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26 February 2008 @ 09:30 pm
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because i was asked to...


Title: Journey to a Star
Rating: PG(?)
Pairing: Josh/Metis
Disclaimer: Not Mine.
Author's Notes: I'm Melissa Dominic (once upon a time known as Melissa Malice), nice to meet you.i take constructive criticism well, so, have at it if you so desire.





There was nothing but the yellow of the overhead lights casting shadows over the bleachers and the football field. Nothing but Metis sitting fourth row with his head in his hands, dropletts of rain patterning down on him. Nothing but Josh watching him, crossing the quieted field and climbing the stairs, tracking mud over the silvertoned grates. Nothing but the half-second of breath when Josh stood in front of Metis and just looked down at him. Sweat collected in the corners of his eyes and at both his temples. Salt and rain glistening on his lips. Nothing but them. Just them and finished football practice. Nothing but the evening spreading out in pairs.

“I can’t believe you stayed.”

“You are my ride home.”

Josh smirked, lifting Metis’ chin with his fingertips and meeting his mouth against his. Metis tasted sweet. Just like overchewed bubble gum. He slipped his tongue past Metis’ lips, running over his collection of teeth, back and round again. Pulling away, Josh’s eyes opened. Rainwater on his web of eyelashes tinkered off, falling onto his cheeks.

“I should get you there then.”

But Metis reached up as Josh turned away, fingers gripping his wrist and tugging him down. The bleachers clanging with his sudden weight. Their bodies collided just a bit too hard. Josh and his shoulder fell into Metis’ chest and he laughed, struggling to right himself.

“There’s still time.” Metis grinned, rolling his eyes towards the rain. His hand slid down, fingers curving around Josh’s. They were cold, just at the tips, thumb rubbing into Josh’s palm. Tiny gestures resting on one another’s thighs. Knees thumping together. Metis didn’t seem to mind the smell of pure grass and the dirt under Josh’s fingernails. Just another small delineation of themselves.

“You’re right,” Josh said, “plus, stars.”

With his free hand, he pointed up somewhere past the glare of the overheads. The cloudless sky seemed painted over in dusky purple with a twittering of light shimmering every now and again. They looked like airplanes, but were stuck steady in the sky.

“You’ve got to me kidding me.”

“What?” Josh looked back, nose scrunching up in confusion.

“Stars?” Metis couldn’t hold back a laugh. He shook his head, shaggy wet hair sticking to his cheeks.

“Yeah, well..They’re there, right?” Josh shoved him, but he bounced back just as quick, his eyes squinted shut.

“I didn’t know stupid football players looked at stars!”

“Yeah, well...Sometimes.” Josh’s lips drew in a line. Eyebrows heavy on his face. Everything about him was childlike and caught. He pulled his hand back away from Metis’s and crossed them over his chest, leaning all the way back, bleachers digging into his skin. The rain soaked through where the water hadn’t, chilling him straight to the bone

The line cracked though and Josh broke into a small smile.

“Look at you! You’re just trying to be cute. Thinking this is something I’d like, right?” Metis turned, picking Josh’s hand back up and pulling it into his lap. Grazing each knuckle with his fingertips. Riding a slow line to his wrist and back again. “I can’t believe you. How stereotypical do you think I am?”

“You think they’re nice though, right?”

Yeah, well...” Metis stalled. “I guess.” His mouth twisted and he looked up, catching sight of another glittering twinkle. “I mean, they are...”

“All stereotypes are based in truth, ya know?”

“You’re such a jerk.” But Metis laughed and Josh shook his head.

“Not really Metis, but you knew that already.”

And in the sprawled evening, Josh fell foward, knocking into once again into Metis’ frame. Lips hovering just under his jawline, breathing him in. There was nothing but them. Nothing but the soft smells and the disentegrating rain. Nothing but the bleachers that were cold under their bodies, the lonley football field. Nothing but the yellow lights. Nothing but that moment. Nothing but stars. Nothing but time.
 
 
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Hopeless Circus[info]hopeless_circus on February 27th, 2008 05:33 am (UTC)
Beeoooteefool!
the kid detective: patrick wolf - witw thunder/pressure by[info]tokyoghoststory on February 27th, 2008 05:35 am (UTC)


that means a lot.
Jen: seme find j00[info]jinsunpyo_18 on February 27th, 2008 06:10 am (UTC)
Lovely! Such a suspended moment in time, I love it!
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on February 27th, 2008 06:45 am (UTC)
thank you. ♥
suspended moments are my speciality!
wyvern_elavie: Metis It means You're emo[info]wyvern_elavie on February 27th, 2008 07:21 am (UTC)
oh noes.

i'm getting that feeling again.

that fuzzy little fangasm that's less of a fangasm and more of an "AWWWWOMGTHEY'RESOKYOOOOOOTE"

and my insides just melted.

“You’re such a jerk.” But Metis laughed and Josh shook his head.
“Not really Metis, but you knew that already.”


Absolutely cute.
the kid detective: beauty - bike riding wing shuya style by[info]tokyoghoststory on February 27th, 2008 07:25 am (UTC)
i'm glad! i was really trying to go the cute route!

thanks you for reading!

Edited at 2008-02-27 07:25 am (UTC)
Kayevelyn: hitomi[info]kayevelyn on February 27th, 2008 09:52 am (UTC)
*pokes tooth* Yup definitely got a cavity. Need to brush them again.

Though that kiss was kinda hot >.< I'm such a dork.

Great story I loved it!
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on February 28th, 2008 07:39 am (UTC)
maybe i'll write something sexy next time ;D. i've written angst and cute for 'em. maybe sexy is in order.

thank you!
A Mandas of Ill Repute: Matthew Good || Are I not adorables?[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 5th, 2008 05:18 am (UTC)
And this is why I love this fandom.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on March 5th, 2008 05:19 am (UTC)
that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said ♥

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the kid detective: comics - exteme close up robin by jemppu[info]tokyoghoststory on March 5th, 2008 05:20 am (UTC)
also,

homg matt good.
A Mandas of Ill Repute: Frank Sinatra || I've got the world on a[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 5th, 2008 05:23 am (UTC)
Haha, I was actually not going to use that icon, but I'm like, my Mattie Good needs some love.

He is, and will be, my fav singer. Too bad his show in my area is in an over-21 club ;-;

Also, you're very welcome. I enjoy reading the fic here so much, and this was just so poignant and so... honeysyn.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on March 5th, 2008 05:28 am (UTC)
i don't have a matt good icon, i need one. perferably in the "i hear matt good is an asshole" tee shirt. hahah.

i think he's so rad. i've never seen him, but, i've liked him/his work for a long long time. i even have his 'manifesto book', hahah.

i'm very glad you like my work and i'm really glad it fit the fandom! i'm not a fanfiction writer by any means, i was just asked to write this, and, you know, as a writer, i do the writing thing!

ahhaa

most of my work is like this, so, it makes me glad.
A Mandas of Ill Repute[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 5th, 2008 05:40 am (UTC)
I could make you one! My pics are screaming for an icon to be made, I just have no inspiration, lol.

He is rad, even though I'm a newer fan (thanks to my BF) I have his manifesto in PDF from Wowio, haha.

Yeah, I'm not really a fandom writer either... all my fanfic flounders. But that's ok, because I like where my regular writing is. Although I'm crazy and I joined the art/fic exchange. Haha.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on March 5th, 2008 05:52 am (UTC)
if you made me one, i'd so use it! i've liked him since high school. and since i'm quite a long ways out of high school, that would make a not-new fan. but def not an old one. such a career is lengthy to follow!

what is your regular writing like? i'd be interested in seeing it!
A Mandas of Ill Repute[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 5th, 2008 05:56 am (UTC)
Hmmm... I have it posted on a forum, but it's a school forum. Ooh! I know! I'll post it on my icon journal, [info]anomalous_matls! Whee.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on March 5th, 2008 05:57 am (UTC)
sounds fab!
A Mandas of Ill Repute[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 5th, 2008 06:09 am (UTC)
Done. Also posting a play fragment in a sec, if I can figure out how to get the RTF feature on LJ to work.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on March 5th, 2008 06:11 am (UTC)
excellent! i will go see
A Mandas of Ill Repute[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 5th, 2008 07:05 am (UTC)
PS: I be friendin u. You're cool, and suchnot.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on March 6th, 2008 06:37 am (UTC)
yipee skippe! i read your piece. man, i'm impressed!
A Mandas of Ill Repute: Castlevania || a magician; the antidote[info]kotorjedi_amaya on March 6th, 2008 03:33 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thank you.

It's actually some of the first writing I've done that hasn't sucked
Jenny: Honeydew Syndrome - Metis/Josh[info]jenwryn on August 30th, 2008 12:54 pm (UTC)
This is so cute! And... well, I have this obnoxious habit - I get enjoy recording peoples' stories into fanfiction and, y'know, was wondering if you'd mind me reading this one? It's so sweet and lovely.
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on September 1st, 2008 01:17 am (UTC)
YES! by all means, enjoy yourself and read it. :) as long as you're cool with credit, which i'm sure you are. you can credit me as melissa dominic and link this page or something. and show me when you're done!

i'm very glad you liked it!
Jenny: Music - bands that don't exist[info]jenwryn on September 1st, 2008 01:49 am (UTC)
Hooray! And naturally you'll be credited. Thanks for telling me which name you prefer to have used. And I'll drop you the link when I'm done! *hugs*
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on September 1st, 2008 02:07 am (UTC)
haha excellent :)

i hope you have fun reading it. i always read my work as i write it. haha
Jenny: Honeydew Syndrome - Metis/Josh[info]jenwryn on September 1st, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC)
Helloooo. Here's the podfic: http://community.livejournal.com/jenwryn_fic/35602.html

Well, it will actually have a permanent home at [info]general_jinjur's audiofic archives, but that always takes a little while.

Hope you don't hate it or something! :)

ETA: Here's the "official" link - it makes you the first HoneySyn author over there. ;)
http://jinjurly.com/audio/journey-to-a-star/

Edited at 2008-09-02 12:57 am (UTC)
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on September 3rd, 2008 03:25 am (UTC)
oh WOW you're really fantastic ;O;! this fic started as a tiny favor to nuu, and i'm so glad to see where it ended up *___*. it pleases me! i've really only ever written like.. 3 fanfics in my life.

ps, may i friend you?
Jenny: Honeydew Syndrome - Metis/Josh[info]jenwryn on September 3rd, 2008 09:12 am (UTC)
Hooray, I'm so pleased you liked it! I'm sort of relatively new to doing podfic, so it's always a bit daunting. And up until now I've only done things of my own, or written by people on my f-list.

And sure, feel free to friend me if you'd like! I'll friend you back? :D
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on September 4th, 2008 05:05 am (UTC)
sounds excellent :D
passthebutter: dgm lavi touching allen head[info]passthebutter on September 12th, 2008 08:35 am (UTC)
Oh my god this was a brilliant story, so cute. ♥
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on September 14th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
thank you! thank you so much!
[info]gracespradlin on September 14th, 2008 04:23 am (UTC)
Oh wow. Brilliant. :)
the kid detective[info]tokyoghoststory on September 14th, 2008 04:24 am (UTC)
thank you. ;;. it really means a lot that you've read this