oceansportrait ([info]oceansportrait) wrote in [info]hot_gimmick,
@ 2005-01-31 18:21:00
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Hot Gimmick Chapter 48 Translation
Since no one's posted the translation for Chapter 48, (other than a summary, which the girl did a great job on XD) so I thought I'd write up a translation for it (since the mangaka has been drawing bigger pictures with less words it's much faster to translate :D) Just in case people don't want to be spoiled of Chapter 48 if they want to hold back until the volume is released, I put it behind a link. Enjoy!

Legend:
//-action words
()-thoughts
[]-translator's notes

Page Cover:
I love my brother---
but will these feelings change to love? [love as in the real thing, not the sibling bonding XD]

Page 1:
Shinogu: Would it be possible for you to look at me as a man?

Page 2:
Shinogu: There's something I have to apologize to you about.
Shinogu: ..Up until now,
Shinogu: I've never thought of you once as a sister.

Page 3:
Shinogu: For a long time
Shinogu: I thought
Shinogu: ...how good it would be if you were a girl that only I treasured.
Shinogu: If it were me,
Shinogu: I would treasure you more than anything.

Page 4:
//dokin dokinn// [hatsumi's heart beating]
Hatsumi: I..f..you say things...like that...all of a sudden
Hatsumi: it's a problem.
Shinogu: I..I'm..
Shinogu: I'm sorry. It would be, wouldn't it?
Shinogu: I'm sorry, it's just I got a little carried away
//biku// [hatsumi tensing and backing away from shinogu]
Hatsumi: Ah..

Page 5:
Shinogu: It's okay Hatsumi
Shinogu: I'm sorry I surprised you
Shinogu: It's all right if this is taken in slowly
Shingou: It's not like I wanted something or other to happen now so..
Shinogu: It's okay.
Shinogu: Okay? More importantly, let's go and get the supplies for dinner.
Shinogu: Hatsumi, you come too.
Hatsumi: Yeah..
Hatsumi: (No)

Page 6:
Hatsumi: (If I become too conscious of this, Onii-chan [Shinogu] will be worried. I know that..even though I know that..)
Hatsumi: (But)
Azusa (Shinogu-san loves you as a woman)
Hatsumi:(Now, it's truly...with this...)

Page 7:
Hatsumi: (Onii-chan really did stop being "Onii-chan")
Hatsumi: T..that's...
Hatsumi: a problem...
Hatsumi: (I really don't know what to do anymore)

Page 8:
Akane: Heyy Subaru-senpai why are you walking so far away from me
Subaru: No..but because, see, it's no good
Subaru: If rumours spread, it'll be a chore so---
Akane: What is that---
Woman: Then is it true she will be staying for a while at her parents' home?
Woman #2: That's right. I wonder if anything happened---
Akane: What...what are all those people doing over there...
Subaru: Ah...
Akane: Is that Ryoki's..?!

Page 9:
Ryoki's Mother: Goodbye
Akane: Then that talk before was about Tachibana-san?!
Akane: Then she'll be gone from this place? Lucky!!
Subaru: Akane-san, don't say things like that---
Father: Subaru's right
//gonn// [hits Akane lightly on the head ^^]
Akane: Dad!
Subaru: G-good afternoon
Akane: But it'll be so nice without her around
Akane: It was that woman's fault that Hatsumi broke up [with Ryoki]
Akane: She's even depressed enough that she's staying at Shinogu's house. Poor Hatsumi---

Page 10:
Father: ...with Shinogu....
Father: Hatsumi....
Akane: Eh? What? Did something happen?
Father: ...No---
Father: Let's talk this over slowly later, let's go home.
Akane: Subaru-senpai, see you later

Page 11:
//pinnn ponnn// [ringing door bell]
[the kanji sign on the wall says Tachibana--meaning he's ringing the doorbell to Ryoki's family's apartment]
//shiinnn// [silence]
Subaru: (one more time)
//pinnn ponnn//
Subaru: (Ryo-kun..I wonder if he's all right...is he not here?...)

Page 12:
Shinogu: Hatsumi, is there something you want to eat for dinner?
Shinogu: Last night there were hardly any vegetables for dinner so
Shinogu: tonight we'll properly have--
Hatsumi: No thanks
Hatsumi: I'm not feeling very hungry
Shinogu: Don't...saying things like that, come on.
Hatsumi: A rice ball or something like that will be fine. I'll go buy it on my own.
Hatsumi: (Why)
Hatsumi: (Do I have to feel so nervous?!)

Page 13:
Hatsumi: (Idiot) [she's calling Shinogu this ^^]
Hatsumi: (After saying things like that)
Hatsumi: (How can he act so normal?)
Hatsumi: (He knows how I'm upset as it is)
Hatsumi: (so why does he abruptly)
Hatsumi: (say something liket hat?)
//chira// [hatsumi briefly glancing over at Shinogu]

Page 14:
Shinogu: I'm making hot cocoa right now, so wait a while.
Shinogu: It's the one that you really liked yesterday--
Hatsumi: No thanks
Hatsumi: I don't want any
Hatsumi: I'm going to go and clean the bathtub [people go clean the tub when they're upset? XD]
Hatsumi: I'll be fine by myself.
//batan// [door closing]
[Hatsumi's having a flashback of what Shinogu told her: "I've never thought of you once as a sister"]

Page 15:
Hatsumi: (This is weird)
Hatsumi: (I love my brother...he's my brother...I don't want to be conscious of him like this)
//knock knock//
Shinogu: ...Hatsumi?
Shinogu: I got an urgent call. I'll have to leave right now.

Page 16:
Shinogu: Depending on the situation it might wind up being really late
Shinogu: I think that maybe I might end up spending the night over there
Shinogu: If that happens, make sure to lock up and go to sleep ahead of me.
//gatcha// [door opening]
Hatsumi: Ah..
Hatsumi: Um...is it your part time job..?
Shinogu: Yeah, the convenience store in front of the train station.
Shinogu: It seems like they suddenly ran short of workers

Page 17:
Shinogu: I'm sorry I have to suddenly leave you here by yourself
Hatsumi: It's...okay...please be careful.
//batann// [door closing]
//gatcha gatcha// [door locking]
//ka ka ka// [fading footsteps]

Page 18:
Hatsumi: (To think I'm so relieved)
Hatsumi: (that I don't have to be alone with my brother)
Hatsumi: (This definitely isn't good)
Hatsumi: (I can't go on relying on him so much)
Hatsumi: (but..I don't want to go back to the apartment)
Hatsumi: (What should I do...)

Page 19:
Hatsumi: (To me, my brother is my brother and)
Hatsumi: (all I wanted was for him to stay my brother)
Hatsumi: (That was all it was supposed to be..)
Hatsumi: (That was all...)

Page 20:
Hatsumi: (Why do I feel suffocated with my heart beating?) [doki doki ^^]
//haa// [him sighing ^^]

Page 21:
Shinogu: ...I'm the worst...
//pin ponn/ [door bell ringing]
Hatsumi: Onii-chan?
Kazama: What? Narita isn't here? [referring to Shinogu]
//gatcha// [door opening]
Hatsumi: Kazama-san!

Page 22:
Hatsumi: I'll be staying here while you're away, I'm sorry for the bother
Kazama: No no no
Kazama: I just came back here to get something I forgot
Kazama: I'll be leaving right away so just relax. So, where's Narita?
Hatsumi: He..had to go to his part time job at the convenience store because they suddenly ran short of people
Kazama: Eh?
Kazama: What's that? Right now he doesn't have any convenience store jobs
Hatsumi: Eh...
Hatsumi: B-but...
Hatsumi: He said that maybe he'll stay over there...
Kazama: What?! What is that?!
Kazama: There's just no way. There's no way he'll leave you here by yourself.
Hatsumi: Ah...

Page 23:
Hatsumi: Could it be...that maybe...
Hatsumi: he was worried about me...
Hatsumi: Onii-chan---
Hatsumi: What should I do, I--
Hatsumi: I have to go find him
Kazama: Hey
Kazama: Wait a sec, you don't know the roads around here do you?
Kazama: Did something happen with Narita?

Page 24:
Kazama: Sorry
Kazama: I know I'm just butting in but I heard the circumstances from
Kazama: Akane and a little from Narita himself
Kazama: Looking at him I thought,
Kazama: is this what it means to "love" someone
Kazama: because if he cuts his ties with your family, he really will be alone
Kazama: even then he chose that because he loves you

Page 25:
Hatsumi: ..a..lone..?
Kazama: The parents who he's related to are gone, and he said his relatives were gone too
Kazama: so that's what it would come down to, wouldn't it?
Kazama: ..hold on. Don't you know? Hasn't he told you this?
Kazama: I'm sorry! I didn't mean to say anything that's not my business
Kazama: Sorry! I really am! Sorry!

Page 26:
Hatsumi: I'm going to go
Hatsumi: search for my brother.
Kazama: Wait a..sec...
Kazama: maybe...
Kazama: he might be close by.
Kazama: A place where he can protect you.

Page 27:
Kazama: He probably thought
Kazama: if it's here, it's close enough so he can quickly go if something happens

Page 28:
//knock knock//
Shinogu: H..Hatsumi?!
Shinogu: I..I was trying to get to my part time job and I..
//gatcha// [door opening]
Shinogu: Sorry, I--
Shinogu: I have to go right away--

Page 29:
//doki//
Hatsumi: It's cold..
Hatsumi: It was cold in there wasn't it?
Hatsumi: I'm sorry
Hatsumi: I'm so sorry
Hatsumi: I was scared because it seemed as if you were becoming another person
Hatsumi: but you see

Page 30:
Hatsumi: More than you becoming another person.
Hatsumi: I hate the thought of you being gone
Shinogu: ...Can I hug you...? [I'm pretty sure this is Shinogu saying this since in the next page he's the one that hugs her and not the other way around, I guess we'll only be sure once we get the next chapter ^^]

Page 31:
Hatsumi: (because I felt like I had to warm him up)



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OMG~
[info]littlemelgirl
2005-02-01 02:28 am UTC (link)
I just skimmed through this and I haven't read the stuff from earlier. Ryoki and Hatsumi broke up? *cries* ;_;

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OMG!
(Anonymous)
2005-02-01 03:31 am UTC (link)
Thanxs so much. *still cant log in darnit!* but u know how subaru said or thought to him self that Ryoki not be home well i became really good at predictiong stuff like this so if a say whats gonna happen next can u tell me if im right!? is Ryoki gonna show up when Hatsumi and Shinogu *gags* are hugging like you know sense he loves her and all still and Ryoki Doesn't give up eaisly!? if so O NO POOR RYOKI-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me if im right *if u no i mean please and thankyou*!

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[info]makotos
2005-02-01 03:39 am UTC (link)
thanx again for another awesome transaltion. ah now I sorta feel bad for Shinogu but not really..I like Hatsumi and Ryouki better

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OMG NOOOOO! o(>_<)o~!!
[info]mtsu
2005-02-01 04:01 am UTC (link)
THEY CAN'T BREAK UP! it just can't happen. this is upsetting me more than it should. it feels like my OWN boyfriend just dumped me or something! how can miki aihara do this!! i'm going to go sob my heart out now...

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[info]ladysilvermoon
2005-02-01 04:05 am UTC (link)
Ooooh- we all know they'll get back together! *laughs*

But...But...I alone...long for love between Shinogu and Hatsumi. SHINOGU. He's like the nicest guy on the planet. He NEEDS someone. But, it makes sense that she'd still want to think of him as her brother because... you can't just STOP. Like, it would totally creep me out if my brother told me that stuff. YUCK.

THANK YOU for the translation! I bow down to you and wish to learn from you

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(Anonymous)
2005-07-20 12:40 am UTC (link)
but they aren't really related, he was just takin into care by hatsumi's parents

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(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 10:58 pm UTC (link)
>.< Not her real brother o_o; >>;;

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[info]crimsay
2005-02-01 04:23 am UTC (link)
You put onee-chan, but isn't it onii-chan?

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whoops
[info]oceansportrait
2005-02-01 04:55 am UTC (link)
Sorry XD I always get those too mixed up because if you pronounce Onee-chan like "Oh-neeee-chan" (stretch out the eee and pronounce it as "e")(in hiragana) then it's the same thing ^^ But thanks for letting me know, I'll try to fix it (if I remember how, XD I'm still new to this LJ stuff ^^)

The anonymous person, sorry I have no idea what happens in the next chapter either! (but believe me, if I knew, I would be posting my reactions in this HG LJ group XD) But if HG follows the normal shoujo-pattern then it does make sense to say Ryoki will probably show up while they're hugging (people coming into the picture at the most inconvenient moments seem to be frequent in shoujo manga, especially when a love triangle is involved XD)

And you're welcome to all the people who said thanks XD It's the least I could do when people are nice enough to post new HG scans XD

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Re: whoops
(Anonymous)
2005-02-01 11:42 am UTC (link)
Thanx and srry i have to be anonymous b/c trust me im trying but it dosent want to work! but thanxs and i just wanted to know and all ^_^!

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many thankies!!!
[info]stingiz
2005-02-01 05:46 pm UTC (link)
When i got the chappie 48.. I was like what are they talking about.. now i know..
Thank you...

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(Anonymous)
2005-02-01 06:02 pm UTC (link)
Thank you sooooooooooooo much for translating this!!! I guess I'm one of the few who really want shinogu and hatsumi together (though I'm not sure it's too likely)... thank you again and again!

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me too!
(Anonymous)
2005-08-20 11:00 pm UTC (link)
Thank you sooooooooooooo much for translating this!!! I guess I'm one of the few who really want shinogu and hatsumi together (though I'm not sure it's too likely)... thank you again and again!

Me too!! o_o I argee with you! >.< * a Shinogu x Hatsumi fan 4 life* o.o

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Re: me too!
(Anonymous)
2007-10-31 07:13 pm UTC (link)
Me too :DD

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[info]jubileerain
2005-02-01 08:08 pm UTC (link)
"[love as in the real thing, not the sibling bonding XD]"

LOL haha That made me laugh. Good translation!

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:D
[info]oceansportrait
2005-02-01 11:00 pm UTC (link)
Blame the language itself for me having to clear that up XD "daisuki" can mean "like very much" or "love" and siblings usually love each other (in a sibling way of course XD), but "koi" means love as well but in a different way and it just got way too confusing XD

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[info]deecaffeinated
2005-02-01 08:55 pm UTC (link)
yeah, no, not happy about this (am ryoki x hatsumi fan). but hey, i mean, it's manga, it has to go one for like 300 more years of angst and miscommunications before anybody settles.

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[info]sxylilwitch
2005-02-01 09:02 pm UTC (link)
Shinogu: I've never thought of you once as a sister.

Shinogu: ...how good it would be if you were a girl that only I treasured.

OH MAN...Shinogu's making MY heart throb XD Not the whole, I've never thought of you as a Sister thing...the other one lol.

THANK YOU!

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[info]sakuyaslilbird
2005-02-01 09:42 pm UTC (link)
poor ryoki and hatsumi T0T GET BACK TOGETHER

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[info]baka_ruby
2005-02-06 04:26 pm UTC (link)
<3 My love for Shinogu is getting bigger and bigger!

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[info]melene
2005-02-08 04:21 am UTC (link)
AW. I feel bad for Shinogu, and angry at Hatsumi :/ Thought I guess I can't blame her but..He looks so sad :[ I want them to end up together but it just doesnt seem likely, but now I'm not sure! ahh. Thanks for translating though <333

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(Anonymous)
2005-07-20 12:34 am UTC (link)
poor guy....... i hope they'll end up together at the end of the series, but a gall like that would probably prefer a jerk over a nice and sensitive sweet guy oh well . thanks for translating it

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(Anonymous)
2005-09-10 02:24 am UTC (link)
...I wish hatsumi can stop calling Shinogu "brother".. Somehow, it still sounds wrong.

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[info]melly408
2009-07-02 07:03 am UTC (link)
agreed!!!! D:>

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[info]hpraven89
2005-10-25 07:56 am UTC (link)
OMG!! I love that you are doing translations!! I'm like soo obsessed with Hot Gimmick that I need to read it!! I loved Ryoki and now I love Shinogu!!
I feel soo bad for Hatsumi, she's all confused!!

Thanks for Tranlating.. keep up with the good work!! ~HpRaven89~

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[info]xjazzberryjamx
2006-02-10 05:25 pm UTC (link)
Page 30..

i think its Hatsumi that asks Shinogu if she can hug him becuase in a previous chapter, she was having a flashback to when she was younger and she hugged him to keep him warm.

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hi!!hot gimmick rock!! ^.^]
(Anonymous)
2006-05-09 03:54 pm UTC (link)
i'm really luv shinogu!! he da best in all da guy i dink
ryoky is rially ugly ,en rude 2 hatsumi!!!i rially hate him!!

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Re: hi!!hot gimmick rock!! ^.^]
(Anonymous)
2006-05-09 03:55 pm UTC (link)
hey watcha' want ryoky is da best!!!

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Re: hi!!hot gimmick rock!! ^.^]
(Anonymous)
2009-07-02 06:25 am UTC (link)
agreed!!!!! :D

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Ehh, Ryoki X Hatsumi = NO WAY Dx
(Anonymous)
2007-08-21 12:14 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much for this !
o____o

But for the people who want Hatsumi to be with Ryoki - wtf, are you crazy ?!
He's abusive //mentally & physically.
She's really dumb for falling for him.
He said himself in ..o__<
Chapter 46 I believe.
"If she can't be mine -
She should die."

asdfghjkl;
How can he even think that ?!
PURE EVILL !
The end.

u____u

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Re: Ehh, Ryoki X Hatsumi = NO WAY Dx
[info]melly408
2009-07-02 07:01 am UTC (link)
Hatsumi is sooo selfish she should have chosen Shinogu, the ending killed the who series for me the whole thing would have been better if she choose the right guy (Shinogu) >.> and theres too many unexplained details it shouldn't have ended with so many things left unsaid -.-*

oh well (sigh) it was a good manga overall i suppose ;3

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