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20 September 2007 @ 08:20 pm
Title: Less than Perfect
Pairings: Kihae;ShinMin(Shindong/Changmin);HyukSu
Rating: PG-13
A/N: This chapter switches POV's a lot.......so look out for changes.


He just stared at me before saying "The truth is...."

*Story Begins* (Eunhyuk's POV)

"The truth is.........I love you too." Junsu said while i look up to see if he was lying or not. I looked into his eyes and saw that he wasn't. We hugged and kissed with the up most passion. It was then that I realized that the whole time I was going out with Donghae,my heart didn't belong to him. My heart was for Junsu, and him alone.

*In the waiting room* (Third person)

Everyone waited patiently even though it was already midnight. They all knew no one was leaving without Kibum right beside them. Changmin,Ryeowook,and Sungmin all slept peacefully while Shindong,Yesung,and Ruki all played poker. "I know it's wrong to think this way, but what if Kibum doesn't make it?" Yesung asked while putting his cards down. "I can't lose him, he's the only family I have left. His parents died this past summer and before that mine died. I couldn't stand to lose him." Ruki said while getting up and walking down the lonely hallway. "I think if he doesn't make it...Donghae would be heartbroken and so would I. I knew him since we were kids." Shindong said. "He'll make it.....right?" Changmin asked while yawning. "Yes, now go back to sleep, you need it." Shindong said while laying Changmin back down.Yesung just stared off into space and slowly started to let sleep take over.

*Kibum's Room* (Donghae's POV)

The more I look at Kibum the more upset I get at myself. I love him and yet I did nothing to move him out of the way.......NOTHING!!!! I just wish I could do something for him.

*In Kibum's Mind* (Creepy...lol)

Donghae come back.......please come back.

*Flashback* (still in his head)

"Hey Kibum, what's up?" Shindong asked me. "Nothing just waiting for Donghae." I said while seeing him walk through the door and sit down with us. "Hey babe, what's wrong?" I ask. "Um Shindong could I have a minute alone with Kibum?" "Sure, have fun" Shindong says while going over to Changmin. "Kibum I have some bad news........we have to break up. I'm moving." Donghae says while looking at me with sadness in his eyes. "What? I can't believe this.....I love you. I thought love conquered all." "Not this time I guess, but remember this I will always love you and if fate brings us together again, I promise to come back to you,ok? "Ok" I say while we shared our last kiss. "Good-bye Kibum" "Good-bye" COME BACK DONGHAE...........PLEASE!!!!!

*End of FB*

*Kibum's Room* (Donghae's POV)

I look over to see a tear drop fall down Kibum's face. I get up and wipe it off gently. I'm sorry Kibum for everything, if only you could hear me. Just come back to me Kibum......."I miss you" I whisper while a tear raced my down my cheek. I wipe it off right before it was about to fall. I sit back down in the chair and look at Kibum one last time before I let sleep take over.

*Next Morning*

I wake up to see Kibum in the same spot I left him in. I wish he was awake and we could live happily but i guess that was only in dreams for now. I get up and walk down to the waiting room. When I got there everyone looked up at me and then continued on to what they were doing. I look around and realize that Eunhyuk and Dr. Junsu are missing. Wonder where they are?


All of a sudden I see Dr. Junsu run down the hall and into Kibum's room. We all run over to Kibum's door and listen. For the longest time we only heard beeping and more beeping. After a while the beeping ceased and Dr. Junsu came out. "What's wrong?" I blurt out. "I guess he moved,sometime today and one of his ribs moved and hit his lung, which made complications with his breathing. We just carefully moved the rib back and now he's breathing normally." he explained while my face went three shades lighter. Why does something bad always happen when I leave? WHY?! "Can I go in and see him?" I ask. "Sure." He said while walking back down the hall with the others. I walk in and see Kibum...........


Kissing me.............jk....i wish though....neways hopefully this chapter was good. Next chapter will probably be the last one.....sad i know. Well feel free to comment and let me know what you think.

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