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[Jul. 28th, 2008|10:58 pm]

schansuperrad
Title: Sweet and Fitting
Fandom: Avatar: The Last Airbender
Rating: PG-13
Warnings (if there are any):
Character Death
Summary:
Back then I didn't see anything wrong with a child of fire befriending an Airbender, but I'd grow up in time. The untold story of a very minor character. Please read and review.
I fail at cuts and links tonight.

X-posted to [info]avatar_fans
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[Jul. 14th, 2008|02:38 pm]

hearxmexrawr
Hello :]
im looking for some constructive criticism  on these stories. Thanks bunches.

 Title: Goodbye {subject to change}
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Characters: Lily and Petunia
Summary: [drabble] The last time Petunia and Lily saw each other they had nothing to say. 
Goodbye )


Title: Loveless
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Character: Narcissa Malfoy
Summary: 300 words on a day in the life of Narcissa Malfoy's wedding dress
Loveless )


Title: Waiting for Heaven
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: PG
Character: Sirius Black
Summary: Sirius contemplates whilas he waits to pass through the pearly gates
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New user here. ^.^ [Aug. 29th, 2006|09:30 pm]

hakushino_sui
[mood | morose]
[music |Nirvana- "You Know You're Right"]

Uh...A ficlet of mine that I wrote a while back on a whim. That's really all I have to say.

Title: Connections

Fandom: Naruto

Rating: PG

Warnings: Mild OOC, implied yaoi if you squint, cursing, and angst a-plenty

Pairing(s): Hinted KabuSasu

Link: 'Es right here.
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Yes, I'm pimping Guyver-fic [Aug. 2nd, 2006|09:42 am]

ingriam
My own, to be precise. :D I've got 12 reviews, but that doesn't seem like a good number for a 60+ chapter fanfic. Please review it if you have the time.

Title: Son of Mine
Fandom: Guyver: OAV, manga, later the second movie.
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence, language, mild slash, OCs included, AU
Pairings: (mentioned) Mizuki/Sho, Agito/Shizu, Masaki/Miaka, Zektor/Elegen
Summary: Masaki Murakami has been keeping a secret from the rest of the group. That secret is about to come out. Meanwhile, Sho and the others have to deal with an overambitious Zoalord, the ruler of Chronos itself, and the trials of living on the run.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2578044/1/
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Two fandoms for the price of one! [Jun. 14th, 2006|01:06 am]

raina_chan
I don't add just any old story to my favorites list. Those that manage to stay on there throughout the changes are some damned good fanfiction.

Title: The Heart is a Lonely Hunter
Fandom: Weiss Kreuz
Rating: T
Pairings: Yohji/Ken
Summary: Sent on a mission by themselves, Yohji and Ken are forced to cope with the realities of their job as assassins. By complete accident, they find that comfort with each other.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1273336/1/

Really, this fic is utterly awesome, without the kissing and fluff and sex. I couldn't improve it in any way, and s1ncer1ty should be really proud of her skills as a writer.

Title: So Glad to Break it to You
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: K
Pairings: None. But there is Remus abuse.
Summary: 2 November, 1981, and Remus has been isolated for three days. Catching-up isn't quite a chat over tea, not with a vengeful Snape.

This piece is a very, very long one. But it will definitely bring tears to your eyes on that first read through.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/875259/1/

(x-posted to [info]fanficraves)
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New shameless plug [Jun. 10th, 2006|12:38 pm]

madcap_minstrel
Hey, all. This is my first post. Here's a story I've been working on for the past six months. It started when I was reading a FF7 fic where Sephiroth speaks to Professor Gast in the Lifestream. It made me wonder what might happen had Sephiroth been raised by Gast and Ifalna, alongside Aeris.

Title: Us & Them
Fandom: Final Fantasy 7
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Pseudo-incest
Pairings: Aeris/Sephiroth, Cloud/Tifa, and a couple others.
Summary: When Professor Gast followed the clues leading to Vincent's wherabouts, everything changed. Now, Vincent, Sephiroth and Aeris fight against Shinra alongside the members of Avalanche. However, Jenova's plans for Sephiroth and the Planet haven't changed...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2708515/1/
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Had to. Just.. Had to. [Jun. 7th, 2006|12:45 am]

raina_chan
Because Akuroku is the only yaoi pairing that I'll raise my flag to readily... I kind of wanted to write something for it. Then it came to me as I was trying to go to bed. This inspired story came to me. Wonder if I'll keep the inspiration?

Title: One for the Money
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Rating: M
Pairings: AxelRoxas
Warnings: Violence, language, implied rape, molestation, murder
Summary: It's a Roarin Twenties AU. Axel has managed to gamble himself into a hole. He's in debt and has at least one death threat on his head. He has three days to pay his debt. Will Roxas be his lucky charm?
(Follow the fake LJ cut!)
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[May. 31st, 2006|05:18 pm]

anime_angel_ash
Currently, I'm writing a novella-length fanfiction detailing some of the events that take place before FFX-2. Unfortunately enough for me, concrit isn't very prominant for two reasons. 1) Quite a few people (even those who haven't played it for themselves) avoid it like the plague. 2) Many of the ones that don't aren't the best for giving concrit. While I have been lucky and have several very good reviewers, I'd also like a little more concrit thrown my way. Particularly so with the last chapter I posted, since I finally got into the romance and don't know it it's realistically timed and laid out. Hopefully, someone could find it in there hearts to wade into the fandom of a game that is universely (and in my opinion, wrongly, but I digress) despised to help me. It would be greatly appreciated.

Title: Unwavering Symphony
Fandom: FFX-2
Rating: T, but might go up a bit with chapter 12.
Warnings: Some mild cursing, at least one instance of the "F" word being used.
Pairings: Shuyin/Lenne
Summary: Every story has an ending. Not all of them are happy ones. Thus, the story of Shuyin and Lenne.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2556031/1/
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[May. 28th, 2006|04:50 pm]

dinogrrl
So, I'm a Legend of Dragoon fangirl. LoD is a playstation game that gets compartively little recognition and appreciation in the gaming world. Sure, the game itself has its problems (what game doesn't?), but the world created for it is, imho, very interesting.
Unfortunately, there is a TON of badfic, intentional or not, in this fandom. Trying to find or write a good one is like wading through molasses. But we try.

First, a recommendation for a fic that isn't mine.


Title: Rebirth of a Legend, by pyrostriker
Fandom: Legend of Dragoon
Rating: pg13
Summary: The rebirth of the dragoons in modern times.

This is one of the few that's caught my attention and kept it. It's long (80 chapters now, and I think there are/were supposed to be 2 more), but it's got some interesting ideas--I don't necessarily agree with all of them but it's still a good read. :}



And my attempt at a good LoD fic.

Title: Daughter of the Wind
Fandom: Legend of Dragoon
Rating: pg13, for language and violence later
Warnings: It's slightly AU, in that I bent a canon event slightly to avoid the death of one of the characters ^^;. Also, it involves a lot of OCs. Both of these I know are things that not everybody likes, so there's mah warning.
Pairings: None that are of canon characters, unless you count Albert and Emille o_O. The only other pair that really gets worked on is a pair of OCs.
Summary: There was a girl who mysteriously disappeared from Bale before the Second Dragon Campaign. Now she's back, but how? The truth may end up dragging Serdio into yet another war...against an enemy that cannot die.

This is still an active fic. I've only gotten to chapter 17 so far, but it's going to be much, much longer before I'm finally done with it XD.
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Meet my fandom and my fic. [May. 26th, 2006|09:47 pm]

tikatu
[Current Location |In front of the airconditioner]
[mood | mellow]
[music |"Falcon In The Dive" - The Scarlet Pimpernel OBC]

I have to admit it, I love reviews. 

My fandom is Thunderbirds... yeah, that old 1960s science fiction show with the marionettes. I much prefer the TV show to the 2004 live action movie, but I do have one WIP using the "movie-verse".  The short fic below - actually a series of four short vignettes - is what I consider some of my best work. I had a choice of archives, but I thought I might put the spotlight on a smaller, less traveled one: lunaescence.com. Enjoy.

Title: Burning Muses
Fandom: Thunderbirds (TV verse)
Rating: G or K
Warnings: none
Pairings: none
Summary: Brains ponders a problem. Virgil writes a song. John takes a picture. Another Tracy takes up a pen.

Burning Muses
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FFVII Parody Fic [May. 26th, 2006|08:54 pm]

mimi_sardinia
[Current Location |Nibelheim]
[mood | amused]
[music |Higher Than Hope - Nightwish]

Title: This Army Life
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Rating: T/PG-13
Warnings: Insanely funny?
Pairings: Zack/Aeris mentioned but nothing really.

Summary: All is not quiet on the Wutai front, as Sephiroth and Zack do everything possible to screw off and not run a war.


This Army Life


Someone mentioned this somewhere on [info]fanficrants and I followed the link. I'm glad I followed the link!
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[May. 23rd, 2006|08:45 pm]

gal_montag
So, I wrote this like, three years ago. I'm struck with the sneaking suspicion that my style hasn't changed much since. But I dunno, since it's mine and I'm always looking at it.

Title: Noir
Author: Bartleby
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Ron/Harry
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Harry is afraid of the dark...
Archive: No
Feedback: Uh-huh
Series/Sequel: No
Disclaimer: Harry, the Dursleys, the Weasleys and Hogwarts belong to J.K. Rowling and to Warner Brothers. They're not mine.

Noir )

This one I wrote about five months ago. It's RPF, but I don't think it would be necessary to know who the people are to understand the story.

Title: That Girl
Fandom: Queens of the Stone Age
Characters: Mark Lanegan, Nick Oliveri, Brody Dalle, Troy VanLeeuwen
Prompt: #85 She
Word Count: 323
Rating: PG, but only barely
Summary: Genderfuck, you know you love it
Disclaimer: These people aren't mine, I don't know them, I don't claim to. This is all fiction.
Warnings: The word "dyke"

That Girl )

And a sequel...

Title: Don't Dream It...
Fandom: Queens of the Stone Age
Characters: Mark Lanegan, Brody Dalle, PJ Harvey
Prompt: #40 Sight
Word Count: 197
Rating: G
Summary: The continuing adventures of Girl!Mark Lanegan
Disclaimer: These people aren't mine, I don't know them, I don't claim to. This is all fiction.

Don't Dream It... )

So. In my own TL;DR kind of way, I'd like some feedback, please and thank you. Have I changed as a writer? For the better or the worse?
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Pimping my fandom. :) [May. 23rd, 2006|12:53 pm]

ingriam
Not one of my fics, though.

Title: The Conquered

Fandom: Guyver

Rating: T, for violence and language

Warnings: none

Pairings: Sho/Mizuki Agito/Shizu minor Zektor/Elegen

Summary: The destruction of Chronos does not lead to peace. It leads to a new world tyrant. But that Government cannot face the Advents and Earth is lost, leading to a quest among the stars.


This is one of the longest WIPs for Guyver that I've read. A very good one, too. It focuses on Sho and Agito for the most part, but Aptom, Imakarum and the other characters do get a fair amount of time of their own. The thing that most caught me was the seer ruthlessness of the Advents when theyh returned. It fit, considering just what the Advents designed the human race to be in the Guyver manga.

Still, it was a very interesting read. Nice long chapters, too.

The Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/473336/1/
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Time for some of my own self-pimpage! [May. 23rd, 2006|11:44 am]

raina_chan
Alright. I'll try to keep my self pimping down, because God knows I want to do a lot of it. :D

So, I'll just start with my one-shot.

Title: My Best Friend
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts II
Rating: T, for minor cursing
Warnings: None
Pairings: Very, very, very light Akuroku. (Aren't you all sick of that by now? XD)
Summary: Everyone knows the nobodies lack feelings. Yet, why did Axel focus so many of his motives around Roxas? What was so great about their friendship?


Here the story be!

Also, I guess I should mention this. Try to review if you can for stories pimped out here. This is mainly for those who think they need more feedback, so... Yeah. Try to deliver. XD

Peace!
-Raina, who needs to get more people to join
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[May. 23rd, 2006|06:43 am]

hakane_
[mood | complacent]
[music |The Hellacopters- "No Song Unheard"]

An attempt at self-pimpage...Because something is better than nothing, I suppose, even if it is just an idiotic drabble.


Title: 3 Vices of a Shinobi
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG, just to be safe
Warnings: None
Pairings: None
Summary: Orochimaru muses about his teammates, and the things that can bring a ninja down. [Sannin-centric Drabble]

Here it be.
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I shamelessly try for first self-pimping post. 8D; Why hlo thar [May. 23rd, 2006|01:17 am]

ladypalazzo
[mood | anxious]
[music |Advance Wars 2 - Adder's Theme]

Title: + Ange et Diable +

Fandom: La Pucelle Tactics, first and foremost, somewhat an unavoidable Disgaea and Makai Kingdom crossover. If you don't know the fandom, I'll gratefully welcome concrits on writing style alone. ♥ Just bear in mind the narrative bits and bizarre Next Chapter previews are a hallmark of the games the story is based in.

Rating: T

Warnings (if there are any): None I can think of. 8D; A li'l violent in bits, but nothing worse than, say, LotR's Helm's Deep.

Pairings (if there are any): Maybe in the future, but I'm really trying for plot first. XD; Um....Demon Overlord Culotte brings all the girls to the yard?

Summary: And so ends a tale that would become a legend...a story of a girl who came to rule over all demons as the Demon Overlord Prier. Not quite...

Here goes!

Merci! :3

Happy Mask Salesgirl


Also, one of the most amazing Makai Kingdom stories evah, by Rayless Night!

Title: Wishes

Fandom: Makai Kingdom

Rating: T

Warnings (if there are any): None.

Pairings (if there are any): Zetta x Salome.

Summary: A history of Salome The Traitor. Complete.

Join me in giving her much deserved reviewings, favings, and alerts. ♥ You won't be sorry!
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