Kass ([info]kassrachel) wrote in [info]mcsmooch,
@ 2008-06-20 12:39:00
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Good Shape
I'm so glad the [info]mcsmooch deadline got extended by a few days; it meant I could post this! 1000 words, set sometime after the S4 finale, many thanks to [info]sihayab for beta.




Good Shape



Rodney was the last person John expected to see in the Atlantis gym.

Everyone in the city had collapsed in exhaustion once they got Teyla and her baby safely home. A skeleton crew was keeping an eye on the city, and everyone else was officially off-duty. Not even the marines were working out this morning. John had assumed he'd have the place to himself.

But no: McKay was pumping away on John's favorite elliptical machine, the one that faced the window and, beyond it, the sea. He had his iPod clipped to his waistband, but he popped one earbud out and nodded to John in greeting. "Hey," he said, a little out of breath.

"Hey yourself." John leaned against one wall to stretch his hamstrings. "Thought you'd be taking advantage of the chance to sleep in."

"Yeah, well, I don't want to be out of shape when we go back out there," Rodney pointed out.

John climbed on to the other elliptical, just behind and to the left of the one that Rodney was on.

They churned away in silence for a while. Rodney couldn't see him -- not without turning his neck to an alarming degree -- so John took advantage of the chance to watch him.

McKay had a great ass. His calves were rounded, and his thighs were strong. None of this was news, but John was used to seeing him in work clothes, trousers that hid as much as they revealed. Those silky workout shorts clung to Rodney's ass as if they wanted to be there. Not that John could blame them.

Jesus: he was losing it. Imputing motive to a pair of workout shorts. "What's your plan for the rest of the day?"

Maybe talking would take his mind off McKay's ass.

"I thought I'd go see Teyla this morning," Rodney said, pulling out the other earbud and draping the cord over his shoulders. "Have you held the baby yet?"

John couldn't help the dopey smile. "He's so tiny."

"One of the botanists knitted a little sweater for him," Rodney offered.

"Aww, that's sweet."

But now John was picturing Teyla's son in Rodney's hands. It was the kind of domestic image that shouldn't have been attractive to him, but -- hell, Rodney puffing away at a cardio workout shouldn't have been attractive to him either.

He was so fucked.

*

After thirty minutes of cardio, John stepped down from his machine. Rodney did, too, grabbing a towel and wiping his face.

"You going to lift weights?" Rodney asked. "I don't know if I can spot for you --"

John contemplated the possibility for a split second. Him lying on his back. Rodney standing over him, silk running shorts whispering around his upper thighs. That sounded like a recipe for a really inappropriate reaction to weight-lifting. "No thanks."

Rodney looked crestfallen.

"I trust you to spot for me," John said quickly, "I just don't feel like lifting today."

"Suit yourself," Rodney said, shrugging.

"You want a spot?" It seemed only fair to offer. Though the thought of Rodney bench-pressing was dangerously arousing, too. Biceps and chest. Jesus. Please say no, John thought.

"Nah," Rodney said. "I'm good."

That was a relief; at least he wasn't going to embarrass himself.

"C'mon," Rodney said, and jerked his head toward the door. John slung his towel over one shoulder and picked up his water bottle.

But a few feet before the door, Rodney stopped unexpectedly to fiddle with his iPod and headphones, and John -- busy reciting his new mantra (stop staring, you're being too obvious, stop staring) -- walked right into him. Rodney turned, surprised, which brought them face-to-face. Standing too close. John could feel the heat radiating off of Rodney's body.

Shit shit shit. "Sorry," John said hastily. "I didn't--"

Rodney swallowed, but didn't back away.

For a long instant neither one of them moved. John felt his heart hammering, and noticed Rodney's chest rising and falling. His brain was screaming that men didn't stand this close together, that he had to make some kind of joke and move away now, but he didn't. Because Rodney hadn't. It was like some kind of crazy game of chicken.

Rodney moved first, but not the way John had been expecting. He leaned in just enough to brush his lips against John's.

And then he pulled back, eyes wide and expression suddenly anxious. "I, ah," he cleared his throat, "don't suppose I'd have plausible deniability if I said I didn't mean to do that?"

John's mouth tingled like he'd been gently shocked. "Not really." Before Rodney's face could shift into the all-out panic John was pretty sure was coming, he took the plunge. "I don't either," he said, and leaned in again.

This time it was a real kiss, open-mouthed and hot. John dropped his water bottle so he could use both hands to angle Rodney's head just right, and Rodney slid one possessive arm around John's back. God, his arms were strong. John's running shorts suddenly felt too tight.

"You know," Rodney said when they stopped, "I could probably convince this door to lock, but it would take a while."

"People might wonder why the gym suddenly required a scurity clearance," John said ruefully.

"But I was going to shower before breakfast," Rodney said, giving John a glance that was both sly and hopeful. "You want to--"

"Hell yes," John said, fast, and bent to pick up his water bottle. He gestured toward the door. "After you."

"You just want to watch my ass," Rodney muttered, walking out of the gym.

"Can you blame me?" John felt reckless, high on all of these new possibilities. "It's the best ass in two galaxies."

"If you think flattery's going to get you anywhere--" Rodney's voice was haughty but he was grinning to beat the band.

The transporter doors opened, then whooshed shut behind them. "I'm already where I want to be," John said, and it was true.

(1000 words)



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[info]melagan
2008-06-20 04:58 pm UTC (link)
*big ass grin* I LOVE This!!!!!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:01 pm UTC (link)
::grinning back at you:: I'm so glad you like it!

Your icon is totally adorable. OH BOYS.

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[info]sihayab
2008-06-20 04:58 pm UTC (link)
Yay! So *them*! Love the final version -- and the title works. (Ignore my suggestions -- too late!)

Um, shouldn't you be packing? ::g::

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:17 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much for your help, hon!

(And hee! I'm in good shape -- I can spend tomorrow trying to cram clothes into my duffel bag, no worries.)

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[info]sanj
2008-06-20 05:01 pm UTC (link)
Oh, FRABJOUS. This made me grin like a loon. ;)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:18 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it!

::twirls you::

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[info]jessebee
2008-06-20 05:02 pm UTC (link)
BOYZ! Oh, nicely done! *mems*

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:18 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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[info]omglawdork
2008-06-20 05:05 pm UTC (link)
This is so fantastic. They're so funny, and so them. Yay boys!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yay boys indeed!

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[info]Elizabeth Perry [insanejournal.com]
2008-06-20 05:06 pm UTC (link)
Oh, my god, plausible deniability is one of those phrases that will never stop being made of win.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:19 pm UTC (link)
::beaming::

They are so made of win, I just can't stand it.

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[info]aesc
2008-06-20 05:09 pm UTC (link)
Eeeeeeeee!! I can totally relate to the motives of Rodney's shiny workout shorts :>

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:20 pm UTC (link)
The minute they get into one of their rooms, John is going to grope Rodney shamelessly. *g*

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(no subject) - [info]aesc, 2008-06-20 05:25 pm UTC

[info]ailurophile6
2008-06-20 05:12 pm UTC (link)
wonderful! I loved it :)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:20 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]sheafrotherdon
2008-06-20 05:20 pm UTC (link)
wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee YAY! :D :D awwww I love it when the boys figure it out :D

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:21 pm UTC (link)
::beaming::

They're adorable when they get a clue, aren't they?

Thank you so much, hon!

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[info]the_shoshanna
2008-06-20 05:24 pm UTC (link)
Awww!

(Man, I have got to get back to the gym. It seems a lot more interesting now.)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:25 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Sad to say, this totally constitutes wishful thinking; I did not get to spend my workout this morning ogling Rodney McKay's ass.

Glad you enjoyed!

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[info]accidentalfan
2008-06-20 05:27 pm UTC (link)
Rodney in tight shorts on an elliptical = brain exploding with the image. Really can't blame John for staring. Nice kissies at the end.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:28 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I'm totally with John on this one. *g*

Glad you enjoyed!

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[info]winter_elf
2008-06-20 05:29 pm UTC (link)
heh - boys! Lovely.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Glad you enjoyed!

Edited at 2008-06-20 05:37 pm UTC

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[info]lamardeuse
2008-06-20 05:31 pm UTC (link)
EEEEEEEEEEEEE! Now I will have a very happy rest-of-my-day, imagining Rodney's gorgeous ass in workout shorts (and out of them). Thanks, hon! :)

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:38 pm UTC (link)
I live to serve! :-)

It really is a pretty mental image, isn't it? *g*

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[info]tarlanx
2008-06-20 05:47 pm UTC (link)
Very nice!!!!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you kindly!

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[info]darsynia
2008-06-20 05:49 pm UTC (link)
Ok, I loved that whole thing so very, very much, but the best part was this line:

The transporter doors opened, then whooshed shut behind them. "I'm already where I want to be," John said, and it was true.

That was such a masterful little story, I'm squeeing like mad right now! Because really, all of the imagery and John's thoughts and guh.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:51 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yay! I'm so glad this worked for you -- especially that last line, which I was worried was a little bit OTT. *g*

I love your icon, btw. This fandom reduces me to dolphin noises all the damn time. \o/

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[info]gnine
2008-06-20 05:49 pm UTC (link)
Heeeee! So cute! Yay for more Mcsmooch! w00t! ^_^

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 05:51 pm UTC (link)
Thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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[info]isagel
2008-06-20 06:30 pm UTC (link)
I have SUCH a big grin on my face right now. I loved everything about this. And, um, I might be a little bit dead from John's mental image of Rodney with Teyla's baby.

Also, this is so much hotter than it has any right to be. Guh.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 06:34 pm UTC (link)
I am so glad you liked it! I'm a little bit dead from John's mental image of Rodney with Teyla's baby, too. *g*

And yeah, I continue to be distracted by the hotness of Rodney in silk running shorts! I don't even know. I just -- damn. Yeah. \o/

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[info]siriaeve
2008-06-20 06:35 pm UTC (link)
erlkaerjhgakeg oh, I APPROVE of this mental image \o/

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 07:20 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yay!

(And now I can't stop giggling because I want that to be the voiceover on a clip of John and Rodney making out: "I'm [info]siraeve, and I approve this image!")

Edited at 2008-06-20 07:21 pm UTC

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(no subject) - [info]siriaeve, 2008-06-20 07:35 pm UTC

[info]aurora_84
2008-06-20 06:50 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww, I love it!!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 07:21 pm UTC (link)
Thank you kindly!

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[info]anatsuno
2008-06-20 07:25 pm UTC (link)
oh, sweetness! Yes, I loved this.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 07:27 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! \o/

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[info]tex
2008-06-20 07:53 pm UTC (link)
YAY! I can totally understand John's thinking in this -- Rodney working out on the elliptical must be a thing of beauty. Nrrrgh, silky shorts. Rodney should always wear silky shorts! So much with the sexual tension in this - it was fantastic!

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 07:59 pm UTC (link)
Seriously, every time I think about Rodney in these silky running shorts I just about combust. *g*

So glad you enjoyed! And damn, that icon is pretty.

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[info]sageness
2008-06-20 08:10 pm UTC (link)
Awwww, yay!! ♥

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[info]pennyplainknits
2008-06-20 08:35 pm UTC (link)
Mmm workout shorts and sweaty boys!

Sometime I just sit down with the SGA wardrobe people and explain why we need better-cut uniforms. With pictures.

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[info]pennyplainknits
2008-06-20 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Sorry, that should be "I just want to sit down with the SGA wardrobe people". The pretty picture of the Rodney ass in clingy shorts has had a deletrious effect on my ability to type!

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(no subject) - [info]kassrachel, 2008-06-20 08:57 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pennyplainknits, 2008-06-20 10:04 pm UTC

[info]incidental_fire
2008-06-20 08:37 pm UTC (link)
So cute! And the image of them working out together is a *very* nice one.

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 08:57 pm UTC (link)
Thank you most kindly!

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[info]scribblinlenore
2008-06-20 08:47 pm UTC (link)
Awwww! This is just adorable, and I was really quite jealous of John, getting to watch Rodney's ass in a clingy pair of workout shorts. That would make it totally worth it to go to the gym! *g*

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[info]kassrachel
2008-06-20 08:58 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Look at it this way: through the wonders of fic, we all get to join John in watching Rodney's ass. *g* I hope you're having a lovely day!

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