Isis ([info]isiscolo) wrote in [info]ithurtsmybrain,
@ 2004-08-29 20:52:00
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FIC: A Girl of a Different Color
Title: A Girl of a Different Color
Author: Isis ([info]isiscolo)
Pairing: Parvati (HP) / Elphaba (Wicked)
Rating: G
Summary: A strange visitor appears in Elphaba's room.
Notes: Based on book versions of both sources. About 1600 words. Feedback is adored.


It happened while she was brushing her hair. A flash of movement in the mirror and a loud crack followed by a ka-THUNK made her whirl, dropping the brush; there on the floor behind her sat a strange girl, wincing and holding her head in her hands as though she had a terrible headache. She wore odd-looking clothes, and she was dark, like Fiyero, so maybe she was from the Vinkus, Elphaba thought. But she didn't seem to have any marks on her face - and hadn't he said something, once, about Vinkus women always staying at home?

The dark girl groaned, and Elphaba cautiously stepped toward her. "Are you all right?"

Another groan. "I don't think we're in Hogsmeade anymore."

"Where?"

The girl opened her eyes, which immediately widened in shock as she took in her surroundings - and Elphaba. "You're not lavender!"

Elphaba blinked in surprise; she was used to people commenting on her skin -- but certainly not like that. Lavender? Well, that would be a girl of a different color! She put her hands on her hips. "No, I know that I'm green, and I'm tired of explaining it to people, and you don't have to go on about it, please."

The girl shook her head, then grabbed it as though shaking it had made it hurt. "No, I meant my friend. Her name's Lavender. We were practicing Apparating." Then her expression changed. "No, forget I said that. I can't believe I'm talking about it. I must be splinched."

"What?"

"Never mind." She looked around, her eyes taking in all the detail: Elphaba's simple bed, Galinda's elaborate one, their books piled high on their desks. "Where am I?"

"Shiz University, of course."

"Sorry, I don't know it. Am I at least still in Scotland?"

"Where?"

The girl's eyebrows lifted. "Are you having me on? You can't tell me you don't know Scotland."

"I don't know Scotland, I'm sorry. I'm from Munchkinland and I haven't travelled very much, really. Coming here to Shiz was the biggest journey I've ever taken."

"Shiz." The girl turned the syllable over in her mouth as though tasting something strange and somewhat unappetizing. "It's a University? What do you study here?"

Elphaba couldn't keep the note of pride out of her voice. "The Headmistress is teaching me sorcery. I'm a natural witch, she said."

"Oh! So am I!" The girl grinned suddenly, her teeth very white against her dark face. "So this is a place like Hogwarts, then. That's my school," she confided. "My name's Parvati, by the way."

"I'm Elphaba. Where's Hogwarts? Is it in the Vinkus?"

"It's in Scotland. Which you don't know where it is. Where's Vinkus?"

"Somewhere to the west, I think. I'm not very good with geography."

"No kidding." Parvati rolled her eyes. "Hmm. Vinkus. Isn't that in Poland? And if that's to the west…" she trailed off, frowning. "I didn't think it was possible to Apparate that far."

That was the second time she'd used that strange word. "Is Apparating like flying?"

A suspicious look crossed Parvati's face. "You don't know…I thought you said you were a witch?"

"I'm learning to be a witch. I just started," she said defensively. "I can make lights flicker, and things move around. I haven't learned Apparating. Anyway," she added, "obviously you can't do it either, if you were trying to go somewhere else and you ended up here."

"You're right about that," said Parvati, smiling a bit ruefully. She held her head in her hands again. "I've got a bit of a headache - think I splinched something, maybe."

"I might have a headache powder," offered Elphaba, and went to rummage in her dresser. She was reaching toward the back of a drawer when she heard the door bang.

"Oh!" It was Galinda's voice, at its most imperious. "Who are you, and what are you doing in my room?"

"Er…it's complicated," said Parvati.

Elphaba turned from the dresser. "Her name's Parvati, and she's a friend of mine, so don't worry about it."

"What a surprise. I didn't think you had any friends." Galinda looked appraisingly at Parvati, then back to Elphaba. "Too bad," she said airily. "I was hoping that maybe Madame Morrible had assigned me a new roommate so I wouldn't have to put up with you anymore."

"Don't think I don't wish the same," muttered Elphaba, but Galinda had already turned to collect some books from her desk.

She headed toward the door, then paused with her hand on the doorknob. "And do brush your hair before coming to class. If you can't do anything about your skin, at least you can get that rat's nest untangled." Leaning toward Parvati with a conspiratorial smile, she added: "But you ought to leave, first. You might catch her lice."

"I don't have lice!" Elphaba shouted, but the door swung shut behind Galinda before the words were out of her mouth. She slumped to the floor. "I hate her, I hate her."

"Yeah, obviously she doesn't like you either," said Parvati.

"And I hate being stuck with her. I wanted to share with Nessarose - that's my sister. But it didn't work out that way."

"I know exactly how you feel." Parvati's voice sounded sympathetic, even wistful. She scooted over until she was sitting on the floor directly behind Elphaba; picking up the hairbrush, she began to brush Elphaba's hair with smooth, even strokes. "My sister and I went to Hogwarts together, too. We'd always been together, so we thought we'd be together there, but it didn't work out that way for us, either."

Elphaba closed her eyes, feeling the bristles of the hairbrush move against her scalp, feeling Parvati's deft fingers as she carefully worked out the tangles. Nobody had ever brushed her hair like this. Not her mother, who had always resented her daughter's strange coloration; and of course Nessarose wasn’t able to. It felt so good, so comforting, and she never wanted it to end.

But all too soon Parvati put down the brush. Elphaba turned her head, started to thank her, but hands turned her head back to face front. "Shh. Let me finish. You have lovely hair."

She turned the word over in her mind. Lovely. Nobody had ever applied that word to any part of her before. But here was this strange girl, who looked like she might be from the Vinkus but claimed to be from somewhere called Scotland, which Elphaba had never seen on a map, who said her hair was lovely. Who was almost as pretty as Galinda, though in a dark way, but who was kind, not cruel. Maybe it was because Parvati had a sister she loved. Maybe having a sister was a special kind of magic that made a person kinder, she thought. Take Galinda, for example - she only ever thought about herself. But if she'd had a sister, someone else to think about, maybe she would have been a different sort of person.

Parvati was doing intricate things with her hair now, weaving the strands, pulling and smoothing them back. "There. My sister and I always used to plait each other's hair like this. Go look in your mirror and tell me if you like it."

Bemused, Elphaba rose and went to the mirror. "Oh! It looks so elegant." And it did, a smooth weave of black falling down her back, the usual fierce tangles all vanished. "Can you - could you -" She stopped, suddenly shy.

"Could I what?"

"You're a witch, right? Are you as powerful as the Wizard?"

Parvati looked puzzled. "Which one?"

"What do you mean, which one? The Wizard. Our ruler!" This Scotland place must be very far away, thought Elphaba, if this girl didn't even know who the Wizard was!

"Well," said Parvati, sounding a bit cautious, "I don't expect I'm as powerful as your ruler is. I've not even taken my NEWTs yet."

That made absolutely no sense, but she decided to let it go. "I was just wondering…" She put a hand to her beautifully-plaited hair. "You made my hair look so nice," she said, all in a rush, "so do you think you could do something for my skin?"

"You mean," said Parvati slowly, "make it not be green?"

"Right. I don't care, you can make me dark or light, but I don't want to be green. Please?"

The other girl shook her head. "I wouldn't know how, sorry." Her lips twisted in a wry smile. "Besides, if I knew how to change skin color, I'd have gone a few shades lighter myself."

"Are they not all dark like you where you come from?"

"Not at all. The girls who look like your roommate don't care for my color, either. But I've got used to it."

"I see." And she did. That was why Parvati was so kind to her; being dark back in Scotland was probably as bad as being green here in Oz. A sudden idea occurred to her. "You could stay here. Everybody would just think you were from the Vinkus." And Parvati could be her roommate, and she wouldn't have to live with Galinda anymore. And they could brush and plait each other's hair…

"I can't. I've got to go home," said Parvati, breaking into her thoughts. "I think I'm ready to try Apparating back."

"Oh," said Elphaba, trying to hide her disappointment. But it was no more than she'd expected. And she really couldn't expect Parvati to leave her sister; that would be like asking her to leave Nessarose. Which she'd never, ever do. She offered Parvati a shaky smile. "Well, there's no place like home, is there."

Parvati nodded. "There's no place like home," she repeated. And, with a crack, she disappeared.



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[info]mayhap
2004-08-29 08:18 pm UTC (link)
Aww! That was fabulously perfect, right up to the very last line which, like a dork, I totally wasn't expecting. ;)

Maybe having a sister was a special kind of magic that made a person kinder, she thought..

Just fantastic. Every little detail about how the two of them connect in such a short time is so right.

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 08:24 am UTC (link)
Thanks very much!

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[info]everythingisaid
2004-08-29 09:27 pm UTC (link)
Aw, that's sweet! I'm only vaguely familiar with Wicked, but I know enough about it to not be lost in this fic. I loved the way you could connect Elphaba and Parvati. I never really paid all that much thought to Parvati before, but I think that I appreciate her more after reading this fic. : )

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 08:27 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I hadn't thought much about her either, but when I saw this pairing on the list I started going through the "what connects these characters" thing that I mentioned about my last fic. Glad to provide you with some non-smut :-)

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[info]seelechen
2004-08-30 01:40 am UTC (link)
I know of Wicked, but not much about it, so the initial explanation at your lj was helpful *g*. That being said, I probably could have navigated this ficlet even without it; the interaction between Parvati and Elphaba was so deftly depicted, and Elphaba's ruminations were...let's just say it's always a very pleasant suprise to find a few, humble truths within a fanfic that go beyond the usual self-contained logic of character/pairing. And I love what you've done with Parvati - not that I think you've made her 'better' per se, but that you've chosen aspects of her canonical presentation (ie. the her fussy-hairdos and hence the hair brushing), and used them to speculate on her, without demeaning the character. I express my admiration particularly for this aspect because I'm writing a Parvarti centred gift fic for someone, and I've had to confront my tendency to dismiss her as silly, simply because of our mutual differences.

Only one quibble, and it's probably nothing that reflects badly on your writing anyway. I noticed that the rules of the community stipulate a romantic relationship between the characters. But did you mean for one to be perceived between Parvati and Elphaba? I didn't see one, and the story works just as well without - or perhaps better, as it really doesn't seem to be needed, the friendly interaction, finding commonalities and so forth seem just as moving and satisfying. So I found the characters being listed as a pairing in the story notes was a distraction, and made me look for the pairing in the story. As I said, I can see this isn't necessarily anything you had control over, but I'm curious about your intentions and thoughts on the subject.

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 08:29 am UTC (link)
Yeah, I was really trying for some romance, but it wasn't happening too explicitly. The feeling I was trying to convey was that Elphaba had a slight crush on Parvati, because she was nice to her, and a pretty girl, but it never got actually spelled out, I guess.

Thanks for your comments - I'm glad you enjoyed the ficlet.

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[info]louiselux
2004-08-30 02:44 am UTC (link)
I loved the ending - very neat! I was worrying about Parvati and how she was going to get home. I also felt sorry for Elphaba, losing her new friend. I love the tone of the story - it walks a careful line between comedy and sadness. I've no idea what the style of 'Wicked' is like, but I really enjoyed what you did here.

The 'Lavender' joke made me giggle!

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 08:31 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I had a lot of fun working in the bits of humor - the puns between the two universes (and the original Wizard of Oz universe as well).

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[info]stanharding
2004-08-30 04:16 am UTC (link)
That was charming!

You should write a sequel where Elphaba ends up at Hogwarts and kicks Draco's butt.

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 08:32 am UTC (link)
Hee! Keep those plotbunnies away from me, boy!

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[info]ex_theatrica309
2004-08-30 06:39 am UTC (link)
I loved this. I've never written Elphaba, but I've always thought it would be difficult to really get her character down, and you seem to have done that. :)

"No, I know that I'm green, and I'm tired of explaining it to people, and you don't have to go on about it, please."

Very IC, and it made me smile.

My favorite part was the bit about sisters; it was sweet and made perfect sense without being over-dramatic.

Thanks for letting me know you finished this--I really enjoyed reading it. :D

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 08:34 am UTC (link)
Thanks very much! Once I saw these characters on the list, it just grabbed me so hard - thinking of the parallels and the differences between them, and it almost seemed like a natural crossover (as opposed to a brillo-scrubbing one).

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[info]seventines
2004-08-30 11:22 am UTC (link)
Fantastic! what a great cross-over idea and you make it work so well. BTW should say I'm called after my granny and the name is such that no straight boy I have ever known has ever been willing to be called my friend for fear of ridicule. Ahem. So I am familiar with the story. And the lines that you chose make the story. Love it, really.

All I need now is a Gilderoy Lockhart/Galinda fic.

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-30 12:44 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much - I'm pleased you liked it! But aie, keep those bunnies away from me. Gilderoy/Galinda indeed...

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[info]penmage
2004-08-31 06:44 am UTC (link)
This is wonderful. I love the interaction between the two of them - and the last line is fantastic.

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-31 12:03 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

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[info]roseanna
2004-08-31 02:33 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Was linked here through people, and just wow. That's brilliantly done!

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-31 02:41 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! And your icon is so cute, and so appropriate.

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[info]roseanna
2004-08-31 02:47 pm UTC (link)
Hee, thanks muchly. :D

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[info]shatterglass
2004-08-31 08:22 pm UTC (link)
Elphie! <3333 It was so cute. And after I just saw Wicked, too! Have you seen it? Lah, but bookverse is nice after all the music theatre campers babbling about Idina and Kristen but never having read the book.

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[info]isiscolo
2004-08-31 09:03 pm UTC (link)
Thanks very much!

I have not seen the musical - I have only read the book. However, I was referring to various synopses online which mostly dealt with the musical, so it's possible there are a few musical-only bits that have crept in. I just got a copy of the book now (thanks to the lovely [info]dementordelta!) so I will be able to keep to canon a bit better in the future. Um, assuming I write any more Wickedfic.

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[info]shatterglass
2004-08-31 09:28 pm UTC (link)
I'm just on such a Wicked kick right now. If you get a chance, see the musical before Idina leaves. She's brill.

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[info]hapes
2004-09-01 04:15 pm UTC (link)
Aww. I love it, especially the ending. *cuddles Parvati*

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[info]isiscolo
2004-09-02 02:55 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

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[info]guntar
2004-09-07 11:31 am UTC (link)
Heehee! This is a lovely little story. There's not much I can comment on, since I'm so late here, because the wonderfully funny jokes have already been mentioned.

Of course, the amusing thing is that, me never having heard of Wicked before, I assumed, when I read "and of course Nessarose wasn’t able to," I assumed that this would be important later on--instead of just a reference to canon that I wasn't aware of. But, despite my lack of knowledge, I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!

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[info]isiscolo
2004-09-07 01:39 pm UTC (link)
Heh. I'm glad that reply-from-other-journal went to you and not so someone else. :-)

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[info]katiewilde
2004-09-20 04:39 pm UTC (link)
Hmm. Vinkus. Isn't that in Poland?
*is delighted*

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[info]isiscolo
2004-09-21 07:38 pm UTC (link)
Thanks very much!

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[info]qurinas
2005-01-18 06:38 pm UTC (link)
Wow, this ruled. I loved the feel of it and you blended the two worlds so well. Great job!

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[info]isiscolo
2005-01-25 02:17 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much! I love the challenge of crossovers in part because blending worlds is great fun, looking for points of similarity and contrast.

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