oceansportrait ([info]oceansportrait) wrote in [info]hot_gimmick,
@ 2005-03-20 22:57:00
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Chapter 49 Translation!
Since Chapter 49 was posted a few days ago (thank you thank you! XD) I decided to translate it since no one else has (at least, I hope not XD). This was translated all in one night so it might be a little rough (I didn't take as much time as I would translating it then re-translating it into the vernacular but I did my best ^^) If you notice any mistakes or if something isn't clear, just post a message saying so and I'll do my best to fix/answer. Here it is, chapter 49, inside a lj-cut to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!


Legend:
[] - translator's notes
() – thoughts

Page 1:
(since I didn’t think the cover had any important information about the chapter, I didn’t bother translating it to save myself a bit of time since I’m translating all of this chapter in one night :D. Basically it said things like “A hit series you can’t take your eyes off of---!”. ^^)

Page 2:
Hatsumi: (I can hear his heart beating)

Page 3:
Hatsumi: (Even though I’m the one who thought to warm him up, I might have been the one who was warmed up)
//squeeeze//
Hatsumi: urg…
Hatsumi: I..t…hurts…
Hatsumi: Onii-chan, it hurts..
//realization//
Shinogu: Wah! I’m sorry
Shinogu: I’m sorry! I’m sorry Hatsumi!

Page 4:
Hatsumi: I’m fine.
Shinogu: I’m sorry, I put too much strength in.
Are you hurting anywhere?
Hatsumi: I’m fine. Don’t worry, I’m all right.
Shinogu: …I’m really sorry…
Shinogu: To hug you…like this…
Shinogu: I..can’t believe it.
Shinogu: I thought if I let go, you might disappear—
Shinogu: I thought it might have been a dream—

Page 5:
Hatsumi: Stop it, Onii-chan
Hatsumi: You’re making such a big deal out of it. I’m not like some treasure---
Shinogu: You are.
Shinogu: You’re my treasure.

Page 6:
//blusshh//
Hatsumi: T—
Hatsumi: Thanks…
Shinogu: Hatsumi—
//squeezes fist//

Page 7:
Shinogu: Because you’re my treasure
Shinogu: I’m okay with just watching you, being near you.
Shinogu: If you can forgive me for my feelings
Shinogu: then I’m fine with just that.
Hatsumi: Forgiveness..
Hatsumi: something like that…
Hatsumi: …but I…

Page 8:
Hatsumi: It’s a little late but
Hatsumi: I’m going back to the apartment now.
Hatsumi: Ah, no no. It’s not because I’m becoming conscious of you or anything like that.
Hatsumi: It’s
Hatsumi: s-school! I can’t not go to school anymore.
Hatsumi: It’s almost final exams so it’ll be really bad for me
Hatsumi: and plus, dad said for me to go to school too, remember?
Hatsumi: I’m scared of mom too..
Hatsumi: (The truth is)
Hatsumi: (I don’t like relying on him by being here when I can’t even reply to his feelings right away)

Page 9:
Hatsumi: (And)
Hatsumi: …And
Hatsumi: I shouldn’t run—I have to..
Hatsumi: I can’t just forget or give things up
Hatsumi: Because my house is a company owned housing
Hatsumi: I have to go on living there so—
Hatsumi: I have to be fine—
Shinogu: …All right.
Shinogu: Just a while ago mom phoned and I heard about this but
Shinogu: Ryoki-kun

Page 10:
Shinogu: …well more like Tachibana-san’s family, left the apartment.
Shingou: It seems they won’t be back for a while so she said for you to come home.
Mariko: Ryoki-sama! Please wait!

Page 11:
Mariko: Where are you heading? And along with your luggage no less…
Mariko: Your mother was saying that you will be staying here for a while
Ryoki: I’m going home.
Ryoki: I went along quietly with that hag for a day but
Ryoki: it’s better being at school.
Mariko: That’s why
Mariko: She was saying for you to attend school from this hotel
Ryoki: No, that’s way too much work—
Mariko: B-but…

Page 12:
Mariko: But there, Narita-san will be—
Mariko: Hatsumi-sama…will be there—
Mariko: That’s why—
Ryoki: How stupid
Ryoki: She doesn’t matter anymore
Girl:Tachibana Ryoki!

Page 13: [Note: I purposely translated Mariko and Ruri’s dialogues with a more polite form of speech because in Japanese they are very formal.]
Ryoki: ..Who are you?
Girl: I can’t believe you embarrassed me so last time
Girl: And to not even show up for the second exam!
//whisper whisper//
Mariko: It’s Ruri-sama
The daughter of Saionji-sama
Ruri: Ah
Ruri: Ishizono! Let me borrow your glasses
Ishizono: Yes m’am!
Ruri: I came here today because of a party so
//shakiiinnn// [not sure what an exact translation of this sfx would be. Basically it means she’s in serious mode with her glasses on XD]
[the written words say “What a forgetful man!”]
Ruri: I didn’t wear my glasses
Ryoki: Ah..that annoying girl from study school…
Ruri: That exam, if you weren’t there, then I’ll obviously be at top
Ruri: but to win like that would be boring.

Page 14:
Ryoki: It doesn’t matter. Moreover, move.
Ruri: Hey! Wait—
Ruri: You wont get away that easily. I want to win against you.
I-I’ll win and make you obey.
Ruri: I’ll make you listen to anything I say.
Ryoki: ---You
Ryoki: Really want to go out with me that much?
Ruri: HAH?!
What are you saying?!
All I want to do is knock you down, and show off my victory
Ryoki: It doesn’t really bother me.
Ruri: He?
Ryoki: It’s fine, I’ll go out with you.

Page 15:
Ruri: B..but..you were
Ruri: with that Takazono Academy’s girl called Narita-san…
Ryoki: I dumped her.
Ruri: Eh..
Ruri: Is..that right…?
Ryoki: There are two conditions. I’m going to do it with you on the first date
Ryoki: Let me do it with you whenever I want, got that? And the second thing is—
[Ishizono in the background is saying “To speak so offensively to madam!” XD]
Ryoki: You’re more my type
Ryoki: without the glasses
Ryoki: See ya.
Ryoki: Mariko-san, if you’re worried you can come along.
Mariko: Oh my—
Ruri: …

Page 16:
Mariko: I’m truly sorry Saionji-sama
Mariko: Master said some very rude things—
Ruri: Very true indeed.
Ruri: W-who..
Ruri: would go out with him…
Mariko: For you to do a sinful thing as well..
Ryoki: Ah?
Mariko: ---nothing. I was saying how much you resemble your father.

Page 17:
Mariko: You have a girl whom you truly like
Mariko: and yet you say something that would make her hold feelings for you…it’s horrible.
Ryoki: And even then you like my father
Mariko: That’s not the point.
Ryoki: I told you. She doesn’t matter any more.
Ryoki: A person who picks her family instead of me…
Ryoki: I don’t need someone like that.
Mariko: Ryoki-sama
Mariko: At least go to the building entrance along with the luggage—
Ryoki: No, I’ll walk from here.

Page 18:
Mariko: I understand. Then I’ll go ahead and wait inside.
Guy: So I see you’ve come back

Page 19:
Azusa: Coming back here like this
Azusa: you’re really shameless, you know that?
Ryoki: Be quiet
Ryoki: What’s wrong with going back to my own house.
Ryoki: Go back to your house. Fooling around at night, you scum model.
Azusa: Your masks’ shell is way too thick.
Azusa: After making Hatsumi cry like that
Ryoki: How should I know
Ryoki: She’s the one that betrayed me.
Azusa: Well
Azusa: I don’t really have the right to say this but

Page 20:
Ryoki: Don’t put me in the same category as you!
Ryoki: And don’t follow me--!
Azusa: I have no choice. The direction I’m heading in is the same as you. Are you some kind of brat…
Azusa: Well,
Azusa: thanks to you, my wish was granted so I’m happy
Ryoki: …what
Ryoki: are you talking about.
Azusa: Hatsumi and Shinogu-san.
Azusa: Hatsumi’s been staying at Shinogu-san’s place
Azusa: ever since the night she came back from Izu.

Page 21:
Azusa: She hasn’t showed up at school either
[the words at the top of Ryoki’s head reads: She’s staying at Shinogu-san’s house ^^]
Azusa: My thoughts were she’ll be safe with Shinogu-san.
Ryoki: Hah
Ryoki: It’s the same “Onii-chan” “Onii-chan” deal right?
Ryoki: I can’t keep up with that woman’s “the family is number 1” attack
[the words at the top of his head are the same as before, he’s just flicking the words away ^^]
Azusa: No, Shinogu-san’s already confessed to her so she knows of his feelings
Ryoki: I didn’t hear about that—
[again, same words at the top of his head ^^]
Azusa: If I told you, you’d probably go out of control
Azusa: well, anyway

Page 22:
Azusa: They’ve probably already done it
Azusa: Even if it’s Shinogu-san, he probably wouldn’t have been able to hold back
Azusa: Hatsumi’s staying with him even when she knows of his feelings so
Azusa: it wouldn’t be too unbelievable if it happened

Page 23:
Azusa: (As if)
Azusa: (the truth is, it’s those two..)
Azusa: (the probability of them doing it is probably really low..)
Ryoki: (With me,)
Ryoki: (Even with all the time I spent with her, even then it’s a no-go.)
RyokI: (Even though she told me she’d choose me)
Ryoki: (She’d do it with him?!)
[it says “The mind’s imagination” basically, it’s his mind working overtime XD the rat wheel’s turning ^^]

Page 24:
Ryoki: (You’ve got to be kidding me)
Azusa: …see. Good timing.
Azusa: Seems they’ve come back together

Page 25:
Shinogu: I’m glad you were able to come back today even though there’s not much time left
Hatsumi: But at a time like this, dad’ll still be on my case about it
Hatsumi: He’ll be saying “I told you to come back before!”
Shinogu: What?
Hatsumi: …I really really
Hatsumi: thank you. For everything.
Hatsumi: Like coming to pick me up at Izu, and giving me your time for the whole day yesterday.
Hatsumi: It might be thanks to you
Hatsumi: that I’ve begun to have a little courage.

Page 26:
Shinogu: …Sorry
Hatsumi: Eh..?
Shinogu: Five seconds is fine.
Hatsumi: O-Onii-chan..
Shinogu: I’m sorry, after I told you what I did.
Shinogu: It’ll just be now.

Page 27:
Hatsumi: (I’m still not used to it, but I don’t hate it.)
Hatsumi: (Strangely, it feels warm—)
Shinogu: S…sorry…hugging you at a place like this…
Shinogu: To think I’m a person with low self-control..
Shinogu: I didn’t know…

Page 28:
Hatsumi: Ah…

Page 29:
Ryoki: Dirty woman—
Ryoki: I really feel like I’ve cooled down [he means he really has lost interest in her]
Azusa: Hey Ryoki…

Page 30:
Hatsumi: (Yeah..)
Hatsumi: (Even when he sees things like this)
Hatsumi: (he won’t get mad anymore and)
Hatsumi: (same with his crazy orders)
Shinogu: I..I’m sorry Hatsumi
Shinogu: Mom said he wouldn’t be here..

Page 31:
Hatsumi: (It won’t happen anymore.)
Mariko: You’re late Ryoki-sama

Page 32:
Mariko: Tea has already been prepared
Mariko: I’ll carry the tea
Mariko: soon to your room—
//falling to the ground//
Mariko: R-Ryoki-sama
Mariko: Ryoki-sama?!
Ryoki: I hate…
Ryoki: a woman like her…



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Many thankiES!!!
[info]stingiz
2005-03-21 10:51 am UTC (link)
Thank you soo much for the translation.... sorry its great weather (finally) so im going out now...
thankies!!!!!!!! :) And happy easter if your celebrating that!?

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-03-21 10:59 am UTC (link)
WOOHOO! You made my morning! Thank you so much :D

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-21 11:29 am UTC (link)
OMG OMG OGM!!!!!!!! DOES HE NOT REALLY LIKE HER ANYMORE!!!!!!!!OMG AND DOES SHE NOT CARE ABOUT HIM!!!!??????????? IM SOOOOOOOO CONFUSED!!!!!!!

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(Anonymous)
2005-03-21 11:34 am UTC (link)
thanxalot! but what does Hatsumi mean by it wont happen aymore?

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-21 11:38 am UTC (link)
wait Ryoki Broke up with her!? i thought she broke up with him!? poor poor RYOKI!

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Questions
[info]oceansportrait
2005-03-21 04:11 pm UTC (link)
Okay to answer some of your questions ^^ I think judging from the several panels in which Ryoki made these heartbroken, sad faces that he is far from being over Hatsumi. It's his personality to say things that is opposite of what he's feeling, so I think when he was saying things like "Hatsumi doesn't matter anymore" he's saying it more to convince himself that rather than that being what he's truly feeling.

Judging from the panels near the very end of this chapter, Hatsumi still very much cares for him because she's making the same heartbroken expressions he was ^^

And as for Hatsumi's "It won't happen anymore" sentence, it's a continuation from the previous page. She's saying all the times he used to get mad at her over little things, and all the crazy orders he used to give her, all of that won't happen anymore [because they've broken up]

I didn't read a few chapters so I'm not sure who broke up with who, but it said clearly on that page that Ryoki said "I dumped her." He's not really the type to admit that he was dumped [and I think he'd be less willing to admit that to another person!] so I don't think it was out of character for him to lie and say that.

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[info]tricianna
2005-03-21 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Thanks as always for the translation! I saw this chapter a while ago in the bookstore and while I was pleased to see Ryoki again (two months without a Tachibana fix was just too cruel, Aihara-sensei!), his sadness at not having Hatsumi just makes me oh-so very sad.

(I also saw the April Betsucomi last week, and things don't seem to get any better.)

But as you said in your comment below, I don't think Ryoki or Hatsumi are over each other, even though they keep trying to convince themselves that they are.

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[info]becca_chan
2005-03-21 04:59 pm UTC (link)
they are definitely not over each other, for the same reasons others have stated above @_@

while the prospect of having Shinogu and Hatsumi become a couple sounds nice and all, I really don't think it'll ever be definite (and I ♥ me some Shinogu); though I do believe there will be tons of drama between them now that the whole not-related-by-blood thing is cleared o_o ooo, bring it on!

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[info]manjusang
2005-03-21 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Ooooooh! Shinogu can't control himself huh??? And I dunno whats up with Azusa... it seems like his goal in this story is to make Ryoki's life hell! But aren't they technically stepbrothers? ^^

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-21 07:56 pm UTC (link)
Well There not step brothers b/c his dad and his mom never got married, also if Azusa KNows it was Ryoki's Dad he wants to ruein there lifes sooooooo. POOR RYOKI!!!!!!!!!!

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-03-21 08:16 pm UTC (link)
Did it come out yet that they were step brothers? I've been waiting for that revelation, I hope I didn't miss it with those couple chapters I didn't get to see XD

Azusa is acting weird though. I wonder if he's trying to make Ryoki's life hell like you said...or if he wants Shinogu and Hatsumi to get together...or the long shot, if he wants to get with Hatsumi! Haha I love Azusa...he's so evil and mysterious :P

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-03-21 08:19 pm UTC (link)
Err, wait, they would be half brother's wouldn't they? If Azusa's Mom got pregnant by Ryoki's Dad...that was my theory until just now. I just realized that Azusa was already like 4 when they moved to company housing...so they can't be half brothers. Well my prediction went out the window haha

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[info]manjusang
2005-03-21 08:27 pm UTC (link)
Aw crap you're right!!! The only way that would work is if, like tokyo_gurl said, they had gotten married or, if Azusa' mom and Ryoki's Dad had Ryoki...and that would be impossible. But it's just the way that Ryoki's dad looked at Azusa in the car that time. Almost like he was his father haha! Man I'm confusing myself. Anyway I love Azusa too!!!! He's so great! You just wanna know what his objective is. It's hard to say what it is... Man I CAN'T wait until Azusa finds out what really went on with his mom!!!! He's gonna get so mad! (and I'll bet he's even hotter when he's mad...!!)

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-03-21 09:31 pm UTC (link)
Yeah there's been way too many instances of Ryoki's Dad being weird around Azusa. Like looking at him in the car, and when Ryoki found the picture of Miho and Azusa in his Dad's drawer, and the way he talked to him on the street (whatever chapter that was). Like [info]tokyo_gurl said, Mr. Tachibana and Miho probably knew each other before they moved to company housing. I still want to believe it! LOL

Hey, I just thought of something! Azusa has a suspicion that Ryoki's Dad was the one having the affair with his Mom...so that could be why he's being nasty to Ryoki! Kind of like how he was being evil to Hatsumi? Of course, he's definitely toned it down since Hatsumi...can't exactly gang rape Ryoki :P Alright, I'm thinking way too much about this. My head's going to explode hehe.

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-21 08:37 pm UTC (link)
Ya but Ryoki's Dad and Azusa's Mom was still in love at that time, the only reason y she didnt go with him was b/c she got pregnant with Azusa or so ive read

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-03-21 09:21 pm UTC (link)
You're right, Hatsumi and Azusa's Dad's went to school with Ryoki's Dad...so Miho and Mr. Tachibana could have been together before she got pregnant! There's so many things pointing to Ryoki's Dad also being Azusa's Dad, I don't want to believe otherwise! I can't wait till everything comes out in the manga. Oh the drama XD

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[info]manjusang
2005-03-22 05:41 am UTC (link)
Ahhhhh! It's killing me too! I hate guessing but I can't help it! There are so many possiblities...Aihara hasn't told us the whole past for a reason...eeps! Ok...ok..I'm just gonna stop thinking about it...I think I'm gonna go read HG 1 again...back when things were simple... ^^

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[info]jubileerain
2005-03-21 10:22 pm UTC (link)
Thanks Aya, you've been so quiet lately I was wondering where you went!

Azusa has never really liked Ryouki, so I guess now he has more of a reason to hate him. He scares me -_- All that hate in one skinny guy.

Hatsumi made the decision to break up with Ryouki, something about her not being able to take it anymore. There was more to it, but I was to lazy to read it ^^;;; & I don't have the chapter anymore. I really want those 2 back together. Ryouki needs someone nice like Hatsumi, & I also think he's pretty infatuated with her.

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well..
[info]oceansportrait
2005-03-22 11:44 pm UTC (link)
I've been around XD My local Japanese bookstore still hasn't gotten volume 10 yet so there's nothing for me to put up here XD

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[info]shoes_eat_me
2005-03-21 10:38 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for translating!!! It really cleared things up. I love Shinogu. Seriously, the boy's adorable. The look on his face when Hatsumi announced that she was going home was too cute. And Azusa's probably bugging Ryoki because (a) he wants revenge on Tachibana's son or (b) he cares for Hatsumi and is trying to knock sense into the boy. Or a mix of both (hey, the boy is a bit screwed up in the head).

And what Mariko said about Ryoki being just like his father is very telling. It seems like that's what happened w/ Mr. Tachibana: he lost the girl so he jumped to another one (even married her) and wouldn't admit his feelings. That'd be sad if Ryoki repeats his father's mistakes. But he's so pigheaded. Sigh, too much drama.

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-29 01:35 am UTC (link)
i though Mr.t and Mrs.t had a arrenged marriage? OO and i hope Ryoki doesnt!!!!

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(Anonymous)
2005-03-22 01:42 am UTC (link)
i'm confused does ryoki still love hatsumi or does he like ruri?

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Hmmm...
[info]marie_fan
2005-03-22 02:50 am UTC (link)
Ryoki fainted again. I'm starting to worry.

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AHHHH!
[info]eyeamvindicated
2005-03-22 05:30 am UTC (link)
You're awesome! That was so helpful! I just popped it open, read with my finger following the english on the screen and looking at the pretty pictures! Makes so much more sense!

But oh my! I seemed to have missed the chapters where Hatsumi wouldn't do it with Ryouki and they broke up!!

I hope he doesn't really go out with Ruri (*she'd* better not say yes after that lobby floor show)

I bet the same thing did happen to Ryouki's dad. Like Azusa's mom getting pregnant and choosing to stay with her husband/Azusa's dad. And Tachibana-san got angry she chose her family over him (Like what Ryouki's mad about), and he married that scary Mrs. Tachibana.

I love Azusa! I've *almost* >_< forgiven him for his earlier transgressions. He's just out to cause mischief it seems. Now, it seems the focus of his wrath is on Ryouki I dono if I believe he's out to play matchmaker for someone else, out of the kindness of his heart (unless it irritates Ryouki), but I also don't really believe he means to hurt Hatsumi in the process this time, either.

*sigh*
I should order another Betsucomi (it'll probably be May before I get it tho) so i can read along again. With you're AWESOME interpretations, it's almost as good as having the Viz edition. lol

kan

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Re: AHHHH!
[info]oceansportrait
2005-03-22 07:44 am UTC (link)
Thanks for the compliment, it's really flattering considering how the professional translators probably take 1+ months translating a volume whereas I took 2 hours to translate this chapter XD

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-24 02:38 am UTC (link)
I have a question and im sorry for posting it here but how do u get the Lj cuts? if anyone can help me with that i would be most grateful!

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[info]jubileerain
2005-03-24 09:22 pm UTC (link)
Try the LJ FAQ. It'll give you all the info you need.

http://www.livejournal.com/support/faq.bml

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-03-24 09:34 pm UTC (link)
THANX!

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[info]hpraven89
2005-10-25 08:44 am UTC (link)
AH!!! Im soo confused... its like I like Shinogu, but then i like Ryoki and I'm soo lost!! I should really go to sleep now!! Keep up the good work w/ translations!! ~HpRaven89~

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You are soo my hero!
(Anonymous)
2005-12-28 02:39 am UTC (link)
The release date said the 11th would be released until July or something like that and I couldn't possibly wait that long, this really really really means alot that someone took the time to translate it. <33333

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COOL!!!!
[info]fushigi06
2006-01-15 05:52 am UTC (link)
Hey I'm new here!!! ^_^ But anyways, not the main point, I think that it's awesome what you're doing!!!! ^_^ I am so unpatient when it comes to comic books and then I stumbled upon this site and I was like SCORE!!! And then it was HOT GIMMICK!!! Which is an awesome comic book... Duh! :P Anyways yeah.... hehe

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Re: COOL!!!!
(Anonymous)
2006-05-10 02:48 am UTC (link)
i kno watcha' talk'n 'bout issss very gooddd!!!

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