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. Gwynn is, in many ways, his dad all over again, but with a side helping of Hermione's stubbornness and analytical mind. :-)

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[info]medie
2007-02-27 08:25 pm UTC (link)
Oh that's wonderful. (And may I confess to a purely Canadian squeak of glee when I realized where he was? *Facepalm* I can be such a stereotype *G*) Just yes, I need to reread this again but oh man I loved it.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Hee. Cedric would rah-rah Canada along with you. (G)

I'm really glad you enjoyed!

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[info]cosmo_jenny
2007-02-27 08:44 pm UTC (link)
Oh! *dies a death*
That was wonderful and I love how you portraited Cedric and Hermione.

I can only hope that this is in canon with Finding himself.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-27 09:08 pm UTC (link)
Well, I make no promises, as I'm not sure where the actual sequel will go, but I have some of it planned (if it's not tabled by Book 7). There's a teeny-tiny reference to one of those plot points in this. :-)

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[info]seaislewitch
2007-02-27 11:05 pm UTC (link)
What a wonderful Fiftieth Anniversary gift.

Gwynn is as tenacious as his mother. *g*

Thanks for participating, [info]minisinoo.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-28 03:17 am UTC (link)
Yes, he is. And thanks. (G)

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[info]veradee
2007-02-27 11:39 pm UTC (link)
Very nice story. I liked how you combined wizard and Muggle medicine and incorporated the idea of love.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-02-28 03:19 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I used to be a hospice counselor, so it was sort of nice to throw a little about love and healing into a fluff piece. (G) I'm glad you enjoyed!

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[info]velvetcandy
2007-03-01 06:29 am UTC (link)
You know, you're turning me around on the whole Cedric/Hermione pairing )though admittedly, my dislike in the pairing comes for Hermione and not Cedric).

Another wonderfully sweet story. And a great son they have there as well!

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[info]minisinoo
2007-03-01 06:59 am UTC (link)
(chuckle)

>>lure, lure<<

Actually, part of why I like Cedric and Hermione as a pair is that they both shore up (at least in my mind) the other's weak spots. Not only do they match well in their strengths and virtues, but her weak spots aren't his, and his aren't hers. So they don't just reinforce each other, but offset each other. They're neither of them perfect characters (would be boring, if so), but as I conceive of them, they have the right alchemy so that they each make the other a better person. :)

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[info]robin777
2007-03-01 03:36 pm UTC (link)
That was beautiful. I kept hearing Lee Ann's song in the back of my head as I was reading this.

I just loved the image of them dancing together for the first time.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-03-02 09:30 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :-) And yes, I kinda imagined them dancing to the song. Hee.

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[info]redvelvetcanopy
2007-03-01 08:43 pm UTC (link)
Very nice! I love the mixing of the scientific and the magical.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-03-02 09:32 pm UTC (link)
Yes, the mixing was a lot of fun. I'm not really medical personnel but I worked in a hospital for some years doing hospice.

(Nice icon, too, btw. (g)

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[info]gelsey
2007-03-02 06:55 pm UTC (link)
How wonderful. And you know the irony of it ... that song came up on my play list just as I started reading this! Lol. Lovely. I'm not sure if I ever commented on Finding Himself, but I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it and all your other stuff that I've read, as well.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-03-02 09:37 pm UTC (link)
Hee. And thanks, on Finding Himself; I'm glad you enjoyed The Monster. Ha.

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[info]limguine
2007-07-02 04:18 am UTC (link)
Ugh, this made me cry. My father passed away three years ago and I've never danced with him in the entirety of my life. But! I really did love it--very endearing and heartfelt and sweet.

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[info]minisinoo
2007-07-14 03:39 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! And I'm very sorry to hear about your father. Losing a parent, even if we know it will happen, is never easy. I lost my mother 10 years ago this August, and still miss her, and things I see or read or experience can still make me cry.

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[info]madderbrad
2008-01-02 03:44 am UTC (link)
Ah, this was lovely ... got to love those happy endings, and the reward Gwynn's persistence.

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[info]minisinoo
2008-01-02 05:24 am UTC (link)
Thank you! :-)

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