| oceansportrait ( @ 2005-04-01 23:06:00 |
Hot Gimmick Chapter 50 Translation
As promised here's the translation for Chapter 50. I got this finished after getting back from work at 10pm, but I managed somehow to complete it XD If anything's not clear, just like the other times, just post a comment and I'll do my best to explain/clarify things up. I didn't translate the cover page since it's basically questions brought on by the last chapter but if anyone wants me to translate it, I can. It's just I didn't find it very significant to this chapter at all so I didn't bother XD Anyhow, the translations are behind a link to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!
Page 2:
[the sign says “Narita”]
Page 3:
Hatsumi: I..I’m sorry I’m late mom.
Hatsumi: And I’m sorry I left the house without saying anything.
Hatsumi: I’ll go to school tomorrow.
Mother: Are you all right about Ryoki now?
Mother: Are you?
Hatsumi: …yeah.
Hatsumi: I’m fine..
Hatsumi: (He saw Onii-chan embrace me, but he left looking like he didn’t care at all)
Page 4:
Hatsumi: (Has he moved on so easily already?)
Shinogu: Mom, is dad asleep?
Mother: Yes he is. So please keep your voices down. We’ll talk tomorrow.
Mother: Spring break’s already started for you, right? Why don’t you stay here this week? Let’s have a talk while your father is in Tokyo.
//gatcha// [door opening]
Akane: Hatsumi-chan! You’re back?
Mother: Sh---! [telling her to be quiet XD]
Akane: I’m so glad! Welcome back!
[in the background her mother’s saying “sh---“ ^^]
Hatsumi: Aka-chin, sh--- [Aka-chin is Akane’s nickname XD]
Mother: Akane! You’re too loud, go talk in your room!
Mother: And Shinogu, for you it’s the bath. I’ll go put in the water right now so you can go in first.
Shinogu: Ah---yeah…
Akane: Hatsumi-chan, come here! How are you? Are you okay?
Page 5:
//batan// [door closing]
Mother: Shinogu..
Mother: I heard a little about this from your father, but he was saying could it be…
Mother: you…
Page 6:
Mother: were trying to be removed from the family register because
Mother: you’re in love with Hatsumi.
Akane: Hey hey! Hatsumi-chan, cheer up. It’s okay now!
Hatsumi: Eh..?
Akane: The Tachibanas left for some reason.
Akane: Rumours have it they went to her parents’ home in Kobe and won’t be back for a while.
Akane: This is so great.
Hatsumi: (It could have been, that she found out about Ryoki’s father’s affair.)
Page 7:
Akane: So hey, get back together with him already.
Akane: With Ryoki-kun! You still like him, don’t you?! Hey!
Hatsumi: …nevermind about that anymore.
Hatsumi: I’m going to go wash my hands and rinse my mouth.
Akane: Hatsumi-chan!
//batan// [door closing]
Mother: Well..of course it would be a lie to say I wasn’t surprised.
Mother: but Shinogu,
Hatsumi: (Mom’s voice..?)
Mother: I think that if that happens, it wouldn’t be such a bad thing.
Mother: Even if something like that happened between you and Hatsumi
Mother: I probably wouldn’t be against it.
Page 8:
Mother: Truth be said, there might be some bad people out there who might say what a horrible thing it is but
Mother: …if things go well between you two,
Mother: Even if you part from the family registry, you wouldn’t part with us, and I thought how good it would be if you two would stay a part of our family forever.
Shingou: M-mom.
Mother: I know. Your father would get angry if he finds out what I’ve been thinking.
Hatsumi: (Mom..what are you saying..)
Shinogu: Don’t say things like that to Hatsumi.
Mother: I know.
Mother: But see..about Ryoki-kun, it’s sad for Hatsumi.
Mother: If it’s with you, I could watch over with ease.
Page 9:
Shinogu: Mom
Mother: Okay, okay. I won’t say anything anymore.
Mother: You can go take a bath. I’ll have some tea ready.
//tat a ta// [fast movement of feet]
//batan// [ door closing]
Akane: What?
Akane: Weren’t you a bit quick?
Hatsumi: Onii-chan was in the bathroom already, getting ready for the bath so I couldn’t go in.
Akane: Oh, right—
Hatsumi: (So that’s how it is.)
Hatsumi: (My mom thinks like that.)
Hatsumi: (Unlike the time I was going out with Tachibana-kun, when she kept on saying how she was against it, she would be happy.)
Page 10:
Hatsumi: (If I choose Onii-chan.)
Subaru: A-
Subaru: A fever?! He collapsed because of that? [what he actually said was “chienetsu” which is a term often used to describe fever that children have. It’s nothing serious apparently judging from the term used ^^]
Mariko: Yes, the family doctor was saying it was something similar to it.
Mariko: He also mentioned how as a child, Ryoki-sama would have tendencies of falling ill.
Mariko: He couldn’t take the elementary school finals because this.
Page 11:
Mariko: The doctor was suggesting perhaps he had gone through a large shock.
[Ryoki’s remembering back to Azusa’s words from the previous chapter]
(Azusa: They’re probably doing it already)
(Azusa: Hatsumi’s staying at his house even after knowing his feelings towards her, so if it happened it wouldn’t be that much of a surprise)
Ryoki: I don’t have anything to be shocked about!!
Subaru: R-
Subaru: Ryoki-kun?
[around the word bubbles says “fear” XD]
Ryoki: A woman like her…
Page 12:
Ryoki: I have nothing to do with
Ryoki: whether she chooses to do it with her brother, or anyone
Ryoki: at all.
Ryoki: Since it’s been hectic the past few days, even a person like me would get tired. I’m just tired, that’s all.
Ryoki: Stop worrying about me and go to school already!
Ryoki: Just go—
Subaru: Ryo-kun?!
Mariko: Ryoki-sama
//fuu// [exhaling of breath ^^]
Subaru: (Ryo-kun)
Page 13:
[all the words in the background are just different ways of saying “Good morning”]
Girl: ‘morning Narita—It’s been two days, have you been sick? Are you okay? [Narita is Hatsumi’s last name]
Girl: Yesterday they told us what we have to study for the test. Ugh, give me a break.
Hatsumi: Eh, r-really? Tell me about it later.
Girl: The section we have to study for Japanese history is soo long—
Azusa: Good morning.
//dokin// [heat beat]
Azusa: Glad your “cold”’s gotten better.
Girl: Ah—Azusa-kun, good morning—
Girl #2: Good morning, Azusa-kun—
Page 14:
Azusa: Just the other day, he came up to me.
Hatsumi: Eh?
Azusa: Ryoki’s father.
Hatsumi: Eh…
Azusa: And he was saying how
Azusa: in the end it was me and my father’s fault that he was dumped by my mother.
Azusa: Seems he came to tell me that he has no plans of apologizing at all about the affair.
Hatsumi: What?! What is that?! How could he say—
Azusa: Yeah, you’d think that too, right? He’s so self-centered, no wonder he’s Ryoki’s father.
Page 15:
Azusa: Hey, Hatsumi.
Azusa: Last night. That thing with Shinogu.
Azusa: Was that just some act put on to show Ryoki?
Azusa: Or
Azusa: are you really going to choose Shinogu-san?
Page 16:
Azusa: …sorry…
Azusa: It’s none of my business. Hahaha—
Azusa: ha—
Hatsumi: --But
Hatsumi: you were always saying how
Hatsumi: I should choose Onii-chan.
Hatsumi: My mom too.
Hatsumi: She was saying how
Hatsumi: she’d be at ease if I date Onii-chan.
Hatsumi: And he’s been unbelievably caring of me.
Page 17:
Hatsumi: And if I choose Onii-chan, he might be really happy.
Hatsumi: If he’s happy, then I am too.
Azusa: ..Hatsumi. Are you okay with that?
Azusa: Isn’t that…a bit different?
Subaru: N-Narita!
Page 18:
Azusa: Subaru
Hatsumi: Subaru…g-good morning.
Hatsumi: What’s wrong? You’ve got a scary expression on your face.
Subaru: U-um..
Subaru: Ryo-kun..
//doki// [heart beat]
Subaru: Um..you see…
Subaru: I know he probably would tell me not to say anything but
Subaru: um…
Subaru: He’s been in bed all day since running a fever last night.
Subaru: He’s been
Subaru: wanting to see you. [the small words in the bubble says “….I think” XD]
Page 19:
Hatsumi: Eh…that’s a lie.
Hatsumi: a fever—
Hatsumi: But I just saw him last night.
Hatsumi: (He..ignored me and..)
Hatsumi: (it’s a lie that he’s wanting to see me.)
Hatsumi: And plus, there are a lot of maids at his place.
Subaru: There’s only one right now. Only Takatou-san is there.
Subaru: It’s because Tachibana-san took all the maids with her back to her parents’ home.
Subaru: Takatou-san has some matters she has to take care of.
Subaru: Even if I go, he’ll just tell me I’m a bother and get me to leave, it’s no good.
Subaru: His father and mother haven’t come back.
//kiiin kooon kaann kooonn// [school bell ringing]
Subaru: ---but Ryo-kun---
Subaru: he never says that he’s lonely,,,
Hatsumi: (but I)
//koon// [bell continuing to ring ^^]
Page 20:
Hatsumi: (I decided I wouldn’t go to him anymore.)
Hatsumi: (After going through a painful time, I decided I’d give him up.)
Hatsumi: (I won’t be worried about him. I’m not worried. I’m not worried.)
Hatsumi: (I’ll never go.)
Page 21:
//piin pooon// [door bell ringing]
Ryoki: Uggh…so loud….
Ryoki: Did Mariko-san leave somewhere?
//pin pon pin pon// [insistent door bell ringing XD]
Page 22:
//pin pon pin pon// [again, continuing to ring ^^]
Ryoki: A----ah fine. FINE!
//batan// [door opening]
Ryoki: Who is it, you—
Ryoki: You again…
Ruri: W-what! Are you not all right?
Page 23:
Ryoki: Huh?
Ruri: I went to your school to pick you up,
Ruri: and I was told you had not come to school.
Ruri: You
Ruri: made me worried—
Ryoki: Why do I have to be worried by you?
Ruri: --I’ve come to a decision.
//ton// [lightly rests her head on his shoulder XD]
Ruri: I’ll agree to your arrogant conditions, and I’ll give it to you.
Ruri: You’ll..be my..
Ruri: I’ll let you be..my first…
Page 24:
Ryoki: You’ll…
Ryoki: listen to anything I say?
Page 25:
Ryoki: If you will,
Ryoki: then I’ll let you
Ryoki: be mine.
As promised here's the translation for Chapter 50. I got this finished after getting back from work at 10pm, but I managed somehow to complete it XD If anything's not clear, just like the other times, just post a comment and I'll do my best to explain/clarify things up. I didn't translate the cover page since it's basically questions brought on by the last chapter but if anyone wants me to translate it, I can. It's just I didn't find it very significant to this chapter at all so I didn't bother XD Anyhow, the translations are behind a link to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!
Page 2:
[the sign says “Narita”]
Page 3:
Hatsumi: I..I’m sorry I’m late mom.
Hatsumi: And I’m sorry I left the house without saying anything.
Hatsumi: I’ll go to school tomorrow.
Mother: Are you all right about Ryoki now?
Mother: Are you?
Hatsumi: …yeah.
Hatsumi: I’m fine..
Hatsumi: (He saw Onii-chan embrace me, but he left looking like he didn’t care at all)
Page 4:
Hatsumi: (Has he moved on so easily already?)
Shinogu: Mom, is dad asleep?
Mother: Yes he is. So please keep your voices down. We’ll talk tomorrow.
Mother: Spring break’s already started for you, right? Why don’t you stay here this week? Let’s have a talk while your father is in Tokyo.
//gatcha// [door opening]
Akane: Hatsumi-chan! You’re back?
Mother: Sh---! [telling her to be quiet XD]
Akane: I’m so glad! Welcome back!
[in the background her mother’s saying “sh---“ ^^]
Hatsumi: Aka-chin, sh--- [Aka-chin is Akane’s nickname XD]
Mother: Akane! You’re too loud, go talk in your room!
Mother: And Shinogu, for you it’s the bath. I’ll go put in the water right now so you can go in first.
Shinogu: Ah---yeah…
Akane: Hatsumi-chan, come here! How are you? Are you okay?
Page 5:
//batan// [door closing]
Mother: Shinogu..
Mother: I heard a little about this from your father, but he was saying could it be…
Mother: you…
Page 6:
Mother: were trying to be removed from the family register because
Mother: you’re in love with Hatsumi.
Akane: Hey hey! Hatsumi-chan, cheer up. It’s okay now!
Hatsumi: Eh..?
Akane: The Tachibanas left for some reason.
Akane: Rumours have it they went to her parents’ home in Kobe and won’t be back for a while.
Akane: This is so great.
Hatsumi: (It could have been, that she found out about Ryoki’s father’s affair.)
Page 7:
Akane: So hey, get back together with him already.
Akane: With Ryoki-kun! You still like him, don’t you?! Hey!
Hatsumi: …nevermind about that anymore.
Hatsumi: I’m going to go wash my hands and rinse my mouth.
Akane: Hatsumi-chan!
//batan// [door closing]
Mother: Well..of course it would be a lie to say I wasn’t surprised.
Mother: but Shinogu,
Hatsumi: (Mom’s voice..?)
Mother: I think that if that happens, it wouldn’t be such a bad thing.
Mother: Even if something like that happened between you and Hatsumi
Mother: I probably wouldn’t be against it.
Page 8:
Mother: Truth be said, there might be some bad people out there who might say what a horrible thing it is but
Mother: …if things go well between you two,
Mother: Even if you part from the family registry, you wouldn’t part with us, and I thought how good it would be if you two would stay a part of our family forever.
Shingou: M-mom.
Mother: I know. Your father would get angry if he finds out what I’ve been thinking.
Hatsumi: (Mom..what are you saying..)
Shinogu: Don’t say things like that to Hatsumi.
Mother: I know.
Mother: But see..about Ryoki-kun, it’s sad for Hatsumi.
Mother: If it’s with you, I could watch over with ease.
Page 9:
Shinogu: Mom
Mother: Okay, okay. I won’t say anything anymore.
Mother: You can go take a bath. I’ll have some tea ready.
//tat a ta// [fast movement of feet]
//batan// [ door closing]
Akane: What?
Akane: Weren’t you a bit quick?
Hatsumi: Onii-chan was in the bathroom already, getting ready for the bath so I couldn’t go in.
Akane: Oh, right—
Hatsumi: (So that’s how it is.)
Hatsumi: (My mom thinks like that.)
Hatsumi: (Unlike the time I was going out with Tachibana-kun, when she kept on saying how she was against it, she would be happy.)
Page 10:
Hatsumi: (If I choose Onii-chan.)
Subaru: A-
Subaru: A fever?! He collapsed because of that? [what he actually said was “chienetsu” which is a term often used to describe fever that children have. It’s nothing serious apparently judging from the term used ^^]
Mariko: Yes, the family doctor was saying it was something similar to it.
Mariko: He also mentioned how as a child, Ryoki-sama would have tendencies of falling ill.
Mariko: He couldn’t take the elementary school finals because this.
Page 11:
Mariko: The doctor was suggesting perhaps he had gone through a large shock.
[Ryoki’s remembering back to Azusa’s words from the previous chapter]
(Azusa: They’re probably doing it already)
(Azusa: Hatsumi’s staying at his house even after knowing his feelings towards her, so if it happened it wouldn’t be that much of a surprise)
Ryoki: I don’t have anything to be shocked about!!
Subaru: R-
Subaru: Ryoki-kun?
[around the word bubbles says “fear” XD]
Ryoki: A woman like her…
Page 12:
Ryoki: I have nothing to do with
Ryoki: whether she chooses to do it with her brother, or anyone
Ryoki: at all.
Ryoki: Since it’s been hectic the past few days, even a person like me would get tired. I’m just tired, that’s all.
Ryoki: Stop worrying about me and go to school already!
Ryoki: Just go—
Subaru: Ryo-kun?!
Mariko: Ryoki-sama
//fuu// [exhaling of breath ^^]
Subaru: (Ryo-kun)
Page 13:
[all the words in the background are just different ways of saying “Good morning”]
Girl: ‘morning Narita—It’s been two days, have you been sick? Are you okay? [Narita is Hatsumi’s last name]
Girl: Yesterday they told us what we have to study for the test. Ugh, give me a break.
Hatsumi: Eh, r-really? Tell me about it later.
Girl: The section we have to study for Japanese history is soo long—
Azusa: Good morning.
//dokin// [heat beat]
Azusa: Glad your “cold”’s gotten better.
Girl: Ah—Azusa-kun, good morning—
Girl #2: Good morning, Azusa-kun—
Page 14:
Azusa: Just the other day, he came up to me.
Hatsumi: Eh?
Azusa: Ryoki’s father.
Hatsumi: Eh…
Azusa: And he was saying how
Azusa: in the end it was me and my father’s fault that he was dumped by my mother.
Azusa: Seems he came to tell me that he has no plans of apologizing at all about the affair.
Hatsumi: What?! What is that?! How could he say—
Azusa: Yeah, you’d think that too, right? He’s so self-centered, no wonder he’s Ryoki’s father.
Page 15:
Azusa: Hey, Hatsumi.
Azusa: Last night. That thing with Shinogu.
Azusa: Was that just some act put on to show Ryoki?
Azusa: Or
Azusa: are you really going to choose Shinogu-san?
Page 16:
Azusa: …sorry…
Azusa: It’s none of my business. Hahaha—
Azusa: ha—
Hatsumi: --But
Hatsumi: you were always saying how
Hatsumi: I should choose Onii-chan.
Hatsumi: My mom too.
Hatsumi: She was saying how
Hatsumi: she’d be at ease if I date Onii-chan.
Hatsumi: And he’s been unbelievably caring of me.
Page 17:
Hatsumi: And if I choose Onii-chan, he might be really happy.
Hatsumi: If he’s happy, then I am too.
Azusa: ..Hatsumi. Are you okay with that?
Azusa: Isn’t that…a bit different?
Subaru: N-Narita!
Page 18:
Azusa: Subaru
Hatsumi: Subaru…g-good morning.
Hatsumi: What’s wrong? You’ve got a scary expression on your face.
Subaru: U-um..
Subaru: Ryo-kun..
//doki// [heart beat]
Subaru: Um..you see…
Subaru: I know he probably would tell me not to say anything but
Subaru: um…
Subaru: He’s been in bed all day since running a fever last night.
Subaru: He’s been
Subaru: wanting to see you. [the small words in the bubble says “….I think” XD]
Page 19:
Hatsumi: Eh…that’s a lie.
Hatsumi: a fever—
Hatsumi: But I just saw him last night.
Hatsumi: (He..ignored me and..)
Hatsumi: (it’s a lie that he’s wanting to see me.)
Hatsumi: And plus, there are a lot of maids at his place.
Subaru: There’s only one right now. Only Takatou-san is there.
Subaru: It’s because Tachibana-san took all the maids with her back to her parents’ home.
Subaru: Takatou-san has some matters she has to take care of.
Subaru: Even if I go, he’ll just tell me I’m a bother and get me to leave, it’s no good.
Subaru: His father and mother haven’t come back.
//kiiin kooon kaann kooonn// [school bell ringing]
Subaru: ---but Ryo-kun---
Subaru: he never says that he’s lonely,,,
Hatsumi: (but I)
//koon// [bell continuing to ring ^^]
Page 20:
Hatsumi: (I decided I wouldn’t go to him anymore.)
Hatsumi: (After going through a painful time, I decided I’d give him up.)
Hatsumi: (I won’t be worried about him. I’m not worried. I’m not worried.)
Hatsumi: (I’ll never go.)
Page 21:
//piin pooon// [door bell ringing]
Ryoki: Uggh…so loud….
Ryoki: Did Mariko-san leave somewhere?
//pin pon pin pon// [insistent door bell ringing XD]
Page 22:
//pin pon pin pon// [again, continuing to ring ^^]
Ryoki: A----ah fine. FINE!
//batan// [door opening]
Ryoki: Who is it, you—
Ryoki: You again…
Ruri: W-what! Are you not all right?
Page 23:
Ryoki: Huh?
Ruri: I went to your school to pick you up,
Ruri: and I was told you had not come to school.
Ruri: You
Ruri: made me worried—
Ryoki: Why do I have to be worried by you?
Ruri: --I’ve come to a decision.
//ton// [lightly rests her head on his shoulder XD]
Ruri: I’ll agree to your arrogant conditions, and I’ll give it to you.
Ruri: You’ll..be my..
Ruri: I’ll let you be..my first…
Page 24:
Ryoki: You’ll…
Ryoki: listen to anything I say?
Page 25:
Ryoki: If you will,
Ryoki: then I’ll let you
Ryoki: be mine.