Phoenix ([info]aznmen) wrote in [info]phoenixflights,
@ 2008-08-22 17:06:00
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Entry tags:character:changmin, character:jaejoong, fandom: dbsk, fic:100challenge, fic:drabbles, fic:one-shot, genre:angst, p:changmin/jaejoong, rating:pg

Kiss Him Breathless

Title: Kiss Him Breathless
Author: Aznmen
Pairing: JaeMin
Genre: Mild Angst
Summary: You want to kiss him, kiss him until you’re both out of breath and left gasping…

Changmin smiles (you smile as it reaches his eyes), quirks his head to the side as he laughs and closes his eyes. He tosses his head, trying to get the hair from his face, but it’s a useless gesture and the hair quickly bounces back into the same spot it was before.  

You’re staring, you’re aware of it, but you can’t help it. You want to sit behind him and casually run your hands through his hair, reveling in the softness of the locks, while he protests but doesn’t really move out from under you.

In your mind, you think of the other things you want to do. You want to kiss him, kiss him until you’re both out of breath and left gasping. You want his hands to wrap around your waist and bring the two of you so close that the beatings of your hearts are in perfect synchronization. You want to breathe the air he breathes (exchanging passion, exchanging, breath, exchanging love), closing your eyes at the serenity, and clasp his hand until you can barely tell whose finger belongs to whom. You want to be with him when you pass something beautiful, he would laugh at you because you’re queer like that. You want to be standing still, talking to friends, only for him to put his arms around your shoulders, claiming you as his own in front of the rest of the world, and have him rest his chin on your head and glare at the others when they laugh at the two of you.

But. Rejection’s a bitch and something that you’ve had months to get over, but it’s still bubbling at the bottom of your heart. He still smiles and jokes, but sometimes (sometimes), he smiles in this sort of way that makes your heart stop for a beat, and remember why you fell in love with him in the first place.

100 Theme Pic Challenge – Standing Still

20/100
Written at school, edited and finished at 16.27 8.22

A/N: I wrote this one on the bus. XD I’m surprised looking at my notebook where I typed it from it’s not horrible >.> the bus is soooo bumpy! ^^; And... I"M AT 20!! I started this on a whim as simply a thing to play with for drabbles and make my writing better. I started on the 1st of March XD I might do the Suju one later... >.>




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[info]umai_jae_ai
2008-08-22 10:18 pm UTC (link)
ohh poor jaejoongie

Really good job. Loved it!

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[info]aribrikapanda1
2008-08-23 12:04 am UTC (link)
I fell in love with this ... he smiles in this sort of way that makes your heart stop for a beat, and remember why you fell in love with him in the first place.

I really really loved this
♥♥♥

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[info]kratynoi
2008-08-23 06:19 am UTC (link)
Aww~ I missed your JaeMin...and I missed your writing. ^^ But why so sad? ~.~

Still loved it though. ^^

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[info]xiahlover
2008-08-23 06:59 am UTC (link)
omg..so romanic <3 i luv it *big kiss on cheek*

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[info]kimjaeshim
2008-08-23 10:21 am UTC (link)
i love it!!!

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[info]chloe1910
2008-08-25 04:46 am UTC (link)
Hey..I've missed your fic..espeically Jaemin ones..

This leave me feeling a little bitter for Jae..yes, rejection is a bitch....*huggles Jae* I hope Jae will not give up on his love for Min and in time to come, Min would accept Jae...

Edited at 2008-08-25 04:54 am UTC

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[info]ilovefanficz
2008-08-26 01:38 am UTC (link)
Awwwwwwww~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ToT

SO BEAUTIFUL~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

KYA~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

but what what what?!?!?!

YOURE LOCKING?!?!

what does semi locking mean anyway..? XD

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[info]aznmen
2008-08-26 07:46 pm UTC (link)
Awww *huggles*

Hahahah okay semi-locking (and I"m being slow on the official post, ne? xD) semi-locking is basically as it's stated. I'm ONLY locking fics that have been posted 1 month previous. this doesn't count ongoing fics, because those will always stay open, except for when they're finished, then they'll be locked.
the way to see them anyway would just be to join xD i don't want to force force people (thus the insane amount of time i'm keeping them open) to join, but, i still want to kinda know how many people are reading, you know? (does this make sense? XD)

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[info]ilovefanficz
2008-08-27 12:03 am UTC (link)
ah.. then i must join~! ^o^v

its gonna take me awhile until i read ur fics cuz i have school.. and i have to study hard.

it might take awhile to comment sometimes. ToT

but yeah.. ANYWAYS~~ ill always read ur fics, ne?

itll.. take long though.. TT________TT

sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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[info]mrsedjack
2008-09-23 06:26 pm UTC (link)
;-; So sad. Why so sad.

I love it. It's like - so heartbreakingly beautiful. D:

-insert sound of breaking heart- ♥

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