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@ 2005-04-01 23:06:00
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Hot Gimmick Chapter 50 Translation
As promised here's the translation for Chapter 50. I got this finished after getting back from work at 10pm, but I managed somehow to complete it XD If anything's not clear, just like the other times, just post a comment and I'll do my best to explain/clarify things up. I didn't translate the cover page since it's basically questions brought on by the last chapter but if anyone wants me to translate it, I can. It's just I didn't find it very significant to this chapter at all so I didn't bother XD Anyhow, the translations are behind a link to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!


Page 2:
[the sign says “Narita”]

Page 3:
Hatsumi: I..I’m sorry I’m late mom.
Hatsumi: And I’m sorry I left the house without saying anything.
Hatsumi: I’ll go to school tomorrow.
Mother: Are you all right about Ryoki now?
Mother: Are you?
Hatsumi: …yeah.
Hatsumi: I’m fine..
Hatsumi: (He saw Onii-chan embrace me, but he left looking like he didn’t care at all)

Page 4:
Hatsumi: (Has he moved on so easily already?)
Shinogu: Mom, is dad asleep?
Mother: Yes he is. So please keep your voices down. We’ll talk tomorrow.
Mother: Spring break’s already started for you, right? Why don’t you stay here this week? Let’s have a talk while your father is in Tokyo.
//gatcha// [door opening]
Akane: Hatsumi-chan! You’re back?
Mother: Sh---! [telling her to be quiet XD]
Akane: I’m so glad! Welcome back!
[in the background her mother’s saying “sh---“ ^^]
Hatsumi: Aka-chin, sh--- [Aka-chin is Akane’s nickname XD]
Mother: Akane! You’re too loud, go talk in your room!
Mother: And Shinogu, for you it’s the bath. I’ll go put in the water right now so you can go in first.
Shinogu: Ah---yeah…
Akane: Hatsumi-chan, come here! How are you? Are you okay?

Page 5:
//batan// [door closing]
Mother: Shinogu..
Mother: I heard a little about this from your father, but he was saying could it be…
Mother: you…

Page 6:
Mother: were trying to be removed from the family register because
Mother: you’re in love with Hatsumi.
Akane: Hey hey! Hatsumi-chan, cheer up. It’s okay now!
Hatsumi: Eh..?
Akane: The Tachibanas left for some reason.
Akane: Rumours have it they went to her parents’ home in Kobe and won’t be back for a while.
Akane: This is so great.
Hatsumi: (It could have been, that she found out about Ryoki’s father’s affair.)

Page 7:
Akane: So hey, get back together with him already.
Akane: With Ryoki-kun! You still like him, don’t you?! Hey!
Hatsumi: …nevermind about that anymore.
Hatsumi: I’m going to go wash my hands and rinse my mouth.
Akane: Hatsumi-chan!
//batan// [door closing]
Mother: Well..of course it would be a lie to say I wasn’t surprised.
Mother: but Shinogu,
Hatsumi: (Mom’s voice..?)
Mother: I think that if that happens, it wouldn’t be such a bad thing.
Mother: Even if something like that happened between you and Hatsumi
Mother: I probably wouldn’t be against it.

Page 8:
Mother: Truth be said, there might be some bad people out there who might say what a horrible thing it is but
Mother: …if things go well between you two,
Mother: Even if you part from the family registry, you wouldn’t part with us, and I thought how good it would be if you two would stay a part of our family forever.
Shingou: M-mom.
Mother: I know. Your father would get angry if he finds out what I’ve been thinking.
Hatsumi: (Mom..what are you saying..)
Shinogu: Don’t say things like that to Hatsumi.
Mother: I know.
Mother: But see..about Ryoki-kun, it’s sad for Hatsumi.
Mother: If it’s with you, I could watch over with ease.

Page 9:
Shinogu: Mom
Mother: Okay, okay. I won’t say anything anymore.
Mother: You can go take a bath. I’ll have some tea ready.
//tat a ta// [fast movement of feet]
//batan// [ door closing]
Akane: What?
Akane: Weren’t you a bit quick?
Hatsumi: Onii-chan was in the bathroom already, getting ready for the bath so I couldn’t go in.
Akane: Oh, right—
Hatsumi: (So that’s how it is.)
Hatsumi: (My mom thinks like that.)
Hatsumi: (Unlike the time I was going out with Tachibana-kun, when she kept on saying how she was against it, she would be happy.)

Page 10:
Hatsumi: (If I choose Onii-chan.)
Subaru: A-
Subaru: A fever?! He collapsed because of that? [what he actually said was “chienetsu” which is a term often used to describe fever that children have. It’s nothing serious apparently judging from the term used ^^]
Mariko: Yes, the family doctor was saying it was something similar to it.
Mariko: He also mentioned how as a child, Ryoki-sama would have tendencies of falling ill.
Mariko: He couldn’t take the elementary school finals because this.

Page 11:
Mariko: The doctor was suggesting perhaps he had gone through a large shock.
[Ryoki’s remembering back to Azusa’s words from the previous chapter]
(Azusa: They’re probably doing it already)
(Azusa: Hatsumi’s staying at his house even after knowing his feelings towards her, so if it happened it wouldn’t be that much of a surprise)
Ryoki: I don’t have anything to be shocked about!!
Subaru: R-
Subaru: Ryoki-kun?
[around the word bubbles says “fear” XD]
Ryoki: A woman like her…

Page 12:
Ryoki: I have nothing to do with
Ryoki: whether she chooses to do it with her brother, or anyone
Ryoki: at all.
Ryoki: Since it’s been hectic the past few days, even a person like me would get tired. I’m just tired, that’s all.
Ryoki: Stop worrying about me and go to school already!
Ryoki: Just go—
Subaru: Ryo-kun?!
Mariko: Ryoki-sama
//fuu// [exhaling of breath ^^]
Subaru: (Ryo-kun)

Page 13:
[all the words in the background are just different ways of saying “Good morning”]
Girl: ‘morning Narita—It’s been two days, have you been sick? Are you okay? [Narita is Hatsumi’s last name]
Girl: Yesterday they told us what we have to study for the test. Ugh, give me a break.
Hatsumi: Eh, r-really? Tell me about it later.
Girl: The section we have to study for Japanese history is soo long—
Azusa: Good morning.
//dokin// [heat beat]
Azusa: Glad your “cold”’s gotten better.
Girl: Ah—Azusa-kun, good morning—
Girl #2: Good morning, Azusa-kun—

Page 14:
Azusa: Just the other day, he came up to me.
Hatsumi: Eh?
Azusa: Ryoki’s father.
Hatsumi: Eh…
Azusa: And he was saying how
Azusa: in the end it was me and my father’s fault that he was dumped by my mother.
Azusa: Seems he came to tell me that he has no plans of apologizing at all about the affair.
Hatsumi: What?! What is that?! How could he say—
Azusa: Yeah, you’d think that too, right? He’s so self-centered, no wonder he’s Ryoki’s father.

Page 15:
Azusa: Hey, Hatsumi.
Azusa: Last night. That thing with Shinogu.
Azusa: Was that just some act put on to show Ryoki?
Azusa: Or
Azusa: are you really going to choose Shinogu-san?

Page 16:
Azusa: …sorry…
Azusa: It’s none of my business. Hahaha—
Azusa: ha—
Hatsumi: --But
Hatsumi: you were always saying how
Hatsumi: I should choose Onii-chan.
Hatsumi: My mom too.
Hatsumi: She was saying how
Hatsumi: she’d be at ease if I date Onii-chan.
Hatsumi: And he’s been unbelievably caring of me.

Page 17:
Hatsumi: And if I choose Onii-chan, he might be really happy.
Hatsumi: If he’s happy, then I am too.
Azusa: ..Hatsumi. Are you okay with that?
Azusa: Isn’t that…a bit different?
Subaru: N-Narita!

Page 18:
Azusa: Subaru
Hatsumi: Subaru…g-good morning.
Hatsumi: What’s wrong? You’ve got a scary expression on your face.
Subaru: U-um..
Subaru: Ryo-kun..
//doki// [heart beat]
Subaru: Um..you see…
Subaru: I know he probably would tell me not to say anything but
Subaru: um…
Subaru: He’s been in bed all day since running a fever last night.
Subaru: He’s been
Subaru: wanting to see you. [the small words in the bubble says “….I think” XD]

Page 19:
Hatsumi: Eh…that’s a lie.
Hatsumi: a fever—
Hatsumi: But I just saw him last night.
Hatsumi: (He..ignored me and..)
Hatsumi: (it’s a lie that he’s wanting to see me.)
Hatsumi: And plus, there are a lot of maids at his place.
Subaru: There’s only one right now. Only Takatou-san is there.
Subaru: It’s because Tachibana-san took all the maids with her back to her parents’ home.
Subaru: Takatou-san has some matters she has to take care of.
Subaru: Even if I go, he’ll just tell me I’m a bother and get me to leave, it’s no good.
Subaru: His father and mother haven’t come back.
//kiiin kooon kaann kooonn// [school bell ringing]
Subaru: ---but Ryo-kun---
Subaru: he never says that he’s lonely,,,
Hatsumi: (but I)
//koon// [bell continuing to ring ^^]

Page 20:
Hatsumi: (I decided I wouldn’t go to him anymore.)
Hatsumi: (After going through a painful time, I decided I’d give him up.)
Hatsumi: (I won’t be worried about him. I’m not worried. I’m not worried.)
Hatsumi: (I’ll never go.)

Page 21:
//piin pooon// [door bell ringing]
Ryoki: Uggh…so loud….
Ryoki: Did Mariko-san leave somewhere?
//pin pon pin pon// [insistent door bell ringing XD]

Page 22:
//pin pon pin pon// [again, continuing to ring ^^]
Ryoki: A----ah fine. FINE!
//batan// [door opening]
Ryoki: Who is it, you—
Ryoki: You again…
Ruri: W-what! Are you not all right?

Page 23:
Ryoki: Huh?
Ruri: I went to your school to pick you up,
Ruri: and I was told you had not come to school.
Ruri: You
Ruri: made me worried—
Ryoki: Why do I have to be worried by you?
Ruri: --I’ve come to a decision.
//ton// [lightly rests her head on his shoulder XD]
Ruri: I’ll agree to your arrogant conditions, and I’ll give it to you.
Ruri: You’ll..be my..
Ruri: I’ll let you be..my first…

Page 24:
Ryoki: You’ll…
Ryoki: listen to anything I say?

Page 25:
Ryoki: If you will,
Ryoki: then I’ll let you
Ryoki: be mine.






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[info]rubyjuls
2005-04-02 07:15 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much for the translations of this chapter. Oooh the suspense. *waits anxiously for next issue of Betsucomi to arrive*

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[info]lemony
2005-04-02 07:33 am UTC (link)
^-^ thanks!

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[info]rectherapyfreak
2005-04-02 07:53 am UTC (link)
Thank you!!!

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[info]kilalaaa
2005-04-02 12:07 pm UTC (link)
NO!!! Ryoki!! *cries*
Thank you for the translations ^bows head gratefully^

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-04-02 03:19 pm UTC (link)
oh no!!! poor Ryoki!! atleast i no y he collapsed.. but hes suppose to be with Hatsumi!

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[info]littlemelgirl
2005-04-02 03:24 pm UTC (link)
DON'T HAVE SEX WITH THAT GLASSES BITCH! noOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. -_-

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[info]madam_midnight
2005-04-03 06:26 am UTC (link)
=P You make me laugh

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(Anonymous)
2005-09-06 10:48 pm UTC (link)
lol i know

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NNNNOOOOO!!!
(Anonymous)
2006-03-12 10:48 pm UTC (link)
AHH HELL NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!WATAHELLS GOIN ON?!?!?!?!?!?! RYOUKI NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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(Anonymous)
2005-04-02 04:32 pm UTC (link)
umm did hatsumi hear the whole thing like when ruri sid that she'll let Ryoki be her first and then him replying back? *stupid question i no but im still curious* also i dont want hatsumi and shinogu to get together :(

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[info]rectherapyfreak
2005-04-02 04:55 pm UTC (link)
i don't either!!!!!

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-04-02 05:45 pm UTC (link)
YAY! Thank you so much for translating again! I really appreciate you taking the time to do this every month :D

Also, Mom approves!? That cracked me up! Although, I suppose I would approve of him too haha. And what a suprise move by Ruri, I can't wait for May's issue!

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[info]jubileerain
2005-04-02 07:00 pm UTC (link)
The mom did want to adopt Shinogu, so he must have a special place in her heart ^^

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[info]jubileerain
2005-04-02 06:59 pm UTC (link)
thanks for the translation! OMG!!!!! Hatsumi was right there!! Typical drama! Arggghhh misunderstanding ensues. I can't believe those 2 are going to do "it" when he's running a fever. It'll hinder his stamina & skill =P LOL

I feel sorry for Ruri. She's so into Ryouki, & it's obvious he's crazy about Hatsumi.

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agreed
[info]marie_fan
2005-04-03 08:31 am UTC (link)
I hope they are not going to try and make out while he's sick. Hatsumi needs to speak up before Ruri gets into deep with her ex-boyfriend.

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[info]manjusang
2005-04-02 08:24 pm UTC (link)
Holy shat I can believe Ryoki said those words...he's such a...such a...RYOKI!!!
OMG!! And his father is rude too! AHHH!! I wonder wonder wonder what is going to happen!!!

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[info]scorpio1987
2005-04-03 12:50 am UTC (link)
Thank you SO much!!! I'm really glad that it's leaning more towards Shinogu&Hatsumi now. What volume is this chapter in? 10 maybe?

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(Anonymous)
2005-04-03 12:55 am UTC (link)
This is in volume 11, I believe.

On another note...I must be the only one who doesn't hate RuriXRyouki. =/ I just can't believe Ruri would actually agree to that.

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[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-04-07 11:57 am UTC (link)
yea prob xD I hate Ruri to death

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[info]madam_midnight
2005-04-03 06:26 am UTC (link)
Thanks for the translations! *hugs*

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Wow!
[info]marie_fan
2005-04-03 08:27 am UTC (link)
Did he just agree to be with Ruri?! OMG he must really believe that
Hatsumi slept with her brother. I think he is only doing this to try and get over Hatsumi. Even if he do try and make out with Ruri it will be his love for Hatsumi that will stop him.

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hey
[info]hatsumi_majere
2005-04-04 02:05 am UTC (link)
I am all for the ShinoguXHatsumi relationship ... Shinogu-kun is perfect for her, he's the hottest, the most caring, and loves her the MOST!! (Did I mention he is the HOTTEST?)

Arigatou for the translations! I have been coming to this community for a while now ((why haven't I JOINED??)) and reading up on what's been going on.. of course HG is my fav. manga- and this releasing of the manga every two months is stupid!! >< too long of a wait..
so thanks SO MUCH for letting me know what's going to happen!
BAD Ryoki! he's so mean! how could he say that to Ruri?? I don't like her... *grumble*
Go Shinogu! Go Shinogu!

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Re: hey
[info]lemony
2005-04-04 03:30 am UTC (link)
I agree ^-^v 100%

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Re: hey
[info]jacachu
2005-04-04 04:58 am UTC (link)
=o

I agree!

^___^ YAY SHINOGUXHATSUMI!! *holds up signs*

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Re: hey
(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 11:21 pm UTC (link)
^___^ YAY SHINOGUXHATSUMI!! *holds up signs*

Yay! XD!!! -Tap dances-

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[info]timebees
2005-04-04 04:54 pm UTC (link)
Argh... this breaks my heart. I don't think Hatsumi is ever going to be really happy. Is she ends up with Shinogu, she will still have feelings for Ryoki, and vise virsa.
Why, why god why did I ever start to read this manga..... It kills me to have to wait for the next chapters!!!

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time time time
[info]hatsumi_majere
2005-04-05 04:46 pm UTC (link)
I agree with you totally, it's like we innocently picked up this manga and got sucked into a world with Hatsumi as out heroine and we are just trying to see her end up with the right person ((along with so much more other things going on))
I know what you mean about Hatsumi though, I feel for her... who IS she going to end up with? is she ever going to be happy? poor Hatsumi-chan


don't worry.. it's killing me inside too :(

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Thanks!!!!!
(Anonymous)
2005-04-04 05:24 pm UTC (link)
Your translations are the next best thing to actually reading the manga.

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-04-07 11:58 am UTC (link)
Oh my gosh I don't know what to think anymore @_@ Ryouki is being dumb why would he want to let Ruri be his first and I wonder if he's just going to do all this to try and make Hatsumi jealous. Ugh Ruri is an annoying cunt face. Whatever fine xD Hatsumi should go with Shinogu then if Ryouki's gunna be a lil beetch

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(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 11:18 pm UTC (link)
XD WHOA! I didn't see that ending coming!! XD

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[info]hpraven89
2005-10-25 11:56 am UTC (link)
This is like soo confusing!! It's like it gets you to think about one couple and then like goes to a whole other couple...It's just throwing you all around!! Thanx again for the translations!! ~HpRaven89~

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(Anonymous)
2005-11-30 04:02 am UTC (link)
Is it just me or is Azusa having second thoughts about pairing up ShinoguxHatsumi? Before this he was the first person to urge Shinogu to go after Hatsumi, but after his 'talk' with Ryouki he's changed his mind or something....

I can't help loving Azusa even though he is such a prat. ^_^; He's actually a nice boy, judging from his early childhood days. What made him so messed up like this??

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[info]fushigi06
2006-01-15 06:08 am UTC (link)
NOOOOO!!!! WHAT THE HELL DOES RYOUKI THINK HE'S DOING!!!!!!! He's supposed to be with Hatsumi, u know at times I thought that that guy was an a**hole from like the beginning, and then I kind of got used to him because it seemed to me that he liked Hatsumi just couldn't show his feeling the right way and thought "he'll get better, he'll get better" OOOOOH! But now he's gone DOWN~!!!!! He's not up on there anymore!!

Also that girl's such a !@#$%^& !@#$%!!!!! OOOOH!

Okay I feel better now... hehe

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HOW COULD HE?!
(Anonymous)
2006-06-24 02:37 am UTC (link)
ok, i was surprised enough of how he can easily move on with ruri O__O but then to want sex from her. And now ruri is excepting it?! >o< NOOOO!!! how could he?! why?!! don't do this ryoki! T__T you still love hatsumi don't you?! don't do it!

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