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5th January, 2010. 12:33 pm. More WoW characters for the same story(epicbishophazel)

The story I'm writing centers around Hazel from my previous entry and Cassus from the entry, the others are also main characters, but not as much as those two. So, anyway, here're the rest of the characters I'd like opinions on. They don't seem Sueish to me, but they could be and that's where second opinions come in.

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4th January, 2010. 4:20 pm. A World of Warcraft character(epicbishophazel)

Keep in mind, I will not be playing him in-game because 1. I can't afford it. 2. His race makes it impossible and 3.It would be a pain in the ass to level a priest just to abandon the character and re-roll him as a Death Knight. Basically I plan to either write about him or use him in the tabletop game. Also, I have researched WoW lore, but I have a piss-poor memory and sometimes things get lost in the jumble that is my brain, so if I've forgotten something, don't hesitate to tell me.
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1st January, 2010. 6:45 am. District 9 OC Who's Sounding Like A Shallow Love Interest(animefan19)

Fandom: District 9
Character Name: Michael Smith

( Cut to save flist. )



Current mood: worried.
Current music: Truly Madly Deeply-Savage Garden.

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26th June, 2006. 9:21 am. [KHR OC Character] I really hope that she isn't a Mary Sue. Please...(teruame)


Fandom: Katekyoushi Hitman Reborn!

( OC: Zhang Ling )


Current mood: crushed.
Current music: "Pet" by A Perfect Circle.

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21st December, 2009. 5:42 pm. Second District 9 OC(animefan19)

Fandom: District 9
Character Name: Natalie Blake This is a sequel to my profile on Sherry, in a way.

( Sherry's arch-nemesis. )

Current mood: sad.
Current music: I Will Not Bow-Breaking Benjamin.

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12th December, 2009. 5:36 am. G.I. Joe (comics continuity) OC(tungsten_monk)

I came here once before, and I have to say, I really appreciate the feedback you guys gave me for my OC. I've got another one here in a slightly different format (Marvel rather than DC, for starters :D ) and if a couple of you could take a quick look, I'd be very grateful. Inserting a new character into a long-established continuity is always tricky.

Fandom: G.I. Joe (original comics continuity)
Character Name: Short Stack AKA Pfc. Anne Georgiana Gorshin

( An original quartermaster. )

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7th December, 2009. 9:46 pm. Batman v. Mary Sue(witchsnovel)

Greetings and Salutations.

Fandom:Batman
Characters Simone Templar and Raffles

I'm writing in the Nolan-universe but pulling in stuff from comic book canon.

( Simone )

( Raffles )

So there they are. What do you think?
I've posted about half of the fic in my writing journal. I need to get the last half written and beta'ed.

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7th December, 2009. 1:16 pm. Introduction + 2x OCs(violet_pourpre)

Hello, guys! I'm brand new around here and I just want to say that this community is a really awesome idea. The hard part about writing, for me, is trying to make up interesting characters whom people will not find boring or Sue-ish...Pick apart at will!

So lately I was wanting to do some sort of fantasy-esque vampire thing involving a young girl and a young Confederate vampire, but I want this to be, practically, the complete anti-thesis of Twilight. Like, have plot and characters who are not flat as a piece of paper. If you guys could help me I will love you forever <3

( A young lady and gentleman )

Current mood: creative.

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5th December, 2009. 10:39 pm. Character Sheet for a male OC - too bland and too good to be true(aqueousgold)

Hi everyone! I'm fresh meat here and I finally decided to join. I kept hearing a lot of great comments about this community and how much it's helped writers, so I'm hoping that you all could help me too with this story <3 :)


Fandom: Original -- an online series I plan to share soon, as soon I get all of these glitches and goofs worked out. The story circles around the lives of people, a gr who are trying to figure out who they really are and what they're really after.
Character Name: Kyle Miller

( The 411 on Kyle Miller )




Current mood: mellow.

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3rd December, 2009. 11:56 pm. original story character(misstumbledown)

Fandom: Original
Character Name: Gillian Drew
( click for a Wild Card Magnificent Bitch )( Read more... )

So is she a Sue? I'll be posting about a couple of more improtant characters later on, I think.

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