Sinick ([info]sinick) wrote in [info]hello_hbp,
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Spinner’s End — 15th July, 1998


A scrawny man, his drab clothes blending into the dirty greys of the streets, trudged up a narrow alley as night fell, heading for the last house in Spinner’s End. He was sick, from the last three days’ lack of sleep and from the months before that: desperate months of trying to disappear into Muggle crowds, fleeing the notice of anyone who might possibly be an Auror, or any wizard willing to capture a traitor. There was no wind in the cramped maze of abandoned row houses, and although the sun had set at last, the cobbled streets still radiated heat. The man’s skin itched under a layer of sweat and grime, and his hair hung in greasy hanks around his face. The stifling heat, the dank stench of the river, the crushing feeling of being surrounded by thousands of Muggles made his spine crawl.

The man had been careful, more than careful to leave no record of this place at the Ministry or the Order, so there should have been no reason to worry. Yet he knew that nowhere was safe for him, not any more. Not for long. If the Ministry and Harry Potter wanted to find him, then sooner or later, they would: it was as simple and as final as that. He planned to stay there another day and then move on. Where? He had not yet decided; he knew that the longer in advance plans are made, the greater their chances of being discovered, anticipated, thwarted.

Something flickered, pale against the darkening sky. Instinctively he ducked into the dubious shelter of a boarded-up front door. He clung to the shadows, his bony shoulder-blades grinding against the brick of the niche as he stared out. What was it? False alarm? His gaze flicked from one possible place of concealment to the next, but he saw no one. Not that that meant anything. His palm was slick with cold sweat as he whipped his wand out of his sleeve and traced a wide circle around him, frantically muttering his own modification of the Foe-glass charm under his breath. The charm would see through Invisibility cloaks and Disillusionment charms to alert him to the presence of any who wished him ill... yet still, all was quiet.

Another glint of white. A snowy owl was circling past the streetlamps and the low roofs. It glided lower and lower. The man shrank back into the shadows, his wand clutched in a grip tight enough to betray the tremor in his hands, as he scanned again and again for the Aurors or the Hit Wizards or the Order, who he knew now must be closing in on him.

There was no mistaking that owl. Somewhere nearby Potter was laughing at him, sending his bird to hunt him down, as a distraction, as a prophecy of what was to come: silent wings spectre-white against the gloom, an omen of retribution and death. The Aurors used owls to track down criminals during the Dark Times, just by sending them a letter. He had hidden himself long ago from such simple methods of detection; he knew he had. But somehow Potter had found him all the same, and death could not be far behind.

The owl swooped down, its spread wings spanning the narrow doorway. It landed with an impact like a punch to his shoulder, dropping its letter which fell at his feet. But he spared owl and note not a glance, not even when the owl changed its stance on his shoulder so that it too was facing out into the street, and shook out its feathers as if settling down for a long stay.

Anytime now... he concentrated and faced the inevitable. Silence lingered, stretched, until the suspense was a torment all its own. His breathing grew louder and louder and his tremors spread from his wand hand through his whole weary body as he waited for his long-delayed doom to arrive.

Nothing.

Nothing.

Absolutely nothing.

At long last, he was almost sure that the owl hadn’t brought attackers or even its master with it.

His mouth twitched in a parody of a smirk as he realised that this hour – huddled in the doorway of the abandoned row house, trembling with desperate weariness and the terror of imminent death – wasn’t even the worst hour of his relatively-short existence.

All along, the persistent bird had sat on his shoulder. For the first time, the man had leisure to feel grateful that he had worn his coat, despite the heat; if he hadn’t, those talons would no doubt have gouged holes in his shoulder by now. He twitched said shoulder irritably; the owl only gripped tighter, giving an equally irritable shriek and glaring pointedly at the letter it had dropped. Instinctively he followed the direction of its gaze. The letter could hardly be called that: there was no envelope or address. It was a single page ripped out of a book and folded into a triangle, and in a space bare of type was scrawled a single word: Snape.

Snape pointed his wand at the bit of paper, hitting it with a barrage of charms aimed at detecting all the curses, hexes, jinxes, potions, poisons and tracking charms he knew, but test after test drew a total blank. At last he turned his head, exchanging an almost beak-to-beak glare with the owl still sitting on his shoulder.

“Don’t you have somewhere else to be?” he inquired sardonically. When the owl still wouldn’t budge, he bent to snatch up the letter with such suddenness that he unbalanced the bird, which flapped off with a speed that suggested it was glad to go. He stood and watched the gleam of white wings, circling over the alley and finally heading north. Only when the owl had disappeared into the darkness, did he finish the walk down the length of the alley. He unlocked the door to the very last house, slipping inside and shutting out the night with locks both magical and mundane.

He unfolded the yellowed page in the light of a single candle, and at once he knew which book it had come from: his mother’s Advanced Potion-Making textbook that he had used as his research diary in sixth year. The page contained one of his usual sarcastic observations penned in the obsessively cramped script of his schooldays: this one was on the trifling potions and charms which were the closest analogues to the dreaded Morsmordre. The cheap ink had faded; some of his words had gone grey with time. But there were also new lines, scrawled hastily at the top of the page in fresh ink. Lines in a hand that, though he hadn’t seen it for quite a while, he recognised well enough.


The added message conveyed interesting news, to be sure, but it was the Thanks. that Snape saw first. He stared down at the note in his hand, stunned. There was no signature, but Snape didn’t need one. There was no other person who could’ve written this.

Potter, he thought. At least this means the nitwit kept my textbook after all; kept it and used it. It also means that there just might be a glorious absence of Aurors and Hit Wizards in my immediate future. Perhaps Dumbledore’s pensieve survived, and they’ve finally managed to lift the charm securing it, now that the Dark Lord is gone. Or perhaps the Order has finally put two and two together and for once hasn’t come up with five.

Frankly, Snape didn’t care one way or the other. Not right then. All he cared about was that, at the moment, he was apparently safe. Potter had clearly known where he was, and had done nothing to him. For the first time in longer than he cared to remember, he didn’t have to watch his back and hide from every suspicious stranger. Without thinking or wondering any more about the letter, he toppled onto his narrow bed like a felled tree.

Finally, some peace.

He was asleep before the smoke of the blown-out candle had time to dissipate into the humid, dusty air.

He didn’t wake until noon the next day.



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[info]tentofblue
2005-11-27 06:32 am UTC (link)
What happens next?! Best beginning to a post-HBP story ever:)

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 07:01 am UTC (link)
Thanks for your kind comment!

As for what happens next, sorry, but I'm afraid you'll just have to see in the next posting! (Muahaha ;)

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(no subject) - [info]lishel_fracrium, 2005-11-28 03:31 am UTC
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[info]saldemonium
2005-11-27 06:33 am UTC (link)
Very, /very/ interesting! I can't wait to see more. This is going to be good. =)

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 07:03 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear we've managed to pique your interest a bit...

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[info]fleurdeliser
2005-11-27 06:39 am UTC (link)
Absolutely gorgeous, both of you! The descriptions were stunningly beautiful. I could feel the scene, see it, taste it, smell it.

The text of the actual book is perfect. It's nearly impossible to read without yawning. The handwriting for both was grat as well.

In all, I'm extraordinarily excited about this. Bless you both, I very eagerly await more.

-Nessi

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 07:18 am UTC (link)
It's great to hear that the descriptions worked for you: I love the idea of Snape growing up in such deeply unmagical, unromantic surroundings, and I thought the locale of Spinner's End was worth trying to get across.

And thank you for your feedback on the textbook! I think I'll be writing quite a few more bits of Libatius Borage. (Knowing JKR's fondness for puns, I strongly suspect she picked his last name, not only for the reference to the herb, but also for its similarity to 'boring'.)

I'm relieved that you liked the handwriting choices! Just in case you're a fellow font freak, or if any other reader is, I chose "Benegraphic" for young Snape's handwriting, while Harry's is "Octavio", and Advanced Potion-Making is "Casablanca Antique". Present-day Snape's handwriting will be "Viner Hand ITC", and other books will be in "High Tower Text", and other old-world fonts and dingbats including old English/blackletter/Gothic fonts.

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(no subject) - [info]fleurdeliser, 2005-11-27 08:47 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]sinick, 2005-11-27 05:46 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]ac1d6urn, 2005-11-27 07:18 pm UTC
Ah, I was going to ask about the fonts. ^^ - [info]tpod, 2005-11-27 03:26 pm UTC
Re: Ah, I was going to ask about the fonts. ^^ - [info]sinick, 2005-11-27 05:47 pm UTC
Re: Ah, I was going to ask about the fonts. ^^ - [info]ac1d6urn, 2005-11-27 07:16 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]foomf, 2005-11-27 09:34 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]sinick, 2005-11-28 04:14 pm UTC

[info]snapetoy
2005-11-27 06:44 am UTC (link)
This is marvellous. A fabulous concept and so well executed! The text is evocative, capturing me from the beginning, and the parchment is perfect. The picture at the top is also a terrific choice.

I'm really looking forward to more of this! You two totally rock!

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 07:29 am UTC (link)
Hi, Toy! I'm so chuffed that you like what we've done so far!

We really wanted to get the atmosphere (both the text and the visuals) "right": i.e. as close to canon as we could manage (never having been able to nick anything from Leavesden or the WB prop warehouse, more's the pity).

I fell in love with the source image for that picture, which is in [info]zoepaleologa's post on Spinner's End that we mentioned in the userinfo for this comm. [info]ac1d6urn did quite a bit of tweaking on that image, not only to turn it into an (IMO terrific) imitation tintype photograph, but to add the silhouette of Snape trudging back to Spinner's End.

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[info]macabre31
2005-11-27 07:04 am UTC (link)
Great start. I would really like to see where this goes. I loved the page from the text book; it looked and sounded very realistic. I hope to see more soon!

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 07:32 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm happy to hear you liked the textbook image: we both agreed it's really important to get these 'souvenirs' of the wizarding world feeling as 'authentic' as possible.

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[info]leairan
2005-11-27 07:18 am UTC (link)
Intriguing start.. can't wait to see where you go with this.

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 07:33 am UTC (link)
Welcome aboard! Thanks for your interest. I hope you like future episodes as much.

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[info]badfeeling
2005-11-27 08:14 am UTC (link)
AHGJKJ. < - Universal sign for incoherancy. The page excerpt blew me away and I'm itching to know where this is going. I eagerly await more!

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-27 07:25 pm UTC (link)
*grins* Welcome aboard. :) I'm looking forward to working on more graphics for this, especially with Sinick doing such a wonderful job writing 'boring' Potions textbooks and channelling young Snape.

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[info]gaycrow
2005-11-27 08:50 am UTC (link)
Oh, I loved this! The story is intriguing, and the torn page is just so well done. Thank you for providing the fonts you're using. I'm definitely a font nut!

Congratulations to you both on creating such an interesting project.

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 11:59 pm UTC (link)
Glad you liked the story so far! Always great to hear from a fellow font freak!

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[info]perverteerno1
2005-11-27 09:58 am UTC (link)
OMG I do hope you will update on a regulasr basis... I'm sure the suspense is going to kill me! You guys rock.
*sucks at giving feedback*

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[info]sinick
2005-11-28 12:02 am UTC (link)
Well, we'll be updating when we can: we don't have a regular schedule, but we certainly are going to do many more updates.

And thanks! Hey, you give feedback. That, IMNSHO, Does NOT Suck. :)

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[info]morrighan_sai
2005-11-27 10:03 am UTC (link)
Ooh, you two will be the death of me. I'm having a very busy time and you keep distracting me! Not that I mind, really :). The project was an amazing idea. I'm loving the descriptions, the atmosphere, the darkness that somehow surrounds Snape, the page from the book, the idea that Snape's comments helped, the handwritings and the "Thanks", guh.
I'm sitting here, totally transfixed, because I didn't even think of such a beginning to a post-HBP story. And it is just a beginning, right? Now I wish I could suddenly discover the next twenty chapters that you left somewhere as a surprise and read them in one sitting. (Any chance of that?)

I truly don't mean to sound like a teenager but, damn, I want more!

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-27 07:30 pm UTC (link)
Twenty chapters? Eeep! (Although very possible in the future.) Actually the idea for this was born from a 100 word drabble prompt which soon grew into the outline for a slightly larger story and got expanded with new ideas, details, and graphics per Sinick's suggestion. It's certainly just a beginning. :)

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-11-27 12:40 pm UTC (link)
This looks really great. The amount of work that both of you have put into this project is obvious, and I love it :) You're both so talented! It is indeed great news that you're collaborating on anything. The choice of project leaves me bouncing as well! I have a feeling that this community will very soon become one of the most exciting things on my flist :)

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-28 12:36 am UTC (link)
Thank you, Rose. :) I'm very excited to work with Sinick on this. She's great at writing everything Snape-related.

become one of the most exciting things on my flist
We'll try our best to make it so. :)

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[info]josanpq
2005-11-27 02:29 pm UTC (link)
Okay...I'm hooked. :-) Joined the community.

Do you have a posting schedule?

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-27 07:33 pm UTC (link)
Schedule. Uh-oh. Not really, and I'm afraid to suggest one with the dreaded exams week in my immediate future. We're working on the next update, does that count? :)

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[info]painless_j
2005-11-27 03:37 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful beginning, wonderful design! Looking forward to the next chapter.

If I may suggest something? For a non-native speaker, one with a not very good eyesight besides, it's a bit difficult to read handwriting. Could you, please, put in someting like footnotes with the same text typed?

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[info]sinick
2005-11-27 06:08 pm UTC (link)
I'm sorry! I never thought to add a print version of the text in the note image, but you're so right; it'd also be handy for anyone using a text reader. I'll put a transcript in a comment underneath this and future posts.

And thanks for your kind comment. :)

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[info]snakeling
2005-11-27 03:47 pm UTC (link)
The story is excellent, the picture at the top beautiful, and the short extract of Advanced Potions Making suitably abscons :)

Must now hunt the fonts, because they're beautiful. And as a font freak to another, have you seen this site?

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[info]matyas_adina
2005-11-27 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow. A new story to look out for. Wonderful begining, I'm runninug to join the com.

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(no subject) - [info]sinick, 2005-11-28 12:24 am UTC
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[info]gaeta
2005-11-27 04:42 pm UTC (link)
How wonderful to see such a clever post-HBP Snape/Harry story emerge. the design, as others have said, is gorgeous. That textbook is hilarious.

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[info]sinick
2005-11-28 12:27 am UTC (link)
Oh, I'm so glad you see the humour in the textbook! I really was trying for a bit of the ridiculous: given that the textbook is (at least, maybe more than) fifty years old, and given how far Wizarding culture tends to lag behind Muggle, I thought that the text of "Advanced Potion-Making" would be just ludicrously stuffy. It makes it that much juicier of a target for Young Snape to take sarcastic potshots at in his notes! ;^}

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[info]iamravine
2005-11-27 05:14 pm UTC (link)
A wonderful beginning. I especially love the atmosphere you have created. It really enhances the great writing and The Spinners End picture is soo right. Can't wait for more.

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[info]sinick
2005-11-28 12:31 am UTC (link)
Thank you! [info]zoepaleologa's source picture for [info]ac1d6urn's 'photo' was such a rich plotbunny in itself, I couldn't resist using it. And I'm so glad that you felt the atmosphere we were trying to convey.

We'll be updating as often as we can (can't say "regularly", since we don't have a schedule per sé). But this is definitely only the first of many planned posts.

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[info]bluerose16
2005-11-27 05:54 pm UTC (link)
Wow. That was AMAZING. I am definitely watching this community! :D

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-28 12:31 am UTC (link)
On behalf of both of us, thank you and welcome aboard. :)

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(no subject) - [info]sinick, 2005-11-28 12:32 am UTC

[info]sazzlette
2005-11-27 06:11 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow, a very intriguiing first chapter, I can't wait to read more :D! I love the descriptions, and Snape's characterisation is wonderful. Brilliant start.

Have you considered putting a line in between each paragraph? It would make it easier to read; text tends to all slide into itself on a computer screen, and people lose interest more quickly. Just a suggestion :]

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-27 07:40 pm UTC (link)
Ah, you are right! Thank you for suggesting to separate the paragraphs. I'll see if I can work out how to customise the main layout. :)

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[info]rantipole_
2005-11-27 06:24 pm UTC (link)
Wow. The atmosphere! no wind in the cramped maze of abandoned row houses ... the dank stench of the river
And perversely, magic almost seems inevitable in such a place (to me, at least). I mean, the way it would in Dickens or Sherlock Holmes... Um.

And: The Aurors used owls to track down criminals during the Dark Times, just by sending them a letter
is just the kind of blunt, mundane strategy that you'd expect in this setting -- and disturbingly likely to succeed. Really scary in a WWII kind of way.

(And oh, Snape huddled in a boarded-up doorway with really no future)
the longer in advance plans are made, the greater their chances of being discovered
*wibble*

(But still Snapish! "beak-to-beak glare with the owl sitting on his shoulder" YES!)

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[info]sinick
2005-11-28 01:27 am UTC (link)
*grins widely* You always get what I'm trying to say. Your 'no future' comment was so perceptive: that's exactly how Snape's life had been: existing from day to day, dodging the Sword of Damocles (or Gryffindor) for as long as he can, with no hope of finally evading it.

And, yes, perhaps it is revulsion against the squalor of the intensely-mundane that powers equally intense, rebellious, world-order-changing magic. As both Snape and Harry would know firsthand.

As for the Aurors' use of owls, t's always seemed to me to be a bit of a loophole in the idea of hiding from other wizards: how do owls always seem to know how to find the recipients of letters?

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(no subject) - [info]rantipole_, 2005-11-28 01:44 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]sinick, 2005-11-28 04:28 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]rantipole_, 2005-11-28 05:33 pm UTC
Transcript of the note
[info]sinick
2005-11-27 11:55 pm UTC (link)
Obvious to you, but not to anyone else! This note was just what the Order needed to trace the location of the Morsmordre's casters and then reflect all that burning energy right back at the bastards.
Thanks.


Ironic that such an utterly trivial potion is obviously analogous not only to the equally trivial Wand Sparks charm, but also to the notorious Morsmordre: all three simply convert the energy of the caster's Will to a more visible form, via the incineration of dust motes. The Dark Mark is further empowered by ritual sacrifice: the death-by-immolation of countless airborne organisms, micro- and macroscopic.

* SCINTILLATING SOLUTION *
Scintillating Solution
, though oft-dismissed as the province of mere Squibs, shall be shewn herein to be a Potion not to be disdained by the Worthy Student, inasmuch as such Solutions are undeniably the source of munificent incomes for those Potion-Makers inclined to the creation of various and sundry cosmetic preparations; for well is it observed that none hath ever descended into penury by catering to the manifold and endless vanities of Humankind.
Though the Method of Preparation is not unduly taxing to even the less-Advanced...

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[info]untiemybinds
2005-11-28 12:20 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is delicious. I can't wait for more!

I love the Hedwig thing that's there too :)).

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-28 12:29 am UTC (link)
Thank you. *grin* Sinick found the original picture and I adjusted it to work as a spacer image. Now instead of replies we have the owl attack in this comm.

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[info]raventbear
2005-11-28 05:17 am UTC (link)
I am sure this will come as a surprise to Acid but I took the time to read it tonight. Kudos to you and Sinick! Very nicely done.

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[info]ac1d6urn
2005-11-28 06:32 am UTC (link)
*Speechless and stunned. Looks outside.* Did you see the flock of piglets fly past the window just now? Are you feeling all right? ;)

Ahem. Thank you, hon. :)

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[info]aviss
2005-11-28 05:14 pm UTC (link)
Wow! This is amazing! It's a really good idea to write the fic and illustrate it and I can see everything is nicely done.

Cab't wait to see the rest of it.

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[info]sinick
2005-11-29 04:13 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! We're working on future editions already, though we won't be posting to a schedule, just putting them up as soon as each one is done.

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[info]everythingisaid
2005-11-28 05:22 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this looks like it's going to be excellent. I'm so excited that you both are doing this! I definitely look forward to more.

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[info]sinick
2005-11-29 04:14 pm UTC (link)
Thank you and welcome aboard! There'll definitely be future updates: we're working on them now.

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[info]athenakt
2005-11-28 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Absolutely wonderful! I'll definitely be watching you two on this one. I love the style of the journal layout, the writing and (hee!) the "page excerpt"/art.

*bounces* Lovely post-HBP! My preeeeccciousssss...

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[info]sinick
2005-11-29 04:16 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much and welcome aboard! I'm so glad you liked it so far. The layout was [info]ac1d6urn's work, and I'm very pleased with how it turned out.

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