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Good Twilight Script Review - Rob Pattinson's role seen as difficult
Advance Script Review: Twilight
Written by Beth Woodward, Special to CC2K

High school sucks. Many movies have tackled this topic. But most of them don’t mean it quite so literally.

In certain ways, Twilight is a very typical teenage love story: Bella, an awkward, clumsy seventeen-year-old, meets the handsomest boy in school, Edward. Bella finds herself drawn to Edward’s mysteriousness, and Edward is intrigued by her intelligence and intuition. Before either of them realizes what’s happening, they fall in love. But one thing does keep this film from becoming too She’s All That: Edward is a “vegetarian” vampire, one who does not drink human blood. Unfortunately for Bella, her blood is sweet-smelling enough to tempt Edward to fall off the wagon.

Twilight is based on the first book in the bestselling young adult series by Stephenie Meyer. Twilight’s fans are a very outspoken group, and although the movie is not scheduled for release until December 12, they have already taken to cyberspace, critiquing every bit of available intel on the film, from the cast to the teaser trailers. Luckily for them, this script does deliver, managing to condense Meyer’s 498-page novel into a 103-page script without sacrificing cohesion or clarity. Plus, the script is straightforward enough that the people who walk into the film without reading the book should have no trouble following.

One area where the script excels is building suspense. As the novel is narrated by Bella, we are never able to see outside of her head – and therefore, we are never able to see danger except from her limited point of view. The script takes advantage of this difference, and a vague sense of foreboding and danger is set up right from the beginning. As Bella and Edward’s relationship begins, it is never quite clear whether Edward is falling in love with her or he’s just using her attraction to him as a means to kill her. We are also able to see the activities of three non-vegetarian vampires long before they encounter Bella and the Cullens.

But obviously, cutting a story to one-fifth its original size is going to result in some sacrifices – a few of which will undoubtedly upset some of the book’s fans. All of the major characters are here, but many of them are not nearly as well-developed here as they were in the book. One omission in particular is jarring: Jacob Black – a Quileute Indian boy who befriends Bella – is marginalized in the script, and a few of his key scenes are omitted. Jacob plays a relatively small role in the book, so his presence here is not missed much. But given Jacob’s importance in future storylines, I thought his character should have been developed a little bit more. Edward’s vampire family is also sketched much more vaguely than it was in the novel, although the fact that all seven Cullens made it to the film without being cut altogether is a feat in and of itself.

But whether the secondary characters are better developed in the final film or not, this is still Bella and Edward’s story. As such, the success or failure of this film will depend very much on its two stars, Kristen Stewart and Robert Pattinson. I think Stewart is up to the task. In one of her most recent films, 2007’s Into the Wild, Stewart brought depth and beyond-her-years maturity to a relatively small role. If Stewart can bring the same complexity and vulnerability to Bella – with perhaps a little more awkwardness mixed in – she should be compelling to watch.

Robert Pattinson is more of a wild card. Pattinson, a British actor, is best known to American audiences for his role as Cedric Diggory in Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. Despite the fact that Goblet of Fire is my favorite movie in the Harry Potter series, I honestly cannot remember anything about Pattinson’s performance. The good news is that this may not have anything to do with Pattinson’s acting ability. Cedric Diggory was more of a plot device than a character, and he didn’t have much to do in Goblet of Fire besides look blandly cute.

The bad news is that Edward is a much more difficult character than Bella – and Twilight’s teenage fans will be ready to pounce if the role is done poorly. With his self-loathing and his conflicted feelings toward Bella, Edward is much more multi-faceted than anyone in the Harry Potter universe. The challenge here will be making Edward seem both conflicted and confident, sexy and somehow menacing – a modern day answer to Wuthering Heights’ Heathcliff and Jane Eyre’s Edward Rochester.

Overall, I think this film will appeal to fans of romance and supernatural films alike. But non-Twilight readers, beware: don’t be fooled by the action-oriented teaser trailer that was posted on the Internet recently: this is, at its heart, a love story, and the script does not forget that. Anyone walking into this film expecting a vampire version of Spiderman is going to be disappointed. But if you’re looking for a creepy, character-driven romance, Twilight should deliver.

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[info]blinkers345
2008-08-13 02:44 pm UTC (link)
i really liked the script.

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[info]mana1023
2008-08-13 02:55 pm UTC (link)
I agree, but I found that there were quite a few lines and things we know they filmed that were missing. So I want to see the whole complete script.

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[info]9_happyducks
2008-08-13 03:16 pm UTC (link)
I guess I'm behind in Twilight movie news--the script was leaked?

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[info]shadesofblue28
2008-08-13 03:23 pm UTC (link)
ooh...where can I find the script? I want to read it, too!

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[info]haniie_x
2008-08-13 03:34 pm UTC (link)
This is where I read some of it they have quite a few characters and from sneak peeks that I have seen after I read these I think they are genuine


http://stewieismyhomeboy.buzznet.com/user/journal/1644031/

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[info]luisa_f
2008-08-13 04:12 pm UTC (link)
Bah! I'm beginning to think people who have this supposed script only mention it so that they're asked where they found it and they'll just be "neener! neener! I have it and you don't".

Sorry to say, but this always happens, someone mentions it and when they're asked they respond with a vague "oh I found it around at imdb/megaupload, look for it".

So I wouldn't even bother to ask where they found it.

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[info]iamthepirate007
2008-08-13 04:26 pm UTC (link)
lmao, alot of people have it. One of these LJ members just sent it to me from the spam post once again last night. I originally found it on another community a few weeks ago.

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[info]dr_crgirl
2008-08-13 05:44 pm UTC (link)
no way it could be sent...to me?

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[info]poetrytoprose
2008-08-13 05:50 pm UTC (link)
Please don't discuss the distribution of scripts in the post. Thanks.

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[info]sprut6
2008-08-13 02:51 pm UTC (link)
From what little we have seen of the Cullens in the teasers and the scenes I was preparing myself that they probably were going to wind up being underdeveloped and hardly there but still having someone who has the read the script say the same thing stills disappoints me. Oh well...it's not unexpected and she is right and it is pretty amazing that all of the Cullens made it into the film.

thanks for posting.

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[info]haniie_x
2008-08-13 02:53 pm UTC (link)
Although I am slightly disappointed that the Cullen's are going to be a bit more vague I understand that it would be hard to condense such a long book into a film and I think that Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart will pull off there rolls fantastically =]

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[info]blinkers345
2008-08-13 02:55 pm UTC (link)
IA. And practically everyone who is seeing the movie will have read the book and will know everything they need to know about the Cullens.

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[info]alexon_charm
2008-08-13 03:07 pm UTC (link)
I hope they do New Moon and Eclipse(so we can see more cullens too) with a wedding tacked onto the end or something and that Catherine does it, I think that would be awesome since I love her. :)

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[info]declan_k
2008-08-13 03:23 pm UTC (link)
Awesome! Thanks for posting! :)

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[info]annie_elainey
2008-08-13 03:28 pm UTC (link)
Edward is a much more difficult character than Bella – and Twilight’s teenage fans will be ready to pounce if the role is done poorly. With his self-loathing and his conflicted feelings toward Bella, Edward is much more multi-faceted than anyone in the Harry Potter universe. The challenge here will be making Edward seem both conflicted and confident, sexy and somehow menacing – a modern day answer to Wuthering Heights’ Heathcliff and Jane Eyre’s Edward Rochester.

ia.

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[info]chrissydechagny
2008-08-13 04:04 pm UTC (link)
Isn't Jacob's role actually expanded, not marginalized? I hope they do marginalize it in the sequels though.

It's too bad the reviewer hasn't seen any of Robert's other performances because they definitely prove he has the chops to pull off Edward. I don't see any complexity or vulnerability (but plenty of the wrong kind of awkwardness) in KStew's performances but to each their own, I suppose.

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[info]ceramicpiece
2008-08-13 04:18 pm UTC (link)
Jacob has a few scenes in the script for Twilight. Infact you see him before Edward! I'd have been happier with less of him. Infact they can marginalise him for the whole franchise as far as I'm concerned.

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[info]chrissydechagny
2008-08-13 04:31 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, he's in more scenes in the movie than he is in the book. He wasn't there to give the truck to Bella in the book, and every other one of his scenes from the book is in the script. So I don't know why the reviewer is saying his role is marginalized. It definitely isn't.

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[info]_transformed
2008-08-13 04:44 pm UTC (link)
He's not in the prom though, right? I didn't just miss that in the script, right? LOL.

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[info]andyta_love
2008-08-13 04:58 pm UTC (link)
lol, nope he is not in the prom. YAY! xD

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[info]luvcali76
2008-08-13 08:04 pm UTC (link)
Yay!!! <3

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[info]hayley_cullen
2008-08-14 10:51 am UTC (link)
he isnt in the prom? huh.. thats a bit weird.. but atleast we get a bit more Edward and Bella time ;D

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[info]luvcali76
2008-08-13 08:04 pm UTC (link)
ITA. Why not just pull the whole character? :D

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[info]asian_soul
2008-08-14 12:26 am UTC (link)
yeha why not?! :P

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[info]iamthepirate007
2008-08-13 04:24 pm UTC (link)
I refuse to read more of the script from what i've already read, but from what I've read it is excellent. and even the people who don't like the script have to agree it is so much like the book. Which makes me happy.

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[info]niceiceedward
2008-08-14 02:06 pm UTC (link)
where did you read the script?

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[info]_transformed
2008-08-13 04:43 pm UTC (link)
I was quite impressed with the script actually. Sure, I was kinda miffed at a couple of things (grrrr at those couple of things), but overall they did a pretty good job with bringing out the main points. It's pretty funny too, lol.

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[info]blackroseninja
2008-08-13 04:46 pm UTC (link)
I really hope they make New Moon and Eclipse, it would be awesome to get to know all the characters for the books. From the trailers that I have seen I really think that Pattison is going to pull it off, the look he has on his face when James says, "You brought a snack" Holy Crap amazing, that is what I think will make a difference.

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[info]ion_square
2008-08-13 08:35 pm UTC (link)
The script is actually pretty good, I think.

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[info]dietzipcoke
2008-08-13 09:30 pm UTC (link)
Why is it that I feel like I am the only one who who hasn't read the script?


This is all news to me.


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[info]qiushuwen
2008-08-13 10:56 pm UTC (link)
I haven't read it either. I guess it's a hush, hush thing? Anyway, the link in one of the comments above....

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[info]candy_003
2008-08-13 09:58 pm UTC (link)
I think the script was fantastic. I wasn't really expecting much when I sat down to read it, but at the end I was very suprised. I think they did good justice to the original material and I especially love that the Bella/Charlie relationship has been expanded.

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[info]asian_soul
2008-08-14 12:27 am UTC (link)
Yeah the script is good. I can't wait for the movie!

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[info]figures_out
2008-08-14 01:26 am UTC (link)
Thanks for posting! Interesting article. I can't wait!

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[info]piratewars
2008-08-14 01:50 am UTC (link)
I havent read all of the script, but so far I've liked what I've seen.

I think Kristen and Rob will do a good job (Kristen especially).




and a vampire Spiderman would be cool haha :p

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[info]hayley_cullen
2008-08-14 10:53 am UTC (link)
lol I would love to see Vampire Spiderman!

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