out_briefcandle ([info]out_briefcandle) wrote in [info]rarelitslash,
@ 2008-01-09 18:17:00
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Hi all, I'm new. *waves* Also, I can't be the only one wanting to write fanfic on this book, can I? If anyone could point me towards fic, I'd be very appreciative!

Title: Silence
Author: The Poor Player
Fandom: The Kingkiller Chronicle (specifically Day One, The Name of the Wind.) by Patrick Rothfuss
Pairing: Bast/Kvothe (aka Reshi)
Rating: PG-13 for slash and sexual implications

Disclaimer: None of the characters or locations in this story belong to me, they belong to Patrick Rothfuss. This fanfic is in no way intended for profit, I just wanted to play in his sandbox.



Bast has known this man for a long time now. In that time, he has learned to fear one thing from his master and mentor: the silence. When the red-haired innkeeper falls into one of his dark moods, the silence permeates everything, and no one outside the stone walls of the inn ever notices. But he does. It has been hours, he thinks, since a word has been said in the inn. No one is coming tonight, the men of Newarre had satisfied their taste for ale and tales and news the night before. Perhaps it was the tales that sent the innkeeper into this black mood, Kvothe the Bloodless had been a favored topic when the telling began. Finally he closes his book, his master’s been after him for ages now to read it but he always manages to find something better to do. And this, this is more important than that dry old text. Regardless of what had triggered it this time, any time, he knows that he can stop it.

The barely audible sound of the book against the table top and the scrape of the chair on the hardwood floor nearly echo in the deep silence of the inn, and each loud click of his footsteps further shatters the quiet. The innkeeper never looks up. He steps around behind the bar, and Bast sets his hands on the innkeeper’s shoulders from behind, rubbing them gently but firmly for a few minutes before sliding his arms around his Reshi. Finally the white cloth clutched in a pale hand stops uselessly polishing the already gleaming bar, and the red-haired man slowly relaxes back against his student with a quiet exhalation of breath, too quiet to be called a sigh. Bast automatically tightens his arms around his Reshi and presses his face against the man’s neck for a moment, stifling his own sigh of relief. He stays like that for a moment, holding tight, before loosening his arms again and raising his head just slightly, kissing the long neck, jaw, hands coaxing the man before him to turn. He buries his hands in the flame-bright red hair and finally feels long, deceptively delicate fingers coming to rest on his hip and shoulder as lips meet.

Much, much later that night, lying in the warm dark, the oppressiveness has eased. It is once again just silence, the sort of quiet made by the lack of things and easily broken by sleeping breath or the languid shifting of a limb under the light blanket as the red-haired man sleeps easily for the first time in weeks. Beside him blue eyes watch the silhouette in the starlight, Bast knows that he will get little sleep. His eyes close against sudden and unwanted moisture and he presses close to the form beside him Tomorrow this will have never happened but for now he holds tight, hands flat against the warm, scarred skin and face buried in the unruly red hair against his neck. Reshi needs this, he tells himself, that’s why he does this. Reshi needs the closeness and the comfort sometimes, more than he will ever say. That is why he does this. And it is the only reason he does this. It would hurt too much to admit how desperately he wants it.




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[info]dragon_crier
2008-02-17 11:16 am UTC (link)
Ooh, I liked this. Very nice.

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[info]out_briefcandle
2008-02-17 03:29 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :D I was starting to wonder if anyone had read it.

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[info]dragon_crier
2008-02-17 04:05 pm UTC (link)
Did you know that Pat has put a link to it in his blog? That's how I found it.
Here: http://www.patrickrothfuss.com/blog/blog.html

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[info]out_briefcandle
2008-02-17 05:14 pm UTC (link)
...You're freaking kidding me. o___o

It's not even very good, I was still trying to get the hang of writing again after not doing much for a long while...

Wow. I'm just going to go over here and freak out now. XD

*waves shyly at Pat?*

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(Anonymous)
2008-02-17 08:45 pm UTC (link)
*Waves Back*

pat

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the above
(Anonymous)
2008-02-18 09:36 pm UTC (link)
... proves once again that Pat is 4 kinds of awesome

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[info]coldstormrising
2008-04-19 01:00 pm UTC (link)
Makes you nervous to know they're watching, doesn't it?

Regardless, well done. Normally I work to give pros and cons, so here we go.
+Proper english (Mother of Christ, how exciting)
+Lovely inclusion of key terms from the original work (i.e. Silence references)
+Characters seem properly in form and believable
=This sentence seems a little awkward to me:
"It is once again just silence, the sort of quiet made by the lack of things and easily broken by sleeping breath or the languid shifting of a limb under the light blanket as the red-haired man sleeps easily for the first time in weeks." Consider the ever-dreaded semi-colon?

I'm a critical person, but I didn't really see open errors. :D I like it, very much so. I apologize for reading it so much later than the rest. Also, I belatedly noted that you didn't ask for any manner of reviewing, so if I'm out of line, my apologies again! <3

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[info]out_briefcandle
2008-04-20 02:13 am UTC (link)
Yeah, it's a little intimidating. Why do you think so few of the comments have been answered? XD I'm not quite as freaked out over it anymore, at least...

That exact sentance gave me fits when I was writing it but I couldn't figure out how to fix it at the time. This is a prime example why I shouldn't start writing past 11:30 at night, much less dumping it onto the internet without a proper proofread or beta. I loathe poor English in fics that I read, so I do my best to write it properly in my own.

I always appreciate reviews of any sort, it at least lets me know someone has read the thing. XD Even long after the story's been posted I like hearing what people think. Thanks for your comment!

(And anyone else who commented and sees this, thanks for reading, and the kind words. I'm glad so many people enjoyed the fic. ...I'm gonna go hide back in my corner now. >___> XD)

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[info]etrix
2008-02-18 04:40 am UTC (link)
Very nice. It shows a good understanding of the characters.. and the possibilities. =)

And yes, I found it thru the author's blog cuz' I'm waiting for news on when the next book is coming out.

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(Anonymous)
2008-02-18 10:25 pm UTC (link)
The next books not coming out till 2009

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aww
(Anonymous)
2008-06-23 02:48 pm UTC (link)
Damn, it's coming out on the day of my graduation :( maybe i'll be able to pick it up after the Senior Party...*hopes*

Anywho, wonderful writing. Thank you so much for following the orig. work - word choice, characters personalities, ect. Wonderful job!

Keep writing!
Dag

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[info]suziko
2008-02-18 01:21 pm UTC (link)
Also found this through Pat's blog. A very sweet vignette. Keep up the good work!

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[info]thunderemerald
2008-02-19 03:03 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, me likey! It's about time someone wrote fic for this book. :)

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[info]alexia
2008-03-02 01:51 pm UTC (link)
Ohhh may I steal your icon?

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[info]thunderemerald
2008-03-03 03:04 pm UTC (link)
But of course! No credit necessary -- just make more people read the book. :)

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[info]white_tean
2008-02-20 05:26 pm UTC (link)
WOW, I actually *really* like this.

*heart!*

yeah, meandered over from the rofthuss blog.

(am most thoroughly gobsmacked-happily-suprised now)

it's very... how should I say, I don't know - I think this story is very... adequate in sort of, getting the right feel into the story - the part about it [the novel] where you really sink down into it.

I admire how you've managed to make it so compactedly nice - relying enough on familiar actions from the characters and book (the counter cleaning, the cut-flower silence of the man waiting to die - my favourite line... I would *marry* that line from the end of the book's prologue... anyway, back on topic!)and also somehow pulling off that master storytelling marvel about being able to fit so much feeling and meaning through some pocket-dimension way into so few words.

so, yes, thankyou for writing this piece - I'll probably not ever read another Name of the Wind fic (because the book sets that high a standard) but yours was very fitting, sweet and I'm very happy and glad I read it.

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WHYY!!!!!!!!
(Anonymous)
2008-02-22 12:30 am UTC (link)
It's good literature, but why did you have to basicly demasculate Kvothe??????COuldn't you have picked Harry Potter? Or even My Dad would be better than Kvothe!!!! That's the only problem I have with it. Otherwise (Altough I am not a fan of the gay fanfic) it has some great imagry, have you written anything else?

Kip
kgk4569@gmail.com

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[info]ookamimidnight
2008-02-24 08:21 pm UTC (link)
Ohmigod, I loved it. xD Found it through Pat's blog, and I was surprised and delighted at the quality of your writing~

Anyway, thanks for that. Of all the NotW fics I could've read, I'm glad I found yours first. XD

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[info]jay_of_lasgalen
2009-02-10 03:42 pm UTC (link)
This is very good and believable, and I love how you've caught the tone of the original.

Loved it - well done!


Jay

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[info]out_briefcandle
2009-02-10 06:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! It'd my favorite book, so I'd really wanted to do justice to it. :)

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[info]winhall
2009-02-12 09:46 am UTC (link)
Wow, that was really good! :D Enjoyed the (unfortunately short) read. :)
How come this doesn't have more comments even after Pat linked to it in his blog...? XD

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[info]out_briefcandle
2009-02-12 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :D Well, there is some discussion on the comments to that blog entry, but not many of them came over here, and I didn't reply to anything over there because I was busy discovering whether or not it's possible to actually die of mortification. >_> Unfortunately I didn't have the inspiration for a longer fic (or any others, this is sadly the only story I have in this canon), but hopefully the second book will rectify that... XD

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(Anonymous)
2009-02-12 09:51 pm UTC (link)
I don't know why it just occured to me now to look for fanfics of that awesome book.
Yes, I was directed here from pat's blog as well. (seems like really good advertisement :D) Loved this fic and as of now I'm crying cause its so short. Please won't you make more of those? XD

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[info]out_briefcandle
2009-02-12 09:58 pm UTC (link)
XD Thank you(and yes it is but it was a bit startling when I learned of it o_o; very flattering, but very startling)! Well, it's not as if you've missed a lot waiting, this was the earliest fanfiction that I've been able to find for it, and I know of a whole ...four? Others. One brief drabble written by a friend of mine, three on Fanfiction.net? Unless something's gone up there since the last time I've looked. They aren't too bad.

I haven't had much inspiration for more fic yet...but with the new book coming out, maybe I'll come up with more. *g* Glad you liked it!

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[info]vague_salvation
2009-03-29 07:09 pm UTC (link)
Dude.....that's so fucking great. I don't what i would do if the authors read my fiction.....i think i would die a little inside.

Cute story too. Bast and Kavothe are cute cannon it was only a matter of time ^^

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[info]out_briefcandle
2009-03-29 07:12 pm UTC (link)
Oh I tried very hard to see if it was possible to die of embarassment. Turns out it's not. XD

Thank you! :D I'm glad people are still enjoying this. And yeah, as one of my friends pointed out as I was making her read the book... "Kvothe and Bast are just so married, aren't they?"

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[info]vague_salvation
2009-03-30 12:43 am UTC (link)
they really are.

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[info]lysander_o
2009-05-04 08:31 am UTC (link)
Hello, also got here via Pat's blog (well, via [info]thearcanum and then the blog) and just wanted to say really lovely piece, especially the last paragraph. Glad I found this :)

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[info]out_briefcandle
2009-05-04 08:36 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.


...also, there's an LJ community now? I had not found this yet! Thanks for the tip! :D *is always the last to year everything, seriously XD* I'll have to tell my friends.

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[info]lysander_o
2009-05-04 08:42 am UTC (link)
Haha no worries, the more the merrier! It has been a little quiet recently, but is picking up again. Bienvenue :)

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[info]out_briefcandle
2009-05-04 08:46 am UTC (link)
Hopefully I'll be able to lure in the friends I dragged into the series as well and that may help. XD I'll bring it up when they're...awake. And it's not dark o'clock in the morning. *facepalm* Merci and bonsoir. :)

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