Nakeno ([info]nakeno) wrote in [info]house_slash,
@ 2006-02-01 03:08:00
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Current mood: awake
Current music:Between The Wheels - Rush

Fic: Carpet Burn
Title: Carpet Burn
Rating: Hard R, perhaps even NC-17
Pairing: Houson
Summary: Wilson is rocking into him like he's a quarter-pony and he only has ten seconds left.
Disclaimer: This account is completely, utterly true. Except for the bits I made up.
Beta: [info]cueballex Thank you for being the Nazi I needed.
Warnings: PWP, no bloody plot in sight. No, not even between the couch cushions, try as you might.
Feedback: Surely.
Author's notes: The style here is choppy and in the vein of James Ellroy, one of my favorite authors. Hopefully I didn't hack it all to hell. Cross-posted to: [info]house_wilson




Just gingerly. Just carefully. Not to be known—furtive: Greg's fingers in Wilson's hair. Subtle. Strands of silk, short and cropped and smoothing through the nooks where his fingers meet his palm.

Dark and dim, light from the kitchen but it's not even enough to show him the color of his own carpet, much less the profile of a sleeping James Wilson.

Fingers around his wrist, swift and tight—he falters but his breathing is normal. He'd congratulate himself. Only the sleeping James Wilson isn't so sleeping—

Caught. Red-handed. Hair-handed.

"James," soft-sharp like a warning except that it isn't and Jimmy is all rustling movement coming out of that blanket, moving off those cushions; faster than any sleeping man ought to.

Only: "You fucking fak—" James' mouth tastes like lingering whisky, heat, and lust.

It's grappling in the dark, this. Cane to the floor, curses to the air when lips part, and James is fucking tumbling him—and that's his cane. Right there, under his ass. That's his carpet, too—and a ceiling he can't see in the dark and Jimmy biting into his exposed throat.

His fingers are smooth—he's only used them to heal the sick, to mop the tears of the dying—but they scrabble. Hard. Tug, pull—snap, pop-pop, all Greg's pretty buttons right in a row until all that nice Jimmy Wilson breath is on his chest, followed by tongue and teeth.

Greg bites off curses, “Son-of-a-bitch,” “Fucker,” 'Slutslutslut.' Only he doesn't say the last one out loud because it's merely a self-inverted view and Wilson doesn't need to know he'd give it up for a half a cold Reuben as long as said Wilson was on the receiving end.

He's not a pushover. Fuck, his leg hurts… He can make James gasp, too. Hah, see there? No more cane pressing indents in his ass, just him struggling to not be on his knees and yet be on top at the same time. It'd be easier if Jimmy weren't doing all that damn squirming.

Wincing, pushing, grunting—carpet burns in the dark, this. Hah.

The world turns, and fuck all Jimmy, it isn't a race—but his tongue doesn't say that because it's too busy pushing into that broad mouth and counting teeth and slicking off enamel.

Greg's shirt parts like the fucking sea—hi, Moses—Jimmy kiss-biting at his mouth and doing that biblical trick to his pants, too. He doesn't mind so much, he lets Wilson know that by grabbing all that lovely hair into his fists and tugging to the beat of 'mmm-mmm.'

He's pushing off the carpet instead of into it—and wow, James is quite good at this. He was on top last he looked. Oh, yeah…the world did turn, after all.

Breathing like pistons in an overworked engine—stop-go, stop-go, moan-stop-curse-mouthfuck-go again. He can almost dance to the rhythm. Except he'd rather just push up, up, up and yes-okay; Jimmy’s fingers all inside his jeans, making those boxers feel unwanted and, really, they are. They are.

His jeans roll, catch, all tight on his hips and it doesn't really matter as long as his cock is free enough for Wilson to get familiar with it and—oh, that's quite nice—fuck, now that is even better.

Pre-come on a thumb that isn't his—brief sound of suction in the dark and are men supposed to moan like that when they're tasting another guy's pre-ejac? Does it matter? No—teeth in his shoulder, fingers in his hair—oh, yeah and…right. Forgot. Jimmy has a jimmy, too.

Greg's fingers trip-tripping over underwear elastic, just boxers… No shirt, no shoes, no fuss. Jimmy comes sex-on-best-friend's-carpet ready.

Owowow—twinging up his thigh and Jesus, not now, okay? It snaps. He thinks he's broken something—Wilson's boxers. Well, he didn't need them just as much as Greg didn't need his and—huh, that's a cock pressing into his thigh. Hot. Hard. Definitely hard.

Shove, shove—goes Jimmy. "Oh, motherfuck,"—goes Greg.

This is fun. Jimmy on his knees—because he can and what a fucker, show the cripple up, will you? Only, aagh, jeans scraping over his ass, hips canted up because Wilson is just all 'offoffoff' about these fucking jeans. Greg struggles a little, his hand and the edge of the coffee table have an argument. It's brief, but the coffee table wins and Greg just digs his fingers into the curve of Wilson's ass through rumpled, half gone underwear. Because, really, it's his fault anyway.

He's gonna have carpet burn on his ass. He's getting cock-burn on his thigh.

Teeth again, he's all about the teeth for someone so…nice. Right into a nipple and—ohholymotherofGod, where'd he get a tongue like that?

Wilson is rocking into him like he's a quarter-pony and he only has ten seconds left. Push, rub, pull, grunt—all over again. Vicious cycle. Vicious heat up his spine, his head tipping back, carpet scuffing against his skull and Jesus, really, he's gonna look like he spent the night getting tongue-bathed by a snow tiger.

Speaking of—claws. Claws in his hips, Jimmy's panting against his damp neck and it's all, "Greg—" this and "Fuckme" that, and “Ohohoh” in this little ragged, hiccupping way that makes everything below Greg's waistline all nice and tight and, 'Please, sir, can I have another?'

Jimmy's squirming again. Active little fuck—only he isn't a little fuck because that's his cock against Greg's now somehow. All this moving, he can't think, but he can swear just fine and his hips don't need any instructions whatsoever, thank you.

Pushing, moving—thrusting, he's thrusting and Jimmy's trying to ride him through the fucking floor. All bowed head and messy, damp hair. Limbs all over the place, bare skin—too much to touch, too much to kissbitelickfuck so he just clings.

Nails in Wilson's back, and he must really like that because he's arching his lower body and his head is all tilted back and he's a taut bow of muscle and bone and “Greeeggg!!”, strained and whiny like House started this shit in the first fucking place. Don't throw stones, fucker.

It's close; down to the wire now—neck and neck. Necks with bite marks. That's not here nor there, really because it's getting all slippery down there and Wilson's thighs are gonna be bloody with the way they're scraping up and down the parted teeth of Greg's zipper like that.

That's neither here nor there, either, because he's just along for the ride now. Fuck his leg, fuck his cane, fuck the ceiling he can't see and the carpet burn he's not gonna be able to hide—thrustthrustpushpushfuckfuckfuck Jimmy Wilson right back to the lusty hell the man came from.

Hand from his hip to his shoulder now; heavy, pinning. Jimmy was the type that always needed a supporting hand on the shower wall when he jacked off, Greg's suspecting, because he's being held down and fucked dry.

Vicious heat. Vicious circle, again: "Ohfuckohyes", Jimmy goes—breathless like. "Nnngghh!" goes Greg—nothing left to say.

Sweat, heat, carpet burn in the dark—harder, faster, hearts like drums and that's his Jimmy, that's his Wilson, choking his name and coming in shots; Greg's cock, Greg's waist, Greg's stomach: paintedpaintedpainted white.

He has one good leg, he puts it to use: around Jimmy's bare waist, slick-slide and thrust and push and it's “Fuck!” all loud against the ceiling he can't see.

Shotgun-orgasm, that's what it is. Head to toe, man, no lie—quick and hot and hard. Intense. It's lights behind his eyes, pictures rattling off the walls, full fucking fifty-five-piece orchestra in his ears, neighbors-lit-up-cigarettes-20-minutes-back sort of good. The whole fucking shebang—coming. Everywhere.

"Greg…" Muffled and tired in his damp, bitten, abused, pulse-throbbing throat. He's wearing a Jimmy Wilson blanket. The buy-one-get-sex-free sort.

It's all sticky, sweaty, just-had-sex-on-the-carpet-in-the-dark-and-can't-move-now sort of quiet in the room. Except for the breathing. And, of course, Greg's mouth—the one that doesn't know how to shut up—muttering while sounding accusing but so very sated: "Fucking faker…"


-The End-




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[info]uwkthe002
2006-02-01 09:06 am UTC (link)
O.O
O.O -.- O.O
Ohmygod.
That was...that was....Guugh.
Now I really can't sleep.
Very, VERY well done.

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-01 10:16 am UTC (link)
Aw, well, I didn't mean to keep you up! But thank you for taking the time to read, I appreciate it. =)

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[info]mei_yanohi
2006-02-01 09:45 am UTC (link)
...HOT DAMN. I fucking ADORE your style. SO unique and just what I like to see and don't get enough of. This was really gorgeous, really powerful, each word a punch in the face. So, so excellent. I hope to GOD you'll be giving us more soon. I haven't been reading much here, but this really, really caught my eye. Wow. Excellent.

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-01 10:20 am UTC (link)
The style isn't as concise as Ellroy's, but I didn't want to confuse anyone as he seems to be an acquired taste. I'm very glad it worked for you, though. =)

This was really gorgeous, really powerful, each word a punch in the face. So, so excellent. Oh, dear... now I think I've gone and wet myself. With pleasure, naturally! You flatter me, but thank you. ^_~

And that's an even bigger compliment. Being that you scarcely read here, but then read and then commented! So, thank you for taking the time to give my man-smut a read. =)

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Fic: Carpet Burn
[info]secondsilk
2006-02-01 12:06 pm UTC (link)
Wow. That was an amazing ride.
The style is fabulous, quite evocative. And perfect for describing the actions and the thoughts altogether at once.
Oh, yeah…the world did turn, after all. That was good.
And other bits later along that I was too caught up in to make a note of.

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Re: Fic: Carpet Burn
[info]nakeno
2006-02-01 09:44 pm UTC (link)
Well, I'm glad I could drag you along in my dirty, dirty brain for a bit. And I'm also glad that the style worked for you, I was kinda anxious about it. =)

Thanks for taking a moment to read my man-smut! It makes me grin. ^_~

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[info]sylph_ironlight
2006-02-01 03:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh holy hell, that was hot. Incredible.

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-01 09:45 pm UTC (link)
*fans you* Well thank you so much for reading. =)

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[info]reitsu
2006-02-02 02:58 am UTC (link)
Your icon > The World

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-02 04:03 am UTC (link)
Heee! I'm glad someone found that as amusing as I did.

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[info]genagirl
2006-02-02 12:38 am UTC (link)
Holy crap - I need a cigarette. *afterglow*

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[info]reitsu
2006-02-02 02:57 am UTC (link)
*attempts making words and fails* asdjfkl;alsjfas
♥♥♥♥♥

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-02 04:06 am UTC (link)
GUH. Your icon makes me wanna grab and squeeze and cuddle and 'I'll show you what' and... well, maybe lick. Stuff. Ahem. And, yes, you may have one of mine-- *passes packet*

... *lounges with you* ...Was it as good for you...? ^_~

Serious thanks for taking the time to read and review. ♥

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[info]astro599
2006-02-03 07:38 am UTC (link)
Oh. My. God. Excuse me.
*washes her hands*
Totally hot! Love it love it! I really like how you manage to infuse humor here without losing any of your intensity. It would be so easy to ruin something like this with humor, but you pulled it off wonderfully!
I also like how some parts are stream-of-consciousness, like how you're thinking clearly one moment, and the next your brain is mush because he just did something that feels really good. The frantic pace you used here also gives you that "gotta get there now" edge that makes really great sex scenes.
*rereads*

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-07 12:20 am UTC (link)
*curtsey* Thank you kindly. =)

It would be so easy to ruin something like this with humor, but you pulled it off wonderfully!

*sigh of relief* Thank you, yet again-- I was worried about how this would be responded to. Actually, I didn't think I'd get more than a few nods, because my beau read over this and was just, "Oh, c'mon, half a reuben? You have to take that out..." But. I didn't. Because it just didn't feel right without the pathetically dry, inane humor thrown in. I'm so happy it worked for you. <3

Oh, you're so very new to LJ! Welcome aboard! Let's be friends, em? <3<3

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[info]greyandgrey
2006-02-05 01:46 am UTC (link)
gnah. wow. that... that is fucking hot. I love how it gets almost poetic at times in a sing-song sort of way and it's frantic and desperate and moremoremorenow.

oh gods... just, hot. so hot. please write in this style again.

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-07 12:22 am UTC (link)
*grins* Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad the pacing and style worked for you! <3

And, sadly, I love this style so much it's about all I can handle... Well, handle and come out with something halfway decent... *flush* So, thanks again. =)

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[info]topaz_eyes
2006-02-14 04:17 am UTC (link)
Guuuuh... *flails at teh hawt*

*ahem*

OK, now more coherent comments... the style works well here. You've captured the roughness and urgency, it felt like a race to the end, one image tumbling after another. Reads like a fight for dominance and sex. (Yum!) I like how you keep to "Greg" throughout, and moving from "Wilson" to "James" then "Jimmy". Also like you start and end with "fucking faker". :-)

Well done!

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[info]nakeno
2006-02-15 04:26 pm UTC (link)
*takes a moment to grope and molest your icon in a back alley*

Ahem, indeed-- Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! And you're the only person who has mentioned the 'fucking faker' bit at all, which tickles me because I liked the idea of House getting caught doing something he shouldn't. =)

Also, very pleased the style worked for you, I had been worried when I posted it but it seemed to work well for the piece.

And, last but not least, your rec list is fucking amazing! Just... just incredible. I didn't get to read much of it, which is probably a good thing since it was 4am and I couldn't leave coherent feedback so I'll have to get back to it later-- but thank you. This is going to keep me occupied forever, I love your taste in writing and everything I've read so far I would have never have found on my own! (Though, I'm a bit flattered that anything of mine should be on there... *flush*) Again, it's just... just wonderful. Thanks so much for having that much love for fandom to put together something like that. <3<3<3

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[info]topaz_eyes
2006-02-17 10:28 pm UTC (link)
Glad to know my rec list is useful! Always happy to enable! It's a personal rec list, so what I like, goes on. :-)

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[info]carnivalesque
2006-04-01 10:30 am UTC (link)
I feel super late in commenting. Just found this and was searching through memories to find something good, and... well. Lets say this is the first fic I've ever... *ahem* enjoyed, to put it in PG terms.

That, quite frankly, rocked.

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[info]nakeno
2006-04-06 03:01 am UTC (link)
Aw, no problem at all. *grins, tips hat* I'm glad I could be of... er... service. =D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Late or no, feedback is always nice. <3

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[info]rageprufrock
2006-05-06 03:53 pm UTC (link)
God, hot like burning. I like the image of Wilson just pinning House down and going to town--okay, seriously, who DOESN'T like that image? Mmm.

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[info]nakeno
2006-09-04 10:50 pm UTC (link)
*grins* I'm glad someone's as fond of that thought as I am.

Glad you liked, thanks for reading. =)

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[info]tourmaline1973
2006-06-12 11:51 pm UTC (link)
That was amazing! *Runs off for a cold Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting*

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[info]nakeno
2006-09-04 11:25 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Don't waste the water! =D

Thanks for reading. =)

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(Anonymous)
2006-07-22 05:16 am UTC (link)
God i love grunge fics. a "grunge" fic is a fic that is written not for style, grammer, spelling or purpose. they are written only to protray a feeling of intensity, they are fast-paced and suck you in so you can't stop until it's over or you snap at things that interrupt it. They're selfish and attention-grabbing fics that scream "ME, ME, ME! MINE, MINE, MINE! NOW, NOW, NOW!"

I find these types of fics to be the most addictive. The way they make a reader's mind and body react is like how a drug effects the same aspects. love this fic to pieces!

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[info]nakeno
2006-09-04 11:29 pm UTC (link)
Jesus. I. Uh, well... I don't know what to say to that besides thank you.

But I did go into the fic hoping the style would convey a sense of urgency. Erratic and fast.

I'm so very glad this worked for you and thank you so much for reading. <3

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[info]missviolet
2006-08-31 07:06 pm UTC (link)
Oh my, was that ever hot. I love the dialogue especially. It's definitely one of my favorite House slash fics ever. I've already read it like twenty times. It is a bold and original take on House and Wilson. Quite literary, too. But most of all, it is feverishly hot and sexy. Smouldering, as a matter of fact. Do you think it is mean to portray their first time? I got that sense from it.
The sad thing is I cannot find any other of your fics even though I have been poring through your livejournal. Have you written anything else? Would love to read more!

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[info]nakeno
2006-09-04 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Mmm, I'm just quite enamoured with the idea of Wilson just doing a full-out high-octane pounce of that sex on legs-and-cane. I'm quite glad you liked it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. And you're quite right, I did mean to portray it as a first time fic.

Sadly, this seems to be everyone's favorite, but I do have a couple of works posted here. I never post anything in my actual journal but I have a fic journal that is piss-poor updated.

A quick Wilson/House unrequited drabble here- angst bound: http://community.livejournal.com/house_slash/85008.html

A quick writing excercise that was focused on House/Chase: http://community.livejournal.com/house_slash/98147.html

And a small fic about Chase determined to get a bit of that House/Wilson dynamic: http://community.livejournal.com/house_slash/109759.html

Last but not least, my fic journal, which currently holds no House but other things you might care to look at: http://corner-shelf.livejournal.com/

Hope you enjoy. Thanks again for reading and thanks again for your beautiful feedback. It makes me squirm. ...With delight, of course. =)

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thanks!
[info]missviolet
2006-09-06 09:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh, thanks for the links, my prayers are answered Keep writing, you're terrific! *scurries off to read more fics*

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Holy Shit!!!
[info]anonymiss731
2007-01-12 10:37 pm UTC (link)
I need Valium, now. I'm cold in places and hot in others and wired all over. That was.....HOT!!! Jimminy Crickets....I....wow! This is gonna sound corny...but that was like poetry. I read it out loud and the style had a beat and rhythm and sometimes it almost rhymed. I'm going to try and wined down now. Thank you very much ^_^!

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Re: Holy Shit!!!
[info]nakeno
2007-04-14 07:28 am UTC (link)
Poetry? Um. Wow. Thank you. I'm sorry it took me so long to respond, but the e-mail address my comments go to is no longer there and I don't know how to change it to the one I have. XD

But I'm glad I moseyed back this far... I really appreciate you reading and reviewing. So glad you liked it. =)

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[info]tasha_elizabeth
2007-02-20 06:04 pm UTC (link)
Jeeee-suuus, that's good. I want to read it again and pick out my favorite parts for you, but I think I need to put my head down on a table for a few moments first. No, no, I'll be fine. Just give me a second.

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[info]nakeno
2007-04-14 07:30 am UTC (link)
*pats* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad this fic worked for you. =)

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[info]le_dook
2007-03-14 04:08 pm UTC (link)
That was. Fucken. AMAZING
omg I can hardly type
I can't believe I hadn't heard of this fic before.
What a fucking TREAT

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[info]nakeno
2007-04-14 07:32 am UTC (link)
*flushes* Well, thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. =)

Hee, probably because I haven't written (well, that's not true), probably because I haven't posted much outside of this. I have so many co-author projects going; one of which was just posted.

I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get back to you, by the way, but I'm glad this fic worked for you. <3

(Hee! I love your icon. <3)

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Oh holy hell...
(Anonymous)
2007-03-18 03:23 am UTC (link)
If you have repeated hits from one IP, it's me. I've been back to read this at least 20 times and I love it love it love it more each time. Always leaves me panting, and I have to say I just adore the style. It reminds me a little of David Foster Wallace.

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Re: Oh holy hell...
[info]nakeno
2007-04-14 07:33 am UTC (link)
*grins* Well! Thank you very much. I appreciate the re-reads and I'm so glad the style works for you because I had been hesitant about it before.

I haven't heard of David Foster Wallace, but this style is definitely a hybrid spawned by James Ellroy.

(Sorry it took me so long to respond, by the way! <3)

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[info]lookfar
2007-04-29 04:58 am UTC (link)
Very nice and experimental!

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[info]nakeno
2007-04-30 04:53 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ^_~

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[info]blighted_garden
2007-05-20 04:28 pm UTC (link)
This is what happens when you're a later comer to the fandom: you miss things like this.

God that was hot. I personally loved the writing style. You certainly haven't hacked anything "all to hell". Nice insertions of humour (or, at least, I found some things funny), and I particularly liked the simile of the quarter-pony.

Guh. *goes to read it again*

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[info]nakeno
2007-05-22 09:47 am UTC (link)
You know, I've been told by people who have been in this fandom from the beginning that they also "missed it" somehow. It seems to be everyone's favorite, though, of my solo pieces. I'm more partial to the co-authored works I've done. I'm really a co-writer at heart; get more enjoyment out of it that way. I guess it would help if I put them in my fic journal or at least linked them in my hopelessly un-updated journal. Apparently, I just don't pimp myself properly. =D

I do appreciate you trolling back this far and finding this enjoyable enough to read (twice? *flushgrin*) and comment on. =)

Not hacked to hell, huh? Have you read all of Ellroy's works or just the one Russel Crowe made popular? =D I love the writing style but I'm self-conscious about employing it because I don't want to mangle it.

And, yes, there was a definite attempt to lace Greg's dry, dry humor into the situations without over doing it. I'm so glad it worked for you.

(Sorry I've gone on and on; I've been up something like 48 hours and I'm kind of wired [bi-polar] so you don't actually have to respond to all this rambling. =D)

By the by, if you're interested in reading anything else (solo or co) just let me know and I'll try to point you toward something I felt confident enough to post. =)

Thanks again for the reading and reviewing.

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[info]blighted_garden
2007-05-25 05:19 am UTC (link)
I've actually only co-authored something once myself, and I had quite a difficult time since we kept on debating how the sentences should be written and arguing over word choice XD. Posting your stuff (if it's H/W) on the HouseWilson livejournal would definitely help its popularity; I'm sure many people would like your stories.

Actually, I haven't read any of Ellroy's works; I just thought that your writing style sounded good to me. Polished and well-written. The humour was brilliant =D.

I certainly don't mind long posts, since I enjoy writing them myself. I'm going for the weekend now, though (off to the Anime North Convention), so I won't be responding for a little while.

I would be interesting in reading more. Let me know what kind of things you've written (what fandom/pairing, or if it's original) and I'll give it a shot if it floats my boat.

You're welcome about the review; I know how happy they can make a person *is a comment whore herself*.

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[info]shutterbug12
2007-09-05 04:34 am UTC (link)
Just discovered this fic and, whew, am I glad I did.

he's gonna look like he spent the night getting tongue-bathed by a snow tiger. That made me laugh. Hard. :)

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[info]anoel
2007-10-10 04:33 am UTC (link)
Wow! That is awesome. I love the unique style and how it all flows and make it ten times hotter. Your descriptive words are wonderful. Not to mention the short words and thoughts that make you feel it all the more. Thanks for writing!

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[info]alemyrddin
2008-02-07 08:32 pm UTC (link)
Just found this today, thanks to a rec... it was very good, and hot!
I love the "faker" line, and it's the first thing House says after he had regained his ability to think, remembering what he was trying to say at first.

Also, Wilson faking sleep so House cuddles him? Aww.

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[info]cadeira
2008-06-12 06:08 pm UTC (link)
That was ingeniously hot! I recognized your style at once from the open24hours account - it´s absolutely unique!
Perfectly porny!

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