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Oops, was so tired after all-star game that I went to sleep without posting an update ^.^ Oh Well.
Well, for some reason Kim's section is being difficult. My problem is figuring out the main action that occurs before the climax action. Also I'm not sure the "moral" of this section, because this section is my current life and I personally don't see anything wrong with it. There is, and it's something along the lines of 'stop and smell the roses', but I need to think of a non-retarded way of saying that, since that saying pisses me off and I rebel against the concept. Burnout may be a good argument...
Anyway. So I managed to complete the first chapter of Kim's section, by some miracle. There is soooo little dialog though, it's just her walking around going to classes and junk. The first chapter is basically "a day in the life of", you know? Whatever, I'll fix it in editing. Anyway, main problem now: need something else to be going on besides Kim just wandering around her life.
Oops, was so tired after all-star game that I went to sleep without posting an update ^.^ Oh Well.
Well, for some reason Kim's section is being difficult. My problem is figuring out the main action that occurs before the climax action. Also I'm not sure the "moral" of this section, because this section is my current life and I personally don't see anything wrong with it. There is, and it's something along the lines of 'stop and smell the roses', but I need to think of a non-retarded way of saying that, since that saying pisses me off and I rebel against the concept. Burnout may be a good argument...
Anyway. So I managed to complete the first chapter of Kim's section, by some miracle. There is soooo little dialog though, it's just her walking around going to classes and junk. The first chapter is basically "a day in the life of", you know? Whatever, I'll fix it in editing. Anyway, main problem now: need something else to be going on besides Kim just wandering around her life.
( Excerpt! )
Current Location: My brain, which is boring and contains no action!
How we're feeling:
sleepy
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