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Unbroken

Hey all, this is my first time post on this 'pair-of-deuces', just thought I'd give it a try since I have loads of free time at the moment.  This poem is most relevant to how Jack, perhaps, feels but can't express.

Comments and constructive criticism are welcome and try to be kind, if possible, it is my first time after all :P

My inspiration for the poem is of course, the property of Annie Proulx, but more so, my poetry comes from me and some of the feelings I have.

Unbroken

You say no,
I say yes,
They say it cannot be,
I say it was born to be.

A Love, oppressed,
But never faltering.
A Bond so strong,
As to be unbreakable.

The Embrace,
The Touch.
A love re-united,
With the flames of yesteryear.

This isn't dying,
We won't let it end so,
Together, Forever,
Our desire never ending.

My love, my soul,
My Skin.
I won't shed you, for,
You are Me.

'Till Death so us part
& beyond.
The Grave,
No obstacle.
This love must prevail.