one sixteenth Habadoo ([info]dogeared) wrote in [info]mcsmooch,
@ 2008-06-12 10:44:00
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I'll Feel Fine
I'll Feel Fine by [info]dogeared
(~200 words, prequelish to Lie Beside the Sea)

John hears Rodney cursing and muttering—"Fucking things grow like weeds!"—before he sees him, finds him kneeling on the ground engrossed in ripping out what Teyla told them were luunyll vines by the root, fighting what John suspects is a losing battle where they're starting to take over the south-facing side of the bungalow. He opens his mouth to point out that they are weeds, but when Rodney turns to him, John can see that he has dirt smeared all along one side of his nose and streaked on one cheek, and he ends up gesturing and saying, "Rodney, you've got . . . "

Rodney rolls his eyes and swipes at his face, completely ineffectually, and John finds himself on his knees too, chuckling and reaching for him and saying, "C'mere, c'mere," and Rodney smells like a hundred missions gone bad, like soil and sweat and sunscreen, and John can't do anything except lean closer, lean in.

And it's the middle of the day, bright and hot and shimmering; John's wearing his radio; they're not alone—he ferried eight people over to the new mainland with him, and some of them are close enough that he can hear their voices—and he kisses Rodney anyway, and it feels amazing. It's amazing.




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[info]lamardeuse
2008-06-12 02:54 pm UTC (link)
Oh. Oh.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:37 am UTC (link)
Yay yay! :)

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[info]amberlynne
2008-06-12 02:54 pm UTC (link)
I will never ever ever ever ever get tired of reading about them getting to do normal, everyday things and being happy about it. OH BOYS! You are amazing. ♥

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:37 am UTC (link)
*squishes youuuuuuuuu* *sends boys over to sit on your couch*

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[info]darsynia
2008-06-12 02:55 pm UTC (link)
I can so see this vividly with your descriptions, oh man. Plus, RADIO. I love their radios irrationally!

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:39 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you so much!

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[info]adafrog
2008-06-12 03:00 pm UTC (link)
awwww.....

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:39 am UTC (link)
Wheee!

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[info]siriaeve
2008-06-12 03:02 pm UTC (link)
They are so ADORABLE. \o/ As are Jenns!

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:39 am UTC (link)
\o/ ♥!

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[info]melagan
2008-06-12 03:08 pm UTC (link)
...and Rodney smells like a hundred missions gone bad, like soil and sweat and sunscreen, and John can't do anything except lean closer, lean in.

Just makes me so damn happy

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:40 am UTC (link)
eeeeeee YAY!

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[info]sihayab
2008-06-12 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Oh, man, I love that Rodney's weeding! (Having just come in from doing the same.)

Yummy kiss.

Thanks!

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:40 am UTC (link)
I think I would go search out weeds if it meant getting this! :D

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[info]larauwen
2008-06-12 03:25 pm UTC (link)
sweet sweet domesticity

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:41 am UTC (link)
Hee, thank you!

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[info]aesc
2008-06-12 03:28 pm UTC (link)
*happiest of happy sighs!!!!* JENNNNNNNNNS I love you and I love them so much.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:41 am UTC (link)
Happy boys are HAPPY! :D

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[info]gaffsie
2008-06-12 03:39 pm UTC (link)
If I had John to kiss me afterwards, I'd be better about weeding. *sigh* Stupid dandelions...

I want to hug this fic to my bosom. It's just so wonderful to see them happy and domestic and in love.

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[info]lysambre
2008-06-12 03:42 pm UTC (link)
Hey, I would actually volunteer for weeding if I had this kind of reward ;).

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[info]lysambre
2008-06-12 03:41 pm UTC (link)
Oh yeah, it is definitely amazing <3

Thank you :)

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 01:38 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]gnine
2008-06-12 04:41 pm UTC (link)
So. Cute!

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:42 am UTC (link)
Thank you! :D

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[info]sheafrotherdon
2008-06-12 04:41 pm UTC (link)
Oh! Oh, so lovely!! Oh wee boys!

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:43 am UTC (link)
So in love, Cates!

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[info]aurora_84
2008-06-12 05:06 pm UTC (link)
*melts*

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:43 am UTC (link)
eeeee!

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[info]beadattitude
2008-06-12 05:10 pm UTC (link)
So adorable and happy. I love seeing them domestic and happy. Well, John's happy. I'm sure Rodney feels better for the smooch.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:43 am UTC (link)
Oh, I think Rodney feels VERY happy about it :D

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eee
[info]solvent90
2008-06-12 05:18 pm UTC (link)
This is such a happy image. *basks in lovely sunny McShep* I do love your domestic fic - the sheer emotional weight you can make these quiet sweet little things carry is wonderful. Lovely.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:44 am UTC (link)
Oh gosh, thank you--what a very very kind thing to say!! I am really thrilled to know you think that. ♥

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[info]beeej
2008-06-12 05:55 pm UTC (link)
Weeding is not nearly so much fun at my house. ;)

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:44 am UTC (link)
*sends John over* :>

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[info]monanotlisa
2008-06-12 06:31 pm UTC (link)
Mmh, yes.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:44 am UTC (link)
Boyyyyyyys!

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[info]unaccompanied_g
2008-06-12 07:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh. I loved this. ♥

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:45 am UTC (link)
Eeee, thank you so much!!

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[info]stillwaters11
2008-06-12 08:42 pm UTC (link)
and he kisses Rodney anyway, and it feels amazing. It's amazing.
That made me go all "Oh!"
Such a perfect moment.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:45 am UTC (link)
Oh yay, thank you! :)

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[info]anatsuno
2008-06-12 09:33 pm UTC (link)
NAWWWW.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:45 am UTC (link)
:D :D

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[info]accidentalfan
2008-06-12 11:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh lovely. Really. I like how John is all "screw it" and kisses Rodney anyway.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:46 am UTC (link)
Well he just can't help himself! :>

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[info]sffan
2008-06-13 01:14 am UTC (link)
So few words to say oh, so much.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 01:37 am UTC (link)
Oh, thank you!!

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[info]d_odyssey
2008-06-13 01:16 am UTC (link)
*Claps, full of joy* Awww, such a cute story, dirt and leaning and kissing in public. This makes me happy, just like a warm, sunny day. Thank you.

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 01:37 am UTC (link)
Yay, I am so happy for sunny! :)

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[info]sageness
2008-06-13 05:57 am UTC (link)
Oh THEM. That is lovely! ♥

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[info]dogeared
2008-06-13 12:26 pm UTC (link)
eeeee, thank you! ♥

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