oceansportrait ([info]oceansportrait) wrote in [info]hot_gimmick,
@ 2005-02-07 15:13:00
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Hot Gimmick Chapter 47 Translation
I have no idea if Chapter 47 has been translated (if it has been, I'm sorry, I couldn't find any earlier threads with people posting it XD) so I translated it for those who might be curious as to what they were saying in the chapter ^^ It's behind a link again to avoid spoilers, Enjoy!


Legend:
() -thoughts
// - action words
[] -translator's notes

Page 1:
Shinogu: You can go to a place where Ryoki isn't there
Shinogu: Come to my place, Hatsumi.
Shinogu: Let's live together.

Page 2 [cover part 1]:
Hiding various thoughts into the heart--
Neighbor's Love Game

Page 3 [cover part 2]:
Ryoki, Shingou, Azusa, and Hatsumi---
Hatsumi and Shinogu's life together will begin--!?
Hot Gimmick
Aihara Miki

Page 4:
[I won't bother translating the summary up to now--most of you have probably read up to chapter 47 so there's no point in translating what you already know ^^]

Page 5:
Shinogu: Yes, I'm sorry.
Shinogu: I just brought her here out of my own decision--
Shinogu: She's taking a bath right now.
Shinogu: Yes, I understand. She's all right.
Mother: ..Tell her to come back as soon as she can. I'm relying on you Shinogu--all right, bye.
//katchan// [hanging up phone]
Akane: Mom, what did he say about Hatsumi?

Page 6:
//chapu// [lifting her hand from the water]
Mother: I really am worried...
Mother: She has school tomorrow, and the end year exams are coming up---
Mother: I don't know what happened with her and Ryoki but--
Mother: I wonder if she's all right...
//chapu// [same action as before]
Hatsumi: (I came with him)
Hatsumi: (Even after I decided to stop depending on him)
Hatsumi: (I really am..a no-good human being...)
//buku buku buku// [breathing underwater]

Page 7:
Hatsumi: (But)
Hatsumi: (if I stay here,)
Hatsumi: (I won't have to see him.)
//katcha// [door opening]
Hatsumi: ..thanks for the bath...
Shinogu: --what?
//kata kata kata// [noise in the background]
Hatsumi: U-um..onii-chan...
Hatsumi: I'm sorry I--
Shinogu: It'll be ready in a second so wait a little longer.
Shinogu: Here.

Page 8:
Hatsumi: (The sweet smell of cocoa..)
Hatsumi: Onii-chan...this is too good!
Shinogu: Well I'm glad. It's the Buzz Cafe's chef's skills.
Shinogu: Drink that.
Shinogu: You've taken a bath so you're all warmed up, it'll warm you up even more and
Shinogu: you can sleep peacefully today.
Hatsumi: Onii-chan..
Shinogu: n?
Hatsumi: ...nothing. Sorry, it's nothing.

Page 9:
Hatsumi: (Onii-chan..)
Hatsumi: (He's not going to ask anything after all.)
Hatsumi: (During the time I was heading for here with him, I thought he'd ask more about Tachibana-kun)
Shinogu: Hatsumi--is it okay if I make some pasta?
Hatsumi: Eh?! That's okay, I'm not very hungry--
Shinogu: No, I'll be making some for myself too.
Shinogu: Kazama's always making me cook for two.
Hatsumi: Now that I think about it, I came here without letting Kazama-san know--
Shinogu: Don't worry about it, I phoned him about it before you came
Shinogu: He said that he won't be back for 2-3 days because of a tour convention job
Hatsumi: I see...

Page 10:
Hatsumi: U--
Hatsumi: Onii-chan, this is good--it's really good! it's delicious--
Hatsumi: (And here I was thinking I didn't have much of an appetite.)
Shinogu: This is the job's skills too.
Shinogu: I'm glad.
Hatsumi: (He doesn't ask anything.)

Page 11:
Hatsumi: (Onii-chan, you wrap me up without asking any questions, don't you?)
Teacher: Today's absentee is Hatsumi Narita--
Teacher: No one else. Okay, now--
Teacher: concerning next month's end year exams..
Subaru: (Ryo-kun)
Subaru: (didn't come this morning either. I wonder if something happened between the two.)
//kiinn koonn// [school bell ringing]
//pa// [foot stopping]

Page 12:
Tachibana's Father: Oh Azusa-kun, I'm glad I ran into you.
//gatcha// [door opening]
Tachibana's Father: I was planning on waiting for another few hours but--
Azusa: --what about your job? The executive work?
TF: You as well, you left school early. Are you feeling sick?
Azusa: No, after this I have a photo shoot. I don't have very much time.

Page 13:
Azusa: But if you went out of your way to come here like this
Azusa: then what Hatsumi was saying must have been true,
Azusa: that the one who made my mother go through horrible things, and killed her, wasn't Hatsumi's father,
Azusa: but you.

Page 14:
TF: I'm not "you". I'm Shuuichirou Tachibana.
TF: Would you stop glaring at me with a face that looks so much like Miho.
Azusa: Don't say her name lightly like that.
Azusa: Moreover, what do you want?
TF: I heard from my maid that Ryoki talked to you about your mother and I.
TF: I wanted to---
Azusa: You don't have to apologize.
Azusa: I won't forgive you even if I die anyway--

Page 15:
Azusa: And even if
Azusa: you tell me that I'm really related to you,
Azusa: I have nothing to do with it.
Azusa: I'll never have
Azusa: anything to do with it.
TF: Stop talking nonsense.
TF: Because of you, your mother and I broke up twice.
Azusa: What?

Page 16:
TF: In the beginning--right after I married my current wife because of family matters,
TF: she chose Odagiri-kun on purpose...she quickly became pregnant with you and married.
TF: Next, when I was finally able to get things back,
TF: No matter how much I pleaded with her to run away together, she wouldn't come with me, saying she couldn't leave you.
TF: In the end, she always chose you and Odagiri-kun.

Page 17:
TF: That's why
TF: no matter how much you hate me, I have no plans of apologizing to you...that's what I wanted to tell you.
Azusa: This is kind of
Azusa: like talking to Ryoki in his 40's.
Azusa: You're a geezer who doesn't act like an adult--
TF: Do you want to take revenge on me?
Azusa: I'm thinking over carefully what kind of revenge I should take
Azusa: See you. I'm in a hurry because of work--

Page 18:
(She wouldn't come with me, saying she couldn't leave you)
(She chose you and Odagiri-kun)
Azusa: (That geezer..just saying what he wants...)
Azusa: (Mother..)

Page 19:
Subaru: Eh?! Ryoki and Hatsumi broke up?!
Akane: That's what Hatsumi's saying. No matter what I say, she just tells me they've broken up now.
Akane: She won't tell me anything. Is it the same with Ryoki-kun?
Subaru: ..this morning...we were separate so..
Akane: Arggh---it's definitely that Tachibana hag's fault!
Akane: She comes to us with all these complaints--
Akane: Thanks to her, my dad's coming back early from Osaka today.
Akane: I won't have very much time to spend with you.
//cha cha cha// [cellphone ringing]
Subaru: Yeah..but..
Subaru: I'm worried about the two..
Akane: Well yeah I agree but--
//pi// [turns on phone]
Akane: (Ah, it's Kazama-san)
Cellphone Message: It seems that Hatsumi returned safely, I'm glad. The Narita family seems to have some problems but is my precious Akane okay? I'm worried.

Page 20:
Cellphone message: I want to meet with you. Moreover, I want to see your face. I'll come by to see you one of these days so let's date, secretly from your boyfriend.
//dokun// [heart beat]
Subaru: U-Um..Akane-san
Subaru: It's open now, do you want to go?
Akane: Y-Yeah.
Akane: (Geez, that Kazama-kun--)
Akane: (I don't know up to what point he's serious. Well, he's not leaving a bad impression though.)
Akane: (Hehehe)

Page 21:
//gaaaa// [cleaning]
Hatsumi: (I wonder if it's about time Onii-chan will come back from school?)
Hatsumi: (I'm done with the kitchen..)
Hatsumi: (I'm done here too.)
Hatsumi: (The room's really clean for two guys living on their own.)
//fuu// [exhaling of breath]

Page 22:
Hatsumi: (This is bothering me)
Hatsumi: (If I don't keep moving, I'll feel suffocated.)
Shinogu: Hatsumi, I'm home.
//gatcha// [door opening]
Hatsumi: Onii-cha--

Page 23:
Hatsumi: Dad--
Shinogu: I happened to run into him by coincidence at the train station.
Father: I heard from mother that you two were here..
Father: ...I came here to talk...
Father: I heard from mother on the phone.
Father: It seems Tachibana-san talked to you about Shinogu.
Hatsumi: Before that um..I have something I'd like to ask.
Hatsumi: I..heard from Tachibana-kun. The whole truth.

Page 24:
Hatsumi: He said that you had been ordered by Tachibana-kun's father.
Hatsumi: That you were lying about being the person who was having an affair with Azusa's mother.
Hatsumi: You lied to Azusa,
Hatsumi: you even went down on your knees.
Hatsumi: Why were you hiding it?!
Hatsumi: You could have said it then, at that time.
Hatsumi: That you weren't the person...

Page 25:
Hatsumi: If you did that
Hatsumi: more quickly--
Hatsumi: (I could have stopped myself from liking him)
Father: I wasn't ordered to do this
Father: I made a "contract".

Page 26:
Father: At that time..there were some circumstances..
Father: we were in need of a large sum of money.
Father: That's why---
Hatsumi: M-
Hatsumi: Money?
Hatsumi: You accepted money from...Tachibana-kun's father...?
Hatsumi: I-I can't..believe you--

Page 27:
Hatsumi: For money?
Hatsumi: You betrayed Odagiri-san who you were so friendly with,
Hatsumi: and you helped with the affair?
Hatsumi: You...hurt Azusa...?
Hatsumi: I can't believe you...
Hatsumi: you...
Hatsumi: and Tachibana-kun's father...
Shinogu: But

Page 28:
Shinogu: wasn't that because of me?
Shinogu: that money..
Shinogu: because I was adopted into the Narita family...that money was suddenly needed?
Hatsumi: Onii-chan...
Hatsumi: What are you saying..
Shinogu: I thought
Shinogu: that was the case

Page 29:
Shinogu: Some time after we moved to the apartment we're living in now,
Shiongu: there was a time when you and mother argued during the night.
//gashan// [door opening//
Mother: Then what?!
Mother: Are you saying we should return him?!
Father: That's not what I said!
Father: But where would we get that kind of money?! All I'm saying is, it's too much for us.
Mother: We'll do something! Because there's nowhere else he can go!
Father: If you had just discussed about adopting Shinogu a little more carefully--
Shinogu: ---It's my..
Shinogu: fault...

Page 30:
Father: It's not particularly your fault..
Father: It was just your parent's debts
Father: from before you came.
Father: I wasn't planning on speaking to you in this form..
Father: When Tachibana-san was making a scene
Father: it seems you said you were going to pull out of the family.

Page 31:
Father: You
Father: must have had some thoughts of your own to come to that conclusion.
Father: But you see, Shinogu,
Father: it seems you seem to think the money from that time...was your fault but
Father: we wanted you to become our son even if we had to do the impossible.

Page 32:
Father: I thought, at least
Father: you could know that..
Father: ...here's fine.
Father: From here on, straight ahead is the train station, isn't it?
Father: Hatsumi, you come too.
Father: Come, I won't forgive you for missing two days of school.
Hatsumi: (I feel, like I've listened to too much of this)
Hatsumi: (Now I don't know what to do.)

Page 33:
Hatsumi: (Even then)
Hatsumi: (the fact that I have to give up Tachibana-kun)
Hatsumi: (doesn't change.)
Shinogu: Father...I'm sorry...
Shinogu: Even with that I want you to let me step out from the family.
Shinogu: I...
Shinogu: love you and mother and Akane and Hikaru...
Shiongu: ...but

Page 34:
Shinogu: I can't go back to being an older brother.
Shinogu: I don't want to let her return to a place where Ryoki-kun is.

Page 35:
Father: Hey..
Father: What are you talking about, hey
Father: Wait Shinogu.
Father: ..what...
Father: could it be...
Father: that two--
//ha ha// [breathing]
Hatsumi: W-wait..
Hatsumi: Hey, wait--

Page 36:
Hatsumi: Wait!
Hatsumi: Wait, Onii-chan!
//ha ha// [breathing]
Hatsumi: I..
Hatsumi: I---

Page 37:
Shinogu: It..doesn't have to be right now..
Shinogu: After you get over Ryoki-kun,
Shinogu: and once you start liking other guys, and hating other guys,
Shingou: after meeting with different guys,
Shinogu: ..and..
Shinogu: --And if..
Shingou: you could think that I'm not..that bad..
Shinogu: Would it be too much to ask for...

Page 38:
Shinogu: If I ask
Shinogu: for you to see me as a man?



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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-02-07 11:58 pm UTC (link)
GAH! My brain is frazzled...there was a summary before but nothing this in depth, thank you! It's so interesting to see how much Ryoki is like his Father, and that his Father doesn't want to apologize to Azusa! I wonder what Azusa's revenge will be like? And Kazama! My god he's bold! I knew he had a thing for Akane, but to blatantly ask her to go out with him behind Subaru's back! I wonder if she'll do it XD Aww and Shinogu's so cute! He wants her to date other guys so she'll hate them and see how great he is...and he's so right! He's much better hehe. Thanks again!

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Kazama
[info]oceansportrait
2005-02-08 01:04 am UTC (link)
But remember, this is Kazama we're talking about here so I very much doubt he's serious about wanting to date Akane behind Subaru's back. He's probably just asking her to hang out with him in that light-manner of his XD

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Re: Kazama
[info]sxylilwitch
2005-02-08 02:14 am UTC (link)
You're absolutely right...I forgot about him always joking around! PHEW I was a little worried for a second there hehe

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Re: Kazama
[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-02-08 03:40 am UTC (link)
I hope so xD... I'd punch both him and Akane if they did that to poor Subaru

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[info]jubileerain
2005-02-08 08:19 am UTC (link)
Sorry, my summary was from memory, & I just skimmed the chapter as much as I could.

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-02-09 01:16 am UTC (link)
I hope I didn't offend you! I really appreciate your summaries :)

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[info]jubileerain
2005-02-10 04:47 am UTC (link)
nah u didn't ^_^

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no!
[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-02-08 01:06 am UTC (link)
MY POOR POOOOOOOOOOR RYOKI-KUN! oo i hope he's ok! this is messed up! shes supose to be with him! im sorry but i really really DISLIKE Shinogu and Azusa!!!!!!!!!! I love Ryoki though! the poor guy! personally i think his life is worse the Hatsumi! i mean he has no one! he's got to do everything right *or his mom well u know* hes in love with a gurl and she might be falling for her step brother which i might add is supper dupper GROSS! Also he has 1 friend *his friends a sweetie gotta love Subaru 2* and his father never really cared for him or spent time with him! and his father told him this at such a young age! so i feel really bad for Ryoki! *im a BIG Ryoki fan if u couldnt tell lol*

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Re: no!
(Anonymous)
2005-02-08 01:07 am UTC (link)
I HATE SHINOGU AND AZUSA 2 WITH THE PASSION ERRRRRR THEY GET ME SOOO MAD! AND THERE GROSS!

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HOLD ON!
[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-02-08 03:22 am UTC (link)
Does she still like Ryoki!? *i hope so* SO DOES THAT MEAN THERES SOME HOPE OF RYOKI GETTING BACK WITH HATSUMI!? btw i dont understabd y did they break up!? please some one tell me!

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[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-02-08 03:39 am UTC (link)
Graaaaaaaaaaah, I love this but Ryoki and Hatsumi need to get back together! Poor Shinogu though he's got it bad for Hatsumi. As for Ryoki's dad he's an ass lol, poor Azusa but Azusa should be on his knees saying sorry to Hatsumi, tsk tsk. facker. As for Akane... I will officially hate her if she begins dating Kazama or hanging out with him behind Subaru's back thats retarded and skanky lol. Subaru is tooooo good for her I already think that much but they are a cute couple.

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[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-02-08 03:41 am UTC (link)
hanging out with him is okay, I didn't mean to add that. I just meant like dating him and going around to movies and flirting with him and what not but like someone previously said, I'm sure he's joking

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[info]crimsay
2005-02-08 04:21 am UTC (link)
Uwah! Thanks for the translations! <3

A little note though about the translation that kinda bugged me, I think you should change "moreover" to something a bit more colliquial. It's really small, but no one says "moreover" so it sounds kinda...stuck up or something. But I'm just weird noticing things like that ><

For those who like Ryoki: Look at page 32, 33. Sounds like she's still wanting to be with Ryoki. I dunno why they broke up or anything, but it sounds like she regrets having to leave him.

I think she probably will (maybe even should) end up with him. But Shinogu's my favorite character XD

...Anyways. Thanks again for the translations! ^^; <3<3

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True...
[info]oceansportrait
2005-02-08 04:52 am UTC (link)
Putting "moreover" does sound a bit awkward I agree, but I couldn't think of any other word to put that would still have the same impact. "More importantly" is another one, but really, who says that? XD Any suggestions?
^^
Believe it or not, translating the dialogue straight up isn't the hard part--it's changing it all so it's more like the "every-day" language (in the "vernacular" XD Learned that in Grade 8 when we studied the Renaissance. ^^) is what the most difficult aspect of translating is.

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Re: True...
[info]crimsay
2005-02-08 05:30 am UTC (link)
I figured that was the case, trying to make it sound like what people would normally say. "Furthermore" is another suggestions, but it still sounds kinda stuffy, but I see your dilema XD Maybe go with something like

(Pg 14)
Azusa: What do you want, anyway?

(Pg 20)
Cellphone message: I want to meet with you. Besides, I want to see your face.
or Actually, I want to see your face.

May not have quite the same meaning, but...it is a hard word to think of synonyms for XD

You did a wonderful job, really ^^; I'm just nitpicky about little things like that in writing >

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Re: True...
[info]oceansportrait
2005-02-08 06:51 am UTC (link)
That's pretty good actually, better than I could think up XD I'll just leave it the way it is though, since I figure anyone reading the translations will read the people's comments that go with it and they'll put two-and-two together. Thanks for taking the time to think that up ^^

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[info]melene
2005-02-08 04:32 am UTC (link)
eee thankyou for the translations! Gosh I was totally doubting her relationship with Shinogu (Though I'd love to see this happen, he's so much nicer than Ryo..) but now I don't know! =] I hope that if she ends up with Ryoki, he has a serious additude change, and Shinogu ends up happy >>;

-too emotionally involved with the characters- ^^;

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lol
(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 10:51 pm UTC (link)
-too emotionally involved with the characters- ^^;

XD I hear you!

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[info]eyeamvindicated
2005-02-08 05:39 am UTC (link)
Ummmm.... yeah when *did* Hatsumi and Ryouki break up?? I needs to know! lol And why?? I think I missed a summary somewhere..

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clueless..
[info]oceansportrait
2005-02-08 06:49 am UTC (link)
I'm just as clueless as the rest of you ^^ I'm pretty sure it probably happened somewhere between Ch. 44-47 because those are the chapters I haven't read.

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Why they broke up
[info]king_bidgood
2007-03-05 07:38 pm UTC (link)
Ok, it was in chapter 44 and 45. You see Hatsumi found was having second thoughts about running away with Ryoki. Than she found the picture of his father and Azusa's mother. This got her upset, along with the fact that Ryoki knew and didn't tell her. All the emotional stain that had resulted from going out with Ryoki (all the hiding that they had to do, the jeopardy she was putting her family in, and the guilt she felt) was just to much, so even though they still love eachother, she just wasn't strong enough. She also was really ticked that Ryoki knew that her father was actually innocent, and didn't tell her.

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[info]jubileerain
2005-02-08 08:22 am UTC (link)
Yay! Thanks for the summary Aya! Ryouki & Hatsumi broke up in chapter 46. Well they were about to do it, & you know Ryouki & his persistant ways. . . Hatsumi kept crying & told him she couldn't be with him anymore. I didn't really read the chapter (skimmed through it in the store. . .) but he was like "what about always being by my side," & she said she couldn't do it anymore & then I forgot (something else happens), then she gets dressed, apologizes to the maid & leaves.

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[info]tokyo_gurl
2005-02-08 11:50 am UTC (link)
POOR RYOKI!

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[info]baka_ruby
2005-02-08 11:25 am UTC (link)
Aw... Shinogu is sooo sad. <3 Nice translation.

What's wrong with that Kazuma fellow, hitting on Akane! *mad* I'm a Subaru x Akane supporter! *waves flag*

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hiia
[info]stingiz
2005-02-08 10:54 pm UTC (link)
hmmm i dont think Azusas gonna have revenge.. but i can be wrong... but whos hes gonna have his revenge on.. Ryoki maybe..-_-
And is he ever gonna say sorry to Hatsumi...
Say sorry AZUSA!!!! hehe got a little mad there.. hehe just thought something smutty maybe Ryoki will get raped (As revenge)... Eh no i dont think so... where are you Ryoki!!?? ah where is he.. Hurry Ryoki or Hatsumis maybe gonna be taken away by Shinogu!!! ok siiigh!!! THANKIES VERY MUCH FOR THE TRANSLATION... Appreciate it very much... bye

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Re: hiia
[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-02-09 01:34 am UTC (link)
lol if someone tried to rape ryoki he'd stab them in the face with a pencil

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Re: hiia
(Anonymous)
2005-02-09 02:13 am UTC (link)
lol true true but i it was a pen " even a pen, can hurt like H#ll if some one stabs u in the face with it" lol but that was funny

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[info]scorpio1987
2005-02-09 02:41 am UTC (link)
Thanks much! I can't WAIT to get the comic whenever it comes out. It looks like Shinogu's got a chance after all! Yay! ^_^

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[info]masochist_kiss
2005-02-09 04:51 am UTC (link)
But my thing is why is everyone pissed at this whole HatsumixShinogu thing? Um...excuse me, he's adopted. No blood relations AT ALL. So don't sya its gross since they just grew up feeling the ties of brother and sister, as we know so far so there is no real blood ties.

I love HatsumixShinogu because its a sweet coupling and he's the only guy to prove that he wont smash her around!

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[info]crimsay
2005-02-09 06:47 am UTC (link)
Hear, hear! <3

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O_O
(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Yesh! Shinogu and Hatsumi >< yay! -^-^-..Sorreh i just can't help it i love that couple. >.<; I mean Ryoki's so mean <.<; He still treats her like a slave! >.< Qutoe: Ryoki: "YOur body belongs to me"

WTF >.<;;...Shinogu so nice..>.>'' -cough- -Feels death behind her back from Ryoki x Hatsumi fans.-

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(Anonymous)
2005-09-04 10:13 am UTC (link)
hi im sorry but wat happened to the rest of the pictures when Azusa left Ryoukis father? i mean im very grateful for the translations and u puttin up the pics to but when i dld part 47b the page is only up to when Azusa is leaving Ryoukis father what happened to the rest???

and thx agn for the translations ^_^

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shinogu and hastumi
(Anonymous)
2006-05-12 12:05 am UTC (link)
i also think they are a great couple he can proove that he can protect her not kill her.... Even though i would love to see Ryoki redeam himself by admitting he really is falling head over heels in love in with Hastumi.

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THESE ARE SO COOL!
[info]nibzo
2006-01-02 03:55 am UTC (link)
I love Hot Gimmick! Thank you so much for posting these translations! I'll read the others you posted too! I don't like how Hatsumi left Ryoki in vol. 10. I am a Ryoki/Hatsumi fan! Well, again, thanks for the translations!

-Nibzo

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A Question of Love...
[info]amberyl_chan
2006-01-10 06:24 am UTC (link)
I am a big Hot Gimmick fan. I've read through books 1 through 10 twice now as i wait for the last two books to come in the mail straight from Japan (untranslated) since they're not out here in the USA yet. I plan to look at the pictures as i read the translations (thanks to this heavenly site). But i just couldn't help from sneaking a peak at the chapter 47 translation. I can't wait to see Hatsumi's expression when Shinogu asks her to se him as a man!
First off i have to say that i am totally rooting for Shinogu and Hatsumi. There was a time when i was rooting for Ryoki. He does love her in his own way. And they definatly have the chemistry going for them. But true love is loving someone for who they are. And he fails to see Hatsumi for who she really is, time and time again. He is selfish and mean. And he doesn't deserve her as of this current time. Perhaps if he grows up a little and realizes what a wonderful person Hatsumi really is, then maybe they could work as a couple.
As far as Subaru and Akane, i did not see this twist coming. But things now seem to be leaning in the direction of her hurting the poor guy. But honestly, she is only 14 and a total playgirl, so i would be surprised if she doesn't hurt him. Still that really sucks for Subie.
As far as a question of who loves Hatsumi the most, it would have to be Shinogu, no question. Love is self-sacrificing. Azusa may love her, but not enough to stop himself from treating her badly. And Ryoki has not yet developed the selfless love of which Shinogu feels for Hatsumi.

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(Anonymous)
2006-06-24 02:05 am UTC (link)
Wow, shinogu finally has the gutts to tell hatsumi that he wants her. even though i do like shinogu and think both of them would end up together, i still believe hatsumi is destined to be with ryoki. doesn't the heroine always end up with her first love? anyway, i just feel that shinogu is best to be her brother. i feel sorry for hatsumi, even though its great to have 3 guys liking her, its hard to make a choice when they're all so close to her. what is there for a girl to do? T__T the ending result better be good!

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Holy Shizz
(Anonymous)
2009-07-04 09:24 am UTC (link)
Azusa should be with Hatsumi all the way! Ryoki is so damn annoying! But Shinogu?! I guessed that he liked her but c'mon man! Dammit...Poor Hatsumi,END UP WITH AZUSA ALREADY!

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