Peg ([info]mechaieh) wrote in [info]lupin_snape,
@ 2005-08-30 13:50:00
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Current mood: thoughtful
Entry tags:drabbles, fic: pg

Drabble: "Let What Is Broken So Remain"
Title: "Let What Is Broken So Remain"
Rating: PG
Count: 100 words
A/N: Post-war pre-slash. For [info]lupin100's challenge #58: "Why are we weighed upon with heaviness, / And utterly consumed with sharp distress, / While all things else have rest from weariness?" Both the quote and my title are from Tennyson's "The Lotos-Eaters".



There had been no rest for Remus Lupin after the end of the war. Voldemort’s fall had eliminated a nasty set of challenges, of course, but there remained only so much difference between fending-off-apocalypse, perpetually-on-the-run tired and too-much-not-getting-done, can’t-remember-not-being-tired tired.

Neither of those, however, compared to the end-of-one's-tether exhaustion in Severus Snape’s eyes when Lupin caught him contemplating a lethal dose of hebanon.

Snape sneered. “Tell me why not, Lupin.”

“Because you are not a coward, Severus.”

After a long, long pause, Snape let the flask fall from his palm.

Lupin whispered Evanesco the instant before it hit the floor.




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[info]jedirita
2005-08-30 07:22 pm UTC (link)
Ooooh! Very sad. But also kind of hopeful in a way.

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[info]mechaieh
2005-08-31 03:17 pm UTC (link)
The hope is definitely there.

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[info]catrinella
2005-08-30 08:03 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm. Lovely.

I crave backstory, as usual. :)

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[info]mechaieh
2005-08-31 03:16 pm UTC (link)
Thanks. And, um, here you go...

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[info]etrangere
2005-08-30 09:26 pm UTC (link)
Very beautiful.

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[info]mechaieh
2005-08-31 03:17 pm UTC (link)
Merci beaucoup.

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[info]sid
2005-08-31 03:55 am UTC (link)
very nice! it rang very true. i liked it a lot.

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[info]mechaieh
2005-08-31 03:17 pm UTC (link)
Thank you -- glad it struck the right note.

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[info]shadowmouse86
2005-08-31 07:15 am UTC (link)
This is very good! I like it! :)

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[info]mechaieh
2005-08-31 03:18 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! (P.S. Your icon made me laugh.) :-)

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[info]sor_bet
2006-04-04 07:06 pm UTC (link)
“Because you are not a coward, Severus.”

That may be the only reason that would work with Snape, especially after that scene in HBP, when we see his reaction to Harry's calling him that. Nice job working that canon bit into a drabble, and I like the idea that two worn-out, exhausted war heros can find a bit of understanding from each other.

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[info]mechaieh
2006-04-06 01:48 am UTC (link)
Thank you -- I'm glad that line spoke to you.

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