Your Cruise Director ([info]cruisedirector) wrote in [info]mandc100,
@ 2004-03-04 01:10:00
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Preserved
Title: Preserved
Author: [info]cruisedirector
Rating: PG
Word count: 100
Characters: Killick, Jack/Stephen
Rum to: Killick!


There were things that Killick saw, as Jack Aubrey's steward, but never mentioned. Rips in the captain's uniform, blood on his sleeve, and there might have been complaining but there would be no questions. The scent that wafted from Jack's handkerchief and the stains on his breeches simply disappeared.

So Killick must have known, Jack mused, very nearly the day it began, reading Jack's clothing the way Stephen had read Jack's flushed face and fluttering pulse. Yet when, years later, he thanked the man, indirectly, for his long silence, Killick only grumbled, claiming to have forgotten each and every time.



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[info]pun
2004-03-03 10:14 pm UTC (link)
Woohoo! Yay Killick!

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:34 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! Your icon makes me giggle!

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[info]tuff_ghost
2004-03-03 10:24 pm UTC (link)
yeah, rock on killick. the title's perfect, of course.

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:35 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. *g* I do love Killick!

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[info]zasjah
2004-03-04 12:41 am UTC (link)
Yay for faithful stewards! ;-)

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:36 pm UTC (link)
*cheers for Killick, introduces him to Faramir, giggles*

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[info]moonkitty2003
2004-03-04 04:11 am UTC (link)
WOO HOO! Me Love Killick. He's such a mommy type....we all need a little Killick...*Note to self, must make Killick icon.*

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:38 pm UTC (link)
LOL! My cat does that too! Thank you...I want a steward!

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[info]nindulgence
2004-03-04 10:26 am UTC (link)
This is an often-overlooked aspect of the privacy issues in this period. I really like your take on it here.

Thanks for writing!

~h

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:38 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! (I've read that in most adultery cases of the Renaissance, there were eyewitnesses, because so many people shared rooms...)

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[info]nindulgence
2004-03-06 09:29 am UTC (link)
By the way, I hope you don't think I'm stalking you or anything. I was just reading back through the last few challenges all at once, commenting on the drabbles I enjoyed: I didn't realize until I got your replies how many of them had been written by you! *g*

~

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-06 09:43 am UTC (link)
Oh, feel free to stalk. *g* I was very flattered!

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[info]arysteia
2004-03-04 06:33 pm UTC (link)
Go Killick! You da man!

Killick's silent approval, or at least acquiescence, is absolutely vital, I think, to the realistic possibility of this liaison.

Great rendition of Jack finally figuring it out. And how like him, poor innocent, not to think of it till later, but to have relied on his retainers' absolute loyalty all along.

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I agree, it's why I wrote the drabble. Thanks so much! I think he does trust his people pretty securely, even with the things that could get him into trouble if anyone talked...

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[info]dylant
2004-03-04 07:58 pm UTC (link)
Killick's what I'm sure Jack would term "such a damned old softie" -- or something equally fond but with a tacked-on pun that would make Stephen cringe.

I love the Killick man and this drabble...gives him his due.

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:40 pm UTC (link)
LOL about the tacked-on pun! Now I'm trying to think what it would be. Thanks!

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[info]ghazalah
2004-03-04 08:32 pm UTC (link)
Killick is a big grumpy marshmallow, bless him. :-)

Wonderfully evocative, and I don't mean evocative of dirty laundry. I love the feeling of history, of time passed, agreements made.

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 01:42 pm UTC (link)
Big grumpy marshmallow! Yes, that is the greatest description! And thank you so much!

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[info]bronzelionel
2004-03-05 09:56 pm UTC (link)
AGAIN you torture the poor man's uniform.
Honestly, ma'am. Tsk, tsk. ;D

(Love it regardless. :D)

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[info]cruisedirector
2004-03-05 10:08 pm UTC (link)
I have a stained clothing fetish. The more inappropriate the stain, the better. *g*

And thank you!

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[info]bronzelionel
2004-03-05 10:44 pm UTC (link)
...yarrrgh. Ah, yes... alright.
*worries*
:D

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[info]wicked_warrior
2006-04-10 06:20 am UTC (link)
Lovely! I adore Killick, he always acts as an over-protective hen ^^
"blood on his sleeve" ... Guess Stephen is a little, feral creature, heehee.

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[info]cruisedirector
2006-04-11 01:39 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much! I adore Killick too. *G* I meant blood on his sleeve in the battle sense, not the biting sense!

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[info]johanirae
2009-02-19 11:17 am UTC (link)
Killick ROCKS! XD

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[info]cruisedirector
2009-02-19 03:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I love that man. *g*

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