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26 June 2008 @ 03:51 am
Blood and roses (The sequel to Red Darkness)  

Title: Blood and Roses
Author: Dandygrrrl  http://www.myspace.com/fifidelioncourt
Pairing: Frank/Gerard, (My chemical romance) Bob(Mcr.)/Ryan Ross (Patd), Gabe Saporta (Cobra starship)/ Mikey Way (Mcr),  hinted Omc/ Omc, well Gerard and Mikey's parents must have done it at least twice right. OFC/Mike Carden (Tai)  Pete Wentz/ Patrick Stump (Fob)
Beta: 

[info]audrey1nd
Rating: Overall NC-17
Summary: Part one of the sequel to Red Darkness. Gerard's a dom vampire and Frank's a submissive Feratile (A vampire that can get pregnate) Set five years after red darkness
Disclaimer: Don’t own anyone but I might try kidnapping bhahahaha
WARNING: THIS IS THE DARKEST CHAPTER I WROTE IT CONTAINS RAPE AND TORTOUR. RAY AND PETE ARE COMPLEAT PSYCHOPATHIC BASTARDS. DO NOT READ IF THIS WILL UPSET YOU. I DO NOT AGREE WITH HOW THEY BEHAVE BUT THERE NASTY VAMPIRES WITH REVENGE ON THERE MINDS. YOU DO NOT NEED TO READ THIS FOR THE PLOT LINE TO BLOOD AND ROSES, YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED BIG TIME.
Thank's to Devon who gave the idea of Doll and is helping me a great deal with plot. Oh and can I say to a few people who asked me to add them on my space I can't because I need you sir names but feel free to add me just point out you been reading my fan fic and I will approve you. 

Allso if there's anyone got any orginal fic, plot bunnys, or poems I just started a community called </a></font></b></a>[info]bunnyficcorner please join and tell anyone who might be intreasted in joining. Anything goes there but I would really like it to be filled with compleatly out there fic. The more bizarre the better.


one  ) two )three )chapter four )chapter five )six )seven )chapter eight )nine )ten )eleven )twelve )thirteen ) 


 

 

Thirteen B

Ray's arm wrapped around Doll’s throat causing her to lose consciousness.


Doll opened her eyes. She wasn’t sure where she was or how long she had been out for. What she did know was that she was naked and tied over the bonnet of either Ray or Pete’s car.


She shivered. It was a cold night and it was a torture all in itself to be left so exposed to the freezing air.


She whimpered as Ray walked over to her. She hated the way he was looking at her; like he was going to rip her to bits. Ray looked so different now, compared to how she remembered him in the club.


Now his dark eyes were full of a sadistic light. His large hand went to her breast and squeezed it roughly, making Doll sob.


“I bet one of you shits made a comment about how all fertiles like it rough,” Ray spat, his nails digging into Doll, making her whimper in pain. “Well did you slut, did someone say that to Ryan?”


“Yes… Raven said it before he raped him. He said that he bet being beat up was like foreplay to a fertile.”


Ray growled deep in his throat, he had always had a soft spot for Ryan and hearing part of what he went through made his blood boil.


“You have no fucking idea what a vampire feels for a fertile,” Ray spat, removing his belt. He held it in his hand, feeling the weight of the heavy buckle.


“Yes, I've used this belt to whip a fertile before, but always doubling it and using it across their thighs or backside. Just hard enough to sting, but never to break the skin. I would never do this.” Ray laughed before bringing the metal of the buckle down across Doll’s face, almost instantly leaving a nasty black bruise on the side of her face.


Doll screamed as Ray brought the belt down again across the other side of her face and she tasted blood in her mouth. She pulled at the ropes that had her bound to the bonnet as Ray brought the belt down over and over, the cold metal bruising her flesh.


Ray worked down her body, even whipping the soles of her feet before working his way back up. He smiled cruelly as he looked down at the black bruises that made Doll’s body look like rotten fruit.


“Do you think any fertile would class that as foreplay, slut?” Ray spat, bringing the buckle back down around Doll’s head a few times.


Ray looked up as Pete came over and grinned. Pete knew everyone classed Ray as being one of good guys, but he had, like most vampires a strong sadistic streak. It didn’t come out often, but when it did it was bad.


“This thing thinks that a fertile would class being beat up as foreplay. Pete, do you know any fertiles that would class being beaten bloody as a turn on?”


Pete shook his head. He had slept with a fair amount of fertiles, and more than a few had left with bruises, mostly across their stomach and thighs his favorite place to fang fuck a lover, but never had he truly beaten a fertile. No vampire would treat a fertile like that.


“Please… no more…” Doll whimpered, close to passing out.


“Shut up whore, we haven’t even started on you yet,” Pete growled, looking at her with distaste. “You know Ray, she hate raped Ryan, maybe we should show her what it’s like to be hate raped by two vampires.”


Ray smiled, walking over to the now sobbing Doll. He looked down at her, her eyes filled with terror and pain. He untied her and roughly pushed her to the ground.


“Remember that what you are about to go through no fertile would enjoy,” Ray growled, giving Doll a few kicks before undoing his trousers. He slammed into her harder than he would ever dream of fucking a fertile. This had nothing to do with love or passion and everything to do with hate.


He roared as Doll struggled trying to fight him off, he grabbed her head and slammed it against the floor a few times until she want still.


Doll had never felt pain like it. She felt like she was being ripped apart, and as Ray stood up she looked down to see blood on her thighs. She wanted to beg for mercy, but based on the hatred she felt coming from the two vampires, she knew that she would receive none.


“This is what happened to Ryan and what you was planning on doing to other fertiles including my Patty,” Pete roared before taking over from Ray.


Doll wanted to scream that no human could hurt a fertile like they were hurting her. By the time they were done she knew she was bleeding internally and she was coughing up blood. Her pelvis had been broken and she knew that almost no human would have the strength to do that.


Her eyes wore filled with agony as she passed out.


She came round with her hands tied above her head and dangling from a tree. Pete was covering her body with something. She whimpered, as it stung the open wounds that covered her body.


“Oh, this was Ray’s idea. It’s just honey, but there’s an ant nest underneath you. I’m sure they'll have a field day crawling all over you. We're just going to leave you here for the ants to enjoy,” Pete laughed, giving a Doll a punch in the stomach. “Oh, and when some one does bother to come for you, Bob would like a little word with you. Enjoy yourself till then.”


Then Pete did just what he said he would and went to his car, leaving Doll hanging there for the ants to make a meal of.


 
 
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haha_urdead[info]haha_urdead on June 25th, 2008 03:46 am (UTC)
I really like this story and it's plot, but seriously your grammar and spelling is sometimes pretty atrocious, like there, their and they're. You need to revise this and get some more betas that know proper grammar.
I say this as constructive critism, not to be rude, but sometimes it's hard to read this with all the errors.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 03:53 am (UTC)
yes this did go up with no beta to be honest I posted this with out a beta because I'm ashamed of writting this chapter because it's pretty sick, but if your reading this through fobvampirehunt it does say I'm dislexic which I know isn't a excuse. I'm glad you like the plot line though.
Audrey Rachel[info]audrey1nd on June 25th, 2008 04:38 am (UTC)
Really, really great chapter, but seriously, let me beta? Your story is so good, but sometimes the incorrect use of words and wrong words detracts from the story. I think the fact that they covered her in honey and then put her above an ant next is is kind of funny and awesome at the same time. Yes, it's a horrible thing to do to someone, but she deserves it and I just love that you thought of that. Very creative.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:33 am (UTC)
sure sorry I send it to you I was short sort of scared after I wrote it that you would think I was kind of sick in the head and not want to beta for me.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:46 am (UTC)
yeah the ant nest idea came from being bit by one earler that day and thinking oww that hurts, and I was complaining at work and someone said they fell in a ant nest once and it was really bad and I thought umm what a horrible why to tortore someone.
[info]crash_it_yo on June 25th, 2008 05:21 am (UTC)
i totally skipped most of this chapter. thanks for the warning.


i request some pete/patrick soon! :D
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:36 am (UTC)
yeah it needed major a majore warning
chemicaldreamsx[info]chemicaldreamsx on June 25th, 2008 06:27 am (UTC)
Damn, I love this :D
Actually Doll kinda deserved it, but if Raven and them ever end up hurting Patrick or Frank then she definitely deserved it
though, I'd be afraid of what Gerard would do to her and now that Bob is probably going to do something to her too
Can't wait to read more :D
<3
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:38 am (UTC)
yeah Bob as you can imagaine is not a happy bunny.
Sarah: Lucian - Bite me....i mean him[info]joedirntwayiero on June 25th, 2008 09:04 am (UTC)
There's no reason to be ashamed of this - it's fictional. Fiction allows us to write about things that we would never do and want to see in reality. It fits with the story, and i know people who'd be quite willing to be violent if anyone did ever rape a friend of theirs. It is a terrible thing to occur, but with the plot of the story she deserved it, so don't feel ashamed at all :)
I eagerly await the next update :)
xxXxx
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:42 am (UTC)
yeah it was what I thinking when I was writting it. I mean there sadistic vampires who got there hands on someone that just put one of there best friends in hospital I don't think they would just rough Doll up a little then let her go. Of course they would go totally over the top. I actually looked through Lj and found a lot more gruesome fic then this, but I'm not good at writting tortour.
xxjadedxnowxx[info]xxjadedxnowxx on June 25th, 2008 12:29 pm (UTC)
This was really good, and Doll deserved it and she'll deserve what she gets from Bob too.

Need some more Ryan and Frankyness gotta see how there doing.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 09:56 pm (UTC)
there be more coming soon and in some vampire fluff will be coming up soon, well as fluffy as it can get for a fertile when your partner a psychopath.
emobertiztable[info]emobertiztable on June 25th, 2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
You have done a totaly fantastic job on this story ^-^ Bobs not gonna be a happy fluffy when he gets his hands on Doll^__^
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 09:58 pm (UTC)
oh noez I'm so glad I'm not Doll I can tell you
emochick127[info]emochick127 on June 25th, 2008 02:57 pm (UTC)
it was reaslly good, but you really need a beta. (sorry if that's like broken record-ish)
thanku4thvenom[info]thanku4thvenom on June 25th, 2008 04:51 pm (UTC)
This is so random and i'm sorry for spamming dandygrrrl but can i say that i have been looking for the full size of your icon with bill and tom for AGES, do you have it?

And btw to dandygrrrl; i really liked the fic and you were right to put a warning on it but really you shouldent be ashamed of what you write! I was diagnosed to be dislexic as well but i dont really think i am. I just dont care about my schoolwork and they took that as being dislexic. You on the other hand are good at ideas and plotlines and i know everyone else has already bored you saying it, really a beta can fix the rest.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:23 pm (UTC)
I don't mind you spanning even want as far as looking for the oic you wore looking for, I know it was photo bucket somewhere but I can't find it now.
emochick127[info]emochick127 on June 26th, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
nope. sorry. I just found this online somewhere. (hehe. its so funny but it looks so wrong.)
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 09:59 pm (UTC)
Yep I know but I had this chapter betaed now and the corrected version will replace it shortly and I promise I will never put a chapter up again with out one.

Edited at 2008-06-25 10:21 pm (UTC)
EmilyEnvy[info]emo_monster0913 on June 25th, 2008 04:17 pm (UTC)
no, that was great. she totally deserved it.
gah, i can't wait till Bob kicks her ass.
Psh, i bet she knows NO fertile would enjoy that.
I hope the ants enjoy their slutty meal.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 10:24 pm (UTC)
yeah Bob's not happy and of course she knew no fertile would enjoy what they did to Ryan.
EmilyEnvy[info]emo_monster0913 on June 26th, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)
ha, she deserves it.
pete and ray handled it very well in my oppinion.
especially since they were planning on hurting patrick.
i still can't wait to find out what happens when frank finds out daylin's his sister.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 27th, 2008 12:43 am (UTC)
that will be coming up very soon
[info]xdarkk_lustx on June 25th, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
xxx
BEST.CHAPTER.YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Goodness,the revenge,the hurt...PERFECT.
[[I know,I CLEARLY need help]].
But,THIS was AMAZING.
I hope there's more like this...GOD I <3'ed it.
LOL SORRY >.<
xxx
-Pansy
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 25th, 2008 11:48 pm (UTC)
wait till bob get's his hands on her evil laugh
[info]xdarkk_lustx on June 26th, 2008 01:44 am (UTC)
xxx
*GASP* I forgot about Bob....YEA! *head-bangs*
xxx
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 26th, 2008 02:15 am (UTC)
Yeah i got a vision of Bob going all w.w.f on either her or Raven.
Lindsay: Gerard WTF?[info]wilted_rose18 on June 26th, 2008 03:46 am (UTC)
Warning! Warning! Warning! I am a shity writer who likes to rape your flist with giant font!
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 26th, 2008 09:14 am (UTC)
sorry I alter the font size
Lindsay: Gerard WTF?[info]wilted_rose18 on June 26th, 2008 11:29 pm (UTC)
I wasn't just making fun of the font.
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 27th, 2008 12:11 am (UTC)
well never mind, have you got anything constructive to say or are you just here to be bitchy, because really I don't mind if you got something to say but you if you just making fun of me you really don't want to go there.
princessnd01[info]princessnd01 on June 26th, 2008 04:17 am (UTC)
Omg I'm Speechless! That Was Amazing!
Gah , Doll deserved every bit of what she got ...
Can't wait for Bob to get his hands on her :)
<33
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 26th, 2008 09:15 am (UTC)
yeah thats not going to go down well
ditzydmt[info]ditzydmt on June 26th, 2008 11:08 am (UTC)
mmmmm devilishly written, but nothing to be ashamed of! you have a great sense of the characters and I can honestly say you are an amazing writer. Can't wait for more, especially Bob's reaction and what will happen to Patrick!
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 26th, 2008 12:39 pm (UTC)
thankyou I'm glad you enjoyed it.
orangesoda_love[info]orangesoda_love on June 26th, 2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
the ant thing reminded me of this scene in Indiana Jones (the more recent one) where all these HUGE red ants with pincers half the size of your pinkie come out and like swarm over this dude's body and the eat him alive...

i laughed horribly during that scene. great chapter, and is it a bit wrong to say that Doll deserved it? and that this deserves a clap???

*claps* more soon?
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 26th, 2008 10:32 pm (UTC)
yeah now you mention it isn't there a simerler scean in the scorpion king as well? Ray turned out to be a lot more nastyier then I thought he would be, lol. He wasn't ment to be that nasty and I never saw Ray as being sadistic but it just sort of wrote it self and now i wouldn't want to cross him lol.
werewolfvampire[info]werewolfvampire on June 27th, 2008 08:28 pm (UTC)
YAYZ!! Doll finely gets what she desearves!!
Much, much love as usual, my queen!
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 27th, 2008 10:01 pm (UTC)
lol wait till bob get's his hands on her
i am a revolution.[info]keepthevanity on June 29th, 2008 07:13 am (UTC)
Damn, See. It's always the quiet and calm one's with the crazy-ass side. :o

Ray was insane, but doll deserved every second of it! :] hehe. and that can't be the worst of it, i can't wait until bob gets a hold of the chick.

this was brutal and insane, and i loved it.

&heart;

i am a revolution.[info]keepthevanity on June 29th, 2008 07:14 am (UTC)
grr. :[

that's supposed to be ♥
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 29th, 2008 11:38 pm (UTC)
thats ok I have no idea how to get the little hearts up lol. And yes Ray has suddenly seemed to start writting himself, orginaly he was ment to be quite nice, well for a vampire anyway lol. He was going to be written as a vampire that short of listened to a fertiles problems but yeah now his charater short of turned out to have a insane brutal side.
i am a revolution.[info]keepthevanity on June 30th, 2008 01:47 am (UTC)
oh! It's super easy.

Copy && Follow.

& hearts ; = ♥

:] Just take out all the spaces and there ya go.

Ray's just amazing, it's nice to see him have a temper sometimes, because all you ever really see is the nice and calm Mr.Toro , so good job. <3
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 30th, 2008 03:38 am (UTC)
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 30th, 2008 03:44 am (UTC)
yay well you learn something new everyday. Does a little dance.

Yeah in my mind even though Ray's quite a big guy I always saw him as being really nice, then I started writting this and this is how he turned out. ♥ <<< you just know I'm going to be doing this all the time now ;D
dandygrrrl[info]dandygrrrl on June 30th, 2008 10:21 am (UTC)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ what can I say I'm bored hahahaha

Edited at 2008-06-30 10:29 am (UTC)
i am a revolution.[info]keepthevanity on June 30th, 2008 09:05 pm (UTC)
Aaah. For reals man, so much to learn, so little time. =] dude, I don't even know how many times I've seen that quote in my classes. >>. jebus.

♥ raytoro just doesn't get enough credit, I love him. =) as much as I loves the rest. The man with the plaaan! Ray Toro. <3

Lol. Man, making hearts is the funnest, I do it all the time! :] 'hey wanna heart? Have oneeeeeeee ♥♥♥!!'

It's fun.
 
 

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