The Jenniführer ([info]cephiedvariable) wrote in [info]prolific_geeks,
@ 2006-03-27 23:31:00
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Current music:One Who Bears His Fangs at God; Yasunori Mitsuada
Entry tags:drabble meme, kabuto, naruto, sasuke

[Naruto] 'Ripples' [Kabuto/Sasuke]
Kabuto/Sasuke written for [info]lykomancer.

As I excited as I was to write this, I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I WAS SUPPOSED TO BE DOING WITH THIS PAIRING.

This was supposed to be a drabble. All the bare bones narrative, and none of the brevity!



Ripples
Cephied Variable



One of the first things Sasuke learns in Sound Village is that Kabuto is more dangerous than Orochimaru.

Kabuto hides behind disarming smiles and a benign, pleasant nature. There is no particular malice in his words, but they cut to the bone as sharply and percisely as any of his medical instruments. Kabuto is a doctor, a scientist. He pokes and prods and says things for the sake of saying them just to see the way Sasuke's face will contort and his fists will curl and his shoulders will shake. Like throwing a rock in a lake to see the ripples, only Kabuto calculates the radius and frequency of each ring with lightning fast accuracy and an eerily calm, half smirk on his face. As a healer, he has decoded all the secrets of the human body; all that's left now is mapping the human mind.

Sasuke is reminded of the games Neji plays with his Byakugan, only Kabuto is much better at them.

* * *

"Why don't you have a curse seal?" he asks finally, holding his bleeding arm and watching the pale medical nin mix powders and herbs into a disinfectant paste.

"Orochimaru is not a complex man." Kabuto begins conversationally, ignoring the question, "What you need to understand is that he was an isolated child. I'm sure you, of all people, are familiar with the equation. Loneliness breeds bitterness; genius breeds madness." a pause, "That's how we know you're not a genius, Sasuke-kun. You're still sane."

"And what about you?" Sasuke spits, "What does that make you?"

Kabuto's lips twitch up at the edges and his pushes his glasses up the bridge of his nose in a movement of calculated grace, "I'm exactly what I appear to be, Sasuke-kun, and I serve Orochimaru best the way I am. What would he possibly have to gain from giving me a curse seal?"

Sasuke realizes that the only person Orochimaru is more infatuated with than him, is Kabuto. Sasuke also realizes this isn't the sort of thing he should be jealous about.

* * *

The next time he asks Kabuto a question, the taller ninja just smiles, tips his head slightly (white bangs falling across his forehead- he looks to young to be that ruthless) and kisses him.

Sasuke does his best to convince himself he doesn't enjoy it when Kabuto expertly dips his back and smirks into his lips, deft fingers ice cold as they dance across his stomach. His breath hitches and he tells himself: "a stone in the lake, a stone in the lake." Kabuto's just watching for the ripples in his heartbeat, in his breathing, in the way his entire body is reacting, coming alive piece by piece against his will. It's all a carefully crafted psychological manipulation which, Orochimaru has taught him, can be considered part of his training as well ("So always be on guard, Sasuke-kun."), but Sasuke doesn't understand how this could possibly make him strong. All it does is make his legs wobbly and all the wrong muscels tense up under Kabuto's gentle, doctor's touch.

He's almost (almost) disappointed when Kabuto pulls back and raises an eyebrow, staring down at him appraisingly, "Well," he muses thoughtfully, "That's interesting." there's snide laughter dancing in his tone and Sasuke tries to will away the flush in his face.

That night he dreams of things that won't make him stronger.



Word Count: 582



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[info]lykomancer
2006-03-28 04:47 am UTC (link)
LOLZ, I'd forgotten that I'd actually asked for this, so my first thought was something along the lines of "...what did I do to earn this much love!? OMGYAY!"
I'm such a ditz sometimes. *laughs*

But it's still an "OMGYAY!" whether I asked for it or not. It makes me wibbly all over, and no, I have absolutely no problem whatsoever with the hinted SasuNaru (or the OroKabu, either, for that matter)-- it's yummy.
Mmm, Kabuto's avoidance of answers that are either straight or simple is happiness; I really like the way you wrote him. A lot.

Thank you~!

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[info]cephiedvariable
2006-03-28 04:53 am UTC (link)
YOU KNOW WHAT, I actually went through and cut out the hinted SasuNaru after reading it through several times (BECAUSE I'M THE KIND OF LOSER WHO DOES THAT, HAR) but I'm glad you appreciated it anyways? ^__^;; Upon re-examining this, I half wish I'd left it as a drabble and only included the first part, but considering it was written for you and you enjoyed it I think I'll let myself be satisified. *nods*

Kabuto's fun to write, but it's difficult to get into his head. Right now I'm actually working on a OroKabu fic simply because every fic I read about that pairing has this kinky, torture angle where Kabuto's just kind of being abused because he's pretty, which strikes me as being alarmingly OOC since I'd imagine that it'd be more like:

Orochimaru: "Ohohoho, Kabuto you are so brilliant. I must have you NOW."
Kabuto: "Well, then I suppose you must have me."

< /ramble>

But yes, your welcome. XD

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[info]lykomancer
2006-03-28 05:01 am UTC (link)
I understand that feeling, but yes, I do like it very muchly, so be as satisfied as you can be with my enjoyment.

"Alarmingly OOC" is probably one of the kindest ways that can be phrased, I think. Did those writers miss that whole mutal respect angle in the relationship or what? Or the fact that Kabuto's at least as much of a sadist as Orochimaru and probably quite a bit more of a control-freak (...in his own way)?

He'd have that little goddamn smile while he accepted the offer, no less. ^____^

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[info]cephiedvariable
2006-03-28 05:10 am UTC (link)
OH, BUT KABUTO'S SO GEEKY AND ADORABLE AND PRETTY. THERE'S NO WAY HE COULD REALLY BE ALL THAT BAD!!! T____T

They also miss the parts where Kabuto bitches Orochimaru out for his mistakes and Orochimaru's just kinda like: "Yeah, well...... okay, you're right. STFU."

I almost want to write an [info]ship_manifesto on the pairing due to the fandom's utter inability to conmprehend it, but I'm not sure if I really care that much. I just want to be able to read some decent OroKabu fic sometime. Like, even just ONE and I'll be happy.

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[info]a_white_rain
2006-03-28 05:24 am UTC (link)
I liked it. The kiss amused me and made me want to snuggle Sasuke.

However, I guess I'm too sleepy to see the NaruSasu hints you put in there.

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[info]cephiedvariable
2006-03-28 05:47 am UTC (link)
As I said, I deleted them after a second readthrough. I needed to cut down the wordcount and it felt a little bit unecessary. ^__^

Sasuke really does need a hug or a snuggle or two, but c'mon. I bet he's being pampered like royalty in that village anyways, so a few accounts of half willing molestation won't hurt him too much. XD

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[info]a_white_rain
2006-03-28 10:34 am UTC (link)
I bet he's being pampered like royalty in that village anyways, so a few accounts of half willing molestation won't hurt him too much.

He sure acted a bit like a spoiled brat, that bit we got oh him. Though I hardly think Orochimaru left him without something nasty on his unstable phsyce.

And, of course, sort-of-unwilling molesting is a good thing!

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[info]dragonsquee
2006-03-28 11:45 am UTC (link)
Woman, you write great Kabuto, His creepiness and how he's completely intangible sometimes-perfectly captured here. And hey, Kabuto/Sasuke, there's definitely psychological games there.
So yes, good fic.

Can I friend you, as well? I've read several of your fic and, yeah,...>.>...and your NaruSasu ship manisfesto as well.

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[info]cephiedvariable
2006-03-28 11:18 pm UTC (link)
Uh, yeah. Friend away. ^___^;;

This is my first attempt at really writing Kabuto, so I'm glad I didn't COMPLETELY SUCK AT IT. THank you!

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[info]jiffy_pop
2006-03-28 11:14 pm UTC (link)
Kabuto is by far one of the most facinating characters in Naruto, and I loved how you had him in this -- so manipulative and seducing. And I absolutely loved your opening line. So good, so fun.

Thanks for the read!

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[info]bloodnblack
2006-03-28 11:17 pm UTC (link)
You write a great Kabuto, so creepily in character and all that jazz, crazy stuff *le shiver*

NaruSasu pwns SasuNaru, but KabuSasu pwns them both >3

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[info]biztheinsane
2006-03-28 11:58 pm UTC (link)
... so, like. Where has your fic been all my fandom life?

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[info]0x
2006-03-29 12:44 am UTC (link)
EEE!

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[info]typecast
2006-03-29 01:10 am UTC (link)
How can one fic make me love KabuSasu? ;_;

It must be because you're awesome.

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[info]_acerbitas_
2006-03-29 04:47 am UTC (link)
Oh god, I can't believe it. Good lord, KabutoxSasuke, you're my god. You made my life! This was well written, I really liked it. Nice thoughts, nice story idea. Wow, one of my favorite pairings. You're amazing!

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[info]phoiniks
2006-03-29 09:50 am UTC (link)
Oooh I like this, I like your Kabuto.

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