electric violet she-wolf ([info]violet_quill) wrote in [info]ff_friday,
@ 2005-01-22 00:18:00
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Entry tags:072 (cold)

Challenge #72
Title: Examination
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Simon/Kaylee
Word Count: 492
Challenge: Cold
Notes: a very last minute burst of inspiration for this challenge, thanks go [info]kurukami :) Also my first post here! *waves*


"I'm not feeling very well."

Simon, who had been scrawling an inventory list onto a scratch of legal paper, glanced up to see Kaylee standing in the doorway of the infirmary, an ill expression painted over her normally cheerful features. "Oh?" he said, beckoning her into the room. "What's wrong?"

"I think I have a cold." She sniffed, and ran the sleeve of her jumper under her nose before hopping up onto the examining table, as Simon closed the door and grabbed his stethoscope.

"Congestion?" he asked, peering with a small flashlight into her ear.

"Yup."

"Cough?"

"Sometimes."

"Sore throat?"

"Just a little."

He pressed the stethoscope to her back. "Take a deep breath."

She inhaled, her chest rising, then falling abruptly when she let it out.

"You might be wheezing." Simon frowned, polishing the end of the stethoscope on his sleeve. "Can you take off your shirt?"

"Mmm hmm." She yanked the jumper of her head, letting it fall to her lap, and Simon pressed the stethoscope onto her back just under the bright purple bra strap.

She inhaled sharply. "It's cold," she whimpered.

"Sorry about that." He breathed hot air onto the end of the instrument, but rather than taking it away from her back first, he let it linger there, and his breath floated over her skin. She shivered.

The cool metal disappeared, and suddenly his hands were on the side of her neck, gently massaging with his fingers. "Your lymph nodes seem okay," he murmured.

"Mmmm hmmm." Her neck was stretching back slightly, as if leaning into his touch, and his head seemed to be getting closer and closer to his fingers, until his nose was brushing the top of her hair.

"I think it's just a cold," he told her, his voice a bit of a squeak, and then cleared his throat. He started to move away, but she caught his arm.

"I'm feeling better already," she said.

His fingers were suddenly gone from her neck, replaced by his mouth, and his hands pressed into the curve of her abdomen, spinning her so that he stood between her dangling legs.

The stethoscope clanked to the floor, staring up with a steel-gray eye until covered by one of the articles of clothing that were beginning to fly haphazardly around the room. Still sitting on the table, she clung to him as they joined, and it wasn't until afterwards that he climbed up with her, allowing her to curl her body into his arms.

"You're sure you're feeling better?" he asked, stroking her hair.

"You know I wasn't really sick."

He kissed her forehead. "This is silly, you know. We should just tell them. No sense making excuses, pretending, playing games."

"You don't like my games?" She grinned up at him. "I thought you might enjoy playing doctor."

"Just open your mouth and say 'ahhhh'," he demanded, and as soon as she did, he silenced it with a kiss.




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[info]jess_lovecat04
2005-01-21 10:13 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was precious! I adore Simon/Kaylee!

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:20 am UTC (link)
Thanks so much!

*sigh* Me too. I think out of all my fandoms, it's my very favorite almost-canon pairing. :)

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[info]lyndalynn
2005-01-21 10:21 pm UTC (link)
Eeee! What a wonderful way to end my evening! Gotta love happy Simon/Kaylee fic. :) And I imagine that would be the way they just might be- playing games so as to not have the rest of the crew in their relationship...not that it would last long!
Love the details. And especially loved the last line.

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:20 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

Hehe, I think they'd kind of have to do that for a while, so Mal doesn't beat up Simon right away. *g*

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[info]settiai
2005-01-21 11:24 pm UTC (link)
I loved it. :-)

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:21 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Glad you liked it. :-D

Hee, icon love!

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[info]liquidize
2005-01-21 11:41 pm UTC (link)
Aaaaawwwwww! So cute.
I have so much love for Simon-as-Doctor. Yum.

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:21 am UTC (link)
Thanks!

Mmmm, me too. Playing doctor. *happy sigh*

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[info]kurukami
2005-01-22 12:16 am UTC (link)
I gotta admit, Vi, that turned out really well. Shiny romantic Simon/Kaylee... sensual without being too overtly erotic. Lovely! :)

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:22 am UTC (link)
Thanks! *beams* Mmmmm fluffy tablesex. :-D

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[info]dknightshade
2005-01-22 05:51 am UTC (link)
Very cute. I can totally see Kaylee pretending to be sick too. Well done.

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:23 am UTC (link)
Thanks! Hehe, I can see her doing it when they're not together, too, just for an excuse to see him. :)

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[info]jennnlee
2005-01-22 07:50 am UTC (link)
Awwwww. There just isn't enough Simon/Kaylee fic out there. Which baffles me. Thanks for sharing this one!

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[info]foodsthatcan
2005-01-26 09:32 pm UTC (link)
*shuffles feet* I, uh, wrote a Simon/Kaylee fic for [info]bubbleficathon recently, if you're looking for other stories.

Violet, this was a cute story. That devious Kaylee! ;)

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[info]foodsthatcan
2005-01-26 09:33 pm UTC (link)
And, uh, this would be the link to said story.

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[info]jennnlee
2005-01-27 07:09 am UTC (link)
Oooh, really? Just goes to show that I don't know where to look.

*Off to find said fic*

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[info]liquidize
2005-01-27 11:22 pm UTC (link)
In the interest of spreading the S/K love...

my fic, my s/k essay at shippers_manifesto which has a link to you're pretty... pretty a lovely Simon/Kaylee fansite that has a fanfic section. And then there's always Glow where the easiest thing to do is click on Kaylee under the quicksearch and look for the Simon/Kaylee:)

Happy reading!

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[info]jennnlee
2005-01-28 07:41 am UTC (link)
Looking through that first link, I realize I've read a lot of your stuff already. Which means you need to write more. Good stuff! :-)

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[info]liquidize
2005-01-29 11:39 am UTC (link)
Thanks! (I have a few plot bunnies kicking arround, but sadly I'm not a fast writer. More slow like a slow thing...)

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you! And gosh, I agree. It's my favorite FF pairing. :)

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[info]kurukami
2005-01-22 08:43 am UTC (link)
I spotted one small little typo.

She yanked the jumper of her head, letting it fall to her lap...

I'm guessing that's meant to be "off" or "over". Other than that, it's great!

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[info]priscellie
2005-01-22 09:41 am UTC (link)
*squeaks* This is beyond adorable. I love those two! And I can so see Kaylee doing something like this. *grins*

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:24 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Hehe, so can I. She's so cute. :)

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[info]mona1347
2005-01-24 03:17 pm UTC (link)
Eeeee! Adorable :)

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:24 am UTC (link)
Hee, thanks! glad you liked it. :)

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[info]taraljc
2005-01-26 06:52 pm UTC (link)
SQUEE! Fabulousness!!!!

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:24 am UTC (link)
Hee, thank you! *dances*

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[info]theliningsilver
2005-01-27 04:16 am UTC (link)
*sigh* I'm new here, and this was the first thing i read. What a wonderful welcome.
Great job.

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[info]violet_quill
2005-01-27 04:25 am UTC (link)
Aw, thank you! So glad you liked it. :)

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[info]starrysummer
2005-03-05 02:20 am UTC (link)
Hee! If you can't tell, I'm reading through your Firefly fic. Heh, I love how Kaylee's just a little bit sneaky but not really. <333

*uses appropriate icon*

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[info]hermionesviolin
2005-08-13 08:41 pm UTC (link)
Aww, this is a cute look at a potential way for their relationship to play out.

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