ZERO :: the Fool ([info]annwyd) wrote in [info]naruto100,
@ 2005-11-06 22:20:00
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Entry tags:history repeats itself

[Fanfic] Too Many Words
Title: Too Many Words
Characters: Sakura and an original character
Challenge: History Repeats Itself
Wordcount: 258
Notes: No bonuses included, and I'm not entirely sure this exactly qualifies as "history repeats itself." If [info]acanti decides that it doesn't, I'm fine with that. This was mostly written because I had these original characters left over from a previous fanfic who are still gnawing at my brain, and this challenge gave me an opportunity to work with them again.

When Uchiha Kotoyo was eight, she could have graduated from the Academy easily. She knew all the facts, knew every bit of history they'd fed to her and a few more besides, could perform the basic genjutsu with barely a hint of effort.

They held her back, and when they thought Kotoyo couldn't see or hear, they glanced her way and murmured strange comparisons.

Kotoyo went home that afternoon and asked, "Mother, do you think I look like a weasel?"

Sakura stumbled and went pale. She would not explain why. Kotoyo had to figure it out herself. It took her some time to get access to the family records that her mother had tried to hide from her, but she managed it.

Kotoyo is fourteen now, and she enters the chuunin exams whenever they are held. Every time, she makes it through the written exam just fine. She practically flies through the Forest of Death with her siblings (the three of them function as a team; no other team will have them). She fights like a girl possessed in the finals.

It's not good enough, or maybe it's too good. She has never made it to chuunin, and those who know her family's history (and it seems like everyone in Konoha does) look at her with fear in their eyes.

Kotoyo knows many words, more than most. She knows stories and poetry and legends. But she doesn't have the words to explain the love she has for her family or the ways she's different from her dead uncle.




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[info]taintedkibou
2005-11-07 11:30 am UTC (link)
*sniffles silently and covers her face with her forearm* Poor Kotoyo-kun, because of her lineage and name, she's practically destined to live a life of Jinchuuriki who wasn't accepted... *sobs!*

^^; I liked it... In fact, if possible, I'd like to read the fanfic that your characters were left over from.

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[info]annwyd
2005-11-07 12:17 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. :) The other fanfic is here: Lady Uchiha.

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[info]stormcoming
2005-11-07 06:14 pm UTC (link)
I follow Lady Uchiha (lovely) and I greatly enjoyed this! Can't wait to see more! ^^

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[info]rayemars
2005-11-08 08:55 pm UTC (link)
Mmm--I liked Lady Uchiha, and I liked this. The last line is perfect.

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[info]shoeythoughts
2005-11-09 04:16 am UTC (link)
I liked this, but I loved Lady Uchiha more... =PpP

You know, I'm not supposed to like SasuSaku, (you can call me a "hater" ^^") but your fic, Lady Uchiha... I liked the SasuSaku parts! >.<

Urgh... torture...

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[info]annwyd
2005-11-09 05:20 am UTC (link)
Well, I'm always pleased to make someone like something for a pairing they don't normally enjoy. ;)

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[info]acanti
2005-11-12 09:07 am UTC (link)
The bonuses were actually only there to keep with tradition, haha.

I went to read Lady Uchiha and then I read this and I love them both!

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