Gertrude McHoneyGoose ([info]mchoneygoose) wrote in [info]hp_valentine,
@ 2005-02-11 11:12:00
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Author: [info]bsafemydeers

When Severus Snape was a little boy, he was a strange little boy. He
knew so because everyone told him he was.

Severus Snape never questioned why he was such a strange little boy.
After all, he was small and grey around the edges. He had a big nose,
too.

Early on, he figured he was going to die alone.

"I've always known I'd die alone," he croaked out, lying in the mud
with blood caked in his nostrils, watching the Last Battle rage around
him.

"You're so full of shit," Remus Lupin informed him, gently cradling
Severus' shuddering body in his arms. "You aren't going to die, and
I'm here, aren't I?"

"Perhaps I'll still die alone," he mused in bed, lying half-slung over
Remus. "It just wasn't my time."

Remus looked at him intently for a moment, freshly scarred fingers
cupping Severus' face, and kissed him. "You're a very strange man,
Severus Snape. It just so happens that I love you for it."

So it was that Severus Snape was a strange man. Fortunately, as a
very strange man, Severus found that he easily adjusted to loving
something just as strange as himself. "Stranger things have happened."



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[info]mchoneygoose
2005-02-11 03:48 am UTC (link)
Lovely - strangely romantic even! ;-)

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[info]scatteredlogic
2005-02-11 04:56 am UTC (link)
This was very sweet. I liked the refrain of "strange" running through it combined with the storybook tone. ~applause~

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[info]dream_labyrinth
2005-02-11 08:42 am UTC (link)
Strangely touching. So sweet.
I loved the story book style of it.

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[info]whitemunin
2005-02-11 08:52 am UTC (link)
Oh, I liked this. It had a Grimm's Fairytale feel to it, and that consistent "strange" thread through it was great. I loved the line about Snape being grey around the edges. Very unique. An enjoyable read.

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[info]knight0fswords
2005-02-11 09:56 pm UTC (link)
After all, he was small and grey around the edges.

I think that was my favorite line. Very, very well done!

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[info]bluejeanphoenix
2005-02-12 02:06 pm UTC (link)
awwww :) I love this.

I guess everyone feels like an oddball, and then they find someone who loves them the way they are, and it's like, "Hang on a minute...you're SURE, right?" :lol:

very well done :)

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[info]cruisedirector
2005-02-14 09:20 pm UTC (link)
I utterly adore you. Such a lovely tease, going from him shuddering on the ground to shuddering in bed...and Lupin is just adorable! The rhythm of this is delightful too. Thank you so, so much!

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[info]betareject
2005-02-14 09:45 pm UTC (link)
AWWWW!!! *squees and faints* This is so cute a little dark but just precious all the same I love how direct Remus was with him and how they are just holding on as he slips away...beautifully done!

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[info]majinsakuko
2005-03-18 06:23 am UTC (link)
Sweet!

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