| Brendan ( @ 2006-06-15 01:42:00 |
| Current mood: | |
| Current music: | Jim Henson - Can You Picture That? |
Script Ideas
To answer
tuberatn's question, Yes. it is after katsucon. and so, seeing as I can't draw to save my life, I present the following script ideas for whomever is in need of an idea:
Claimed by
seamusvonpepski
Idea 1) Ok, this is a very busy, action oriented comic so keep that in mind before undertaking it.
Panel 1: note at the top reads "Somewhere, in the Matrix". Neo (of matrix fame) looks up to see ...
panel 2: Agent Smith walking towards him with a snide "Mr. Anderson. We've been expecting you."
panel 3-?: The next few frames (how ever many tickles your fancy as long as it get the idea across) is essentially the million smith fight from the second matrix movie. Basically a ton of agent Smith clones come from all directions and lot of fighting between neo and as many Smithes as can reach him at the time. This should go on for several frames at least. All leading up to neo finally getting a bit of space between him and the Smithes and composing himself.
panel (fourth from last): Neo draws his hands back and together like he's winding up for something big, saying "shinku..." *text should get progressively larger and more intricate as he says it*
Panel (third from last): Neo throws his hand forward in a Ryu (from Street fighter fame) Fireball motion, Screaming "HADOKEN!" and shooting off a huge ball of fire at the Smithes.
panel (second to last): Scene of tons of Smithes being enveloped in fire and dying with a big "PWNED!" written in flames across the panel.
last panel: deck of a matrix hover-ship where operators would watch the monitors filled with matrix code. The code on the screen should spell out "YOU WIN!" if possible. There are two people sitting watching the monitors, one of which is holding a video game controller. The other looks thrilled, saying "See? I told you it was quarter circle back!". The one holding the controller looks more amused than happy, saying "Why didn't we think of this years ago?"
end comic. See, like I said, busy and very intricate. not to be attempted by someone who doesn't have a good idea of how to draw fast action. But anyone who wants to take a crack at it can feel free.
Idea 2) This one's a little easier to draw, but a bit on the dirty side.
Panel 1: Shot of a stereotypical arcade scene. Kids gathered around various arcade machines with a DDR machine clearly visible in the background.
Panel 2: Kid leaning back off to the side as people play DDR, watching the people playing rather than the screen. Various DDR phrases come from off screen.
panel 3: (More DDR Phrases, but sounding like whoever is playing is losing) Second kid comes over and says:
Kid 2: What'cha doing?
Kid 1: watching DDR.
Kid 2: Why? DDR sucks! I can't stand that stupid game.
Panel 4: (no noises in this panel) First kid looks over at his friend:
Kid 1: I don't know, it's got its good points.
Kid 2: Oh yeah? Like what?
Panel 5: (Now it's announcing a new player) First kid looks back and points back at the game:
Kid 1: Just watch. You'll see what I mean.
Panel 6: Shot looks like it's looking out from the game screen at whoever is on the playing pads, and their audience behind them. You see that a very cute, VERY well endowed girl has stepped up on the pad with a look of concentration on her face. The machine announces "Now, LET'S DANCE!"
Panel 7: Girl begins to bounce up and down all over the pad, which causes her *ahem* assets to bounce even more than she is (very important to pay attention to details here). Behind her you see several drooling fanboys watching her play.
Panel 8: More bouncing. Machine should be cheering her on with how good she's doing.
Panel 9: Even more bouncing. Machine continues giving praise to the girl, and one of the fan boys has sprung a nose bleed.
Panel 10: Back to our two main characters (the gamers from panels 2-5, not the other two points of interest you pervs. Barry, I'm looking at you). the second guy is drooling up a storm with hearts for eyes. the first guy has a knowing smile on his face.
Kid 2: This is the BEST game ever.
Kid 1: Yeah.
for help with what the machine should be saying, talk to
project_jko or any other DDR fan. There's bound to be some around.