| oceansportrait ( @ 2005-10-04 13:01:00 |
Hot Gimmick Chapter 42
Since some people seemed to be looking for Chapter 42 translations of Hot Gimmick, I'll re-post my translations that I did a while ago (since I can't find the post in the archive ^^) Behind a link to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!
Chapter 42:
Page 1:
//biiii// [some kind of timer going off?]
Man: All right, stop.
Man: Please close your exam booklets and exit the room—
Page 2:
Man: Make sure to check individually how tomorrow’s schedule will be split.
Man: Do not be late.
Boy: Ah—damn. Problem six’s answer was “ka”—[I’m guessing in Japan they have a different multiple choice system than here so instead of “a, b, c, d” being the possibilities they’re hiragana choices ^^]
Boy #2: Are you serious?! I put “eh”—
Boy #3: Checking over your own marks is so scary— [they’re basically checking back to their textbooks to see if what they wrote down on the exam was the right answer. ^^]
Boy: In that department, the regulars of the nation’s top five have it easy—
Boy: Look over there. Checking mail with his free time?
Boy #2: …no…it’s more like…
Boy #3: Doesn’t he seem
Boy #3: really pissed off to you?
//doro doro doro// [personally I’ve never seen this sfx before. Usually “doro” means “mud” and “doro doro” is mud as well XD But it’s clear to see he’s not very happy right now ^^]
Page 3:
Ryoki: (No phone calls during the exam…)
Ryoki: (That woman~~)
Ryoki: (Sheesh. I’m not going to let her get off easily for this.)
//gatan// [abruptly gets up]
Ryoki: (She left a message yesterday so)
Ryoki: (I went through ALL THAT TROUBLE to phone her back.)
Ryoki: (And she won’t even reply!)
Ryoki: (She pisses me off. She really pisses me off.)
Ryoki: (Not to mention in the morning I had to walk fourteen floors worth of stairs because they were doing that elevator check.)
[in the background it says “Who is the guy that broke the elevator?!” XD]
Ruri: Tachibana Ryoki!
Page 4:
Ruri: I wouldn’t mind
Ruri: letting you know my mail ad.
Ryoki: …what?
Ruri: Your marks.
Ruri: Once you check over what you got on the exam, let me know right away. It’s a contest.
//fuufuun// [there really isn’t an English equivalent of it, it’s more like a “high and mighty” half-laugh ^^]
[beside Ryoki it says “what a bother” XD]
Ruri: But of course, I—
Ruri: Wait a mome—are you listening?!
//kiii// [angry XD]
Ruri: Oh I see. You don’t have much confidence in it so that must mean you didn’t do very well—
Ryoki: I’ve never done anything like that.
Page 5:
Ryoki: I never wrote any wrong answers
Ryoki: so there’s no point in checking to make sure I was right.
Ruri: Wha—
//doki// [heart beat]
Ruri: What are you saying?!
Ruri: Are you just putting up a front?! Pretending to be cool?!
Ruri: Wait! My mail add!
Ryoki: (Forget about it. On the other hand, that Narita~~)
Ryoki: (I’m not going to let her get off easily—that stupid woman—)
Ryoki: (I guess I have no choice. I’ll make a special exception and)
Ryoki: (call her one last time.)
//pi pi pi// [pressing cell buttons]
Page 6:
TM: Ryoki-san.
Ryoki: Mother…
TM: What wonderful timing.
TM: I’ve come to pick you up. Please get in.
Ryoki: …pick me up…?
Ryoki: Did something happen? You didn’t mention anything this morning.
//uu// [hesitation]
TM: I came to pick you up on top of going shopping. Oh?
TM: You were together with Ruri-san, I see!
Ryoki: Well we weren’t really toge—
Ruri: Yes, that’s right. Hello, Tachibana-san.
TM: You two get along so well. I’m pleased.
TM: Why don’t you get in the car as well? We’ll give you a ride home.
//gennari// [disappointed]
Page 7:
[no dialogue, just pictures ^^]
Page 8:
//fuu// [a little laugh ^^]
Ryoki: I’m sorry, mother.
Ryoki: I was planning on staying here a little longer to study so please go ahead of me.
Ryoki: I just came outside to get something to drink.
TM: ..I-is that so..? But I can’t let you go home by yourself tonig—
TM: No…err, I mean…
Ryoki: I’m not alone.
Ryoki: Why don’t we
Ryoki: check our marks for the exam, Saionji-san?
Ruri: Eh…eh?!
Ruri: B-but you were...saying—
TM: Oh, then that should be fine. I understand—
Ryoki: Yes, I’m sorry.
Page 9:
Hatsumi: (He went back inside…)
Hatsumi: (Of…course he would…)
Hatsumi: (I knew I shouldn’t bother him because he’s taking the exam…)
Hatsumi: (I just thought)
Hatsumi: (I wouldn’t be able to see him anymore)
Hatsumi: (so I…)
Hatsumi: (but to think Tachibana-san would come here of all places…)
Page 10:
//gotsu// [hits her on the head XD]
Hatsumi: T-tachibana-kun?!
Ryoki: I could see you from the car mirror, you idiot!
Ryoki: You weren’t waiting here all this time to try to scare me, were you?
Hatsumi: N-no!
Hatsumi: I was waiting for you at the entrance but then Tachibana-san came—
Ryoki: You didn’t have to hide.
Ryoki: I already spilled about us going out.
Hatsumi: No.
Hatsumi: It won’t be good if she finds out…
Hatsumi: but…
Hatsumi: um…
Page 11:
Hatsumi: I…
Hatsumi: still wanted to see you…
Ryoki: (What is this?!)
Ryoki: (“That” Narita is)
Ryoki: (acting more like a girlfriend!) [the actual term he used was “amaeteru”. In the past he kept on getting mad at Hatsumi because whenever she was having problems she would go to other people [namely Shinogu XD] instead of coming to him with the problem. With this, she showed she is becoming more open towards him and acting more like a girlfriend would ^^]
[the box above his head is a check list that goes:
The Reasons I Can Imagine:
1) She’s fixed on thoughts about me.
2) She’s full of thoughts about me.
3) She was lonely because she couldn’t see me.
4) Something happened at her house
…and that about covers it.]
[then the box below it says “Loading” and inside the oval button it says “Stop”]
[the first three points of the checklist are checked off ^^]
//gashi// [grabs her hand]
Page 12:
Ryoki: Okay, Narita! We’re going!
Ryoki: (To do it!)
Hatsumi: Ah, wa-wait Tachibana-kun!
Hatsumi: But, just now, she went in!
Hatsumi: You’re going to study with Saionji-san, aren’t you?
Hatsumi: Isn’t she waiting for you?
Ryoki: Obviously, that was an excuse to tell my mother.
[the sign pointing to him reads “Devil, Damn it” XD]
Ryoki: She’ll probably give up and go home after an hour.
[underneath Ryoki’s words Hatsumi’s saying “I’m sorry Saionji-san”]
[sign says: Study Room]
Ruri: Fu… [starting to laugh]
Ruri: So you’ve fi—nally given into my charms
Ruri: Tachibana Ryoki!
Ruri: To give an excuse like “let’s go over our marks together”.
[everything in the background is her laughing ^^]
Page 13:
Ruri: (You’re definitely)
Ruri: (the man who’s meant to be with me.)
//pururur// [phone going off]
//pi// [presses button]
Shinogu: Yes, hello.
Azusa: Forget hello!
Azusa: What was that text message about! (anger)
[in the back Kazama’s saying “All right! Hit him Kanamoto!”]
Page 14:
Azusa: “Take care of Hatsumi for me”?
Azusa: You didn’t write much so I couldn’t tell but you decided to separate from the family didn’t you?
Azusa: Then the cards are dealt in your favor!
Azusa: Hatsumi finally knows you love her!
Shinogu: My feelings…
Shinogu: are only weights for Hatsumi.
Azusa: But Shinogu-san, that—
Shinogu: I was never planning on telling her.
Page 15:
Shinogu: Telling her
Shinogu: would only hurt her.
Shinogu: --That’s why once I separate from the family, I won’t see her anymore. I’ll become just another stranger again.
Shinogu: I don’t want to hurt her more than I already have.
Azusa: Shinogu-san!
Shinogu: I’m planning on separating after we’re done investigating everything,
Shinogu: so don’t worry Azusa.
Azusa: Right now, I’m not talking about—
Shinogu: I’ll talk to you later—
//pi// [presses button]
Page 16:
Kazama: Err—sorry—
Kazama: I overheard your conversation just now,
Kazama: but would it be better if I pretended I never heard anything?
Shinogu: You don’t have to do that.
Shinogu: But it’s something that’s over already, so forget about it.
[small words beside Kazama says “That’s too much to ask for” XD]
Kazama: To tell you the truth, I have a lot of things I want to ask.
Kazama: but I’ll hold those all in and instead,
Kazama: could I make one comment?
Kazama: I wonder if that’s really for the best.
Page 17:
Kazama: I have a feeling that just because
Kazama: you distance yourself from her, it won’t make her feel any better.
Hatsumi: (I have to tell him.)
Page 18:
Hatsumi: (I have to tell him I only came to see him for a little while, and I have somewhere to go after this.)
Hatsumi: (I have to tell him right away—)
Hatsumi: (I was planning on going there first,)
Hatsumi: (so why did come here before?)
Hatsumi: (Arrghh—I can’t believe myself!!)
Ryoki: …Okay, I got it.
Hatsumi: Why do you keep on looking around?
Ryoki: …Narita.
Ryoki: Looking around at the couples around us, don’t you notice anything?
Hatsumi: eh?
Page 19:
Hatsumi: Ehh~~?
Hatsumi: They…look very…happy…?
Ryoki: No! Look closely at their hands!
Hatsumi: (Their hands—)
Hatsumi: (There are some who are holding hands—)
Hatsumi: (and some who aren’t—)
Ryoki: And our hands.
Ryoki: Look!
Hatsumi: Um…I believe…we’re holding hands…very much like…the others… [here she’s saying this sentence in a very polite manner and this is why I decided to use the “I believe” and the “very much” XD]
Ryoki: Idiot! The way we’re holding hands is different. The way we hold hands!!
//gyaa// [drawing back in fear XD]
Page 20:
Ryoki: There’s something completely different about it.
[the sign at the top right says “The Couple Meter: 45%” then the sign below it says “The Couple Meter: 128%”]
Ryoki: When the hands are threaded together, the bond is stronger!
Ryoki: See?
Page 21:
Hatsumi: …no…this is…embarrassing…
Ryoki: Okay! This is good.
Ryoki: You’ve become more mine.
Page 22:
Ryoki: What?!
Ryoki: …Hey.
Ryoki: I don’t think this is the case—but do you hate it enough to cry over it?
[words at the back of Ryoki says “But no, I won’t let go” XD]
Hatsumi: B-but…
Hatsumi: B-but…Tachibana-kun…
Hatsumi: If…I become yours…
Hatsumi: my family will be destroyed.
Page 23:
Hatsumi: I…don’t want that to happen…
Hatsumi: I don’t want my family to be destroyed, but…
Hatsumi: I still came to see you.
Hatsumi: I was on my way to bring Onii-chan back.
Hatsumi: If I don’t go, I’ll be late…
Ryoki: …bring back…?
Hatsumi: This afternoon, Tachibana-san came.
[remembers back to what TM said:
TM: To hide him being adopted like this…
TM: I can’t help but be suspicious there might be darker circumstances linked to this…
TM: For him to have relations with such a family’s daughter is ridiculous!]
Page 24:
[remembers back to what Shinogu said:
Shinogu: I’ll separate from the Narita family.
Shinogu: If I go,
Shinogu: there won’t be any problems, would there? Tachibana-san?]
Hatsumi: Because of me…
Hatsumi: Because I’m going out with you…
Hatsumi: Onii-chan won’t be a part of my family anymore…
Hatsumi: I don’t want him to separate from my family…
//giri// [rough squeeze]
Hatsumi: That’s why I’m going to bring him back…
Hatsumi: I have to explain about Onii-cha—
Hatsumi: tsuu! [cringing]
Page 25:
Hatsumi: I-It hurts…Tachibana-kun!
Hatsumi: Sorry, um, let me go…if I don’t go now the train—
Ryoki: No.
Hatsumi: Ah…
Ryoki: What did you think I would do
Ryoki: when I heard that?
Ryoki: Did you think I’d go complain to my mother
Ryoki: and protect you and your family from her?
Hatsumi: …O-ow…I didn—
Page 26:
Ryoki: Your brother himself is saying he’ll leave, isn’t he? Then what’s the problem?
Ryoki: He’s a stranger in the first place
Ryoki: so I don’t understand why you’re so against it.
Ryoki: Moreover, isn’t it a good thing because one person gone from your house means you get to have your own room?
//kaa// [blush]
//guii// [pull back]
Ryoki: I told you I’m not letting go!
Ryoki: Your family-games are a waste of time.
Ryoki: I don’t get it at all.
Page 27:
Hatsumi: You wouldn’t…
Hatsumi: understand…
Hatsumi: We were always together…
Hatsumi: He always stood up for me…
Hatsumi: every time…
Hatsumi: and he was kinder to me than anybody…
Hatsumi: He’ll always—always—be an important part of my family…
Ryoki: What I want to know is
Ryoki: not your family-pride, but
Page 28:
Ryoki: if you like your brother as a man!
Hatsumi: Ah…
Hatsumi: I…
Hatsumi: couldn’t possib—
Page 29:
Ryoki: Because he likes you as a woman, doesn’t he?
Ryoki: Asahi said it a while back.
Hatsumi: Ah…
Ryoki: …I see…
Ryoki: So you’re finally going to accept that? Did something happen?
Ryoki: What about it!
Hatsumi: I told you, he’s my brother!
Page 30:
Ryoki: Then choose. Me or your brother.
Ryoki: If you’re going to choose me, swear you’ll never worry about your brother again!
Ryoki: If you do that, I’ll make a special exception and believe what you say.
Ryoki: --But if you choose…
Ryoki: …your brother…
Page 31:
Ryoki: …I’ll let go of your hand…right now…
Ryoki: You can go to his place or wherever.
Ryoki: I don’t need you anymore!
Hatsumi: --Tachibana-kun…
Ryoki: Choose!
Ryoki: I’m not going to accept you choosing both.
Page 32:
Ryoki: Choose. Right here, right now.
Ryoki: Me,
Ryoki: or your brother.
Since some people seemed to be looking for Chapter 42 translations of Hot Gimmick, I'll re-post my translations that I did a while ago (since I can't find the post in the archive ^^) Behind a link to avoid spoilers. Enjoy!
Chapter 42:
Page 1:
//biiii// [some kind of timer going off?]
Man: All right, stop.
Man: Please close your exam booklets and exit the room—
Page 2:
Man: Make sure to check individually how tomorrow’s schedule will be split.
Man: Do not be late.
Boy: Ah—damn. Problem six’s answer was “ka”—[I’m guessing in Japan they have a different multiple choice system than here so instead of “a, b, c, d” being the possibilities they’re hiragana choices ^^]
Boy #2: Are you serious?! I put “eh”—
Boy #3: Checking over your own marks is so scary— [they’re basically checking back to their textbooks to see if what they wrote down on the exam was the right answer. ^^]
Boy: In that department, the regulars of the nation’s top five have it easy—
Boy: Look over there. Checking mail with his free time?
Boy #2: …no…it’s more like…
Boy #3: Doesn’t he seem
Boy #3: really pissed off to you?
//doro doro doro// [personally I’ve never seen this sfx before. Usually “doro” means “mud” and “doro doro” is mud as well XD But it’s clear to see he’s not very happy right now ^^]
Page 3:
Ryoki: (No phone calls during the exam…)
Ryoki: (That woman~~)
Ryoki: (Sheesh. I’m not going to let her get off easily for this.)
//gatan// [abruptly gets up]
Ryoki: (She left a message yesterday so)
Ryoki: (I went through ALL THAT TROUBLE to phone her back.)
Ryoki: (And she won’t even reply!)
Ryoki: (She pisses me off. She really pisses me off.)
Ryoki: (Not to mention in the morning I had to walk fourteen floors worth of stairs because they were doing that elevator check.)
[in the background it says “Who is the guy that broke the elevator?!” XD]
Ruri: Tachibana Ryoki!
Page 4:
Ruri: I wouldn’t mind
Ruri: letting you know my mail ad.
Ryoki: …what?
Ruri: Your marks.
Ruri: Once you check over what you got on the exam, let me know right away. It’s a contest.
//fuufuun// [there really isn’t an English equivalent of it, it’s more like a “high and mighty” half-laugh ^^]
[beside Ryoki it says “what a bother” XD]
Ruri: But of course, I—
Ruri: Wait a mome—are you listening?!
//kiii// [angry XD]
Ruri: Oh I see. You don’t have much confidence in it so that must mean you didn’t do very well—
Ryoki: I’ve never done anything like that.
Page 5:
Ryoki: I never wrote any wrong answers
Ryoki: so there’s no point in checking to make sure I was right.
Ruri: Wha—
//doki// [heart beat]
Ruri: What are you saying?!
Ruri: Are you just putting up a front?! Pretending to be cool?!
Ruri: Wait! My mail add!
Ryoki: (Forget about it. On the other hand, that Narita~~)
Ryoki: (I’m not going to let her get off easily—that stupid woman—)
Ryoki: (I guess I have no choice. I’ll make a special exception and)
Ryoki: (call her one last time.)
//pi pi pi// [pressing cell buttons]
Page 6:
TM: Ryoki-san.
Ryoki: Mother…
TM: What wonderful timing.
TM: I’ve come to pick you up. Please get in.
Ryoki: …pick me up…?
Ryoki: Did something happen? You didn’t mention anything this morning.
//uu// [hesitation]
TM: I came to pick you up on top of going shopping. Oh?
TM: You were together with Ruri-san, I see!
Ryoki: Well we weren’t really toge—
Ruri: Yes, that’s right. Hello, Tachibana-san.
TM: You two get along so well. I’m pleased.
TM: Why don’t you get in the car as well? We’ll give you a ride home.
//gennari// [disappointed]
Page 7:
[no dialogue, just pictures ^^]
Page 8:
//fuu// [a little laugh ^^]
Ryoki: I’m sorry, mother.
Ryoki: I was planning on staying here a little longer to study so please go ahead of me.
Ryoki: I just came outside to get something to drink.
TM: ..I-is that so..? But I can’t let you go home by yourself tonig—
TM: No…err, I mean…
Ryoki: I’m not alone.
Ryoki: Why don’t we
Ryoki: check our marks for the exam, Saionji-san?
Ruri: Eh…eh?!
Ruri: B-but you were...saying—
TM: Oh, then that should be fine. I understand—
Ryoki: Yes, I’m sorry.
Page 9:
Hatsumi: (He went back inside…)
Hatsumi: (Of…course he would…)
Hatsumi: (I knew I shouldn’t bother him because he’s taking the exam…)
Hatsumi: (I just thought)
Hatsumi: (I wouldn’t be able to see him anymore)
Hatsumi: (so I…)
Hatsumi: (but to think Tachibana-san would come here of all places…)
Page 10:
//gotsu// [hits her on the head XD]
Hatsumi: T-tachibana-kun?!
Ryoki: I could see you from the car mirror, you idiot!
Ryoki: You weren’t waiting here all this time to try to scare me, were you?
Hatsumi: N-no!
Hatsumi: I was waiting for you at the entrance but then Tachibana-san came—
Ryoki: You didn’t have to hide.
Ryoki: I already spilled about us going out.
Hatsumi: No.
Hatsumi: It won’t be good if she finds out…
Hatsumi: but…
Hatsumi: um…
Page 11:
Hatsumi: I…
Hatsumi: still wanted to see you…
Ryoki: (What is this?!)
Ryoki: (“That” Narita is)
Ryoki: (acting more like a girlfriend!) [the actual term he used was “amaeteru”. In the past he kept on getting mad at Hatsumi because whenever she was having problems she would go to other people [namely Shinogu XD] instead of coming to him with the problem. With this, she showed she is becoming more open towards him and acting more like a girlfriend would ^^]
[the box above his head is a check list that goes:
The Reasons I Can Imagine:
1) She’s fixed on thoughts about me.
2) She’s full of thoughts about me.
3) She was lonely because she couldn’t see me.
4) Something happened at her house
…and that about covers it.]
[then the box below it says “Loading” and inside the oval button it says “Stop”]
[the first three points of the checklist are checked off ^^]
//gashi// [grabs her hand]
Page 12:
Ryoki: Okay, Narita! We’re going!
Ryoki: (To do it!)
Hatsumi: Ah, wa-wait Tachibana-kun!
Hatsumi: But, just now, she went in!
Hatsumi: You’re going to study with Saionji-san, aren’t you?
Hatsumi: Isn’t she waiting for you?
Ryoki: Obviously, that was an excuse to tell my mother.
[the sign pointing to him reads “Devil, Damn it” XD]
Ryoki: She’ll probably give up and go home after an hour.
[underneath Ryoki’s words Hatsumi’s saying “I’m sorry Saionji-san”]
[sign says: Study Room]
Ruri: Fu… [starting to laugh]
Ruri: So you’ve fi—nally given into my charms
Ruri: Tachibana Ryoki!
Ruri: To give an excuse like “let’s go over our marks together”.
[everything in the background is her laughing ^^]
Page 13:
Ruri: (You’re definitely)
Ruri: (the man who’s meant to be with me.)
//pururur// [phone going off]
//pi// [presses button]
Shinogu: Yes, hello.
Azusa: Forget hello!
Azusa: What was that text message about! (anger)
[in the back Kazama’s saying “All right! Hit him Kanamoto!”]
Page 14:
Azusa: “Take care of Hatsumi for me”?
Azusa: You didn’t write much so I couldn’t tell but you decided to separate from the family didn’t you?
Azusa: Then the cards are dealt in your favor!
Azusa: Hatsumi finally knows you love her!
Shinogu: My feelings…
Shinogu: are only weights for Hatsumi.
Azusa: But Shinogu-san, that—
Shinogu: I was never planning on telling her.
Page 15:
Shinogu: Telling her
Shinogu: would only hurt her.
Shinogu: --That’s why once I separate from the family, I won’t see her anymore. I’ll become just another stranger again.
Shinogu: I don’t want to hurt her more than I already have.
Azusa: Shinogu-san!
Shinogu: I’m planning on separating after we’re done investigating everything,
Shinogu: so don’t worry Azusa.
Azusa: Right now, I’m not talking about—
Shinogu: I’ll talk to you later—
//pi// [presses button]
Page 16:
Kazama: Err—sorry—
Kazama: I overheard your conversation just now,
Kazama: but would it be better if I pretended I never heard anything?
Shinogu: You don’t have to do that.
Shinogu: But it’s something that’s over already, so forget about it.
[small words beside Kazama says “That’s too much to ask for” XD]
Kazama: To tell you the truth, I have a lot of things I want to ask.
Kazama: but I’ll hold those all in and instead,
Kazama: could I make one comment?
Kazama: I wonder if that’s really for the best.
Page 17:
Kazama: I have a feeling that just because
Kazama: you distance yourself from her, it won’t make her feel any better.
Hatsumi: (I have to tell him.)
Page 18:
Hatsumi: (I have to tell him I only came to see him for a little while, and I have somewhere to go after this.)
Hatsumi: (I have to tell him right away—)
Hatsumi: (I was planning on going there first,)
Hatsumi: (so why did come here before?)
Hatsumi: (Arrghh—I can’t believe myself!!)
Ryoki: …Okay, I got it.
Hatsumi: Why do you keep on looking around?
Ryoki: …Narita.
Ryoki: Looking around at the couples around us, don’t you notice anything?
Hatsumi: eh?
Page 19:
Hatsumi: Ehh~~?
Hatsumi: They…look very…happy…?
Ryoki: No! Look closely at their hands!
Hatsumi: (Their hands—)
Hatsumi: (There are some who are holding hands—)
Hatsumi: (and some who aren’t—)
Ryoki: And our hands.
Ryoki: Look!
Hatsumi: Um…I believe…we’re holding hands…very much like…the others… [here she’s saying this sentence in a very polite manner and this is why I decided to use the “I believe” and the “very much” XD]
Ryoki: Idiot! The way we’re holding hands is different. The way we hold hands!!
//gyaa// [drawing back in fear XD]
Page 20:
Ryoki: There’s something completely different about it.
[the sign at the top right says “The Couple Meter: 45%” then the sign below it says “The Couple Meter: 128%”]
Ryoki: When the hands are threaded together, the bond is stronger!
Ryoki: See?
Page 21:
Hatsumi: …no…this is…embarrassing…
Ryoki: Okay! This is good.
Ryoki: You’ve become more mine.
Page 22:
Ryoki: What?!
Ryoki: …Hey.
Ryoki: I don’t think this is the case—but do you hate it enough to cry over it?
[words at the back of Ryoki says “But no, I won’t let go” XD]
Hatsumi: B-but…
Hatsumi: B-but…Tachibana-kun…
Hatsumi: If…I become yours…
Hatsumi: my family will be destroyed.
Page 23:
Hatsumi: I…don’t want that to happen…
Hatsumi: I don’t want my family to be destroyed, but…
Hatsumi: I still came to see you.
Hatsumi: I was on my way to bring Onii-chan back.
Hatsumi: If I don’t go, I’ll be late…
Ryoki: …bring back…?
Hatsumi: This afternoon, Tachibana-san came.
[remembers back to what TM said:
TM: To hide him being adopted like this…
TM: I can’t help but be suspicious there might be darker circumstances linked to this…
TM: For him to have relations with such a family’s daughter is ridiculous!]
Page 24:
[remembers back to what Shinogu said:
Shinogu: I’ll separate from the Narita family.
Shinogu: If I go,
Shinogu: there won’t be any problems, would there? Tachibana-san?]
Hatsumi: Because of me…
Hatsumi: Because I’m going out with you…
Hatsumi: Onii-chan won’t be a part of my family anymore…
Hatsumi: I don’t want him to separate from my family…
//giri// [rough squeeze]
Hatsumi: That’s why I’m going to bring him back…
Hatsumi: I have to explain about Onii-cha—
Hatsumi: tsuu! [cringing]
Page 25:
Hatsumi: I-It hurts…Tachibana-kun!
Hatsumi: Sorry, um, let me go…if I don’t go now the train—
Ryoki: No.
Hatsumi: Ah…
Ryoki: What did you think I would do
Ryoki: when I heard that?
Ryoki: Did you think I’d go complain to my mother
Ryoki: and protect you and your family from her?
Hatsumi: …O-ow…I didn—
Page 26:
Ryoki: Your brother himself is saying he’ll leave, isn’t he? Then what’s the problem?
Ryoki: He’s a stranger in the first place
Ryoki: so I don’t understand why you’re so against it.
Ryoki: Moreover, isn’t it a good thing because one person gone from your house means you get to have your own room?
//kaa// [blush]
//guii// [pull back]
Ryoki: I told you I’m not letting go!
Ryoki: Your family-games are a waste of time.
Ryoki: I don’t get it at all.
Page 27:
Hatsumi: You wouldn’t…
Hatsumi: understand…
Hatsumi: We were always together…
Hatsumi: He always stood up for me…
Hatsumi: every time…
Hatsumi: and he was kinder to me than anybody…
Hatsumi: He’ll always—always—be an important part of my family…
Ryoki: What I want to know is
Ryoki: not your family-pride, but
Page 28:
Ryoki: if you like your brother as a man!
Hatsumi: Ah…
Hatsumi: I…
Hatsumi: couldn’t possib—
Page 29:
Ryoki: Because he likes you as a woman, doesn’t he?
Ryoki: Asahi said it a while back.
Hatsumi: Ah…
Ryoki: …I see…
Ryoki: So you’re finally going to accept that? Did something happen?
Ryoki: What about it!
Hatsumi: I told you, he’s my brother!
Page 30:
Ryoki: Then choose. Me or your brother.
Ryoki: If you’re going to choose me, swear you’ll never worry about your brother again!
Ryoki: If you do that, I’ll make a special exception and believe what you say.
Ryoki: --But if you choose…
Ryoki: …your brother…
Page 31:
Ryoki: …I’ll let go of your hand…right now…
Ryoki: You can go to his place or wherever.
Ryoki: I don’t need you anymore!
Hatsumi: --Tachibana-kun…
Ryoki: Choose!
Ryoki: I’m not going to accept you choosing both.
Page 32:
Ryoki: Choose. Right here, right now.
Ryoki: Me,
Ryoki: or your brother.