Rukawa GF ([info]rukawagf) wrote in [info]picakiraruka,
@ 2008-01-16 17:05:00
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Entry tags:fanfic, hitman reborn, rukawagf

[Fanfic]: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!: 1827: Puzzle

Story:
Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Title: Puzzle
Pairing: 1827 Hibari x Tsuna
Rating: R18
Credits: [info]raenef_mignon for helping me with grammar check.
Warning: None save for the smut itself.
Summary: Smut drabble request from [info]amecandy Hiba x Tsuna: Puzzle. One page long.


Hibari was a puzzle Tsuna did not understand.

Their first time was in the empty classroom after school. It was rough and Hibari’s bites hurt, which made Tsuna cry. The entry was painful and Hibari muffled the sounds by covering Tsuna’s mouth as he told him that it was his punishment for breaking the school rules.

The second time was much more gentle. On top of the roof, during lunch hours, Hibari locked the door shut as he backed Tsuna against the wall and showered him with warm afternoon kisses. Hibari’s hands lightly stroked Tsuna’s back and massaged his curves, making Tsuna moan involuntarily. Just by his sucks and kisses alone, Tsuna climaxed as he shivered in Hibari’s embrace.

Their third time was totally unexpected. Tsuna woke up in the middle of the night and saw the curtains of his window waver. A shadow fell from the window and lightly held Tsuna in the dark. They found each other’s lips and managed to undo their buttons blindly, and their hot breath told each other where to go.

Even after their fourth time and their fifth time, and countless many times afterwards, Tsuna did not understand his smug, proud lover whom everyone in Namimori feared for their lives at the mention of his name. The only thing Tsuna did understand was that once Hibari enjoyed their exchange, he took pleasure in quiet sleeps soon afterwards…. normally, holding tightly onto Tsuna under his chest with Hibird nestled near their head.

It took many, many, many weeks for Tsuna to sleep without waking up Hibari.








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to be honest, I don't like the ending of this drabble -.-;;;; totally ooc. boooo...... oh well. i hope kira likes it though -.-;




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[info]picaaa
2008-01-16 10:07 pm UTC (link)
The second time was much more gentle.
mfu... *started imagining things after this line*

SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE +W+;;;;

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-16 10:30 pm UTC (link)
ahahaha, did you stop reading the fic or just started wanting the 5th time and 6th time? XD

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[info]amecandy
2008-01-16 10:09 pm UTC (link)
UWOOO *_*;; SO SO HAWT OMG... *^*;; that was a sweet ending I thought T^T:; AHH T^T I love how you gradually gets sweeter and AHH T^T;;;

holding tightly onto Tsuna under his chest with Hibird nestled near their head.
c-cute ;;;;;.....

t-thank you ;^;... <3 <3

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-16 10:29 pm UTC (link)
hmmm yes, hibari's warming up to tsuna? XD

i HAD to add hibird in there for you XD

as long as the fic requester likes it, it's good :D

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[info]kurot
2008-01-16 10:14 pm UTC (link)
SO... SO CUTE
UGH
;__; Omg~~ 1827 ;o;;;;

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-16 10:29 pm UTC (link)
really?? whew.... looks like ppl like this fic at least. so far this is my least fav drabble strangely o.o;

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[info]seki_yumizu
2008-01-17 12:58 am UTC (link)
Hibari + Hibird + Tsuna sleeping together = T^T That image is so cute...
I love the third time XD
Ever since Hibari rode his bike to Tsuna's house to dispose of Tsuna's "first kill" I always envisioned something like that might happen XD

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-17 03:58 am UTC (link)
third time eeeeh? XD ahahahaha

ahahaha exactly!!! me too? XD

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[info]izelmecatl
2008-01-17 07:34 am UTC (link)
SDLFAS;KMGS;DLF So cute~!!! Oh My god the first time must've been very tough on Tsuna! It must've been hawt though! *is perv* The third one too~! Speaking of which, a lot of doujunkas seem to liked the concept ever since that chapter where he came in through Tsuna's window, so romantic but a bit scary at the same time! D:

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-17 04:02 pm UTC (link)
first must have hurt yes ahahaha....

and yeaaah. i also like that concept so... XD

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[info]waterbaby12us
2008-01-17 11:19 am UTC (link)
Wow, Very cute ^_^ I didn't think it was too OOC either XD

It took many, many, many weeks for Tsuna to sleep without waking up Hibari.


That line just had me burst out laughing XD

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-17 04:02 pm UTC (link)
whew thank goodness you didn't think it was too ooc T.T;;;;;;;;;

aahahahahaha glad you enjoyed the last blurb

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[info]kawaiixangel
2008-01-18 01:51 am UTC (link)
hahaha took him time to learn to sleep w/o waking hibari...yeah hibari scares me w/ his sleep lol

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-18 02:02 am UTC (link)
ahahaha it's from the chapter in the hospital where hibari says he'll bite tsuna to death if he isn't quiet....? XD

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[info]acire666
2008-01-18 03:42 am UTC (link)
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
How cute~

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-18 03:52 am UTC (link)
thank you~~~<3

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[info]ka_yakusoku
2008-01-24 12:16 am UTC (link)
What's wrong with it? I liked it a lot. Sure sounds like Hibari, always so unpredictable and poor Tsuna has to deal with it. Surprise midnight sex XD

btw, I like your avatar lots :3

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[info]rukawagf
2008-01-26 08:16 am UTC (link)
Ahahaha... I just thought the ending was weak. and too long and winded. strangely ppl like it like this... now re-reading it, it's not too bad Xd

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