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August 6th, 2007 @ 10:20 pm Mary Sue! I have found you! [ ] lalachoy Title: Mazushi's Unexpected New Life Link: Here Author: : Tammyecklemoom Rating: The horrible! Summary: "Mazushi was adopted by Hikaru and Kaoru's mom after being hit by there limo while she was running from security guards for shop lifting ....." My Notes: This is just about the best example of a Mary Sue. You need to learn what your character can't be? Look at this story. One Good Thing About This Fic: It's readable. 1 Flames/ Flame This Story/ Memorize/ Edit/

June 30th, 2007 @ 12:10 pm HARK! THE BADFICS [ ] xxmyfearsmylies Title: Babysitting Link: Here Author: RizaMustang24 Rating: The horrible! Summary: "Haruhi needs money, so she takes up babysitting. Kyouya allows her to bring the child to Club. So, the child tortures Kaoru until Kaoru can't even think straight. Only, this makes it so that Kaoru and Hikaru have to come to terms together. Lover? Friend?" My Notes: Okay, after a while, it's definitely NOT about babysitting anymore. And it's a continuous cycle: twins are in love, they fight, one twin gets a girlfriend [or boyfriend], make up, break up, rinse, lather, repeat. Plus, WTF @ little girl obsessed with religion. Or whatever. Who knows. One Good Thing About This Fic: She has proper punctuation/capitalization/grammar. Readable! 4 Flames/ Flame This Story/ Memorize/ Edit/

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